Silent Death

Can't see... Blinded by society Can't hear... Sounds and voices drowned out by fear Can't touch... Emotions and feelings blocked out by memories and such Can't taste... Trapped in ths desolate place Can't Smell... Lungs bleeding, under a spell Can't speak... Growing weak, coming upon sanity's peak One step over the edge... Mind and senses dyes out ------------------------------------------------------- The last two stanzas define the poem. The guy in the poem is on the brink of insanity. Is this poem any good?

Great Poem, It's very dark and creepy :demon: I like it got any more?

Wonderfully done. That was a breath of fresh air in poetry.

Could you send me a better version of the poem? I'd like to see how it would turn out.

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Kaiba's Angel [/i] [B]Oh, and I like your sig lines. I've been debating whether to get those shirts myself. But you should know that it is: Can't sleep, clowns will eat me... over and over (about 5 times) [/B][/QUOTE] I got them just to see how people would react to it. There one good one that says "How do you keep an idiot busy?... the answer's on the back" and the back of the shirt says the same thing. It kept my college professor busy for a couple minutes before he got it.

Thanks for the compliments, I'll keep trying to keep the rhyme scheme going next time.

To be honest I didn't really understand it all to well at first. But it's a nice little story though. All and all, it was nicely done.

I like it. It's better than what I put up. So far no one has replied to mine. Could you tell me what you think of mine? If it's really that bad, just tell me.

I like them. Did you really write those when you were pissed off?

I wrote this while I was searching for some Asprin. I'm imprisoned in my own personal Hell Trapped in my mind cell Seem to be quiet on the outside Though screaming in pain on the inside Let me out!.... The voice in my head continues to shout As my head continues to beat and bash about My skull feels as if it's about to burst Could things get any worse? What the Hell is this vile curse? The pain is nauseating The pain in agonizing The pain is unbearable The damable being done is unrepairable What is this on my mind? That puts me in such a bind what is this that hurts me so? I just don't know In my desperate search for an asprin I wound up with a gun in hand And I've had just about all I can stand And If this pain in my mind doesn't go away I'm going to blow my mind A...(Away) ...Dang I missed

The game was too short, and the bosses were kinda easy (there were exceptions, But most of them got easy after one two tries) that's pretty much what ruined the game for me.

Christmas=Presents Presents=Money Money=The reason they put out X-mas stuff so early More importantly it gives people I know time to get my presents :D

A brand new Haiku Something I would love to hate hate to love, visa versa Either way I'd write one But I just can't think of any Can you help me? Please?

Death, comes in many forms Slow,painful,quick, and easy but... There is only one Deth In case you're wondering, Deth is me. My name is pronounced as depth, but sounds like death to most people.

So many to choose from...hmmm let's see. First I'll have to say it would have to be a tie between Sephiroth, Devil Jin (or Kazuya). Then the resident evil zombies (The Tyrannt and Nemesis... the list goes on.

I PM'd you a poem to use. tell me if it's any help.

It's really really good. PLease continue PLease

The poem is pretty good.:) This is how I would've revised it. I cannot help but admire you from afar You?re rare and beautiful like a shooting star You?re as beautiful as the sky is blue Your smile brightens my day Your beauty takes my breath away My mind is set on you My feelings for you are true I can?t help but think of you And I wonder if you feel the same way too Hope it helps :)

Why'd capcom wait so long to bring this game to the PS2?.

Never had one and didn't see the purpose of collecting them so I have none.

I loved Legend of Legaia when it came out for PSX, is the sequel as good as te first one?

I'm not really disappointed by most of the games released nowadays. Maybe you don't really care about the graphics f a game but all lot of people do because a lot of times thats what entices people to by the game if they've never heard of it. Personally I'd go for quality over quanity, and if the game's gameplay and storyline holds up I don't see the problem. If the voice overs are really that bad can't you just change the langwage back and use subtitles? don't most games have that option?

All is very quiet now The calm after a stormy night Is very refreshing

MY name kinda describes who I am. I usually very quiet so that explains the silent part and as for death, my actual name's Deth which sounds like death, SO I refer to my self as Silent Death

This is all I could come up with. In a time where the smell of death expanded thoughout the land. Where millions died inoocently in the name of one's ambitions and greed. In the midst of the carnage and bloodshed, one dark figure stood up unwilling to go to hell for sins he have not commited. "I refuse to die this death, for someone else" he cried aloud pointing towards the sky. A couple minutes after he said this a cup appeared before him, the cup of death. With it, he was to end the suffering of million people before he would have the privilage to ascend to heaven. Three years later, he comes upon a woman dying in the fields. As he raised the cup of death towards her mouth, wings sprout from his back. As this woman's feelings and life essence leaves her, the cup disappears and he starts to float towards his final resting place. Three years of releasing souls only to have his wings wither away and have him falling to depths of hell because he did what he did for personal gain and not for the sake of mercy, so he finally died the death he said he didn't deserve eariler.