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[size=1][color=#CD6619]RhodoKnightmon had been wary throughout their walk to Saware Valley, as had Angel. Angel?s pink digimon had noticed the follower since they had left the District, while Angel realized when they had entered the forest. If there was one thing that RhodoKnightmon and Angel had in common is that they despised people who lurked in the shadows without confronting them. Granted, Angel and her digimon did do that; but, the times they had lurked were times they needed information on the good players or if there was thought of betrayal within the evil ranks. Other than that, there was nothing more that boiled their blood than a cowardly player walking behind ever-so silently, or?as silent as a Etemon. However, Angel noticed that the player had fallen back, either he was also being followed or something of other, yet it didn?t matter to her. She merely wanted to get White out of the forest and to Saware Valley, the domain of Mekratrimon?s lair. In moments, they arrived and Angel had RhodoKnightmon take up Gomamon and White, while she carried Wormmon and managed to scale the steep incline using his Silk Thread as a rope. Once up on the flat cliff, Angel led White inside the entrance; White looked above him as he walked in, noticing several flying digimon surrounding the area. [B]?It?s to my knowledge that the digimon in the air are scouts; they also serve as the air defense.?[/B] White looked to Angel, wondering how she could have known what he was thinking. [B]?Don?t be too surprised, anyone would?ve wondered why so many flying digimon gathered here. It?s a simple matter of looking up.?[/B] White nodded and followed Angel further into the depths of the cave. While walking deeper into the main area, there were indications of broken fragments within the walls as well as large rocks that were chipped off of pillars, and other various indications; this only brought more wondering to White and what Saware was. Finally, Angel stopped and crossed her arms, looking ahead to what was in front of her. The new player looked in front of him as well and found a large, massive, digimon with the appearance of a demonic being that rose from hell. At first, his expression was filled with surprise and shock, but it slowly entered into an expression of understanding. [B]?That?s the evil digimon leader, isn?t it??[/B] White stood next to Angel and looked at her, who smirked. [B]?This is where evil players gather, right?? ?You catch on quick for a new player. I would?ve presumed it would?ve taken you a bit more walking, I suppose I was wrong. However, it?s come to my knowledge that something is to happen at Miskas, although?? ?Although??[/B] The tone in Angel?s voice sounded unsure, making White ask, [B]?What? Why?d you say ?although??? ?You?ve just started [i]Digimon[/i] recently, am I correct??[/B] He nodded and Angel went on, [B]?Then we cannot make our way to Miskas; but, I suppose it could be good training. Albeit, using a rookie digimon may result in your downfall. What would you prefer? Would you like to go to Miskas and have your first bout with the ?good? player or train a while before leaving? It?s up to you.?[/B][/size][/color]
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Writing Final Fantasy VIII: Orior Palam Deus - FINAL CUT [M-VSL]
Revelation replied to Doublehex's topic in Creative Works
[color=#CD6619]Tsk, tsk Doublehex. It seems you haven't read the rules correctly within the OB Anthology or the Otakuboards. If you did, however, read the rules, you would have known that double posting was prohibited and therefore, triple posting would have been even worse. With sadness, I say, this thread is closed. But if you wish, you can recreate your thread, like I said last time. THREAD CLOSED.[/color] -
[size=1][color=#CD6619]Continuing from Epsilon's list, [B]Remember:[/B] Anything in bold is being drawn, anything with [B]'*****'[/B] is currently unknown, [B][color=red]RED[/B][/color] means that the person has not posted their character yet, and [B][color=orange]ORANGE[/B][/color] means that the character is up, but not yet called. Now, here's the list: [i]Sara's character drawn by Lunox. Lunox's character drawn by Illusion. Illusion's character drawn by Dodeca. Dodeca's character drawn by Sara. Sara's character drawn by Ezekiel. Ezekiel's character drawn by Boo. Boo's character drawn by Forest. Forest's character drawn by Ozymandius Jones. Ozymandius Jones's character drawn by r2vq. r2vq's chacater drawn by 1nOnlyCloud. 1nOnlyCloud'a character drawn by The Boss. The Boss'a character drawn by han ki-tae. Han ki-tae's character drawn by Epsilon. Epsilon's character drawn by Ezekiel. Ezekiel's character drawn by The Boss. The Boss's character drawn by Delta. Delta's character drawn by cancer. Cancer's character drawn by GTK. GTK's character drawn by The Boss. The Boss's character drawn by han ki-tae. Han ki-tae's character drawn by Amelia. Amelia's character drawn by Revelation. Revelation's character drawn by Epsilon. Epsilon's character drawn by The Boss. The Boss's character drawn by Ezekiel. Ezekiel's character drawn by Dragon Warrior.[/i] [B]Dragon Warrior's character drawn by Frankie.[/B] Frankie's character drawn by[/color] [B][color=Red]*****[/B][/color][color=#CD6619].[/color][/size]
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[size=1][color=#CD6619]As Angel walked towards the tavern, something else caught her eye. It was a new player amidst the crowd, looking confused and without a speck of corruption within him; but, that would all change when Angel spoke to him. She walked towards him, acting as if she wasn?t watching where she was going and bumped into him, nearly tripping over his digimon, which was a Gomamon. Angel caught herself and gracefully landed back to her original pose, yet staring at the new player with an aloof expression. The boy merely stared in a futile attempt to not seem obvious in being new. [B]?I-I?m sorry. I wasn?t seeing where I was going. Are?you okay??[/B] Angel raised a brow but kept silent. The player cleared his throat before addressing Angel again. [B]?Listen, I?m new around here, do you think you can??? ?Show you around??[/B] He gulped slightly and watched Angel as she looked him up and down, wondering if he was ?evil? material. She considered the damage she could do to his unknowing innocence- considering all new players start out that way- she continued saying, [B]?I?m not one for ?showing people around,? but perhaps I can make an exception.?[/B] She smiled deviously and introduced herself. [B]?I am Angel; these are my digimon: Wormmon and RhodoKnightmon?and this?is the Temple Shopping District, but you probably already knew that from the map in your digivice.?[/B] He nodded sheepishly. [B]?Now, before we go on, I?d like to know your name.? ?My name?s Ja-, I mean White. Call me White.? ?White.?[/B] The thought of depraving this boy who holds the name of such a pure color was absolutely thrilling. There was nothing more she wanted than to create a monstrosity within the ranks of the ?evil army?. [B]?Oh, and this is my digimon, Gomamon.?[/B] A small sea animal digimon waved his clawed fin-like hands and smiled. Jumping from Angel?s shoulder, Wormmon greeted Gomamon with such happiness. It had been so long since he had met a rookie such as him and was filled with joy. Angel caught White?s attention and pointed in the direction she came from, telling him the different shopkeepers that stood in their small wooden booths. He took in everything with earnest and interest; it looked like a small child seeing the world for the first time.[/size][/color]
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[size=1][color=#CD6619]Continuing from Epsilon's list, [B]Remember:[/B] Anything in bold is being drawn, anything with [B]'*****'[/B] is currently unknown, [B][color=red]RED[/B][/color] means that the person has not posted their character yet, and [B][color=orange]ORANGE[/B][/color] means that the character is up, but not yet called. Now, here's the list: [i]Sara's character drawn by Lunox. Lunox's character drawn by Illusion. Illusion's character drawn by Dodeca. Dodeca's character drawn by Sara. Sara's character drawn by Ezekiel. Ezekiel's character drawn by Boo. Boo's character drawn by Forest. Forest's character drawn by Ozymandius Jones. Ozymandius Jones's character drawn by r2vq. r2vq's chacater drawn by 1nOnlyCloud. 1nOnlyCloud'a character drawn by The Boss. The Boss'a character drawn by han ki-tae. Han ki-tae's character drawn by Epsilon. Epsilon's character drawn by Ezekiel. Ezekiel's character drawn by The Boss. The Boss's character drawn by Delta. Delta's character drawn by cancer. Cancer's character drawn by GTK. GTK's character drawn by The Boss. The Boss's character drawn by han ki-tae. Han ki-tae's character drawn by Amelia. Amelia's character drawn by Revelation. Revelation's character drawn by Epsilon.[/i] [B]Epsilon's character drawn by The Boss.[/B] The Boss's character drawn by[/color] [B][color=Red]*****[/B].[/color][/SIZE]
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[size=1][color=#CD6619]Amelia's Character: Claimed. [quote name='Amelia][font=arial]Here's my character: [U][URL=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v630/ShikyoKasu/jagerandfurch.jpg]Jager Garnrolle.[/URL][/U'] He's quite tall and muscular, and he doesn't know what the heck he is (though he does have a huge fox tail). I never draw him wearing the same outfit, so whoever claims him can feel free to dress him up differently. I never draw him without his little blue flying fox friend, either, but if you absolutely don't want to, I can forgive you. =);; He's also blind, so his eyes are always closed. Other than that, have fun.[/font][/quote] [B]Le Finished Product:[/B] [IMG]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/7650/jager7pd.jpg[/IMG]. Enjoy, Amelia. Now then, to draw my character: [B][URL=http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/4372/dc5lh.jpg]DC[/URL][/B]. Since my dear character is in sketch, you can do as you wish to him but the style of his clothing is sort of a skater look. He has black hair with red tints and blue eyes; he's sort of a stoic character as well. Also, he's almost never seen without a skateboard.[/size][/color]
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[size=1][color=#CD6619]The night was particularly calm with a few breezes passing by, yet everything within it was wild and active. The sounds of training and skills resounded all around her and filled her with such content feeling, though it was only the feeling of power that could content her. [B]Mystique[/B] watched as Magneto trained his underlings for battle, creating them into powerful machines of destruction. It was a beautiful sight and nothing was more riveting than to watch as the [B]Brotherhood of Mutants[/B] began to strengthen their powers and refine them into finesse weapons. Their training was nearly complete when Magneto called them all to a meeting. They gathered before him and listened to his words, never noticing that Mystique had left his side, though she was his Girl Friday. Magneto explained to them that the final test would be searching for his left hand woman: Mystique; it was a simple game of hide-and-seek: she hides and they seek. Albeit, the only catch was she was thought of as a spy for the X-men. They looked at each other with a cocky attitude and chuckled to themselves, knowing that all Mystique could do was transform herself into anyone she pleased, what they didn?t understand was that this would ultimately test their powers and how well they?ve been trained. Magneto said no more and let them go, in search of Mystique. The training took place in the forest nearby the abandoned estate that Mystique and Magneto took as theirs. He simply watched nonchalantly as the Brotherhood searched fervently for Mystique. Unbeknownst to them, she had changed into one of them and was ?searching? alongside; Mystique was a sly and coy mutant who knew how to use her powers to her advantage and keep it that way. She walked beside a rookie by the name of Jake, Magneto preferred to call him Tesla. He seemed weary and alert but had many weak openings that Mystique had found. [B]?So, who?s this Mystique person? I mean, like, what?s so great about her that we need to take her out??[/B] Jake stayed silent. He muttered under his breath but it seemed as if the ?girl? had heard him and swiftly changed into her own form. [B]?You should always know who your enemies are, kid.?[/B] With a swift kick, Mystique knocked Jake to the ground, who held his wiped away blood from the corner of his mouth. Mystique began to walk away but Jake reached for her leg, thinking he could grab hold and shock her. Unlike other mutants, Mystique was in many forces to have heightened senses, nearly greater than the average human, and know the shifting movements, the sounds underneath her feet, and the change. Before Jake could even touch her, he was knocked out instantly; Mystique smirked and changed into the ?girl? but appeared to be bruised and called for help. Those who had heard ran to her aid and found Jake unconscious with the ?girl? pointing in a wild direction, making the Brotherhood go on a wild goose chase. Looking back at Jake, Mystique?s eyes had changed to her original colors for a moment before she got up and left.[/size][/color]
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[size=1]Watching the sunrise at early dawn, Angelina stretched her arms and legs and reclined into her deck chair. Once the sun had risen fully, she readied herself for the meetings with clients, staff, and etc.; Angelina grabbed her keys and walked out of her apartment building. She stopped by a small café and bought a cup of coffee, not for restlessness or tiredness but for the taste. [center]+ + + + +[/center] The meetings had ended and all paperwork was being filed away, marked, and such by the temporary secretary who took Kara?s place only for the week. With a smile, Angelina told the secretary to hold all calls and to schedule all meetings on Monday and the days after. She walked down the hall and into the lounge room, putting in her digivice and did the necessary things she had to do before settling herself into a VR unit. Once done, Angelina settled into the VR unit where her digivice was and closed her eyes, letting herself be drifted off as she had done the day before. [color=#CD6619]The sounds of the small clearing indicated the place she was before; although, her digimon were nowhere to be found but from behind the brush came the sounds of Wormmon?s snoring and RhodoKnightmon?s training. Angel walked towards the sounds and found the two digimon doing what they always did: sleep and train. With a smile, Angel walked up to the two and greeted them, wanting to know what happened. [B]?Other than the fact that Mekratrimon?s forces are still moving about and that the good had left, nothing since you left.? ?Disappointing, really.? [/B] Angel reached for her digivice and checked through to see what she may need and found that she was in need of several items. [B]?Oh, bother. It seems we?re nearly out of items, time to go to the market.?[/B] Nodding, RhodoKnightmon allowed Angel and Wormmon onto her back and lifted them into the sky, taking flight above the canopies towards the Temple Shopping District. They reached the area soon and found themselves among a crowd of unruly shoppers and barters. Wormmon tried to eat anything the shopkeepers held up, but was quickly denied the choice, RhodoKnightmon, on the other hand, strode with such finesse and strength that they all had to turn heads to see who was walking down, and Angel kept walking with one sight on her eyes, a particular shop near the middle of the district rarely visited by customers because of its shady appearance. The creak of the door echoed throughout the dimly lit shop. It seemed as though no one had been there for ages but Angel knew better than to doubt the shopkeepers and stood at the counter while RhodoKnightmon and Wormmon stood by her. The sound of shifting was heard behind the counter and Angel knew it to be the shopkeepers. The lights brightened and before the three were the shopkeepers with a new riddle for Angel. [B]?If you can answer my brother?s riddle correctly,? ?We?ll give you what you came for?? ?But are you ready??[/B] Angel merely smirked and cocked a brow. [B]?Then let us begin?? ?I am the ruler of clowns, I always smile, I do not frown, I am a jack-of-all-trades, I call my Girl Friday for aid. Who am I??[/B] Wormmon looked at the two shopkeepers with confusion but Angel leaned over with a smirk and replied, [B]?There can only be one clown who is a jack-of-all-trades and always smiles and does not frown, but when in aid he calls his Girl Friday; the clown you are speaking of is Piedmon.?[/B] The two shopkeepers nodded to each other and the one who stood by while his brother told Angel the riddle went to the back and shuffled through some things before reentering the room with an elegant wooden box. [B]?Within this is what you?ll be looking for.?[/B] Angel reached to open it but the riddling shopkeeper held it shut. [B]?I warn you, though, this?[i]item[/i] is very powerful and should only be used when necessary. Take it with you.? ?I bid you farewell, shopkeepers. You?re always a big help in my quest.?[/B] Walking out, Angel held the box in her hands and was tempted to open it but became interrupted by the person in front of the tavern. [B]OOC:[/B] Oh bleh, I really didn?t like this post. Que sera, sera, it?ll just have to suffice.[/size][/color]
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[size=1][color=#CD6619]Well, Anime Elf, it all depends on your grade- something that hasn't been established- or what type(s) of books you like. Albeit, people have been giving you all sorts of recommendations, so shall I. But, I haven't read many books recently XP; but, I really am a book nerd deep down. Anyways, here are some books I found interesting: [B]Dark of the Moon[/B] by Patricia Christine Hodgell: The sequel to [B]God Stalk[/B] is about a girl named Jamethiel who left Taitastigon with her companion Marc in search of her twin brother, Torisen- who is the Highlord of the Kencyrath. Jamethiel goes through rigorous obstacles to get to her brother and has a strange power of hypnotising people with her dancing, as well as a cursed sword. [B]The Visit[/B] by Friedrich Durenmatt: A tragi-comedy play written about Claire Zachanassian and the town of Guellen and revenge. Claire wants the town to kill Alfred Ill, a man who left her when she was pregnant and turned her into a prostitute. It's quite interesting really. Then there's [B]The Lovely Bones[/B] by Alice Sebold which is about a girl named Susie Salmon and the life she watches in her "heaven" after her untimely death. But if you want long and interesting, there's always [B]The Tales of the Otori[/B], a trilogy by Lian Hearn. The first book is called [B]Across the Nightingale Floor[/B], the second is [B]Grass for His Pillow[/B], and the third is [B]Brilliance of the Moon[/B]. They're excellent books that capture you and it's about a boy named Takeo who is thought to be part of an isolated tribe that wanted nothing to do with the war but they were wiped out, excluding himself, and now he's honing the powers he recently found out he had. There are also other books that Ive read but I can't remember the titles, so these will have to suffice for now. [B]EDIT:[/B] I was reading through some of the other posts and I realized that I forgot another book that came to mind: [B]The Outsiders[/B], another book written by S.E. Hinton. It's about a group of boys who are called Outsiders and how they are disliked by the Socs, a prep group. The book is basically about what their life is like.[/size][/color]
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[color=#cd6619]I'm sorry RockHinata-san but this thread has to be closed due to the fact that it lacks the one important requirement: a [b]rating[/b]. But the good news is that you can recreate your thread with the appropriate rating ^_^. THREAD CLOSED. [/color][color=#cd6619]Wow, [b]RockHinata-san[/b], you're just a writing machine, aren't you? Well, I can see that you're a new member here but I'm sorry to that I have to close this thread because like I said in your Part 2, this lacks a rating and ratings are the most important and most needed standards in the OB Anthology. You can recreate this thread if you wish with the right ratings. THREAD CLOSED.[/color]
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Writing Dragon Ball X-treme Episode I- Beginnings (M-LV)
Revelation replied to Deathsye's topic in Creative Works
[color=#CD6619]Instead of doing all of the babble that I do, I'm just going to be straightforward: I am warning anyone and everyone who posts in this thread that if I see anymore inconstructive criticism, meaning it's just "WOW COOL DUDE!" or the sort, I will be forced to... delete your posts. Understood? Have a great time posting, guys![/color] -
[size=1][color=#CD6619]All around, the sounds of battle began to die down as the good players began to search for an escape route. Above the sounds of Mektratrimon?s roar had indicated that the battle in Saware had ended finally and evil had won and looking around Angel saw Mika scurrying to run from her sight calling for her digimon as she did. With a deviant smirk creeping on her face, Angel couldn?t help but chuckle at the sight of a good player, who was once a friend to great players, run from her. From above, Dynasmon and RhodoKnightmon returned with a few scratches but overall nothing more. [B]?It seems we?ve won the good- I mean... we?ve won the fight for now.?[/B] Angel watched as Dynasmon devolved to Wormmon and take his place on RhodoKnightmon?s shoulder. [B]?How was that dance with Justimon? It seems as though he [i]might[/i] have gotten stronger but with our performance, I don?t think either will be putting into any effort of battling us soon. Though, I was impressed by some of the others around this area, even if they are on the opposing team.?[/B] Chuckling to herself for a short while, she got on RhodoKnightmon?s back and decided it was time to shop, even though her two digimon had brought back several stolen goods. Soon after leaving the cave, RhodoKnightmon began to skim the forest canopy but began to falter due to the extremities she had taken within the cave. This went on for a while until Angel found it dangerous for RhodoKnightmon to fly in a condition such as hers and so she tapped RhodoKnightmon on the shoulder and indicated for her to land. [B]?You could have told me that you were injured, even if I?m siding with evil, I still worry about my digimon friends.?[/B] Pulling up the list on her silver and black digivice, she scrolled down searching for a Healing Tablet and once found, she directed it to be used on RhodoKnightmon. It quickly took effect on her and she was healed; RhodoKnightmon thanked Angel who merely smiled and said they would walk but while looking at the clock on the digivice, she decided it was time for her to leave. [b]?It seems it?s time for me to go. It was an interesting battle we?ve had, wasn?t it? I?ll see you two soon, don?t get into too much trouble while I?m gone.?[/B] Angel pressed the ?log off? button and was experienced the same short feeling of unconsciousness before[/color] she was released back to the real world. Stretching her arms out as the VR lid opened, Angel yawned as she stepped out and walked out of the room down the hall to gather the rest of her things. While on the way to her office, she saw that Kara had left but left a note for her. Soon enough, Angelina walked towards the elevator and when it hit first floor, she walked out of the building, waving good-bye to the others around that remained. In her mind, she thought of what was to come tomorrow, though she was expected at many things tomorrow being the company representative and such, but still, [i]Digimon[/i] had become a great part of her life and she intended to keep it that way, no matter what.[/size]
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[color=#CD6619]Something's a bit off here and first things first: introductions. Welcome to the [B]OB Anthology[/B]. I am your Moderator, Revelation. Any questions, comments, etc. you have can be directed towards me via PM. Now then, the few things I see here is that this seems like an advertisement for your story, which is great, but perhaps it would be better if you wrote it here so that others can review and comment here? Just a suggestion. Also, the other MOST important factor is that there is no [B]RATING[/B] on this thread. If you haven't already, read the [B]OB Anthology Basics[/B]; it'll help you a lot around the Anthology. Also, you can recreate your thread, granted that it has a RATING. THREAD CLOSED.[/color]
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Sign Up Lyric Spectrum: Assassin's Overture [M-LV, possible S]
Revelation replied to Onix's topic in Theater
[size=1][color=#CD6619][B]Name-[/B] Isha Thyoala [B]Age-[/B] 23 [B]Gender-[/B] Female [B]Appearance-[/B] [URL=http://falcoon.hp.infoseek.co.jp/images/top1136.jpg]Isha[/URL]: Standing at 5?6? and weighing at 107 lbs, she is gaunt in appearance though no. She has lush brown hair that seemed to become darker by the moments and hazel brown eyes that seemed to be filled with emotions, waiting to pour out. [B]Weapon of Choice?-[/B] Without any real weapons, Isha must rely on her false magic to protect her in times of dire need. [B]Magic?-[/B] Through terrible fate, Isha?s inner forearms are scribed with the Purple Magic- a magic created by Mekkas? people, which her forearms burning with pain. To ensure less pain, Isha wears guards around her forearms that is scribed with intense cooling magic, considering it is deflecting the effect of the Purple Magic?s glyphs. An advantage Isha has is she can use the guards as an outlet for her magic, which can either lower or heighten the amount of magic, but a disadvantage she has is that after a long period of time after using her magic, she begins to lose feeling in her hands. The Purple Magic is not only [B]Personality-[/B] [B]History/Character Snippet-[/B] -- Will Edit.[/size][/color] -
[color=#CD6619]On behalf of Lady Asphyxia and I, welcome to the [B]OB Anthology[/B], [B]Orochisnake[/B]. Now, I'm just going to dive right into the bad news. First off, this is a [B]SPAM-GAME[/B] and should not be in the [B]Otakuboards[/B]. Secondly, it seems that you haven't read the [B][URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/rules.php?]Rules[/B][/URL] of the OB nor have you read the [B][URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44313]OB Anthology Basics[/B][/URL] sticky. I'm suggesting, strongly suggesting, that you do so in order to keep from being banned. The good news is that even though this thread is being closed, you are welcome to write about anything else as long as it has a [B]RATING[/B]. THREAD CLOSED.[/color]
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[size=1][color=#CD6619]Listening to the chaos ahead, Angel wore a nasty smirk across her face, knowing she was nearing the battle. She got on RhodoKnightmon?s back while FlaWizardmon used a fire cloud as his transportation. The three were soon at the entrance of the battle, watching the prolonged fight of good against evil. Angel held out her digivice and looked to her majestic Wizard, [B]?It?s time.?[/B] In reply, he nodded and was soon consumed by a bright light, out of which stepped out Mystimon. Knowing that Mystimon needed more experience as his Ultimate, she decided to digivolve him later, when it was needed. A dark glow appeared within Angel?s eyes as she nodded and watched her digimon enter the battlefield, with their master not far behind. As soon as she got into the chaos, a few of the good players near her averted their attention, thinking she was one of the new players that somehow entered the field blindly. It was a pity that they weren?t thinking for some rushed at her, leaving their digimon to fend for themselves against RhodoKnightmon and Mystimon; who was doing well by himself. Angel could hear the shouts of attacks coming from her pink digimon and some attacks from her fire knight, but mostly, the clinking of metal was heard, which indicated that Mystimon was relying on strength and defense, rather than attacks. All of this she could hear, while she dodged her enemies? attacks, until one had the opportunity to kick her in the stomach. Luckily, Angel was able to slow it down by placing pressure against the soles of her feet. [B]?Why don?t you give up, newbie? You?re not ready to play with the big boys.?[/B] One of the good players had taunted. Chuckles were heard all around, snickers rose and annoyed Angel. She scoffed and straightened herself up, cracking her neck in the process, and still keeping her eyes on the one who had punched her. [B]?Oh, you?d be surprised,?[/B] she said as she took out a pair of baseball gloves and slipped them on, clenching her fingers to stretch them out. Standing there with a raised brow, Angel thought, [i]?What poor fools.?[/i] [center]* * * * *[/center] One by one, the players fell to the ground holding their stomachs or otherwise. Angel wasn?t amused by the actions of the good player nor was she amused by the power that they supposedly said they held; in fact, her digimon weren?t at all interested in fighting the digimon partners of the players keeled over on the ground. They did not even think them to be deemed unworthy; instead Angel?s digimon watched them crash into the walls around them and devolve into their Rookie level. The three needed power, a rivaling force that could parallel them to fight with effort, instead of effortlessly swaying with the wind in the midst of a fight; their lust for such power was insatiable and they had yet to find the source of such. Nonetheless, Angel walked on and soon came to find her digimon standing together. It seemed that Mystimon had gained enough power to digivolve to Dynasmon, but it was something she felt would have to be kept until later. Her eyes floated around, searching and searching, until they landed on Mekratrimon- the evil digimon leader who stood blasting attacks left and right, disrupting the chaos around her to create chaos for herself. Angel was simply entranced by her and was awed to even stand in her demonic appearance. [B]?She?s beautiful,?[/B] was all that Angel said, not taking her eyes off of the digimon. Though it seemed as if her guard was down, Angel was actually alert to everything around her. She could hear, see, and even feel what was around her all the while watching the leader of evil battle against such futile attacks. It was at this time that a partner-less good digimon fired an attack at her. RhodoKnightmon used her Pile Bunker and deflected the attack from reaching her human friend. Still watching Mekratrimon, Angel chuckled and said, [B]?What a cheap trick. Attack the ditzy human and then get rid of her digimon, is that it??[/B] Turning around, she faced her attacker and said, [B]?It?s quite unbecoming of a good digimon, you know? But then again, I can?t exactly say that, can I??[/B] A chuckle was heard from behind the Justimon, the digimon who had attacked Angel. [B]?Not exactly, Angel, or should I say Devil? Either way, it doesn?t fit you.?[/B] The voice soared from in-between the battling digimon. It was faint yet loud, something quite subtle yet straightforward; there was something familiar about it but Angel couldn?t place her finger on it. The voice began to chuckle and sounded as if it was nearing, yet Angel was blind to who the owner of this hideous voice was. [B]?What? You can?t remember me??[/B] The voice was suddenly seen with Justimon only a few feet in front of her. Angel?s eyes began to glare at the person before her; she was someone who was detested at many levels. [B]?I remember you... it?s hard to forget someone who fought like you.? ?How sweet, you actually liked the way I fought! You actually had time to be impressed by my fighting skills while my Cyberdramon was destroying your Mystimon to the ground. Touching, really.?[/B] The girl sneered as she and Justimon walked towards Angel and her two digimon. [B]?Was that what all that flailing was? I thought you were trying to swat a Flymon. And, wasn?t it that it was my Mystimon who devolved your Cyberdramon? Yes, it was. In fact, I believe it was a sweet victory, tasteful too.?[/B] The reply was stinging and it showed in the girl?s expression. [B]?Are you here to reclaim your victory or waiting for another sobbing defeat?? ?I?m here to kick your ass, Angel. I?m going to make you pay for what you did back then. I?m going to watch you in pain while I kick your ass!? ?Oh, well in that case, let me introduce you to someone, Mika,?[/B] With a press of a button, Mystimon was consumed by data. When he stepped out, his form had changed to, [B]?Dynasmon- the mega level of Wormmon. I?ve been waiting for a moment like this; some people wait a lifetime for a moment like this.?[/B] Snapping her fingers, Dynasmon sped off towards Justimon with such speed, who also leaped towards Dynasmon. Angel and Mika did the same as well, running towards each other with the intent to kill.[/size][/color]
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Writing It Only Hurts When I Breathe (Bleach Songfic)
Revelation replied to NashvilleDream's topic in Creative Works
[color=#CD6619]Ok, [B]NashvilleDream[/B], seems that you're a member and should understand the requirements of the [B]OtakuBoards[/B], but since it appears that you've forgotten, I'll remind you. 1) At the [B]OB Anthology[/B], any thread found without a [B]Rating[/B] will be closed. 2) Before posting anything in this area, you must read the [B][URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44313]OB Anthology Basics[/B][/URL]. 3) I don't think there's a three. Now then, with that said, you can recreate this thread but remember to put up a rating. THREAD CLOSED.[/color] -
[color=#CD6619][strike]Sorry to say, but this thread is closed due to the poor post quality that I can see here. If anyone has a problem with this post then, please, feel free to overload my inbox with complains, questions, and whatnot. Don't worry, I don't bite. I have given warning and it has not been heeded. THREAD CLOSED. [size=1][B]EDIT:[/B] Instead of the thread being closed, and after talking to the Cat. Mod., I've decided to reopen this thread but as a warning to all, I am going to delete the unnecessary posts that were written after my warning. THREAD REOPENED.[/strike] [B]EDIT 2:[/B] Upon reading Deathsye's reply, this thread is closed once again. Go see the other recreated thread.[/color][/size]
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[color=#CD6619]Please, direct your eyes to this [B]IMPORTANT[/B] post! Ladies and gentlemen, or whoever may be out there, let's welcome [B]Phobia[/B] to the [B]OB Anthology[/B]. I am glad to see this member here and extra-glad that s/he posted a thread here ^_^. But there's a couple of problems: 1) There's no [B]RATING[/B]! 2) This thread contains poor post quality. Some remedies for this problem is that, other than the fact that I'll be closing this is: a) Read [B][URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44313]OB Anthology Basics[/B][/URL], [B][URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=48241]Constructive Critcism[/URL][/B], and maybe read the [B][URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/rules.php?]Rules[/B][/URL]. B) Phobia, you can re-create this thread with a proper rating (found in the OB Basics sticky), and c) The members posting in this thread can read how to create a constructive post about critiquing. THREAD CLOSED.[/color]
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Writing The Only Cherry Blossom for Kakashi [PG]
Revelation replied to serenayasha's topic in Creative Works
[color=#CD6619][strike]It seems that no one actually really "read" my advice, so then since I did not find any improvement in your posts, it is my duty as a Moderator to close this thread. I apologize to the author- [B]serenayasha[/B] for this unfortunate event but poor post quality means that this thread will be closed, as I have said before. Now then, if anyone wishes to speak with me about this matter, PM me and I will be happy to explain in-depth, if that is what you want. With that said, THREAD CLOSED.[/strike] [size=1][B]EDIT:[/B] Instead of the thread being closed, and after talking to the Cat. Mod., I've decided to reopen this thread but as a warning to all, I am going to delete the unnecessary posts that were written after my warning. THREAD REOPENED.[/color][/size] -
[color=#CD6619]People, please refrain from such poor post quality! If you need help on how to write a critique, please go here -> [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=48241][B]Constructive Criticism[/B][/URL]. Also, if you haven't already, go to the [URL= http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44313][B]OB Anthology Basics[/URL][/B], it'll help. Now, this is only a warning but next time I might not be so kind as to write a warning... in fact, Lady A might not be so kind, either. So please, try to have more details and length. - Revelation.[/color]
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Writing Know Your Stars Stargate SG-1 PG L
Revelation replied to ChibiHorsewoman's topic in Creative Works
[size=1][color=#CD6619][URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showpost.php?p=727392&postcount=2]THIS[/URL] is a no-no. I am going to tell you this once and only once: If you have a request or something that is relevant but irrelevant to the [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=48241][B]Constructive Criticism[/B][/URL] of the thread and might not coincide with the [B]OB Anthology Basics[/B] then please refrain from cluttering the thread with such SPAM-like posts. If you want to post something like that, choose to PM the author instead of doing what you did. - Revelation.[/size][/color] -
Writing The Only Cherry Blossom for Kakashi [PG]
Revelation replied to serenayasha's topic in Creative Works
[color=#CD6619]Please remember that [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=48241][B]Constructive Criticism[/URL][/B] is one of the biggest difficulties most threads in most areas of the OB have. Therefore, as a warning, I urge that you read the link I have provided, maybe even read the [B]Rules[/B] of the OB and, maybe, the [B]OB Anthology Basics[/B], while you're at it. I am telling you: Don't let me find anymore 4 worded posts. I want clear and precise indication of what you're writing. Maybe even tell the author what s/he can improve on and whatnot. - Revelation.[/color] -
[color=#CD6619]This is a warning to everyone who's posted here: if I or Lady Asphyxia sees any more posts that do not follow the Constructive Criticism rules (shown here-> [url]http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=48241[/url]) then I or Lady A will be forced to close the thread. Please remember that posts should be at least a paragraph long and must entail detailed description about CRITICISM or otherwise. I will not be so kind if I see another post that does not follow the CC rules. Thank you for your time. - Revelation.[/color]
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Writing My Fan Fiction \ Real Life Anime Story Part One
Revelation replied to a topic in Creative Works
[size=1][color=#CD6619]Hello, welcome, and all that jazz to [B]OB Anthology[/B]. Before you go diving into posting here at the OB Anthology, please read the [B][URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44313]OB Anthology Basics[/B][/URL] for within this sticky, it entails the magnificence of what is required in a thread, such as a [B]Thread Rating[/B]. Now then, I also suggest you read the Rules and FAQ (found on the blue panel to the left) before doing anything else. By the way, any thread without a rating will be closed. Good news is that if you want to recreate your thread, please do so. But remember a rating. THREAD CLOSED. [B]EDIT:[/B] By the way, I forgot to mention anothing thing that is frowned upon in the Otakuboards: double posting. Since, this is the first that I've seen you do it, this is just a warning but remember, instead of double posting, use the EDIT button.[/size][/color]