Sui Generis

Lalaith: Why she's right be [i]Sees that Nev is missing[/i] NEV!! Great and my bow too!!! Nev!! [i]kneels down[/i] Tracks went that way!! [i]burst out running in the way he pointed....[/i] You guys stay here and see whats going on!

I like it when people are honost with my work (Poetry, Stories, Drawings etc) it makes you more prepared for the world. I mean if you wanna become a writer artist or just about anything in life you gotta be ready for rejection and criticism is a nicer form of it :) The only difference is criticism can be used for your advantage not just the criticisers!

Very good poem! I like it alot! Nice rhthym!

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Arikel [/i] [B]*blinks* Super saiyan.. your not looking, i see the plot perfectly fine... Tasha is the name of her character... The Red Dragon is the name of her sword.... She is saiyan or at least a hybrid and Anthony is some unknown saiyajin she made up. [/B][/QUOTE] Close "Red Dragon" is the name of the bad dude. Tasha is her the newest super saiyan and Anthony was Goku's forgotten brother :)

Lalaith: [i]keeps fending off orcs as the flee. Turns to Ellsa and Lauren[/i] What in the world is Rohirrim?

Jeez I was here at the middle to early stages of Version 2 how many years is that?! Wow...I feel old....I'm an Otakogie!! Well I was here in version one under a different name but I only posted like 3-4 times so I didn't count that :D

1: C, on the wall.... 2:C, I've always wanted to fly! 3:10-11

I believe it was 14,000 or something like that o.O

I would be the guy hidden in the shadows ignored by all only tlaking to a few of them...

Lalaith: [i]Shoots a couple orcs then looks at Nev[/i] Here take this just don't hit any of us! [i]Hands her the bow[/i] Just take the arrows out of my quiver!! [i]Draws his sword and prepares for the orcs[/i]

Congrats! Amazingly I have noticed you...of course I notice most people here so that doesn't say much...*sweatdrops*

Lalaith: [i]walks in the back making sure nothing sneaks up on them from the back[/i] I will be her friend for now, I will help her out, but adopting her...I don't know I shall think about it more......[i]Pulls his bow alittle tighter[/i] Heck I could teach her weaponry...

Um..just checking I'm Gohan right?

Lalaith: [i]Slides two plates to the two waking up[/i] Enjoy!! Tsk tsk Tsk...a princess up later than a humble commoner [i]shakes his head and laughs[/i]

Um they said I was a Wood Nymph...and I put male only...*sweatdrops* Oh well....can't post the pic its "innapropriate"

Lalaith: [i]Hands abob and Samantha their food[/i] Yup we're freaks! [i]Smiles enjoys, hands the wolf some food he just made specially for the wolf[/i][i]. Bows[/i] So what do you think is our next move?

Lalaith:[i]Wakes up to see everyone else asleep[/i] Heh its already dawn and they arn't up..[i]Shakes his head[/i] Oh well guess I'll make breakfast...[i]Begins fixing breakfast for everyone. Notices Abob and the wolf.[/i] We've got a new companion I take it?

I hate you people.....I'm too lazy to explain the whole thing so sorry... ----------------------- Lalaith: It all began when..[i] They all sit down and listen. Lalaith talks deep into the night, not leaving out one detail. Finally as the last embers of their fire begin to burn out Lalaith finishes with where they are at this point. Smiles[/i] Lauren: How did you know all that, I thought only the council knew all of that...they kept some of it secret didn't they? Lalaith: Yup [i]Grins[/i] They're advantages to being quiet all the time. [i]Yawns[/i] Well I'm gonna go to sleep now...[i]Nods to Nev[/i] Good night [i]smiles. Lays down next to a tree[/i]

Lalaith: [i]Looks as Obi-Wan runs off[/i] Master we are you go[i]Obi-wan runs by[/i] ing.......[i]Thinks to himself[/i] He certainly is in a hurry...I wander whats going on...Mace windu will know! [i]walks off to see Mace[/i][i]...Finds him staring out of the window and sees a senator walk into the Jedi council[/i] Mace windu just who I was looking for! Where has master gone running off to? And another senator looking for protection? I would gladly help! I'm sure master Kenobi would have no objections!

Lalaith: *bows* My name is Lalaith Ril of the woods beyound Rivendale.... neveroeiel: *smiles* I know. Please to meet you! Lalaith: *smiles and starts eating* *looks at Nev* I'm sorry....about the rest of your family....

Lalaith: Me adopt her....you saw how responsible I was in the cave! She would learn more from someone like you!

Lalaith:[i]Finally shieths his sword not bothering to clean it off[/i] They all will die.....poor girl....she's by herself.....everyone she knew gone...the king....he' going to die....[i]stands up[/i] I need to take a walk....[i]Walks out into the woods to try and calm down[/i]

Lalaith: [i]Continues trembling in anger[/i] They did nothing to deserve this! [i]Slams his sword into a dead orcs carcass[/i] Its...not...right...[i]Trembles[/i]

Wow I feel so speical I am the only time Mage!

I'm a Trusty sidekick Outsider Time Mage Royal Pain