Vicky

Yeh, your right! What the hell is the war about any ways??? And thanks for looking at this poem. I will read all of yours, because there so good!

That was Ok, but try to make a plot and make it a lot longer. What the hell was it about any way??? I needs work. Cheak out my storys and poems;A poem of life,poem,the meaning of peace,The howler, the dragon king, full moon fever and x-strang?

I'm not to happy about this one. I could have done better... I love this one! I have to atmit, I am a rubish speller. Hay, this may scare you...when you sleep and say to yourself 'If I sleep I'll wake up to a new day'. But what if you don't??? What if the dream goes on forever??? How do you know??? How long will the dream go on for???

Thank you! I just wrote a poem about peace. Its Ok because of the war and all... ):

There a war going on right now, So this might help. If the soilders think like this...the whole war would be over by now! This is a pretty good poem (; Let us all join hands together, All around the world. In ever tribe and ever nation, Let this banner be unfrold. Peace on earth good will to all men, Is the message that we bring. And as in unitey we lift our voices as one. At this season we remeber, The gift of gods own son. A small baby in a manger, Has brought hope to every one! So lift up your hearts togher, And let the world sing as one! Peace on earth! Peace on earth to everone! peace on earth, And good will to all men! Peace on earth to every one!!! Peace on earth to ever one!!!

I can anwser any qestion! I can give you cheats. I have millions of cheats for ever pokemon game! But not for ruby and sappeire (ani't got 'em yet). I have all the cheats right here! What do you want me to do???

Good poem. I like the words and all. Hay, do you want to see mine? you can rate them! There called; poem and poem of life. Or cheak out my storys;The dragon king, The howler,death of my best friend and full moon fever. Plus there the mistory one call x-strange? Please look at them and rate them...

NICE! I LIKE THE FIRST POEM BETTER.IT'S LIKE ME. I LIKE TO BE ALONE AND SIELENT.

You got 6. That good because on the 9th qestion i found that I was wrong! The most acient pokemon is ormeni (you proble never heard of it). The 3rd answer was red. The 6th one was hunter and gastly, there weight is 0. The last one was meowth, when it uses payday it makes coins and if you keep on useing this move you'll be rich! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If some one can get 10 I would be so happy. So, you think you got what it takes???? I don't think ya do!!! [color=indigo]Another double post... I also suggest you read the rules. - Desbreko[/color]

Some of the words are of TV to get me started. What is this full of care, We have no time to stand and stare. No time to stand with woods we pass, Were birds hide there seeds in grass. No time to stand beneith the bows, And stare as long as sheep and cows. No time to watch the cat go by, Or see the tiny robins fly. No time to watch the dark crows, Or start a fight with our greatst foe. No time to sing a silent song, It would waist lovely time it would take to long. Why is this life so full of care, We should have time, to stand and stare. What is to come of this life of care, We once had no time to spear. What will become of this place, will we die or meet a new face. Life pastes though the tide of day, Were we were children were we would play. What pulls us though the dark of night, The only thing would be light. What do we see at the end of the week, Is it death or the life we seek. Thats why we don't have time to share, We have to be careful we have to care. What is this life full of care We have no time to stand and stare. Hi, heres anthor poem. His coat dark as night His nose like pale skin His eyes shinny with light. He hunts his pray With claws of might Hunting for food each day. The wind tells him were to go He could never get lost Until he meets his greatst foe. Thay look each other in the eyes Thay snarl and thay sneer The fight will end with only lies. When the fight is done The beast moves on He's tried and his eye lids weigh a ton. The beast is awoke by noise and rumbles He listen as the voices spoke. He walks to the sene He sees hunter with guns Wearing brown and green. A hunter raised his gun Had thay spoted the beast So the beast began to run. Thay chased him though the jungle Though the mist and trees But the beast trips and falls in a bungle. Thay hit the beast and aim at him Is it the end for the brun One hunter then shot him in the lim. The jungle was silent on this day The death of a animal the death of a panther But his sprit sat were he lay... I wrote another one... I once stood in the dark, With a few stars in the sky, Thay looked like a speckled spark. I once stood in the darkness, I felt nothing nothing at all, I stood with evil heatless. I once stood in the night, Were it was dark there, There was no light. I like to stand in the dark, I like it there, I like to be alone... I like too be EVIL! That wasn't so good. But it's ok.

More...I neeeeedddddd.....mooorrree!!!!!! *drooool*

That well better than any poem that I can write! I tried to write one, but it was rubish! can you help?

Nice! I can tell your a good writer! It's all over that piece!

This may be pretty short. What are we? How do we know that what see and hear is true? What and who created us? Why are we here? I beleive that mankind was once peaceful and kind. But each man and woman were overpowered by greed and now we suffer death and pain for each other. Or was mankind just a dream. Just a dream waiting to be dreamed away?There are many mistorys. When we die, were do we go? Can you imagan not being alive, not being there, not able to think and not able to do nothing at all? I don't think you can, because you would be thinking and I asked you not to. Strange, isn't it? How do we know when we think the person next to you is not reading your mind? How do we know that when a person speaks there words are true? How did we and the other things around us get there? How? Is the impossible possible? How do we know when we sleep we will wake up? What is life for? To live then to die? It just doesn't make sense! If it doesn't make sense, than does that mean...it does not exists???? What happens to our soul when we die? Does it just dissapear if we don't earn trust? How do we know that the person next to you would not kidnap you? Or that your best friend will not cheat you??? Here is the one word that ansewers all these qestion... Faith.

I'm a good writer, and I wanted to share some of my tips with you all. A. A good tittle. 1.your tittle must catch the readers eye. 2.Make it thrilling, but make sure it keeps the plot of your story sraight. 3.Use capitals. b. A opening paragrgh. 1.Use a intro before the opening par'. 2.Speech marks catch the readers eye. 3.Make sure you discribe yourself. 4.End with a snapy pharse. c.The plot. 1.Try to keep the plot nice and clear. 2.Explain the plot on the second our third par'. d. beggining. 1.The beggining has to have a lot of discribing in it. 2.Make sure it joins onto the middle part. 3.The beggining is important because it will unfold the plot. E. Middle. 1.Unfold the plot. 2.Little discribtion is needed. 3.Keep the plot the same. F. Ending. 1.Finish the plot. 2.End the story with a snapy word. 3.Make sure you put in the solusion.

[COLOR=darkblue] I have a quiz for all you pokemon fans out there! OK, heres the qestoin; 1.What was garys first pokemon? 2.Why did govarni create MEWTWO? 3.In the organal episodes, what was the name of the pokemon trainer with a bulbasaur? 4.who was blues rival? 5.Were did clafairy come from? 6.Name the two lightest pokemon. 7.This is a hard qestion. Don't worry if you get it wrong....What is the name of the most aceint pokemon in the world? 8.what happens to a charmander if the flame on its tail goes out? 9.How many pokemon are there all togher? 10.Name a pokemon that could make you rich. Well, thats all. Heres your rate; 0. Do you even watch TV? 1-3. ....... 4-6. Not bad. 7-8. Silk! 9. Brill! 10. WWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Why has no one tried this quiz? To hard for ya!!!!????[/color] [color=indigo]Combined the double post. If you want to add something, please use the "Edit" button instead of posting another message. - Desbreko[/color]

Has any one seen dog soilders??? I have! If you haven't....YOU NEED A LIFE!:demon: :demon: :demon: :demon: :demon: :demon: :demon: :demon: :devil: :devil: :flaming: :flaming:

I not got a clue, soz. But can I ask you a qestion? What is the title of the last ever episode of voyager? Oh, wait! It's me again, my mum said it was probable a captain or commander. [color=green]No double-posting, so I combined your two posts into one. -Endymion[/color]

[B]Ok, this is my first time writing this one, so please, be nice...[/B] Hi! I'm gozita. I'm probale the weirdes boy you'll ever meet! I have parants, but there kinda like foster parent. I know there not my real parents, because...I have a tail, thay never let me outside when its a full moon and my long spikey hair never grows. It goes down to my knee and when I cut it, it just grows back!!! So, I bet your thinking 'CRRREEEEPPPPPYYYY' Well, if you are its not my folt! I was born like this. I don't no what I am or who I am. I mean, who whould call there son 'gozita'? But I now know the ansewer to my past. It all started when.... I was in my room staring at my hands. A few moments ago, a weird ball of light was glowing in my hand. I looked at my mirror. I got up and said to myself "Why?Why do I have to be different? Why can't I be normal?" My long, black spikey hair stood still. I wraped my tail round my waist. I walked out of my room. I then looked at my punch bag, it was ripped and broke. I did that, with one punch! I heade down the stairs. Oh, and theres one other secerat I have to tell you, I can fly....I have been able to do this since I was 10. I have been fly for 4 years. I ran down the stairs and out the door. Then karen (my foster parent) Opened the door. "Come in at 7! It's a full moon!" I looked back and nodded. I began to walk down the cold street. Then my mobile began to rumble. I picked it out of my pocket and it reed on the screen 'malcom calling'. It was my foster dad. I ansewed it. "Hi malc." "Rad! Be sure to come home early! It's a full moon!" "Yeh, ok. I'll be at the tie-known-do club. K?" I put the phone in my pocket after I switched it off. Then a gang of lads walked up to me. "Oh, not again...." One lad pushed me and said "Nice phone you got. What kind is it? Mind if we take a look?" I backed up crossing my arms. Then I stuck my tongue out at them. "LALALAL! COME! COME ON LITTLE DOGGY! HERE BOY!" I said. "Why...BOY GET 'EM!" Three lads charged at me. I then rose into the air, and the three boys banged into each other! I lifted myself higher, and higher. Then I swuped down and punched the lad who pushed me. The lad feel on the ground. When I turn round, the others had ran off. I then headed to the tie-known-do club. When I got there, I went to the hall. I walked to the doors of the hall and there was a notice saying 'CHANCLED TONIGHT'. I sat down and picked out my phone. I began to enter malcs number. "Wait! I here on my own! I can do what I want with out malc or karen knowing!" I put my phone in my poket and ran out of the door. I wanted to make this day count, so I had to do someting speical! I then rang up a taxi company. "Hello? Yes, could I have a taxi going from the david loyds center to the G-max?" I sat down and waited for the cab. "Hay! I can fly! If I go on the roof and when the taxi guy comes...I'll scare him off!" So I lifted myself into the air. I waited and waited. No cab arrived! "Thats it! I might as well fly to the G-max center!" So I did that! I lifted myself up and went to the middle of town. "Now, the G-max should around..." I looked around then I spotted a sign reading 'G-MAX'. I ran over to the sign.

Very nice! I finally found some one who enjoys writing about dbz. If you would like to wrote a story with me, then pm me!

Nice! Your a pro!

Thank again for reading my story. Well, on one part your right, it does need work. You must be a top writer to spot my mistake. I really am tring to get all of my mistakes right, but I write storys at night, and I don't have time to cheak the hole story.:cross:

Soz. And any way, it my first time writer this story! There a load of info, plus I'm a krap speller! And were you put 'cause my story is informal and 'cos would look a lot better. But thanks for filling me in on my mistakes, would you please help me write the other parts of the story? I think we would be a great pair for writing storys. Here the better 2nd chapter... I walked with my parents to the hotel. A small old guy was waiting for us. "Or, yes! You booked a room I belive!" My dad nodded his head. "Please come this way. I will show to your rooms." We followed the guy until he stopped. "Here. This is your room." He said to me. "No way! I get my own room!" I dived though the door. I looked around at the moldy room. I was not very inpressed! I unpacked my stuff. I didn't bother to but them in the draw, I just laded them on the bed. I have to go. I will do the rest later. I looked about for a while. I was so boreing! But tomormw were where gonna go to the temple! I peared out side my room. There was a long hall way. I went out side my room and went for a tour by myself. I walked down the long hall way. I came to a door at the end. It was open a bit. I peared inside the door. There was a cheast there. I slowly walked to it. I noticed a small hand print on it. "Whooa! That way cool!" I saw the hand print glow. Without any other thoughts, I placed my hand over the print. I felt a stronge ray of light blow my black hair to one side. I closed my eyes as the light got stronger. When the light cleared, I opened my eyes to find the cheast open. "What...happen.??" I asked myself. I saw three gold spheres in the cheast. One had a small red light in it, one had a blue light in it and the other had a green light. I like them. They looked like a nice preasent for one of my friends. I picked them out of the cheast, one by one. As I picked out the last one, the cheast shut... I ran out and back to my room. I took out the spheres and put them on the table. I walked to the window and peered outside. I could see the tip of The Temple. I stared at it. I had asked my dad over and over to go today, but he refused. I dicided to go by myself. I picked up the spheres and got the covers off the bed and made a rope. I hung the rope out of the wiondow and climbed down. I carefully placed my hands on the ground and shot off though the trees. I ran swiftly though the jungle and came to a sign. The sign read; 'Temple straight ahead'. I ran straight into the deepths of the jungle. I crossed over the leaves. I gained speed. I ran faster and faster. I then felt my feet come off the ground. I fell flat on my face. I got back up and kept running. I was nearly there!

Thats so easy!!!! Its the sorlax qestion. I got mixed up with the last, soz. A;1001. Ok, heres my HARD qestion! what was the real name of the first pokemon trainer in the old series? bonus; what was the name of his rival?

Thata really sweet poem. It reminds me of lucky. If you would like to hear about lucky, then read the short story called death of a friend.