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Cool! That has a real meaning to it!!! And I have one thing to say... When you think,or day dream or say any thing in your head, how do you know that the person next to you knows what your thinking??? Is it possable??? If it is, what you think, is not safe!
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This is just a short, sad story. And...it's true.:bawl: I sat next to my best friend in the world, knowing that it was luckys last sleep. For I knew...that when she slept, she would not wake up. The sun sone on her black coat as she struggled to keep her green eyes open. She crossed her black paw over the other. I began to cry, but I suddenly wiped away the tears. I looked back into the pasted...when I found lucky.... I saw a cat in a bush, maowing for food. Thats when I gave the little cat some food. Then she wouldn't go away, so I kept her. I have had her for 9 years. She had surrvived a fire and a flood. I looked down at her. She was moments away from...death. I remebered her cat fight! She got into a fight with a ginger cat, and came in with a strach on her back. I then placed my on her heart. I then forgot all the bad things, and remebered all of the best times. I then noticed a blanket. I got up and walked to get it, but the blanket was wet, so I went up stairs. I found a pached cover, luckys first cover. I went down stairs to lucky. I felt her heart...Then...I felt like my heart stoped...Because...Luckys heart had stoped......... She looked so peaceful. I then cried. The next day, I buried lycky...Alone. I was really going to miss her. She was the only thing that understood me. My best friend,my only cat, Had pasted on. Her life came to an end on monday. Bye lucky.... :bawl:
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WOWWW! That Is one super story!!! I really like the names and detail! Although I can't atmit it...You are such a better writter...than me.
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That was super mitch!!! The first one was so sad...you are the best writer I have ever come across! Please, you have to tell me how you do it!!!
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Writing What the hell Rick Hunter's posting here. Need some advice on this please?
Vicky replied to a topic in Creative Works
Nice story rick! If you are thinking of writing anther story, then pm me and i can give some good tips and ideas! Please look at my two storys, the howler and the dragon king. If you are really hoping to write a new story, We could join and create the best story ever! And trust I have mint tips! (well, what do you exspect! I got a L;5A in story writing!) -
:ball: If you have never herd of pokemon, then this story will be hard to understand.And a bit of dragonball z knowlegde is required. :ball: The master of pokemon was decided one year, when a boy called ash won the last champion. He then renamed himself the dragon king and any one who whanted to tested there skills went to gold cave to face the dragon king. But no one could beat him. As he got older he was so great, he rejected all his family and friends. He burnt his cap and when he was 25, he losed all his filling for ever one and ever thing. Even his pokemon! But one day, one man brought the old ash back. The only man to defeat the dragon king. But this man was no ordenry man, he was the...well, you will have to read my story. But the suprise at the end will change the pokemon life forever! Rad was on his way to gold cave. He knew about ash, the dragon king, he knew ever thing. His power alone was unbeliveable! Well... what do you exspect from a saiyan? As he walked the dusty path, he took out a silver pokeball and said. "You...You are the most powerful pokemon in the universe. You only can defeat the dragon king. He can not defeat you. You have to win...REIVAL!" He put the silver ball in his poket, and continued walking towards the cave. As he walked, he saw an old man on a rock. The old man looked at him and said. "You are brave to challange the dragon king. But you can not win!" Rad turn to the old man and said. "Proffeser oak...Have you heard of the most powerful pokemon in the universe?" Rad clenched his fist. "No" Said pr.oak. "Then this conversain ends here!" Rad said as he walked off. Rad continued to the cave. The wind blow rads black hair. Rad looked up at a cliff. On there was a girl, so rad flew up to her and said. "Misty...I am not surpised to see you with out ash." Misty looked at rad and said. "If he heard you, he would kill you, just for saying 'ash'. That doble crossing low life!" Said misty. "Do not worry, i, rad will teach him a lesson!" Rad then flew into the cave. Then...he came face to face with the master...THE DRAGON KING!!! Will i get the next part finshed? How will these battle end? Find out on the next chapter!!! Chapter 2. Rad looked at The dragon king. A small pokemon was next to him grining. The dragon king looked up. "SO, YOU WISH TO CHALANGE ME??? HAHAHA! A SILLY MONKEY WISHES TO CHALANGE THE GREAT DRAGGON KING??? DON'T MAKE ME LAUGH!" The dragon king's voice was cold and deep. The cave was dark and only a little bit of light shone though the hole in the side of the cave. Rad looked at the floor and placed a small pokeball there. He kicked it to ash. "WHAT THIS??? HEPLING YOUR FOE???YOU FOOL! I DON'T NEED YOUR HELP!!" Screamed The dragon king. Rad clened his fist and said "That pokeball is empty. It like you. Empty, you only care about staying the champ. All thats left inside you is greed." Rad took a small ball of his belt. "Are you ready, Dragon king?" Rad asked. "YOU FOOL!!! I WILL MAKE SURE GOLD CAVE IS YOUR GRAVE YARD!!!" Rad though his ball and yelled "GO! SANDSLASH!!!" A small pokemon called Sandslash jumped out of the ball. "HAHAHA! GO CHARIZARD!!!" Said the dragon king. Charizard was huge compered to sandslash! Rad then orded sandslash to use a fury swipe. Sandslash hit charizard with ever thing. But charizard stood there and didn't move. "Oh man! This is wores than i thought!" Rad said. "HAHAH! CHARIZARD! SHOW THEM HOW TO DO IT! FLAMETHOWER!!!!" Charizard unlashed a huge rope of fire. But the small sandslash quickly dodged it and hit charizard with a swift attack! But it didn't even hurt charizard!!! "HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! CHARIZARD IS IMMORTAL!" Rad looked at him. "H...How...It's just not possible! I'm beganing to think he is immortal!!!" Than Rad looked at both The dragon king and Charizard. "It's hard to see ash, or the Dragon king. Charizard is all ways in front of him. And when the dragon king orded charizard to attack, thay open there mouths at the same time!!! It's not possable!" Can Rad defeat THE DRAGON KING??? Is it sandslash's last battle??? Do you want me to shut up??? All qestion will be answered on the next chapter! (but not the last qestion!) Chapter 3. Sandslash had put all his effort into his last attack, and now, sandslash didn't have the energe to unlash another! "HHHAAAAHHHAHAHA! NOW, I WILL NOT ONLY KO YOUR LITTLE SAND RAT, BUT I WILL DISTROY IT! SANDSLASH WILL DIE BECAUSE OF YOUR MISTAKE!!!" Rad jumped back. "You! You have just turn this battle into a fight! In order to kill sandslash, you must go though me!" Rad stepped in front of sandslash and blocked the way for an attack. Dragon king then yelled "BOAHAHAH! CHARIZARD! FIRBLAST!!!!!!!!!!!" Rad put his head down, then he took another pokeball out of his poket. Then he though it. A charizard with a scare on his right eye arose. "HAHAHAH!YOUR CHARIZARD WILL DIE WITH YOU AND THAT SAND RAT!" Yelled the dragon king. But then, rad charizard unlashed a exstreamly powerful flamethower, distoring The dragon kings attack. The flame hit the dragon king's charizard and smoke filled the cave. When the smoke clear, sandslash was stood next to rad who was smiling. "Dragon king! You charizard has been KO! And now that the ultmate pokemon has been relesed, I am the victor! But even if you nock out my charizard, there is another pokemon the you will find unbeatable!" Rad closed his eyes. "You fight with power! I fight with spirt!" The dragon king began to laugh. "YOU FOOL! CHARIZARD IS IMMORTAL! THATS WHY I AM CALLED THE DRAGON KING!!!!!!!!!!!!" Rad looked in shock as The dragon king's charizard got up. "USE YOUR LITTLE MONKEY BRAIN AND TRY TO KEEP UP WITH ME!" Yelled The dragon king. "Thats it!!!" Yelled rad. "Charizard! Attack the dragon king!!!!" Yelled rad. Straight away the pokemon chared up a flame. "FOOL! I AM IMMORRTAL!!!!" What has rad got? Will i finash the next part? (I don't no!) Chapter 4. Rads charizard unleashed the flames of fury. The dragon king stood still. "YOU FOOL!!!" Said The dragon king. The flames swamed round then fell in on the dragon king. The cave filled with smoke once again. When the smoke clear...The dragon king and charizard were on the floor. "Yes!!! I figured your little plan! You shared a heart with charizard! And you were the source!!" Said rad. The dragon king got up. "Y...OU! MY NAME IS DRAGON KING BECAUSE OF MY HEART I SHARED! YOU ARE THE FIRST TO SEE THOUGH ME!!! BUT YOU CAN NOT DEFEAT THE CHAMPION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The dragon king return charizard to its pokeball. "GO!!! BLASTOISE!!!!" A blastoise arose from the pokeball. Then charizard used fire blast. It wasn't very effective! "Well, if charizard can't cut it...I will use...ZAPDOS!!!!!!!!!!" Radcalled charizard back and zapdos swooped out. "Zapdos!Thunder!" Zapdos blasted blastoise with a bolt of thunder! Once again the cave was covered in a thick mist of smoke. As the smoke cleared, Rad jumped back. "Nooo! It...can't be!" Rad stared at Blastoise. Zapdas's attack didn't effect Blastoise! "BAAHAHAHAH! YOU FOOL! I TRAINED BLASTOISE SO WELL, HE HAS NO WEAKNESS!" Said The dragon king. "BLASTOISE! SUPER HIDRO ATTTACK!!!" The Fearless turtle powered up an ora of water around him. "What?!?" The turtle let the huge water bomb out! "Zapdos! Fly! NOW!" Zapdos took of leaving a brust of smoke around him. "BABA!HAHAHAHA! YOU CAN NOT ESCAPE ME!" The powerful water attack followed Zapdos around. "ZAPDOS! GET AWAY!" Rad yelled. The line of water gained on Zapdos. In a few seconds...it was all over for Zapdos. The attack hit Zapdos so hard, it was powerful enough to knock him out. Rad jumped away. "NNNOOO! ZAPDOS! LEGENDS CAN'T LOSE!" Rad held out Zapdos's pokeball. "zapdos...return..." Zapdos was dragged out of battle. "I...I Can't win!" Rad said. Rad had 5 pokemon left. And he was worried. "You can knock out my pokemon, you can treaten me, but you can never, ever take our souls!" Rad smerked at The dragon king. "HAHAHAHA! DO YOU BELIVE POKEMON HAVE SOULS!?" Just before i start the next bit, I hope you all know what it feels like to have no reiple! *sniff* Chapter five. "I chose you! MEWTWO!!!" Yelled Rad. Mewtwo brust out of his pokeball "BAHAHAHAHAHA! YOU CAN NOT DEFEAT ME!" Said the dragon king. Blastoise used a water gun on mew two! "Mewtwo! Releve attack!!" Rad shouted. (What attack was that?) A huge golden shock of energy was unlashed from mewtwo. "NNNNOOOO!" Screamed the dragon king. The energy dismantaled blastoises water gun. Mewtwos attack clashed against blastoise. "BLAST!" Yelled the drgon king. Blastoise was still standing. "Now! MEWTWO!" Rad yelled. Mewtwo used a pywave. "ARRRGGHHH! BLASTOISE DOGDE IT! THATS AN ORDER!" Shouted The dragon king. Blastoise did nothing! Mewtwo's attack hit! "Ha!" Rad laughed. Blastoise fell to the ground. The dragon king stomped and ruturned the turtle to its ball. "Ha! Now were even! I hate to atmit it, but my sandslash was KO!" Rad said. "YOU FOOL! YOU HAVE JUST ATMITED YOUR DEFEAT!" The dragon king laughed. There were two pokemon KO for each trainer. "GO! VENUSAUR!!!" Yelled the dragon king. Venusaur came out of its ball with a roar. "Mewtwo! Use swift!" Mewtwo let out a rain of stars.
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I have not really finshed the howler. I have to warn you, !!!WARNING!!!THIS STORY MAY STARE THE PANTS OFF YOU!!!IF YOU HAVE WET THE BED BEFORE...MAKE SHORE YOU WERE A NAPPY!!!:demon: I'm rad. I have a story or tale about a creature called the holwer, that you should know to prepeare you for the horrible terror!!! Well, listen hard! 'COS this tale will be told only once!... On earth ther was a legand that ever one feared. The legand says that years ago there was a powerful demon called the howler, that killed everone in his path. But one day a champion arose from the temple and silled the demon in the temple were he came from. But the howler sour that a champion like him set foot in the temple he would arise! But I a couldn't worry about this legand. My parents said that I could chose our holiday this year! And I wanted to go to the temple, to see the howler! So I went to my parents room. I headed up the stairs and when i arived at my parents room my dad looked at me and said "So, were do you want to go this year, wales?" I looked at him and said "ER..can we go to the temple?" "ABSOLUTELY NOT!!!" He yelled. "Well then! THAT IT! ME AND YOU...IT'S OVER! I'LL NEVER SPEAK TO YOU AGAIN!" I said. I knew it would work! It would always work! "NO,,,,er..FINE! WE'll go! But you will do as I say all week! OK?" He said. I walked up to him and shuck his hand and said "ITS A DONE DEAL!" But I would do anything to take that back...I would do anything to stay away from the temple, if i knew what terror would be waiting for me. Find out what beholds me on the next chapter of the howler!!! I figured it was really easy to get my parents to go! Can you belive how quick it was??? I began to pack my stuff, i had ever thing! My camera, snacks, a hand TV and all my clothes. The only thing i didn't have was protection. What if there was killer bees or lion??? But i couldn't worry. I was on a island in the middle of the ocaen. I was just finshing stuffing my clothes into my case, when someone called up "Rad! Come on it's time to go!" I rushed down the stairs. I got in the car and my dad said "I really don't see the point in going!" He looked worried.Why was he so worked up??? I only whanted to SEE the temple. When we got to the air port, i looked at my dad. He looked really worried. When we got on the plane, i fell asleep. But after a few hours, my mum woke me up. She had spillt a glass of coke on my lap. She said sorry and wiped it off me. I felt coled on the plane. My dad picked up a small handkerchief and wiped the sweat off his face.:( I sat up the rest of the jornuy. When we arrived, the hole island was misty. I was miststerously strange.
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LIve actoin movie?!? Yeh...If thay DID make one it would be hard and all 'cos of the powering up and all and fling! Anyway IT DON'T WANT TO SEE THE ACTOIN MOVIE!!! I live in salford, and thay don't even show movies of dbz, 'cos not many people like it!!!
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Anime Man, since when was this announced!?!
Vicky replied to Jinzouningen17's topic in Otaku Central
I've played loads of dbz games! I play the legacy of goku,dbgt the final bout, the legacy of goku 2 and dbz the legand begins. If any one knows any better games, tell me. -
I live in salford and the dragonball gt just started! But i hate dbgt! I love dbz 'cos i know everthing about it! Send me a qestion and i bet i can ansewer it!