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[SIZE=1][B]Name: Donkey Kong [IMG]http://home.earthlink.net/~l_evans/donkeykong.jpg[/IMG] Games:[/B] Donkey Kong 3 (I think...) Donkey Kong 94 Donkey Kong Country Donkey Kong Land Donkey Kong 64[/SIZE] I don't know many games Donkey Kong is in... heh... sorry.

[SIZE=1]David sighed heavily from his window. He had just finished a few lessons, and a training session with Logan, though he skipped a few with the excuse he was too gutted to do anything. A full moon meant no going out of his room, no windows open, no light except the one in his room, no staying up late, not nothing! And he had big plans for tonight.... "You're supposseed to be trainin'!" A voice shouted. David turned around, seeing Logan stood at his door. "I'd rather not... I seriously had some good plans for tonight.... damn moon... stupid humans, it's not fair!" David shouted, slamming his window shut and laying down on his bed. "I can never stay up long in the night, because I'm always using up my energy, but when I finally convince myself I want to, it has to be a full moon... I wanted to go out somewhere, too..." David muttered. Logan crossed his arms over his chest and sighed. "You know, kid, Jubilee and Storm are goin' to the Mall pretty soon, Jubilee broke her CD player again. You should go with them, and don't worry about the next few training sessions, you can do double tomorrow." Logan muttered. David jumped off his bed and smiled. "Wow! Really!? I'm gone!" David shouted, in a tone that wasn't really like him. He ran past Logan and came to the stairs, and instead of transforming into an animal, he simply slid down the banister(sp?) and landed on the floor, seeing Storm and Jubilee near the door, and Jean was nearby too. Maybe a few other students would be coming...[/SIZE]

[SIZE=1][B]Name:[/B] Lucas Sherratt [B]Age:[/B] 11 [B]Gender:[/B] Male [B]HomeTown:[/B] Cinnabar Island [B]Appearance:[/B] [IMG]http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/rstrainer72.png[/IMG] Only his clothes are all red. [B]Personality:[/B] Lucas is somewhat proud of himself and his family, even if he does lose. He isn't so tough and will not lose a match, he knows that losing is part of the path to becoming a Champion. He wants to follow in his fathers footsteps, and vowed to catch all the Pokemon, but first find all the Pokemon his father had on his team. Lucas will never ever give up until he is truly defeated. He likes to explore many places and meet new people, and is also the kind of person who doesn't think he's the best at everything. He likes to battle a lot, and is very willing and brave. He's kind sometimes, but will also act cool in front of people. [B]The normal Pokemon from Oak:[/B] [IMG]http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs206.gif[/IMG] Charmander [B]History:[/B] Lucas is the son of a Fire Pokemon trainer. His father had travelled many different regions, but had settled in Kanto. He told his son one day he should become a Pokemon trainer, but one day when Lucas was 5 his father had dissappeared off into the Mountains somewhere. It was thought he was just lost or something, and was fine, until it was discovered that Lucas's father was dead. No one knew what happened, but all of Lucas's fathers six Pokemon had been killed somehow: A Charizard, Nidoking, Pidgeot, Golduck, a Jolten and a Tauros. Lucas vowed to follow in his fathers footstepped, and said he would try to catch every Pokemon and have the exact same team as his father. But catching a Charmander was very hard, and Lucas could never find one. But he would never give up. His father was a great trainer, and had also travelled the world. Lucas was out of ideas on how to catch some Pokemon, until he was told about Oak from a friend. His friend took him to Pallet Town, so Lucas could get his Charmander.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]I'm not really sure how long it took me... around an hour, maybe even more. I wanted it to feel like something meaningful, and not the normal adventure-like things I do. I wanted to get the write, and try to make the rhyming not just be for the sake of it, so I had to change a few things and think somethings over. That's what I'm trying to aim for in most things now; meaningful things. So it took me around 1 hour - 2 hours to finish off completely. Thanks for suggesting that line. I'll try it out.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Thank you all for your comments. Yes this is something new, since I normally write stories and poems aren't like this, so I found it a little hard to do. Though I've been playing around with that one line, because I too thought "whatnot" didn't sound so good. How about this?[/B] [CENTER]I trusted them [B]too[/B], I trusted them more than they [B]knew[/B].[/CENTER] [B]I'm not so sure about this knew line, though, since I use "too" soon afterwards. I also got this one:[/B] [CENTER]We trusted each [B]other[/B], We depended on [B]one another[/B].[/CENTER] [B]I like both lines, though. But which one do you all think works best? Again, thank you all for your wonderful reviews! I have 3 more to do based on the Hero in this (Poem, short story and long story, which I may not post, heh), but again, thanks. The actual consequences of the "Hero's" actions were the death of his friends, as well as his father (without their main Hero by their side, the friends all lose to their arch enemy when moral is reduced), therefore leaving the earth un protected, so it would be correct to say that a Hero's sins are the blood of the earth, heh.[/SIZE][/B]

[size=1][b]OH crap! Sorry, I posted this in the wrong section ^_^;; Could I Mod please move this? I'm really sorry, Skye, ^_^;;.[/b] [b]It's true I can't draw hands, I find them one of the hardest things to do -.- Though he was meant to be holding a staff (as you can tell from the lines slashed through his hands, which I didn't rub out, heh), but I can't draw hands. I can draw paws, but I can't draw hands.[/b] [b]Would anyone here happen to know any good sites to help me?[/b] [color=teal]Moved. -Syk3 (look at the spelling!)[/color][/size]

[SIZE=1][B]Please don't kick my head in because I have somethings wrong on this. Telling me what I could improve on and stuff like that is perfectly fine, but just don't be SO harsh. I did this for my story, "Hero". There are two people in it: The tall guy stood up, Drakoma (Andrew), and the guy on his right, Drakomas (Alan). The thing that looks like it's some weirdo jumping is Alan before he transforms into Silver Shaft, which means he looks very light and isn't supossed to look shaded. I'm only 12 (most people thought I was 14, heh, sorry about that XD), so I'm proud of this. I'll be doing another one with the five main characters on shortly: [IMG]http://img4.imagetown.net/88760117.jpg[/IMG] Comments?[/SIZE][/B] EDIT: Sorry about the crappy-ness of it, the scanner doesn't like my shading so it messes it up XD

[SIZE=1][B]Current Location: Training with Joey[/B] Lucas closed his eyes and sighed slightly. "I think these two have had enough for today... don't you? Ivysaur, return!" Lucas said. Ivysaur was still panting, but it slowly backed away to Lucas. "Agreed." Joey said. His Scizor returned to his side also, and Lucas grinned. He pointed forward at the battle field (well...), and smirked. "Machop, it's your turn!" Lucas shouted. Machop chanted its name happily, and leapt forward into battle, showing off with a series of punches followed by a mid-air spinning kick. Machop really was a show off. Joey smiled. He sent Onix forward to battle, and Machop stared up at the giant Pokemon, raising its fist. "Onix, tackle!" Joey shouted. Onix charged at Machop, but missed and hit the ground. Machop had leapt into the air, and then began kicking Onix on the head with really quick low kicks. It didn't do much, because Onix was a Rock type Pokemon, but it also meant Onix was slow. Machop leapt back on the floor and punched the air again, showing off. "Machop, Focus energy!" Lucas yelled.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]My uncle sent me the DVD of that, and it's funny! I love it all! I have a thing for violence and gore, and when it's funny I just love it. The eyeball ones always make me laugh the most, or the ones were their skin comes off. Cuddles is my favourite, and Nutty. Cuddles always seems to get the beating... which it great! Nutty's just.... a nutcase. He's like some sort of stalker. The ones where things go "boom" are also really funny ^_^ I love the Happy Tree Friends.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]OOC: Great post, everyone. Though Wolf can't teleport, only Pirate can, heh, sorry about that Arika. Pirate can teleport himself or others at will, sorry I should have made it clearer ^_^;;[/B] IC: The same robin that had been flying around the grounds for some time, rested on top of the roof of the mansion. The small bird suddenly morphed into David, and he began to stare down at the people coming out of the mansion. Two he noticed were Storm and Jean, two people David would talk to a lot. David smiled, and leapt off the rooftop morphing into an eagle. He swooped down, just missing Storm's head and landed in the tree nearby, morphing back to his normal self and crouched on the branch. "Why is it that when everyone else get's up, you're always awake?" A voice mumbled below. David looked down seeing Wolverine sat below. David shrugged. "Or is it that you never go to sleep?" Snarled Wolverine. David narrowed his eyes. "I don't do all-nighters, though I plan on staying up late tonight, before there's a fullmoon that is." David said. "There is a fullmoon tonight, David." Storm suddenly said. "What?! Are you joking? There can't be a fullmoon tonight!" David gasped. He wanted to have some fun on his own tonight... but it was a fullmoon! He couldn't go out in the fullmoon. He couldn't even let the moonlight shine on him. "Great..." David muttered. "Well, there's plenty to do in the mansion..." Jean said to David. David rolled his eyes. "What, like Chess...?" David muttered. "Well maybe you should try training in the Danger Room some time!" Snarled Wolverine. David jumped and leapt out of the tree landing crouched on the floor. "On second thoughts mutant Chess sounds good." David said, jumping into the air and morphing into an eagle. He flew off back to the roof and began to fly over the mansion.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=7][FONT=chiller][CENTER]X-Men: Mutant Clash[/CENTER][/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=1][B]NOTE:[/B] In this RPG, you can be a character from the series (Excluding Evolution) or the comics. The time line this story takes place is really somewhere in the TV Series, or wherever. You don?t have to read the comics or watch the Original Series to join in. Basically, just think ?X-Men? and nothing more of it, heh. All information is in the story, and not much about the comic/series past will be mentioned. [B]Story:[/B] Khaldun was a young boy, born in the year of 1312. A long time ago. He was extremely gifted, with immortality. He could not die. Khaldun?s body was indestructible. Well, so he thought. His skin was unbreakable, but his bones were not. Khaldun was the leader of a tribe when he grew older, and was said to be crushed in a great battle. His bones broke, but his skin was fine. Khaldun could never walk, or move again from that battle, his bones were broken for good. His two best friends helped him, by asking a wise man living in the mountains for help. The man was a mutant too, but not many knew it. He said to Khaldun, that by using his powers he would freeze him in ice, in time. He said that in the future, his bones could be fixed and encased with a very strong metal. Khaldun agreed. Now at the time of the X-Men, a new project was going on. The data used to make Weapon X (Wolverine) was stolen, and used to create other Weapons. However, only a few mutants had been given Metal bones (no claws). Khaldun was found in his ice tomb, and taken back to be worked on. Though his skin could not be cut, so they couldn?t implant anything on his bones. So they did something else. They put Adamantium over both his arms, giving Khaldun two metal fist, and also with another little trick. Four sharp, Adamantium claws under his new metal-covered fist. They thought he would not remember anything from his past, but Khaldun did. He escaped, hating humans and mutants. Khaldun wanted to rule. Back in his time, Mutants hardly existed, but if Khaldun used his power to the fullest back then he could have ruled forever. He decided to make his own Mutant team, featuring some of the most powerful mutants around. Several had the healing factor and metal bones (no claws) on his team, which was a great advantage. He planned to join in the war of Mutants and Humans, but he knew there were many in his way. The Friends of Humanity, Magneto, even Mr. Sinister, and of course the X-Men had to go. Khaldun made his base in the old lab, which gave him his Adamantium, meaning any mutants joining his team who had the healing factor could be almost unbeatable, and almost meaning a painful death to all he captures. Back in the X-Men?s Mansion, new mutants had joined. Some young, some old, some making trouble all the time. The war between Humans and Mutants still went on, but now? a much more powerful, and newer force had risen, did they stand a chance? Who knows? [U]X-Men[/U] [B]Ororo Munroe - Storm Scott Summers - Cyclops Logan (James *insert second name which I forgot) - Wolverine Jubilation Lee - Jubilee Marie (possibly) - Rogue[/B] - Leh (Although in L.A., so I'll put X-Men) [B]Xavier Hank MCcoy - Beast Jean (She?s in this?) David Phantom - Shaft[/B] - Me [B]Leon River - Shock[/B] - Assassin [B]Robin Blackburn - Pyro[/B] - DaisukeAngel [B]Shiro Uzuki - Primal[/B] - Vilearchangemon [B]Remy Lebeau - Gambit[/B] - Shiguru (Formelly Mr.Sinister, however). [U]Magneto[/U] [B]Eric Magnus Lensherr - Magneto; The Master of Magnetism[/B] - Jokopoko [B]Jim Mishima - Shadow[/B] - Mage15 [B]Pietro Maximoff - Quicksilver[/B] [U]Mutant Knights:[/U] [B]Khaldun - Prince[/B] - Arika [B]??? - Gargoyle[/B] [B]Aaron Fransher - Pirate[/B] [B]??? - Wolf[/B] [I]I added Pietro, and I would have added Wanda but I didn't.... they have their reasons for joining, so... ya know...? For the three other members of The Mutant Knights, there's some information on them in the recruitment. Now... begin![/I] [U]Mutant Knights Lair (aka, an old Lab)[/U] Gargoyle was sat ontop of the broken tanks, staring down at Pirate and Wolf, arguing again. They two had been calling each other rude things for the past 6 hours, and Gargoyle was getting bored of it. Though it did give him time to think... a Mutant named Magneto would control metal... meaning Khaldun's strength became a weakness. Gargoyle rolled his eyes when Wolf leapt at Pirate for the 19th time in a minute. Pirate shouted at her, and basically flung his arms to the side. In a poof of silver dust, Wolf was gone, but suddenly reappeared, hitting Gargoyle off the tank and making the two of them hit the floor hard. "Garh! Can't you two stop this nonsense for two minutes?" Gargoyle snarled. He was so angry that drool was dripping from his mouth and his eyes were reader than normal. "When Khaldun is gone, I am the one who should be throwing you around! Khaldun trusts me to make sure no one attacks while he's gone, and you're making my job harder!" He snapped. "Sorry. Where is Khaldun anyway?" Pirate asked. Gargoyle froze for a moment, and sighed. "I don't know... maybe he has a plan... or maybe he's gathering information, I just don't know..." Gargoyle muttered. Lately, Khaldun hadn't told him anything. Gargoyle sighed, and the two other mutants began to fight again, but Gargoyle didn't listen. "Whatever you're planning, Khaldun... don't do anything stupid... they'll find a way to beat you one day... they always do..." [U]Xavier's Mansion[/U] It was very early in the morning, around 4am. The sun was just starting to rise, well it was summer. None of the students were up, expect on. David Phantom, or Shaft. A small robin was sat in the tree, staring out at the Mansion. It was the only time David could be perfectly alone, in the mornings that is, for only a few hours. He small robin flew out of the tree and seemed to flip over into the air, quickly morphing into David in the blink of an eye. David landed softly on the ground and smiled. He began to run towards the mansion, and leapt into the air, morphing into an eagle and flying over the rooftop. He didn't dare to wake anyone, it would be bad for him and everyone else. David hardly had any friends, but he was pretty fond of Storm, Jean and Beast. They might be classed as friends, if not, David had none. David flew low on the ground, and kept flying and flying until he came to the water. He flew above the sea, dodging the waves. Suddenly, David dived under the water, then leapt out. He was morphed into a dolphin, and was flipping up and down the sea. Being alone wasn't so bad... not really... -- After many hours of flying through the grounds, David was finally a little bored. People began to wake up, so David flew back to his room, stood near the window and sighing. "Is this really the right place for me...?" He muttered to himself. "Is it...?" He asked again, sighing heavily. He quickly morphed into a small robin and flew out of his window once more, flying through the grounds.[/SIZE]

[quote name='doukeshi03']That disallowed goal was not a foul. Terry and Campbell were clearly intent on the ball and no attention was spared to the keeper. The keeper was underneith the ball and could in no possible way catch it. You have to have your arms up when you jump and the keeper just got in the way.[/quote] [SIZE=1][B]Totally agree with you. Campbell and Terry had their eyes on the ball all the time, and the Keeper was just getting in the way. He jumped up afterwards, and if he did get smacked in the face or whatever, tough sh** it was his own fault. Even if a foul [I]was[/I] intended (I don't think it was... pfft), the goalie was in no way injured and was hardly touched.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]This is... something I did, based on a request from a friend, a very, very good friend. I did right away, and it's basically... something I tried hard at... because... well it's a very long story, but I want to prove something to this friend. His name is Alan, and he requested I used his name. I wanted to prove I can do something like this... so I tried hard, reviews are wanted, please. Here's some information first: Italics are the Poem parts and thoughts, Center are the Poems, normal text is describing what he did, Bold is changing opinion to the demon inside (which is just Alan himself, though he believes it's someone else), and the very end is still Alan saying the poem, but as the demon-part, so you see the Person changes, you know? If you're smart enough, you'll see:[/B] [CENTER][U][B]Song of the Sins[/U][/B] [I]I sin in many different ways, I sin on many different days. I betrayed, attacked and defeated, They defended, ran back and retreated. I was never a friend to them, Nor them to me. Sins of the Hero, Song of the Sins. I trusted them a lot, They trusted me and whatnot. Though I betrayed them all, It doesn?t make me proud, or tall. I was never to be trusted, But they could be trusted. Sins of the Hero, Song of the Sins. I did it all to him too, I would have done the same too you. Betray, destroy, and kill, So do something useful? write your will? I?ll do the same to you, Because I?ve done it before. Sins of the Hero, Song of the Sins?[/I][/CENTER] He never really meant to kill them? it wasn?t his fault. It was the demon? the demon lay doormen inside of him for so long. An unbeatable demon that was a childhood menace. The dark side to Alan, the dark side to the Hero. Betrayal, destroying? killing? was is really his dark side, or just? Alan? He murdered his friends? even his father? the person he loved so much, the man who was the Hero?s Hero? and Alan murdered him without a second thought? his hands were the hands of no hero, but the hands of a sinner? [CENTER][I]Hero, not so. Warrior, oh no. One, two, three, There?s no hope let for me. Sins, sins, sins of the Hero. Song, song, song? of the Sins.[/I][/CENTER] Every breath he took was the air of a murderer, the man who was a traitor, the man who was not all good, and the man who could not control his dark side. The Hero was no more, the Hero was dead, and the evil had taken its move, and won the game. Checkmate? [CENTER][I]Oh? I?m no Hero, No, I?m not a Zero. I?m a killer, through and through, And I?m coming for you, too. Sins, sins, sins of the Hero. Song, song, song? of the Sins.[/I][/CENTER] His father, his friends, his family, everyone he loved and cared about became people who were murdered in his sins. Hero? no? Killer? without a doubt. Alan didn?t mean it, but maybe it was? destiny? [I][CENTER]Never a Hero to mankind, None of the Hero left behind. Sins of the Hero, Song of Sins. Sins, sins, sins of the Hero. Song, song, song? of the Sins.[/CENTER][/I] [CENTER][B]It?s meant to be this way? it is? listen to my words? believe what I say:[/B] Murder, betray. It?s meant to be this way. No turning back. No other path to track. Stay above the lowest, Stay above Zero? Everything you?ve done? Are the Sins of a Hero.[/CENTER][/SIZE]

[SIZE=7]WTF?![/SIZE] [SIZE=1][B]WTF?!! What the hell was that ref doing?! WE WON! WE SHOULD HAVE! That.... was not FAIR! I CANNOT believe England LOST because that STUPID ref couldn't handle the fact that England was GOING to beat them! WHO THE HELL WOULD LET HIM GET AWAY WITH THAT?! We won! We should have won! Why didn't someone slap that idiot silly! .....Words cannot express how angry I am, only cap locks can.... Now I'm pretty much calmer, I think I'll go and bang my head on the wall... I just can't believe it! England had that goal, fair and square, and what... it was just... gone? What was wrong with that ref? If anyone in the world was on drugs, it was him. That was just... poor... England should have won, I know it for a fact! The match was ours... tell me... why is it everytime England is finally in the light, but suddenly a poor excuse comes and ruins it? It just can't believe it, really... Again I say... words cannot express how gutted and angry I am...[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Current Location: Training with Joey.[/B] (This may be a fairly long post) Lucas watched Onix and Scyther excange blow after blow. They battled amazingly, and Lucas was about to join in. He pointed forward, ordering Charmander to fight. Charmander leapt in the air happily, and ran forward. "Charmander, use-" Lucas suddenly cut off and gasped. A very, very strong force had leapt out of the bushes and rammed Charmander to the ground. Everyone, including the Pokemon stared. Lucas gasped again. "Tauros!" He shouted. It was the same one, it had a neckless... Joey looked puzzled at the fact that a wild Tauros was there. "How is there a Tauros in these parts?" Joey asked. Lucas narrowed his eyes. "A trainer abandoned it..." Lucas replied. Charmander steadily got up, with some wounds on its face. Before Lucas could make his next command, Tauros charged forward once more, knocking Charmander to the floor. Charmander smacked hard on th ground, but Lucas wasn't about to give up. "Charmander, try to over power it with Ember!" Lucas yelled. Charmander staggered up again, and began to charge a flame in its mouth... but too late. Tauros raged forward, knocking Charmander to the ground once more. "That trainer must have really upset this Pokemon." Joey said. Lucas didn't reply, he just nodded. Tauros was so fast.... and again, Tauros hit Charmander with another charging attack. Charmander fell on the ground, almost lifeless, but it got back up. Machop was about to step in, but Lucas stopped him. "Charmander! Get out of there!" Lucas shouted. Charmander wasn't listening, it wasn't going to give in. Tauros had the advantage, it was wild, it was ruthless, it was bigger. Tauros charged forward, hitting Charmander again, but Charmander didn't fall. It tried to stay on its feet. "Charmander! Return, now!" Lucas yelled. "You can't beat that! And I won't let any other Pokemon get charged!" Lucas yelled. Charmander still didn't pull out of battle. It went to slash Tauros, but again, Tauros charged it too the ground. "Charmander, PULL BACK! You can't win!" Lucas shouted. His expression suddenly turned to a worried one, but Charmander didn't listen again. It wasn't that it didn't obey Lucas, it was that it didn't want to let Lucas down. Lucas gulped. Tauros began to tap its foot on the ground, and was ready to cahrge at full power. Charmander stepped back, charging up a quick flame and hitting Tauros with it. But it was no use, the flames just went around Tauros. Charmander stepped back again. "Lucas, I ca-" Joey began. "No!" Lucas shouted. Charmander had to get out of the way... on his own. Tauros was coming up to Charmander, it was only a matter of seconds for the final blow. Everyone looked a little shocked at how one simple Tauros could be such a problem. Tauros was about to hit. "CHARMANDER!" Lucas shouted. Too late. Lucas couldn't watch, he turned away closing his eyes tightly. He didn't know what had happened, he couldn't watch. "Lucas!" Joey shouted. Lucas shook his head, but then slowly turned around. He didn't open his eyes, until he felt like there was a warm bright light nearby. When he did, he saw Charmander glowing white, stopping Tauros with his hands. Suddenly, the white figure of Charmander grew bigger, and bigger. Lucas smiled. "Charmeleon!" Charmeleon shouted. It had evolved! Lucas couldn't cheer, he was too happy to cheer. Charmeleon looked amazing, it was pretty big too, and it stopped Tauros in its tracks! Without having to take orders from Lucas, Charmeleon thrusted Tauros backwards, and threatened Tauros with an attack. Tauros stopped, turned around, and ran back into the wild. Charmeleon lifted its arms into the air and chanted its name. Lucas, no longer able to surpress his emotion, leapt into the air cheering. "Charmeleon! Charmeleon! Next stop, CHARIZARD!" Lucas yelled. Charmeleon smirked proudly. Machop leapt up and down too, and Joey was smiling. Lucas continued to leap up, then stopped. He suddenly remembered... "Mars... Venus..." He muttered, taking out the two Pokeball's with the ink on them. He stared at them for awhile. [I]Only use these when you Charmander has evolved.[/I] "What are those?" Joey asked him. "A friend of my brothers gave them too me, I can only use these Pokemon when Charmander has evolved." Replied Lucas. He looked at Charmeleon on grinned. "Looks like he has... GO!" Lucas yelled, tossing the two Pokeballs into the air. He waited for the two Pokemon to emerge.... and in a flash of red light was... "Ivysaur!" Shouted Ivysaur. Lucas smiled. Beside it was Wartortle! Lucas leapt into the air once more. "Ivysaur! Wartortle! Charmeleon! Machop!" Lucas yelled. He leapt into the air, and stared at his Pokemon. "This is brilliant! Now I'm ready to really train!" Lucas yelled, clenching his fists. --- [B]Pokemon Team: [IMG]http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs207.gif[/IMG] Charmeleon [IMG]http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs204.gif[/IMG] Ivysaur [IMG]http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs210.gif[/IMG] Wartortle [IMG]http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs073.gif[/IMG] Machop[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Current Location: Outside Rustboro, training.[/B] Charmander panted heavily. Sweat was running down the poor creatures face, but he wasn't about to give up. "Charmander... keep going! Try to trick your oppenant!" Lucas yelled. Charmander stopped panting for awhile, and charged forward with a tackle attack. He missed when Houndour leapt to the side, but then Charmander managed to whip Houndour with his tail. Machop and Lucas cheered. Flames still flickered around them from the Ember attack, but it didn't bother Lucas too much. "Houndour, stay tough!" Joey said. Lucas smirked. "Charmander try another Ember attack!" Lucas yelled. Charmander leapt back before Houndour could attack, still panting. It opened its mouth wide, charging up a flame. Houndour leapt out of the way when Charmander fired his attack, but more flames filled the area. Lucas and Joey covered their eyes, waiting for the flames to die down. Lucas looked over his arms at the flames, seeing them slowly die down. Both Pokemon were worn out. Lucas narrowed his eyes and smiled. Joey was a great trainer, in fact, maybe more than that. Before Lucas could make his next command, he noticed someone, or something stood in the bushes. Someone with a Raichu. The figure came into view, a girl, smirking. "Howdey I'm Rachael, you owe me a bike." Said the girl, walking forward. Her hair was jet-black and her clothes were simple trainers clothes. Lucas looked to the side, seeing Machop had already picked up the bike and was carrying it to Rachael. Lcas sighed. "I was having fun on that too... here, take these too." Lucas said, tossing the goggles to her. Her Raichu looked up at the two trainers, and then... a Vulpix had appeared behind Rachael. Lucas raised his eyebrow yet again. "A Vulpix..." Joey said. Rachael didn't say anything. "I heard you were on the way to stop that Villian guy from zappin' all the Legendary Pokemon and capturing them? I can tell you where to find his henchen, up in the mountains, you can never miss them." Rachael explained. Lucas nodded slightly.[/SIZE] OOC: Sorry for the crappy post XD

[SIZE=1][B]Current Location: Rustboro City, currenlty running outside it.[/B] Lucas had ran from the rest of the group, after Joey. He was riding on his bike fast, trying to catch up. Then, he saw Joey and his two Pokemon in his site. "Hey, wait!" Lucas shouted. He suddenly stopped, skidding to the side and flicking up dust over his pants. Charmander and Machop were holding onto Lucas's t-shirt tight. "Wait! Let me train with you! I want my Charmander and Machop to evolve too!" Lucas shouted. Joey turned around. "I promise not to get in your way!" Lucas laughed. "Why not?" Replied Joey with a smile. Lucas grinned, leaping off his bike and basically throwing it aside. Machop tilted his head to the side, and ran over to the bike, lifting it with one arm and showing off his strength, Charmander just watched. "My Pokemon have been training for sometime, even Machop. We went through Meteor Falls, the deserts, got chased by a wild Tauros, so I think we've become strong. Maybe we should train first, then have a small battle or something." Lucas suggested. He wasn't watching Machop and Charmander, they were playing around. Charmander was balancing on the bike, almost falling off while Machop held it up. "Sounds good." Joey replied. He two Pokemon walked up beside him, and Lucas smirked, while his two Pokemon played around on a bike. "Hey wait a second... were's that girl with that Raichu I'm supposed to give these too?" Lucas suddenly said, looking around. "Oh well.... hope she finds me soon..."[/SIZE]

[SIZE=1][B]I'd say I'm pretty much an Outcast... I might have some friends, but believe me, not many of the stick beside me. I always feel like the odd one out. Hell, because of school I've quit somethings I like because I hate what people think of me. I always fell different from everyone else, because I like somethings they don't. What's wrong if you like Writing so much you can't wait to do a Writing Exam? I feel like an Outcast becauses like certain "Animes" and I write a "Certain" genre of fanfiction, but I don't do that anymore. I won't even put some stories on the Internet anymore. I try not to get involved with people who are way different then me. I'm different because of the way I act, the things I do, but the way things are going in my school I might end up like everyone; a clone! I don't think anyone but a few people even like me, though I don't really care that much. I just care about being an Outcast to most people because of what I do and what they don't do. Comics, Anime, Writing, Drawing, Games and other things are something I want to do, but I can't do anything like that most of the time because it makes me feel like a total outcast...[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Current Location: Rustboro City, with da group![/B] Lucas continued to stare up, then looked at Imric. "You like Fire Pokemon too? I can from a Fire Pokemon family, we're known for taming Charizard's and normally catching Pokemon from the Region of Kanto." Lucas said with a smirk. Suddenly, he heard somone behind him ask what was going on. Lucas spun round, seeing a Trainer stood there with a Natu beside her. Lucas didn't answer her question, he wasn't sure himself. Then, Joey began to explain. Though Lucas wasn't listening. [I]Wow... one of the Legendary Pokemon, if only Charmander would evolve... then I could have 5 Pokemon and strong ones too...[/I] Lucas thought to himself, still not listening to what anyone was saying. He stared at his Charmander, which was also looking into the sky. Lucas knew that just evolving a Pokemon didn't make it a strong enough, but he also knew that the family had a good record of strong Charizards. Ian's Charizard evolved quickly, and was strong, but Charmander wouldn't. Charmander caught Lucas looking at him, and looked up. "Char...?" It said its name as if it was asking a question. Lucas smiled at Charmander.[/SIZE] OOC: Sorry for the short post...

[SIZE=1][B]Current Location: Meteor Falls[/B] Charmander led the way through Meteor Falls, Lucas behind, and Machop at the back with the bike on his back. Machop's could lift almost anything with one hand, and a bike wasn't a problem. Meteor Falls was pretty light, but there were a lot of Zubat and Solrock hanging around. Charmander leapt back, almost falling over Lucas when a Zubat swooped down almost hitting him. "Zubat's! I can swear that's the same Zubat who keeps trying to knock us over!" Lucas yelled. "Next time, flame 'em Charmander!" Lucas shouted. Charmander looked around, seeing if any Zubat's were coming, but it looked clear. Charmander continued to walk forward, then suddenly stopping. It was a very steep drop down... Lucas growled, lowering his head. He leapt down the steep, landing on his legs half way, almost falling over. Charmander followed, slipping down it also. Machop followed, walking down gracefully and not even slipping. Lucas fell back on the floor. "Man... this will take forever..." He sighed. Machop sat beside him, throwing the bike down. Suddenly, he noticed the sandwhich in Lucas's pocket. "Hey, if you wanted it you could've just asked!" Lucas laughed when Machop took it out of his pocket. They all seemed to laugh, but that stopped when all three of them heard a voice echoeing through the falls. "Useless! You don't belong with me, I don't tame weak Pokemon!" Lucas knew that voice... from somewhere. Lucas, Machop and Charmander looked at each other. "Go on! Get away from me! Get!" The same voice yelled. "It's coming from over there!" Lucas said, getting to his feet. Be began to run forward, almost tripping over some of the rocks. His too Pokemon followed behind, then they came to the same trainer from before, with a Tauros. "It's him!" Lucas shouted. "Hey... you managed to get through! I could have gotten through a lot faster, if it weren't for this useless Pokemon!" The boy yelled, clenched his fist. Lucas gasped, he thought he was about to punch Tauros, but the boy stopped. Tauros had its eyes closed, it was afraid. "Ha! See? It's afraid! Stupid thing even has a neckless!" The boy shouted, his Mightyena barking at Tauros. "By the way, Mr.Weakling, I'm David. You're Lucas, I heard about you from other weak trainers!" The boy laughed. Lucas growled. "You can't treat your Pokemon like that!" Lucas yelled. David sniggered, and began to back out of the cave. "Fine, you keep it!" David shouted. Lucas growled. David had ran off on his Pokemon, so Lucas would keep it. As soon as Lucas turned round to Tauros... it seemed angry. Lucas gulped. "Errr...." Before Lucas could even speak, Tauro began to tap its foot on the ground, ready to charged Lucas. Lucas quickly grabbed the bike off Machop, leapt and it, grabbed his two Pokemon and sped off as fast as he could. As soon as Lucas got out of the cave, Tauros charged, flicking dust up. David was stood near the cave laughing, but Lucas wasn't. "Oh crap! Oh crap! It's catching up!" Lucas yelled. He was riding as fast as he could, and Charmander was holding on to Lucas' s shirt as tight as he could. Machop was on the front, also holding on. "It's gaining on us!" Lucas yelled. Charmander growled, staring back at Tauros who was just a few feet behind them. Suddenly, Charmander began to charge up a flame in its mouth. "Huh? Oh wow! Great idea! Give us a boost Charmander!" Lucas shouted. He quickly pulled his goggles over his eyes, and grabbed Machop. Then, Charmander let loose a massive flame, making the bike so go fast Lucas could hardly see. They easily out ran Tauros, and Machop lost his sandwhich. Tauros skidding and stopped, picking up the sandwhich and running off into the wild. "Maaaaaa!" Machop chanted, almost falling off. The blasted down the road so fast that miles became easy to pass in minutes. Charmander's flame suddenly stopped, but they were still going fast. "There's Rustboro City!" Lucas yelled. He pulled the bikes on the bike, but he couldn't stop. "A-and I c-c-an't stoooop!" Lucas shouted. Suddenly, they sped into Rustboro city, Lucas slamming his foot down on the ground. The bike skidded to the side, making them all fall off, but they still stopped. Lucas fell on his face, Charmander ontop, and Machop landed on his feet. Lucas groaned, looking up with a big red mark on his forehead. "Hey... we stopped right near a Pokemon Center... that's lucky..."[/SIZE] [B]Pokemon Team: [IMG]http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs073.gif[/IMG] Machop [IMG]http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs206.gif[/IMG] Charmander ??? ??[/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Good, good. I would get the started sometime soon, but it looks like friday's the best time. I'm sorry... but I will get this going on friday.... dumb exams. Sign-up's are still open until friday.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Current Location: Route 113 (Towards Fallabour) OOC: It might take a few more long post for me to get to Rustboro City.[/B] It didn't take too long to get through the desert. The bike Aaron gave Lucas was really cool! It rode quickly across all sorts of grounds, was easy to use and got Lucas on his way a lot faster! Right now, he was riding towards Route 113, his goggles on top of his head after riding through the sandstorm. Straight after they got out of the desert, he released Charmander, who was now holding on to the back of Lucas. Lucas was fully of sand and dust, but he didn't care. Lucas was riding so fast, he could hardly see some of the people in front of him. "Woohoo! This is great! We already have 3 new team members, but the 2 new Pokemon don't really count... Oh well! Haha!" Lucas laughed. He sped up, Charmander almost flying off the back. Suddenly, Lucas came to a halt, the bike skidding to the side and Charmander almost falling off. Lucas stared around him. They had just came into Route 113, and there was Volcanic ash falling from the sky. It wasn't hot, just warm on the ground. Lucas started to cough, and pulled his goggles over his eyes. "Man... I can't move this bike, the ash is too thick... and you can't pull it Charmander..." Lucas sighed. "Oh, I know! Go, Machop!" Lucas yelled, grabbing one of his pokeball's. It hit the ground hard, and Machop came bursting out. Machop raised its arms in the air. "Machop! Machop!" It chanted. Lucas remembered how much Machop's loved to work out and show off their muscles, and Lucas couldn't ride his bike with all the ash. "Okay, Charmander, you walk near Machop, make sure no wild Pokemon come near, I want to get to Fallabour fast. Machop, you can help me. Pull the bike along, while I push." Lucas told them. Charmander leapt in the air happily, and Lucas laughed, coughing from the ash. Lucas grabbed the handle bars, and began to push, while Machop grabbed above the while and pulled, pushing soe ash away as he went. -- It took awhile for them to get out of Route 113, and into Fallabour town. The town was fairly small, with no Gym, but still, Lucas had made it in a short time. He should thank Aaron, because without the bike, Lucas would still be in the desert. Charmander and Machop seemed a little worn not, but not too badly. Lucas sat back on the floor beside the Pokemon center, his two Pokemon beside him. "Phew... now all we need to do is get to the next town... want something to eat?" Lucas asked his Pokemon. Charmander nodded happily, but Machop didn't. He was stood up, punching and kicking the air. He was fast, and powerful, it was really amazing. It seemed to love fighting, and working out. "Machop?" Lucas said, his voice raised more. Machop snapped out of his fighting, and blinked at Lucas. "Want a sandwhich?" Lucas asked. Machop paused for a few seconds, then smiled, nodding. It leapt beside Charmander, taking the Sandwhich out of Lucas' hands and eating it playfully. "Not far to the next City..." Lucas said with a sigh. "Not far?" A voice laughed. It was a high voice, like a young man's, around Lucas's age. Lucas looked up. A shaggy looking lad was laughing at him. The boy had a Mightyena beside him, which also seemed to be smirking too. "You have to go through Metor(sp?) Falls! Ha! With those Pokemon you'll never make it!" The boy laughed. Him and his Mightyena ran off, the boy still laughing. Lucas growled. "I'll show you!" Lucas shouted. "Machop, Charmander, c'mon! We're going to Rustboro City, and we're going to train on the way!" Lucas yelled. Machop threw his meal down straight away, running after Lucas, while Charmander came running along with his sandwhich in his hands, munching at it as he ran.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=1][B]Current Location: Route 111 (Desert)[/B] "Man... how do I get to Fallabour town with all these sand storms in the desert?" Lucas sighed. He sat down on the a rock, looking out the Route 111. A sandstorm was raging across it... it looked impossible to cross. "Maybe I'll go the long way or something..." Lucas sighed. Charmander was sat beside him, also looking glum. "Hey, are you Lucas? Ian bro', right?" A voice said. Lucas spun round, seeing a tall boy, or teenager, with a backpack full of Pokeball's and messy hair going over his eyes. The person had black and red clothes on, and a huge Magma stood beside him. The person was holding a bike up beside him also. "I am." Lucas muttered, standing up. "Good. My name's Aaron. Ten years ago, when I was a boy, your brother helped me catch some wild Pokemon, abandoned ones. He helped me a lot, now I caught over 100 Pokemon because of him. No one's heard of him for awhile, correct?" Replied the man. Lucas nodded. "Well... I haven't had a chance to repay him, but I have heard you're going on a journey." "Well... what do you have in mind to give me?" Lucas asked blankly. Aaron chuckled. "Ah well... I didn't know at first. But I can do this for you. Here, take these." Aaron said, reaching into his backpack. He ruffled around his Pokeball's, taking out some goggles. "These can get you past the sandstorm, but you may want to put your Charmander in its Pokeball first." Aaron laughed. He tossed the goggles to Lucas, then walked over to Lucas, particall handing Lucas his bike. "And this too. This bike will get you to Fallabour super fast. Though when you get to Rustoboro City, a young girl will be somewhere near there. She's called Sharon, and you'll know its her because she has a Raichu with her. Give her the bike and Goggles, she'll give them back to me." Aaron explained. Lucas grabbed the bike, and looked confused. "You're doing this because of my brother? He must have done a lot..." Lucas muttered. "He did more for me than you can ever dream of. I might have even died if he didn't guide me into beating and capturing those two Pokemon. Here, I want you to take these too." Aaron said, taking out two wrapped up Pokeball's from his backpack. "But let me tell you this... don't use these Pokemon until your Charmander has evolved. Let your Charmander evolve once first, then you can use these Pokemon. You can look at the Pokeball's their in, just don't use them." Aaron gave Lucas the Pokeball's, smiling. "N-no. I can't take these." Lucas muttered. "I won't." "No please, take them. These Pokemon are the one's your brother helped me get, I can't keep them any longer. They're trusting, and will obey you, I just can't have them anymore. I've got their evolved forms, but they won't evolve. I'm not abandoning them, I'm giving them too you because I know it's the best way to repay your brother. And they'll come in handy when you go on your journey, trust me. You're brother collected all kinds of Pokemon, mainly fire, but in his party he kept only Kanto Pokemon. I have a feeling you'll go his way. Now please, take them, those Pokemon are yours, just don't use them until Charmander evolves." Aaron said. "I have to go now, I might see you again someday, maybe I'll battle you..." Aaron said, running off back to Mt.Chimney. Lucas blinked, and so did Charmander. "Kanto..." Lucas muttered. Aaron said he could look at their Pokeball's, but not the Pokemon. So Lucas unwrapped the brown paper around the Pokeball's, seeing they were both shinny, and looked new. But they were ten years old, so Aaron must have taken good care off them. "Hey... what's this...?" Lucas said, looking at the side of both Pokeball's. It was soe kind of marker, or some kind of ink that wouldn't come off, with the letters "Mars" on one Pokeball, and the letters "Venus" on the others. Lucas figured they were the names of planets. "Well... Aaron said I should only open them when you evolve... so I will... now, onwards to Fallabour!"[/SIZE]

[SIZE=1][B]Name:[/B] Godric Sedric (Doesn't mean he's a God...) [B]Age:[/B] 29 [B]Gender:[/B] Male [B]Race:[/B] Seraph [B]Birth-Place:[/B] Seraphiem; Valeim [B]Class:[/B] Paladin [B]Appearance:[/B] Picture wil be up soon [B]Personality:[/B] Godric is... how would you say? Maybe jealous? A little. He wasn't as well of as many others, so Godric doesn't like many people that much. He normally sits by watching others with a frown on his face, and won't join in. Fun and games isn't something in his life. Though he is a Seraph, Godric isn't proud of himself, or others for that matter. It seems the only emotion Godric has is a bitter kind of emotion, but that's not true. It's just how he grew up. Though he does believe in things still, Godric just doesn't want to show any kind of affection to anyone. He's a little moody sometimes... but that doesn't stop him from fighting. History: [An outline of your characters past, what they have done and such. If you want to make up the birth place feel free to] Class specific Weapon(s): [Most can use the normal weapons but there are exceptions. Paladins can use one great weapon which is a weapon that has a magic ability as well as one normal weapon. Mages can only carry their staff and these count as a weapon as well as a channel for their magic. Rangers must have a bow regardless of their other weapons and finally the Daemon-Hunters must have the ?Sign of Astartes? which comes in may forms but it has been blessed by a Cleric and is empowered with magic designed to banish Daemons] Prayers/Magic: [Mages and Paladins may use magic spells but there is a difference. Mages have five spells which can be varied or can concentrate on a single element I.E. fire. Paladins may have one spell that has to focus on White Magic [Or Light Magic] and a single prayer. Clerics and Daemon-Hunters may use two prayers each, a prayer is different from magic because it comes from Astartes instead of the person and so they cannot always perform it, I?ll post a list of prayers in a while so sit tight till then] Skills:[/SIZE] Sorry, I promise to get this done by friday, I just have a lot too do...

[SIZE=1][B]Current Location: Mt.Chimney[/B] Charmander and Machop eyed each other. They didn't make a move, not yet. Lucas stared at the two Pokemon, thinking what he should do. Charmander seemed to snarl at Machop, and the two began to circle each other. Suddenly, Machop leapt at Charmander with a Karate Chop. It hit Charmander in the chest. "Crap! Charmander! Quick, Tackle Attack!" Lucas yelled. Charmander quickly attacked Machop with a very powerful tackle attack, sending Machop flying towards a rock. But Machop managed to leap on the rock instead of crash into it. "Don't let attack again, use Slash attack!" Lucas yelled. Charmander leapt at Machop with its claws in the air, ready to strike. But Machop got Charmander first. It smacked Charmander in the chest again with a low kick, then Machop landed on the floor gracefully. "Maaachop!" It yelled Machop raised its fist in the air, and just stood there. "Charmander, you can attack it now, its using Focus Energy!" Lucas shouted. "Tackle Attack!" He shouted. Charmander charged forward with all its power, tackling the Machop into a rock. It was a good job the Gym Leader at Mauville City registered Lucas, now he could catch Machop with the Pokeball's he had! Lucas took out a Pokeball, and started to look more serious. He tossed it at the Machop, hitting it clear on the head. A red beam zapped Machop into the Pokeball. The Pokeball landed with a crash on the ground, and began to shake. Both Lucas and Charmander watched closely. Then, the Pokeball stopped shaking. Lucas didn't move. "Charmander!" Charmander yelled happily, leaping in the air. "Alright! I got Machop!" Lucas yelled. "Now... I don't think we need to go over this Mountain. We'll go through the desert on Route 111 and then go to Fallabour Town from there!" Lucas said[/SIZE]