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Thanks, I'll keep that in mind for the next few chapters ^^. Well the Second chapter I did I've writen about 10 times over, because the computer refused to save it and Word froze... I was really, really pi**ed. I think I did this before you gave me the advice, I can't really remember, although I went over it one last time and added a few things. Starting from the third chapter, I'm going to use what you told me to my advantage, thanks ^^ [SIZE=1][U][B]Chapter Two:[/B] The Revel and the Rival[/U] Kevin still sat on the floor, in front of the tank, which the creature that would save the world was. He failed. That?s all he could think of. The words that would haunt him? He failed. His dreams, his life? his father? he failed. The creature inside the tank? the RIVAL Project, fierce enough to with stand anything? and Kevin failed. Kevin lowered hi hat more, over his face, in shame. Failure! He clenched his fist hard? it was his entire fault? he had the chance to stop the crime after years of war, and now? he failed! His body, head to toe was filled with unstoppable hate and anger. He failed? just like his father. ?You?? Kevin stuttered getting to his feet and pointing at the creature. ?You?re just a failure! Like everything I do! Another weakling! It?s your fault!? Kevin screamed loudly. Once again, he threw his hat across the room, and in anger, he punched the glass of the tank, causing the whole tank to smash. Glass shattered on the floor, and the red water splashed over Kevin?s feet. The creature?s fur was no longer brown, but a light red colour, almost like a pink colour. Its huge fangs still where the thing that stood out. Kevin closed his eyes, in grief. When he opened his eyes, the creature?s eyes opened too. Kevin gasped? he couldn?t move? it was? a miracle. The creature?s eyes where blood red, and its body looked stronger. Kevin backed up, as it stepped on the ground. Its feet where claw-like, along with its hands. And of course, a tail, swaying side to side. Kevin gasped once more. ?Finally?? The creature muttered in a low, shallow voice. ?Y-you?re awake? You sh-how did you??? Kevin shuttered still moving back. ?The chemicals inside that prison kept me asleep. You humans are so dumb. And you believe I?ll help you? No, no. Freewill, you should never have given me that? now?? The creature laughed, looking down at its claw hands. It smiled, showing more huge fangs in its mouth. ?I shall do as I please!? It laughed. Kevin backed away. ?NO!? He shouted. His heartbeat suddenly skipped, in fear. Failure? No, he was now a murderer if this thing did what it said it would do? ?Oh? yes!? The creature laughed evilly, jumping at Kevin. It grabbed his throat, choking Kevin in an instant. Kevin?s eyes widened, he couldn?t move, and the creature continued to squeeze Kevin?s throat. It sank its huge fangs into Kevin?s neck, and Kevin couldn?t even scream for help. He felt the life being sucked out of him? bit by bit? the creature near him went blurry, and everything suddenly went black, and Kevin fell lifeless on the floor. ~ Kevin could hear voices outside his head, but all he could see was darkness. The voices where in too low a mumble for him to hear. Kevin couldn?t even feel his hands, legs, or any part of his body. He could only feel pain? like an arrow shooting through his veins. He could feel the world, his life, slowly slipping from his grasp? but suddenly. ?Kevin! Kevin! Wake up! Please!? A familiar voice shouted, much clearer. Kevin tried to push his eyes open, but couldn?t. The voice kept shouting for him? but he wouldn?t awaken. He couldn?t do it? the pull over his body was too powerful. ?KEVIN!!? The voice shouted loudly. This made Kevin?s eyes shoot open. Everything became clearer, the blazing lights over his head, and Sarah staring down at him. ?You?re alright!? Sarah said smiling. Kevin didn?t move. ?What?s? what?s happened to me?? I feel different?.? Kevin managed to say. He finally got the feel back in his body, and sat up noticing he was still on the floor. The young scientist and the lead one from before came running up with a mirror. Kevin looked deep into the mirror, only to see he had changed a lot. He had spikier hair, much bigger muscles, dark red eyes, pointy ears, short fangs and long sideburns. ?You?ve been bitten by that thing we created! Now you?re the mutation! You?re the one who can stop the war! Save our race!? The young scientist shouted happily, smiling with joy. ?I-I can??? Kevin stuttered. ?Well?? ?You can!? Sarah repeated what Kevin said standing up. ?Look behind you!? She added. Kevin adjusted the mirror, and saw behind him? a tail! ?No? this doesn?t make me better? just? different?? Kevin replied sighing. What good were a tail, and all this that had changed? NO good! ?No, not so. The genes in your body reacted differently to the creature?s poison. You have got the power of the creature. That evil thing, you can stop it!? The lead scientist explained. ?I can?? Well? I can?t do it alone? Will you three help me? Young man? what?s your name, yours too, I never asked.? Kevin replied, still a little dizzy and sore around his throat. ?David.? The young man said brushing back his brown hair. ?Aaron.? He lead scientist said. David looked only 20 or so, but Aaron looked around 30. They both wore the long white science coats. Kevin nodded. ?You can?t save the world in that! I know?? Sarah said excited and running off. ?Follow me!? She told them. ~ Kevin smiled happily, looking at the armour he wore in the mirrors. It was shinny silver, and looked as hard as the earth itself. The shoulder wings on it where pointy at the very end, dangerous! The armour went from his head to his toes, literally. The boots however where still silver, but had three massive claws on them. Just like an animal would have. Kevin shook his head. ?No? there?s something missing?? Kevin muttered. ?Hmm? I think I made something else for it? I mean it was for the Project? hang on?? Sarah said running out of the small, dark room. Kevin sighed heavily, and turned to David and Aaron who where sat on chairs in the corner of the small, dark room. ?Here.? Sarah said walking in. She handed Kevin a sort of helmet. All of it silver, and the only hole in it was the eye parts. It was shaped like a dog?s head of some sort, with a much smaller snout. ?It was built for Project RIVAL, but since you?re the new Project? you can try it.? Sarah explained. Kevin examined it some more, and noticed a small hole right at the top, and two places at the side where the ears of the creature would fit. Kevin smiled once more, and put it on. It was okay, and since his ears where pointy now they fit perfectly through the gap. Kevin looked in the mirror once more, but still didn?t like it. ?No?? He muttered. ?Here,? David said walking up. He gave Kevin a pair of red sunglasses, and pulled the three stuck-up hairs through the gap at the top of the helmet. ?Much better, no?? David laughed. Kevin stared down at the glasses, and snapped the red lenses out of them, and fitted them into the eyeholes of the helmet. ?MUCH better.? Kevin said lowering his head making his appearance look a lot? how would you put it?. Cooler?? ?Nice look Kev!? David said nodding. ?I?m no longer Kevin Andrews?? Kevin whispered calmly. ?I?m the un-deafeatable rival of my own creation, the Project RIVAL? I am a God, I?m the one who?s going to Rebel against crime? and from this day forward, I shall be known as Revel.? ?Oh, oh, oh! Like Rebels, but with a V and without the S?? David shouted excited. ?Shut up?? Kevin, or Revel as he was now grumbled.[/SIZE] [I]Oh yes,[/I][URL=http://www.imagetown.net/images/23440749.jpeg]Click here[/URL] [I]to see what some parts of the armour (the boots, helmet and chest plate) would look like, I found it really hard to describe and get what I imagined across. Yes, yes... I drew the picture >.

So I did the first draft... Revel was a pokemon I created, but I re-created and re-created him many times, until finally, the story. The first draft is nothing special, just to see how it will go, and the second one will be totally different. You may be confused why the title is Project: Revel, and in the story it's Project: RIVAl. Well, you'll see: [CENTER][SIZE=7]Project:[/SIZE] Revel[/CENTER] [SIZE=1][I]In the year 2020, any human mutations or un-authorized human testing was strictly forbidden, and the penalty, death. Ten years ago a secret organisation tried to create the most powerful enhanced human ever known. When they where found out, the first floor of their lab was destroyed, and each and every person connected to this project was imprisoned for life, thus bringing out the new law in 2020. However, under the lab was where their real project, RIVAL, an enhanced creature. In the year 2023, Kevin Andrews, son of the leader from the start of the RIVAL project gathered the remaining members of project RIVAL, and others willing to help. All of them where aware of the penalty if they where caught, but project RIVAL was the answer to all crime and hate in the world, the Ultimate Warrior, the future of Earth, the greatest Fighting Force known to man. But something went wrong?[/I] [U][B]Chapter One[/B] Like Father Like Son[/U] The skies where filled with dull grey clouds over the abandoned city. Rain pattered on the battered up ground, pouring down the empty streets of Amaza Town, a city that was long forgotten, burnt to a crisp by the battles of gang members and crime. No one dared go into this city, not anymore. Not after the strange happenings when people came into the gate of the city. People said they saw monsters, ghost, and all sorts of things that could not be possible. Actually, the monsters, ghost and strange happening people saw within the city where just holographic projections, to hide the real secret which lay in the heart of Amaza Town. The Project that would change the world. A tall man began to walk from the shadows of the building, wearing a long coat for the wet weather. The man wore a cowboy hat, very strange, since hardly anyone wore them anymore. ?You finally decided to come??? Said a calm voice. The man laughed lightly, and turned around. A women stood there in a damp white coat, with long jet-black hair and calm, sweet eyes. ?You know me better then to miss something like this?? The man muttered. ?Yes I do? Kevin. This Project will be the greatest thing ever created, let?s hope we don?t die.? Chuckled the women. ?Shut up Sarah, we?re not going to die. I?ll never make the same mistakes my idiot of a father made. I will be the one to finally bring justice to this world, after 20 years of war, and the crimes? I?ll be the one? with my team of course.? Kevin replied, taking off his cowboy hat. His hair was black also, but a lot lighter. Three hairs seemed to be the spikiest of all, over his right eye. ?My father was a fool? and I shall not follow in his footsteps.? Kevin mumbled. Suddenly, a blurry image of some kind of hunch-backed creature, with huge drooling fangs back to roar. It was one of the holographic images. ?Turn that damn thing off!? Kevin snapped. Sarah growled, and took out a small black device, clicked at button, and the image of the creature disappeared. ?Are we going or what?? Kevin growled. ?Yes, yes, shut up and follow me!? Sarah snapped. ~ Sarah walked quickly down the metal stairs, followed by Kevin who walked slowly. They both stopped, when coming to a large room with computers, people working on different things and what not. In the middle of the room, a large tank filled with green water stood. Kevin walked passed Sarah, and walked towards the tank. He took off his coat, revealing his strange, muscular body, and the same black shirt and black pants. Kevin smiled, and looked at the creature inside. A dog-like, humanoid creature that would one day stop all evil in the world. Its snout was short, and the creature sat, as if it where resting on its legs. Brown fur covered it, and its teeth? a huge pair of massive fangs hanging from the creature?s mouth. ?This is it? the day when we can finally give our world back its place, a world of peace, no more war, no more hate? a world my father could never create. Are we ready?? Kevin said, turning to one of the scientist. ?Err? yes Sir.? One scientist said looking at a long scroll of paper. Kevin smiled happily, and put his cowboy hat back on. ?Good. Proceed with the first phase?? Kevin replied. ?Wake him.? ?Sir, I don?t thi-? One young man began. ?Shut up! I gave you an order now follow it!? Kevin snapped at the young man. ?But...? The young man began looking down at the computer and looking back up. Kevin growled. ?Proceed, or GET OUT!!!? Kevin bellowed. The young man frowned, and nodded. Sarah who was stood behind Kevin sighed heavily. ?Everything?s going according to plan sir. Computers are working at full, and the generators too. We?ve got full power.? The lead Scientist said from the large computer. Kevin nodded, signalling to begin. The water inside the tank turned from the grass green colour, to a dark red. There was a rumbling sound coming from the tank, and then? all went silent. ?Is it working?? Kevin shouted. ?Sir? I?.? Stuttered one of them clicking a few buttons on the computers. ?IS IT WORKING?!? Repeated Kevin in a louder tone. ?No! It?s not responding!? The lead Scientist shouted. Kevin growled, staring at the creature inside the tank, which did not move. ?Sir1 Sir quick! We have to abort or the generators and stuff are going to blow!? The young scientist shouted. ?WHAT?S THE PROBLEM?!?! WHY ISN?T IT WORKING?? Shouted Kevin. ?Too much pressure!? The lead scientist shouted. ?We started too soon! The chemicals we?re using aren?t reacting the way we thought!? The lead Scientist looked at Kevin, waiting. ?Shall I abort sir?? He asked. ?No.? Kevin said calmly. ?Sir?? ?NO!!!? Kevin yelled at them. ?We keep going!? He shouted. ?No, I?m aborting it.? The lead scientist shouted. ?YOU WANT YOUR MONEY OR WHAT?? Kevin bellowed. He walked up the steps to the scientist and stared him in the eyes, and the floor beneath them began to shake madly. Kevin sighed heavily, lowered his head, and turned back, walking away. The lead scientist pushed the button on the computer to abort, and the madly shaken room stopped still silent. The lights above flicked madly, and the water in the tank slowly went back to the pure green colour. Kevin stopped in front of the tank, staring at his father creations. He had failed to revive it, and if only his father wasn?t in jail, their quest for peace might have worked. ?Get...OOOOUT!? Kevin shouted at them all. ?ALL OF YOU!! OUT! YOU?RE ALL FIRED! ALL OF YOU!!! GET OUT!? Kevin shouted. His face went red with anger, and a few rushed out, afraid of what he might do. The final two, the young man and the lead scientist where the last to walk out. Kevin clenched his fist hard, and banged hard on the nearest computer, smashing the screen and keypad. Kevin threw his hat across the room, and sat in front of the tank, thinking? everything he worked for? it was reduced to nothing? nothing at all. His father failed, now he did? like they say? like father, like son.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=1][B]Name:[/B] Dango [B]Gender:[/B] Male [B]Age:[/B] 27 [B]Emblem:[/B] Knowledge - A yellow orb with a smaller, red orb insider glowing and two blue lights that look as if they're shooting around the yellow orb. [B]Special Attack:[/B] Fake Knowledge - Not very much of a power, but Tashin can make his foe believe something they're not (like make them think they're dead), and make people believe lies by connecting to them with a small telekinetic power. This is all he can do, really. [B]Weapon:[/B] See his appearance for his sword. And a plain old dagger. [B]Appearance:[/B] Around the 6'0" section, but not really known. To see his description,[URL=http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/hosted/Pozas/Pictures/Oddballs/elf_ranger.jpg]CLICK HERE[/URL]. He also has a long black cape which he can hide himself under. [B]Personality:[/B] See his Bio for more information on his personality, but basically he's had experience as a leader, and therefore is pretty bossy. Sometimes, he won't take no for an answer, and will take matters into his own hands. Mercy is also his strong side. Pure evil people, he might kill, but mercy is what he is capable of, which led him too his own death. He's very caring to everyone who is good to him, and very self aware. If he didn't trust someone from the start, he would never trust them. Tashin has always been this way, and hates people who won't stand and fight, he hates those who hide and don't face their fears, because if he can do it everyone else can. [B]Bio:[/B] His father was the leader of a secret organization in the forest and mountains, and Dango became the leader after his fathers death. Dango was only a boy when his father died, and when he took the place of leader in his fathers little "club", people had their doubts. His fathers organization was like a club of some sort, where they all did special things for the good of other people. Later on they became known as the Daylight Knights, or just DK. Dango was 16 when he was told a masked murderer was on the loose and killing off people at will, and no one seemed to know who it was. Dango had a good idea who it might be, and he set out with a few of his men to find this person. When he found the masked murderer, he did not kill him, merely defeated him and made the murderer run away in shame. After the town knew who the murderer was, he became a laught stock of the whole country even. Dango was proud for letting him live, and went off back into the mountains. At the age of 17, he took his fathers sword, and became permant ruler of the DK just like his father. For 8 years he took the place as ruler, but the rules of the DK clearly states that if the leader is murder, the one who catches the murderer takes the place as Leader. The same masked murderer that Dango made a laughing stock of came back to kill Dango, but was caught. At the moment the murderer was about to die, Dango told his men to stop, and chose mercy once more, letting the murderer go once more. When Dango was 27, he declared that when he died his right hand man (Thorkoloss) would take the place as leader, and after saying this he went out to the river just below the mountains, and there he met the murderer once more, and they both fought each other. The murderer, however, took Dango's sword and killed Dango with it, telling Dango he should have killed him when he had the chance. Dango has been dead for some time now, around 30 years or so.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=1][B]Hmm.... well I won't allow people to have more than one character, it can really mess things up, heh. So you can only have one, but which over one you choose cannot have SSJ2 or over, because that may over rule the rest of the characters. You can have SSJ1, but no higher, and for the exspection of a DBZ character they will need some sort of weakness, I mean DBZ character would blow everyone else away. Apart from that, the sign-up's are good, but just remember you have to play one person, and they can't go over SSJ1 ;) (or they just couldn't go SSJ2 in Cesto's Universe)[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Yeah I was really tight and told one of my friends from other country (could speak English through) that the salt was sugar and it's not normal sugar and you have to put three times as much in your tea. Errr... yeah she put about 6 spoonfuls in and you don't wanna not what happened when she found out it was salt... let's just say I went for a run around the block. We don't really celebrate it, we just use it as an excuse to play a trick on someone. One time I told my friend that this bowl of out-of-date milk was just melted ices cream, and lucky for me they had a cold and couldn't smell a pill of waste even if she was right in front of it. I always like the food jokes.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Nice sign-up, this is pretty much all I really exspect from everyone, and really fun characters to RP with! Oh, just a little problem, the pictures... I can't view them. So... maybe you could save them and up-load them at [url]www.imagetown.net[/url] or somewhere so's we can see them...? ^^ Lovely sign-up though.[/SIZE][/B]

[CENTER][IMG]http://www.imagetown.net/images/58554923.jpeg[/IMG] [FONT=forte]UNIVERSE OF DREAMS[/FONT][/CENTER] [SIZE=1][B]In another Universe from ours, and ancient race known as Warlo?s had almost came to extinction. They where all very powerful, but their powers in their Universe was nothing compared to the other races. The Warlo?s didn?t want to die, so their king, Cesto. He went to the Universe where our planet lived its peaceful life, just to live for one last time. Warlo?s could create anything. They could travel through time, to different Universe?s and even into Movies and unreal television shows. Cesto, however, did not know what was right or wrong in human eyes, so he did not know what was wrong or bad, or cruel. He shifted through times, shifted through lots of different movies, and found some things amazing there. For once he felt the joy of laughter and enjoyment. He felt things he never felt before. Cesto wanted more entertainment. So he created his very own Universe, ruled by his hand. He created armies, warriors, and all sorts of creatures that could copy any enemy. Then, he called forth the people he wanted in this Universe. Cesto brought a few men and women to his Universe, where they would run from his men, and everything would be under Cesto?s control. But Cesto did not know how strong the will of some people were. A mixture of real life people, cartoon characters, movie stars, all sorts of creatures and whatnot are now fighting what might be the most dangerous thing ever, but they are fighting not only to survive, but also to get back home.[/B] [CENTER]Rules --- First off, no one can be the "unbeatable" person/creature. Everyone is stronger than each other and has different skills, but NO ONE can God Mode and say "You's are too weak go away I'll handle this" or "Ha I'm a not a King I'm a God and once I die I get brought back to life." No way. I don't want everyone being a really strong fighter. We need a mixture of people, not just fighters and warriors. I want this to be a funny RPG, yet serious one too. Characters must have some kind of funny side, take Vegeta for exsample, he's serious, but he is funny when he insults people. Good spelling and grammer please Do NOT play other people's character too much. Yeah, having them speaking in your post or fighting in a post is fine, but don't mess around with other people's personalities, ask them first before doing something really HUGE. Have fun! --[/CENTER] Also you may make up your own character. Since my dare isn't over yet, I HAVE to play Wolfgang Amadeys Mozart from the film Amadeus... >.< Sign-up's: [B]Name:[/B] Simple, you can add nicknames too [B]Where from:[/B] A movie, a cartoon, the real earth, an anime, anything. [B]Skills:[/B] Remember the rules, NO GOD MODDING [B]Fighting Styles:[/B] If any [B]Description:[/B] Picture, writen descriptions, they're fine. [B]Description in Cesto's World[/B] It does change [B]Small Bio:[/B] I don't need pages upon pages, jsut some main details. [B]Favourite Quote:[/B] Well... what's funnier than quotes?! [B]Personality:[/B] Here's mio: [B]Name:[/B] Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart [B]Where from:[/B] The film "Amadeus" [B]Skills:[/B] Given the Title "genius", music and... that's it as far as I know, he is smart. [B]Fighting Styles:[/B] None [B]Description:[/B] [URL=http://www.imagetown.net/images/9637066.jpeg]CLICK HERE[/URL] [URL=http://www.angelfire.com/film/amadeus/mozart.jpg]AND HERE[/URL] [B]Description in Cesto's World:[/B] Almost the exsact same, only he has much more modern clothes. He has a white checkers shirt, black pants and just plain old black boots. [B]Small Bio:[/B] Amadeus was the movie based on Mozart (not his life story), and the character you see me playing is the Mozart in the movie. He is not up to date with anything 20th century, and as a boy he was able to play the piano and whatnot blind folded. Mozart had very little fighting experience, also. Most of the opreas he did when he was older where happy or funny, and after his father died he did a very sad and depressing one. Mozart was always trying peoples patience, and when he didn't agree he didn't agree with it. [B]Favourite Quote:[/B] None [B]Personality:[/B] A little on the happy side. No really, a LOT on the happy side. Wolfgang Amdeus Mozart is a very cheerful person, and laughs a lot. But laughing is a bad thing, because when most people hear him laugh for the first time it doesn't give Mozart a good first impression. He can be annoying sometimes, but being serious is also what he's capable of. Mozart's also a very quick thinker, since he can composse music as he goes along, without planning it out, and can also remember music pieces just by glancing at the paper.[/SIZE] See? Now that's all I exspect, but it's not how long the sign-up is, I want the character to be a good one now! Curse me an my dares... if it wheren't for that stupid dare I'd be playing Nightwing instead of Mozart... >.<

[SIZE=1][B]Gazelle sighed heavily once more, and just turned his back. "No, none of you interupted anything." He finally said. "Sorry, but I'm saying out in the woods tonight, I'll be back in the morning." Gazelle mumbled walking off. "Someone come and get me in the morning when we're leaving." Gazelle added looking at Sora and Wolverine. "Well I suggest you stay here, none of us want to go on a man hunt looking for you tomorrow. Besides, it might be too dangerous staying over night." Wolverine explained. "Don't worry... I'll just be near the end of the forest training." Gazelle replied. "That's a bad idea aswell. You scare the whole X-Men when you do things like this you know." Wolverine laughed folding his arms over his chest. Gazelle closed his eyes and laughed lighly too. "Fine, fine. I'll stay." Gazelle replied walking past the two. "Oh and by the way, watch out if you go further into the woods." He added. "Why?" Stuttered Sora. "I think there's another group of mutants. I just saw some guy before, with the exsact same mutantion as mine." Gazelle said seriously.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Gazelle sighed heavily, and breathed out smoke in the cold night air. He had heard Destiny's call for them to come and eat, but to be truthful, Gazelle wasn't hungry. He began his trip through the forest again, looking up at the sky every so often. He flicked his eyes to the side, feeling as if someone was following him. "Didn't your mother ever tell you not to mess with a mutant?" Gazelle said looking around for whoever was there. Gazelle almost jumped out of his skin when a skinny man lept out of the trees. The man was tall, kind of skinny, long blonde hair and pants, but no shirt. "No. I am a mutant." The man answered. Gazelle raised his eyebrow. "Have you considered joining the X-Men?" Gazelle asked smiling. "Magneto's on our team now. We could use all the help we could get." "I will... if you do one thing..." The man said walking into the moonlight more. "I have the same power as you, but I think I can grow stronger than you. So basically all I'm asking is for you to charge up to your strongest, and I'll join the X-Men." The man said. "Why?" Gazelle asked. "I want to see how well the X-Men have been trained. Surpass me, I'll join you." The man said clenching his fist tighly. "Ready?" He asked. Gazelle nodded. "I was born ready." He laughed. Once again, Gazelle pulled his arms from above his head, and his whole body began to grow huge muscles. His eyes went white, and Gazelle growled a little. His armour exspanded, and Gazelle's skin turned into a blue fur. He pulled his arms over his head again, still struggling to move with the extreme force on his body now. Gazelle pulled his arms down with extreme force, roaring loudly. His body seemed to jump at this stage, making him look like a much stronger version of his mutantion. He panted, and looked at the man. Gazelle glared. The man has silver fur, and was much bigger. His fur was spiker. "You failed." The man said in a calm voice. "Prove it!" Gazelle shouted. The man sniggered, and suddenly, his silver fur on his massive body turned blue, like Gazelle's. "You see, what you saw was another version of your transformation, the next stage to our mutantion, a more powerful stage. I have got to that, you however, are still in the lower form." The man laughed, walking off. Gazelle growled lightly...[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]VERY nice, I like it! Thanks Boo, I'll use it! Very good, keep up your banner work! ^^[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]I have two characters I want on this banner, Robin, and Kevin Mask. I've got lot's of pictures of them, but you can chose the best two to put on it:[/B] [URL=http://www.superherophotos.net/batman/robin.jpg]A Robin One[/URL] [URL=http://www.imagetown.net/images/73175697.jpeg]Kevin Mask[/URL] [URL=http://www.imagetown.net/images/15520141.jpeg]'Nother Kevin One[/URL] [URL=http://www.imagetown.net/images/8063189.jpeg]Robin[/URL] [URL=http://www.imagetown.net/images/78509219.jpeg]Kevin Mask[/URL] (clickly-clickly) [B]Pick one Robin one and one Kevin one. I'd like on it: It's not shame... It's Honour And my name. I want a blue or red background, not really bothered. Thanks.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]That was great! Sounds really interesting, and the whole idea sounds cool! Heh, a Fanfic I'm in, pretty good. The part where Solo, Jokopoko and Shinfield get hit by the branches is funny! Great work, seriously, I can't wait for the next chapter! Hehe.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]It's always like that on mine, I have no idea what resolution mine is and all that other stuff, but all I do know is it's annoying. I've attached a shot of what mine's like, it's wide when veiwing threads, same length when posting, same length when you're at the index, and sometimes it depends. My internet loads things fast on mine, and sometimes when I'm looking at the thread for sometime, the side bar stays the same.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][CENTER]You all know the story-line, hopefully. And we'll all start in the same spot, near the mountains and forest where the group decided to lay low until they figured out where to go next, and also while they fix the Jet. Sign-up's are still open for a short time.[/CENTER] [B]Gazelle, or Jason was the only person who had been sent out to gather some wood for the fire. The Jet got hit hard when they landed, so no one could really fly it in its current state. The only thing Gazelle was shocked about was the fact Magneto had joined them, when he [I]wanted[/I] the war in the first place. The sun had set, and the moon was high in the sky tonight. Gazelle walked around the trees, searching for wood he could carry. Gazelle knew the day Humans would finally begin to murder mutants would come, but he wasn't exspecting it so soon... everything broke down because of one man, Charles Xavier. "I can't carry all this..." Gazelle muttered when coming to a huge log and a small pile of sticks and twigs scattered around. A huge grin spread across his face. Gazelle clenched his fist tightly, and the gold armour he wore began to exspan and stretch. His chest and his whole cody grew much more stronger and bigger, then his skin turned into a blue fur. Gazelle laughed lightly to himself, and a larger grin spread across his face. "Muuuuch better..." He laughed. Gazelle grabbed the biggest log and threw it on his shoulder, then waked around picking up from more sticks. -- Gazelle threw the logs and sticks he gathered on the ground near the X-Men and the other mutants. He smied happily, and still in his mutant form he walked away from them resting on a tree. "Hmm... where'd Storm go? And Wolverine...?" Gazelle asked. "Inside the Jet, trying to fix." A voice said. Gazelle looked to the side, and saw only Magneto. "Good job you brought all this wood, at the rate they're working we'll be here all week." Magneto laughed. "Well atleast some of us are working." Gazelle snarled. "Don't push it, even though we're helping each other it doesn't mean [I]I[/I] trust you." Gazelle added turning his back. "Don't treat me like the enemy. We're all on the same side now." Magneto replied, walking away. Gazelle looked down. "But are we on the right one...?" He asked himself. Gazelle sighed heavily, and clenched his fist hard. He crossed his hands over his head, then forced them down, reducing his body size, and features back to normal. He looked back at Magneto's lot and the X-Men talking, snorted, and walked into the shadows.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Yes... my life is sad... Okay... okay... I will admit I've been watching to much TV, and I stumbled across the movie abotu Wolfgang, well Mozart, in a sort of remarked way. I bought it, watched it, liked it, and couldn't stop laughing at the Mozart in the film, 'spect at the end when he died... anyways! Since I am the most saddest and idiotic person in the world... I want a banner of Mozart in that film... SEE HOW SAD MY LIFE IS?!?!?! I'd like any colours... Not really bothered. I have a few quotes, pick the best one to put on it: "Laughter is the joy to the world... or... not..." "To drink, or not to drink!" "In need of a new laugh... or voice for that matter..." "Wigs are for the morons!! ...Wait!" "What kind of a father name's his son 'Wolfgang?'" "A genius always dies peacefully... or sometimes painfully" Something like that anyways... The pictures I want on are attached... I want my name on and Mozart's. Heh... WHY DO I ALWAYS PICK THE LAME PEOPLE!?!?!?!?! ..Sorry...[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]I suggest this site: [url]http://www.imagetown.net/[/url] Only problem is you have the save the file as jpeg or gif, but it's pretty good, I always host my images there, it's very easy to use and 100% free. I think it's pretty good, but not the best, however it's one of the most simple.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Okay, new update. Everything looks great, I never exspected this many people so soon. Well you're all accepted, though I have one request for Mage15, just add a little more to your bio, that's all ;). Though I am very pleased with the sign-up's, and these sign-up's will remain open when the RPG starts, but once we get into greater detail in the RPG itself the sign-up's will be closed. This will start on Sunday though, or possible tomorrow. Anyways, right now the sign-up's are all fine, just that tiny request Mage15 ;)[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]It seems okay, just give a little more information on your characters powers and their bio ^_^ Name: Jason Richers Age: 29 Code-Name: He has two, Ultimate Beast and Gazelle (Mostly Gazelle) Mutant power/Mutantion: A lot like the Beast in the comics. He has the power to increase his strength, turning himself blue and very strong for whatever length of time Jason wishes. Though he can quickly change from form to form, he needs a certain amount of strength in him to do this. (His power is a little like a cross between the Hulk and Beast) Description: [IMG]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=17230[/IMG] Only he wears the golden armour in the beast picture. [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=18244]THIS[/URL] Picture, also his transformation, plus, he wears black boots which he always wears. Side: X-Men Biography: Since he was a child, he was able to transform himself into a huge Beast-like creature. However, in his youth it was very painful. His parents throw him out of his own house, and Jason lived with his grand parents for some time. They understood him, and did not reject Jason. In his small town, he was the all time hero, and as time passed he was able to control his power and transform easily. When his guardians died, he set out on his own. He didn't seem to be rejected in that town, and that's where he got the code-name Ultimate Beast. When he went out on his own, he found out about Xavier's school for the gifted. He was only 13 when he knew this. So he set off to Xavier, but while doing that he got himself involved with a group of street gangs, and his big brother. His brother was also a mutant, with a strange mutantion of a half deer person. When the gangs all faced off against each other, his brother was killed for no reason, making Jason very angry. He unleashed his full power, wiping out the enemy who murdered his brother. From that day on, the gang gave him the nick-name Gazelle, after taking out the enemies gang leader Gazelle. Having no way to find Xavier's school, Jason grew up with the remains of the street gang, learning everything about surviving in the world. When he was 19, he set out once more, remebering what he first wanted to do. No long after he began travelling again, he and a group of mutants got into a mini "war" with another group of mutants. They fought each other in a city where no one lived, and Jason was the leader. At this time, Jason got the golden armour he has today, which exspans when he transforms. All his follow mutant friends died, and he knew he was fighting for the right side. So in honour of them, he defeated the mutant gang who caused chaos, and lived alone after that. When he was 28, he met Charles Xavier. Charles asked him to join the X-Men, and Jason agreed.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Jean died on the day the X-Men escaped the wrath of William Stryder, a military genius. His plan was to kill of all humans, but the X-Men, after Jean's death went to the White House, trying to fix the balance between man kind and mutant kind. Charles Xavier held the balance between mutants and humans after that, his words did the job. So it seemed after Charles and had his little chat session, all the mutant hunting and mutant hating died down, but it did not stop. However, most people thought as the X-Men as good guys now. Until one night... A strange, and very, very powerful mutant had somehow slipped into the Mansion without anyone noticing, not even Charles could see him coming. No one knew his name, but serveral of the students had the pleasure of witness this strange mutant attack Charles... Charles Xavier is dead. When the new hit the headlines, people began to believe mutants killed Charles, saying mutants wanted him out of the way for a war. The whole thing had started again, this time, no Charles. The students in Xavier's School for the Gifted kept real low, and didn't use their powers. However humans where not the consern. The strange and powerful mutant couldn't be found anywhere, and as time went by, more and more attacks on mutants and humans occurred. Humans began to hate mutants more than ever, but because of their fear they stayed away from Xavier's school, thinking they would be killed by the mutants. The X-Men had no choice but to seek out and destroy whoever this mutant was. They set off in the Jet looking for him. However, when the X-Men came back to the mansion, it was burnt to the ground. The childern, and Rogue and Iceman had been captured by the military forces. The X-Men couldn't do anything, and it seemed one of their own kind had started the most horrible thing for mutants and humans alike. The X-Men went into hidding until they thought of who this strange mutant was. Soon they where joined by Magneto and his "gang" and mutants, who believed now that the war was indeed a bad thing. Magneto had changed, since seeing what was happening almost every mutant did. Magneto filled them in on what was going on. The strange mutant was still unknown, but he was the one who wanted a war so he could win it, and take over. From Charles' murder, to the X-Men leaving the mansion was all this strange mutants plot. Now... they justed had to figure out a way to stop him. But now, as much as the X-Men, and even Magneto hated to admit.... This really was a war. Humans against mutants.[/B] [CENTER][U]The Rules and what will happen.[/U] Everyone has to be a mutant. Rogue and Iceman have been captured, but the older X-Men have not. Pyro, and every mutant who followed Magneto are on the X-Men's side. Also, you may make up your own mutant that some how escaped from the capture, or some who went into hidding before. I want good sign-up's, not sign-up's with 0% effort No one is more powerful. You cannot have the greatest Mutant ability, though you may be a mutant already in X-Men. As you can tell, this is based after the 2nd movie, so yeah... you get the idea. Have fun![/CENTER] Sign-up goes like this: [B]Name:[/B] First and last [B]Age:[/B] Simple [B]Code-Name:[/B] Your mutant name? [B]Mutant power/Mutantion:[/B] [B]Description:[/B] [B]Side:[/B] What they used to be on, X-Men's or Magneto's [B]Biography:[/B] Mine will be posted tomorrow, have fun everyone![/SIZE]

[SIZE=1][B]Yamuri moved his bag over his shoulder a little more. He sighed heavily and began walking again in the city. He had just finished a little bit of training from the woods, and he was back in the city once more. Yamuri had little money in his pocket right now, but he was more than likely to win some for fighting. That or it would magically appear in his hands. Yamuri was broke, and he knew he should have stayed home. "No use trying back now..." He mumbled to himself. He kept walking a fairly fast pace. His mind kept racing on about what he could have done with his life instead of this... but since hearing the stories of Yamcha and his friends, he wanted to be known too, but Yamuri wanted a much bigger role in this tale. Yamuri caught the prices of things on sale nearby, they were so damn cheap. The only thing worth selling he had was himself. Yamuri came up to a small wall, and sat down still looking sad. Everything seemed wrong in his life, the fact that his strength and ki where over powering every other ability in his body. Yamuri planned to train and keep things in his life equal, so far he was way off that. He ran his hand through his spiky black hair and sighed once more, then looking up at the sky. "For once I want some adventure..." He muttered to himself. "A real challenge for once... nothing more..." He added. "What more could I ask for...?" Yamuri pulled his bag back over his shoulder, and set off again, still looking at the sky as if he knew something didn't seem... right...[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Kevin staggered back a little more when Jade jumped out of the tree. "Ofcourse Kevin knows me... when was the last time I knocked youo around? Oh well... Kevin's a strange name you know..." Jade laughed folding his arms over his chest. "Oh, that's coming from a guy with a girls name!" Kevin snapped creating two balls of fire in his hands. "Jade is NOT a girls name! It's German... I think..." Jade replied growling. "You don't even know where your name comes from! Sorry Jade, but this time I'm taking you down." Kevin said. Flames arose off his body, and Kevin's eyes turned from a yellow colour to a dark red. "But, who is he?" Alandra asked. "Someone I know..." Kevin growled. Jade walked forward to Kevin, smiled evilly, and simply grabbed the only part of Kevin's neck under hs knight helmet and laughed. "How very noble Kevin, but you forgot one thing... my memories are your fears, my past is your weakness, my power can bring you down." Jade said. Alandra suddenly knocked Jade back with a jet of water. Jade fell backwards on the floor, and Kevin growled. He looked back suddenly, and saw two people behind them. "Look-" Kevin began. "Kevin, who is he?" Alandra asked interuppting him. Kevin froze, and didn't speak. Jade slowly began to get up, looking very pi**ed off. Kevin readied himself again, aiming a fireball at Jade. "Go ahead Kevin, I DARE you to hit me." Jade laughed shaking the water off his hair. "Right here." Jade laughed tapping his chest as a target for Kevin. "Or in my head if you like, I mean... it's where all the memories are, you know?" Jade sniggered. "Hit me!" He shouted. "C'mon! Hit me! Right here! Hit me! Kill me!" Jade shouted. Kevin didn't move. "Hit him already!" Alandra yelled. "Fine Kevin..." Jade said evilly. He drew his hand back, and red light shone around his hand. Jade ran forward, and slashed Kevin from his chest up to his eye, making a small crack in Kevin's mask but not revealing anything. [I]Good damnit...[/I] Kevin thought falling to his knees. [I]I can't attack...[/I][/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Kevin turned back and gulped. "What was that...? It's such a strange power... do you think it's the evil what's it called?" Kevin asked. "I don't know..." Alandra replied. Kevin looked back again. It was so strange... he felt as if he knew the person. "It can't be..." Kevin muttered to himself. "Alandra! Turn around! We're going back to see who that was!" Kevin shouted over the engine. "I thought we had to find the others?" Alandra asked. Kevin nodded, and the bike stopped. He jumped off and looked behind him. "We will. There's something strange going on. I intend to find out what that was. We'll go and look what that was, then instead of looking for the others, we can call them here!" Kevin said running ahead to the place. Alandra sighed heavily. Kevin stopped suddenly, almost tripping over his own feet when he saw two eyes glaring at him from the shadow of the tree. "What they hair ball...?" Kevin gulped staggering back. Alandra came up and stopped too. "What's wrong...?" Alandra asked Kevin who seemed to be frozen in fear. "Jade?!" Kevin shouted looking very mad. "Why hello Kevin." The figure laugehd from the tree, swinging down and kicking Kevin onto the ground. [I]Good nows our chance to call the others.[/I] Kevin thought laying still on the floor.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]We're talking bio's that would be like 12 pages long on word. A Biography is a life story, but it's basically the main details. I like to write a long bio myself, but who wants to read 12 pages when they're only having a small battle? Only the main parts of the character is needed, not what they did with their dad one sunday afternoon. Seriously, it takes a lot of bugging to get me to read even 2 page bio's. There's a difference between an RPG and a Battle; a battle has no huge story-line, and it starts off with two (or more) characters fighting, that doesn't need a huge bio. An RPG however, has a plot that builds up, lots of people playing different characters, so a long bio would be good in an RPG case. I think it can be the person who complains, and the person who writes the long bio that get's the thread closed. People have come on saying "It seems you can't write bio's either...", and the person complaining would be right in moaning at them for that. I don't like people coming on saying "You can't do this and I'm here to teach you how" , "This board has rubish Bio's in the battle section." and stuff like that. It's not how long the bio is, it's just how well you've got the IMPORTANT information down. I also don't like people jumping on each other, and the fact everyone keeps jumping on Harlequin about this and that and how he's being mean and doing everything wrong.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1]OOC: Just some information on our evil doers location. [B]Jade and Leonx where already at the surface of earth. Leonx led Jade to his very old castle, which was just ontop of a small island now. Jade entered the castle, stopping behind Leonx. "Nice place..." He muttered looking around. "Thank you. The Masters never blow this place up, so it is safe for a hideout... and it's my best castle." Leonx said walking faster. His black cloak picked up old dust off the floor, and Jade ran after him. "How many castle do you have?" Jade asked. "64, one for each general. The Masters burnt the others to the floor, but left this one. Say, you don't mind assinasion missions, do you?" Leonx asked laughing. Jade shook his head. "Who do you want dead?" -- "Hey, stop here a sec'." Kevin said. Alandra nodded, and the motorbike came to a stop. Kevin jumped off and looked straight ahead. "There's someone just up there, about a mile or so you should be able to feel it too." "I can..." Alandra said. Kevin jumped back on the bike, and they sped off again.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Kevin titled his head to the side, as the bike began to speed up. He closed his eyes...tried to concentrate... he felt the bike pick up speed a little more... and suddenly Kevin almost made the bike twist to the side. He got his balance back quickly and sighed heavily. "Sorry, there's one of the Masters nearby." He said to Alandra over the bike engine. "I'd say we should go straight ahead, then see where we can go from there." Kevin added getting a better grip. "Right." Alandra said. Kevin looked to the side, and noticed a few people staring. He only saw a glimps, but he was still pretty shocked. They all looked afraid... afraid, why? [I]I guess... having powers gives some people a good reputation and a bad one...[/I] He thought to himself catching a small boys eye. The small boy reminded Kevin of a younger version of himself... carefree, funny, strong, and friendly... but Kevin was like no one else, powers or not, he kept a lie inside him for the rest of his life, a memory that would haunt him until he dies, and further...[/SIZE][/B] OOC: I think it's time we start getting everyone together, so next time I post I'll post a place where everyone should meet.