Vicky

Let me explain first: Annihilation is a story I'm writing, but to make it a lot better, I'm doing the first draft of the whole story now, so it's not meant to be up-to-scratch. Also, I'm writing the Dragon King, so I wanted your opinions on the first draft, then I'll do a second draft and then the final one. Yes... this will take the rest of my life... Here's the first draft first chapter: [SIZE=1][b][u]Chapter 0ne.[/u][/b] Land beneath Ours. [b]Humans are one of the most intelligent races in the universe. Well, they where. Until ever one else knew the secret to there planet. Humans thought they where the only things in the universe, some thought there where others, but they where millions of zillions of miles away. Little did they know, another race and world was right next-door, right under their noses. But to be exact, another race lived right under them. Under them, was a world with little rules, and the people below, wanted what they had. But they had a plan, and would soon get the top world?[/b] ~ [i]?Kill? Dango, walked through the dark forest. His mind was battling against the full moon, and his spiky hair growing longer. ?Transform?. KILL!!? A voice repeated in his head. His eyes went red, and his body growing. His head falling apart in the wind. He never felt like this before. He was alone, under the full moon. For once he didn?t want to transform. The full moon was indeed real. They didn?t live in the ground, but it was infact a magic realm, where they moon reached and the sun shone. Dango feel on the ground, and the cold grass pressed on his chest. ?KILL!? Dango let it go. He couldn?t hold it in any more. The moon shone on him, and he began to transform. He got up, and his shadow cast over the trees. His face began to grow into a snout, and his fangs grew larger, his hands grew claws, and his hair stretched down his body. Then, he jumped up. His snout was wide open, and huge fangs stuck in his mouth. His tail was black, and most of his fur was black and grey. His gold pants flicked in the moonlight. ?KILL?.? Dango looked around. His hands clenched. ?I TOLD YOU TO KILL!? A cold voice said. He didn?t know who it was, or where it was coming from. Dango became scared. His wolf ears flicked. ?KILL!!!!? Shouted the cold voice. Dango looked around, he jumped to the nearest tree and began to rip it with his claws. ?FOOL!? Yelled a voice. Dango stopped, and then looked around. Suddenly, something began to hurt inside. His head began to burn. He howled louder and louder. His head was being attacked by something?. something inside him. He howled louder, biting himself, to fight it off. But he howled louder. His scratched at himself, and growled. ?NEVER DISOBEY ME!? Said the voice. Then, the burning pain went away. Dango looked up. His arm was full of bite marks and blood. He howled slowly, and is eye caught the sight of some one. He turned around to find a man in a cloak, with a knife in his hand and a hood. Dango couldn?t see him, but then he noticed his hood moved down by it?s self. Dango sniffed with his long snout, and growled. The man had a skull like face, with red eyes and a snaked tongue. ?You brought this on yourself?.? He hissed. The man drifted forward, and Dango noticed what the knife was. Pure, shining, Sliver. Dango howled and tried to run away, but he could hardly move. His head felt cold and he began to think this was it, his final night. He fell on his knees, and tried to shake off the cold feel. ?I should have never chosen you?.? Said the man. He bent down, and placed the knife on Dango?s back. Dango couldn?t fight back. He couldn?t move?His eyes widened as he felt a burning knife jab into his back?[/i] Dango jumped up out of bed, yelling. He almost banged into a man with brown hair over his left eye. ?Dango? Are you ok? You where howling in your sleep and yelling?? The man said. Dmitri, his best friend. Dmitri wore red pants, and wasn?t fully dressed. He had nothing on his top and no shoes on. Dango looked around. Dmitri?s bed was beside his, and the room had one window. ?Urgh?what time is it?? Dango?s voice was dull and cold. ?Time you got. Talor?s cookin? breakfast." Said Dmitri running down the stairs. ?Oh right?. WHAT!?? Dango jumped out of bed and put his sliver jeans on. The sunlight shone on his face. His tail swadded side to side as he put on his black boots. Then, he felt a burn in his back?. like his dream?he feel on his knees, sweating. The pain slowly wore off. A man with long red hair and blue cloths on popped his head round from the stairs. ?Are you com?? The man stopped. He was called Talor. Rad?s seconded best friend. ?You don?t look so good.? Talor walked to Dango, whose breath was deep and heavy. ?Err, I?ll be down in a sec?? Dango said slowly. ?You sure your ok?? Talor said as he walked to the stairs. ?Yeah.? He heard Talor run down the stairs, banging as he went. Dango grabbed a red shirt, and pulled it over his head. He walked across the room, and in a door. He closed it behind him and looked in his bathroom mirror. A thousand thoughts flew through his head. [i]Who was that guy? Was it really a dream? Why did my transformation hurt? Why did my personality towards a human change?[/i] Although Talor was a human, people that told him to kill, would find a fist in their face. But, this time he obeyed the human?he was afraid, so he attacked a tree instead of a person? [i]Why?[/i] He thought to himself, until the deep voice of Dmitri called. ?Are you there? Hello? Mr. Wolf?? He called. ?Uu?. what?? Dango rubbed his eyes. ?I called you a million times! Are you awake?? Dmitri sounded pretty angry. ?Sorry. I was miles away?? Yelled Dango. He opened the door and walked to the stairs. But he stopped. He still felt cold. Then, a voice took him out of a dream state. ?So you sleep while your standing now?? Said Dmitri from the bottom of the stairs. ?Huh? Oh, yeah breakfast?? Dango said lazily. He ran down the stairs, into a kitchen where Talor was already sat down reading the newspaper. Outside, the red sphere that was a magic sun shone on the kitchen floor. There sky was gold and sliver, the colours of magic realms. Dango sat down opposite Talor. ?Have you seen the headline today?? Said Talor. ?No I?ve been having the most terrifying dream ever?? Growled Dango. ?Hey! Don?t act like that! Look!? Talor slid the paper across the table. It was The Magical Times. One of the most popular newspapers around. Then, he spotted a huge bold headline reading: [b]?Werewolves called to war!?[/b] Dango groaned. [b]?Almost 300 hundred wolves have been called up to attack the top world. The captain says, ?We need all the men we can get, even if it means wolves. I myself think as them as equals.? We asked him, ?How could you take in the most dangerous race known to our world?? ?Well there only dangerous when they transform. The next full moon is in a month, by then we will have enough poisons to stop the transformation. On the night of the attack, I assure you they will be dangerous. People said it?s a mad idea, but how could I turn down these lot?? ?What will you do if by the time of the attack, you don?t have enough men?? ?Well, that won?t happen. We have over 2000 men already. I think we?ll have enough by the time of the attack.? After a few questions, we left the base with a clear view of the attack. Total Annihilation![/b] Dango laughed. He folded up the newspaper and threw it aside. ?Did you look at the next bit?? Said Talor. ?It?s a load of crap. He?ll have no men left; all the werewolves would have ran off. But some wolves, like me can transform at will.? Dango laughed. ?So you didn?t see the part about ?Werewolves attack Taigul town??? Said Talor smartly. ?Huh?? Dango picked the paper back up and scrolled down it. [b]Werewolves found dead in Taigul town. Also, people found dead! Villagers say there were 5 wolves, 4 men and a wizard. There were claw scratches on a tree, blood all over the ground, and one wolf was found with a sliver knife in it?s back?[/b] Dango froze. He continued to stare at it. [b]This is said to be the work of a thief or more likely to be a wizard. Why or when this happened is still la mystery. But this is the latest case of Murder. It is said to be connected to the attack due to take place in 4 months.[/b] Dango stared down. He threw the paper aside. [i]Ok, that?s just coincidence?. [/i] He calmly thought to himself. [i]THE HELL IT IS!!![/i] He walked out of the kitchen and grabbed his leather coat. ?Hey!? Where the hell are you going?? Yelled Dmitri. ?Out.? Dango said in a shallow voice. He took his house card (instead of keys) and unlocked the door. ?You haven?t had breakfast!? Yelled Talor. ?I?ll get some later. I have to sort something out?? Dango didn?t quiet know what he was going to do, but he had to find out what was going on. ?Well I?m coming too!? Yelled Talor. Dmitri stepped away from the cooker and walked to them both standing at the door. ?ME TOO!? He smiled. Dango groaned. [i]Why me?[/i] Chapter one, what'd think? The remake will be much, much better. Now I have to go finish The Dragon King.[/SIZE]

[B][SIZE=1]Years ago, in a Medieval time, there was peace. Why? Because of the Guardians that called themselves Titans, each one having 3 element powers. They where born in the most bizzare places, like Volcanoes and the bottom of the sea. The Titans where said to be immortal, and everytime Evil took a step they arose and defeated it. The Titans where good friends, they knew each other well. In the Medieval times there was never such great evil, but they where wrong. A new group of evil arose one day, that called themselves the Apocalypse. Each of the Apocalypse had dark powers, and they used it at first to take over earth, bit by bit. The Titans arose and fought against the Apocalypse, only to know they where recruits from the Devil himself in hell. The Apocalypse where men and evil demons that where once alive, but from the tortured fires of hell they became pure evil and weilded the power of darkness. For years, it was a back and forth battler against the Apocalypse, until each Titan got together and used their powers in a hope to destroy the Apocalypse. They worked together, and on their final blow, their hopes where lost. Instead of destroying the Apocalypse, they cast them back into the realm of hell. Each Titan fell out with one another, blaming their friends for the happening. So, the Titans went back to their birth place to rest, until the Apocalypse would return, each one hating another Titan. In the year 2000, the Titans awoke again to find that the Apocalypse threatened to come back again, and the only way to defeat them this time was to unite with the other Titans. But their hate for each other overwelmed them. Now, as the Titans arise again, they must leave their differences aside, and work together once more, to defeat the evil sent down from Hell itself.[/B] -- Okay, so really all we're going to do is be Titans, with three elements to control. You have one main element, and the other two linking to that element. At the start, each Titan will begin in their birth place, and I will tell you all when the Apocalypse comes. Be creative, remember that the Titans where alive from the middle ages. -- [B]Elements:[/B] Dark (Taken by me) Earth (Taken by me) Beast (Take by me) Thunder & Lightning (Taken by KKC and Shy) Fire (Taken by Crazy Ace) Light (Taken by KKC) Day Night(Taken by Dragon Warrior) Sound (Take by Cyriel) Air (Taken by Shy) Water (Taken by Artemis) Speed (Taken by KKC) Strength (Taken by CrH) Ice (Taken by CrH) Life (Taken by Artemis) Death (Taken by Dragon Warrior) Sin's (Taken by Dragon Warrior) Sea (Take by Cyriel) Steel Forest (Taken by Artemis) Plants Dragon's (PM me about this first, there's a lot to know) Time Travel (PM me about this also) Telekinetic Telepathic (Very near to the telekinetic, so if you have Telekinatic, have this, it would be a good idea) (Taken by Cyriel) Teleportic (Same as the Telepathic) Mountain (Also controlling rocks, stone and things like that) Artemis - Thanks for some elements - Sign-Up's: [I]Name:[/I] Keep it creative, no crap like Daniel [I]Gender:[/I] One or the other, I mean it [I]Element:[/I] One, two or three of the above (more will be added soon, and you can try out for one if someone has it) [I]Power:[/I] Related to your Element [I]Weapons:[/I] One special weapon only [I]Description:[/I] [I]Elemental Description:[/I] When they get ready for a fight, or something [I]Birth Place:[/I] [I]Bio:[/I] Simple as my dinner, which is normally pie. My sign-up: [B][I]Name:[/I] Aranel Arnex [I]Gender:[/I] Male [I]Element:[/I] Beast, Dark and Earth. [I]Power:[/I] The only power he has is animal Transformation. Aranel can transform into any animal, but by this he has amazing acorbatic skills. The other small power he has, is to make shadows move, mostly his own shadows to scare off foes. [I]Weapons:[/I] [URL=http://www.woodus.com/den/gallery/graphics/dw1nes/weapon/erdricks-sword.gif]Golden Dragon Sword[/URL] [I]Description:[/I] [IMG]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=550760[/IMG] [I]Elemental Description:[/I] He has longer hair, just down to his neck, and he has metal shin plates on his arms and legs, and a long black cape. Nothing big of in change. [I]Birth Place:[/I] The forest that can't be seen in Day [I]Bio:[/I] He was the first Titan to fight against the Apocalypse, but is also the most brave of them all. Using his animal transformation, he was able to gather most of the Titans for the final attack. Most of it was blamed on him, but he had others to blame. When they went to rest for years, Aranel was the last to rest. Before all this, when he was a young child and just found out what he was, Aranel was given a sword that is said to be the weapon of the earth. Being dark and wanting to be along all the time, Aranel decided to have Beast as his main element, and trained with his weapon. He had been good friends with the Thunder and Lightning Titans, and they used to train a lot. As time grew by, Aranel became aware of his mission on the earth, and stopped much evil with the other Titans. He had no idea of any evil like the Apocalypse, but he still trained day by day. Most of the time he would protect animals, and learn more about them so he could know what to do in their form. Years before the Apocalypse, there was a hunting section in his home forest, men looking for the Red Dragon that killed so many for food. Aranel had a tough time telling them to stop, and telling them to stop, and the only way to save the last Red Dragon was to lead the hunters away. So, he transformed into the Red Dragon, and was able to lead the hunters away, for the Red Dragon to go away from the lands, and live forever in the other realms. From this, Aranel learnt that not everyone was kind and giving, and when he awakes once more to stop the Apocalypse, he will remember what he had learnt, but will the others be friends once more?[/B] -- Rules: No really powerful powers, another that can't kill you No more than one weapon I can decided who is in and out Keep the bio decent Have fun![/SIZE]

[SIZE=1][B]Name: Tarius Gender: Male Age: 27 Appearance: [IMG]http://www.raine-tech.com/images/69148501.jpeg[/IMG] Mutation: His skin is darker and like fur, he is much more acrobatic, but his main power is that he can use dark powers to move objects and create sheild but depending on his strength. Basically he's a guy with dark powers, making him stronger and faster. Personality: Not very nice when it comes to evil. Hes helpful to others, but if people have done bad he would either ignore them or be very very mean and nasty towards them. Due to his past, he's like this. He prefers the shadows and night to anything else, and among all creatures he is most appealing to dragons and bird-type creatures. You can't mess Tarius around, he hates people who think they can fool him. Tarius knows what he knows, and is wise. Tarius is never afriad to use his dark powers, he never has been and he never will. He's sarcastic in most cases, and will have a laugh, but the one thing he isn't is caring. He's never cared for anyone, he's never cared for himself. He never has for himself, or anyone, and he never will. Weapon: [URL=http://www.knightsedge.com/spanish-toledo-swords/dragon-king-sword.jpg]One Dragon Sword[/URL] Bio: From day one, Tarius has lived in the darkest places. At first he lived in the forest, and would train himself, normally defending himself against wild animals and monster, making his power improve day by day. When he was 11 years old, he was like a trickster, tricking animals and monsters and dodging them. It was all fun and games until Tarius killed a mother Dragon. It wasn't his fault, he didn't mean it. Later on the dragons babies died, and Tarius blamed himself for this. He left the forest, and lived on the mountains. For years on the mountains he discovered ever limit to his powers, dark energy enabled him to fly. His powers had limits, they could run out and where only powerful depending on Tarius. He improved even more, but stayed away from animals so he couldn't hurt them anymore. One day when he was 19, he found some sort of Dragon shrine, with a huge sword stuck in a rock. Being Tarius, he pulled it out, and felt that this sword had a dragon soul inside it, but he wanted to make up for the dragon he killed, so he kept the sword, trained with it, practised with it, along with his powers too. As time grew by, when he was 27 he felt he had perfected his powers and his weapon, so he set out once more, knowing he was an outcast, but willing to help. He still didn't care for things, but he still wanted to help... for some reason, it was that way. Extra: Amazing Acrobatic skills (I suppose this is an extra)[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Name: Aranel Lissësúl Age: 22 Race: Elf Magic/Spells/Weapon: [U]Weapons:[/U] A long black staff with two silver sharp blades on each end, and in the middle a long red ribbon. The blades are sharp enough to cut almost any foe in half, but needs a great user to match. Two blades that have pattrens on them, and are really hard to descripe, so they're in his picture. [U]Magic/Spells:[/U] Aegnor Cúthalion (Mytsic Heat), a spell that allows Aranel to heat up the blades of his two weapons, his dagger and staff, but only those two. Elessar Elendil (Dragon Claw), not like it sounds but it confuses the foe, and also making them think the Dragon Claw attack is a real live dragon attacking them, but this magic wears down and can only be used a few times in one day. Picture: [IMG]http://www.mavarts.com/images/large-images/color-art1/originals/originals/misc/ElfWarrior.jpg[/IMG] Biography: Born in the Victoria Kindgom, he grew up to be most like his father, mainly strong and relentless. He wouldn't give up, and he learnt not to in a few experiences in the pass. As a small boy he would ask his father questions about weapons and other things, knowing his father was a great warrior. As time passed by Aranel's father would teach him a few things about either survival or weilding a weapon, and when Aranel was only 10 years of age, his father gave him two matching blades. As Aranel grew, he learnt that using Magic with his weapons, he could fight combining Weapons and Magic. Knowing he could do this, he decided to have two speical weapons of his own, and that tells us how he got his Staff. On one night, Aranel's father went away for a short while, and never returned. Aranel, feeling let down and angry, set off on his own trying to learn more magic and maybe even fight with the greatest of people. Aranel was only a child of 15 when he set off, and he hoped to learn many forms of magic, but only learnt to spells: Aegnor Cúthalion and Elessar Elendil. He did not duobt anything he knew, because Aranel always believed that it's never the magic that's strong, it's the user! Aranel always knew that the two magic spells he knew where of Elf type, but didn't care much. As time went by, he always seemed to develope on his skills and tried everytime to improve his magic and weapons use. When he was 20 years of age, he met a few people who seemed to use magic a lot too, and went under the training of a Magic Master, who said to know everything there is about Magic. The Elvin Magic Master offered to teach Aranel everything he knew, saying Aranel was special. Aranel agreed, and at first he learnt to calm his mind, attack things without seeing and so on. After one year of that, he questioned the Elvin Magic Master about other magic and if he could learn it. Finally, after sometime Aranel was about to learn a few new spells, but when the other Elvin Magic's shown him the spells, Aranel said that kind of magic isn't magic, it's destruction, and left. So for most of his life, he kept the two magic spells he knew, and would never forget the savage people on the world. At the age of 22, he decided to go back to his home, but never went to see anyone he knew. It seemed everyone had forgotten him, but never the less, Aranel had not forgotten them. Most of his life seemed like a mini adventure, that just kept going on and on. But, no matter where he travels, Aranel has always hoped to see the man who gave him the twin blades, the man who tought most things to Aranel, his father, who Aranel feels is still alive. Where From: Victoria Kindgom[/B] Tell me what needs to be edited.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=1][B]Sure, you're all in, so you can post on the RPG now. I thought no one would sign-up as X Legends, so we have another one now. This is in the adventure forum, go post.[/SIZE][/B]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Semjaza Azazel [/i] [B]I'm sorry, I wasn't referring to your post, Vicky. I was referring to the original poster and her idea of "why bother if you're just going to die anyway" heh. Maybe I should start quoting people to avoid these misunderstandings lol. Unless you already knew this, in which case, I apologize again. [/B][/QUOTE] [SIZE=1][B]Ohh... right... "Live your life to the fullest." That means do what you like, and all the dead moments you'll forget, if you die and forget it like a few people say. So.. when you die and forget everything, it means you don't have to remember the bad stuff... hey... wonder what is feels like to never exsist...[/SIZE][/B]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Semjaza Azazel [/i] [B]If you feel this way, you might as well kill yourself right now. If you don't want to kill yourself, then there obviously is some reason for you to live. Why else would you bother? [/B][/QUOTE] [SIZE=1][B]Killing myself would just hurt others, but dieing old or something wouldn't, but the thought of someones daughter, or family member killing themselves makes people sick, so I'd rather wait until someone kills me. I'm just not bothered anymore...[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]I wouldn't and couldn't careless, everything you do will always be a memory sooner or later. The happiest moment ever will just be a memory in a few seconds gone. Same with everything you do, sooner or later you'll just be dead, geeh... doesn't time pass so quickly? I rarely think about it, I just do things for the memory, but when I die I believe that I go to a better place, making more and more memories to remember... making life and the afterlife amazingly coonfusing and easy to forget. I don't know why I should just stop forgetting now, the likely-ness is I won't remember this post in a few years... maybe in a few years I'll be dead, but to be honest I couldn't care about my life, it's just my life, there's nothing important about me.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Rat-thing: Hey mate, you badly need wrinkle resistance.[/B] Rubish attempt...[/SIZE]

[SIZE=1]If you would like to join this, post your sign-up in the recruitment. [B]5 years after Goku disappeared with Ubuu, the remaining warriors lived in peace, not really do anything to save the world or universe. It seemed, putting Majin Buu to rest, the universe had settled down and evil had been put to rest. Goku is still training with his young friend, while the other Z warriors either train, sit on their backsides or do anything a normal person would. But little did they know, or any one for that matter, beyond the Universe, beyond any Realm, beyond a distance you could think of, a race of extremely amazing fighters traveled planet to planet, universe to universe, Realm to realm in search of good fighters. They're not evil, they never where, just amazing fighters, known as X Legends. They came to the Realm right next to earth, and the news had spread very far about the Z Fighters. Since they hadn't found a way into the universe of Earth, they asked a few people who could get through to pass the message on. 10 years later, the remaining Z Fighters came to a tournament held in the next realm near them, bringing Goku, Ubuu and a few other fighters. The X Legends had 10 Warriors and the Z Fighters had many more, but only Ten fought. The tournament came to a halt when everyone was informed of a time traveler in the universe of Earth, who was taking over completly! The tournament came to a complete halt, and the X Legends team decided to go back to their universe for awhile, then continued on their way. It seemed that the fair ends of the universe where already in darkness, and planets where destroyed and reduced to dust. The time traveler known as Leon had taken the far end of the universe, taken over, infact, killing off races with his warriors and men. The Z Fighters only got to their planet in time, and it was only one year before Leon would make it to their section, but they could do nothing until Leon came closer. Before long, they asked the X Legends to join them. Being Legends, they said yes, and together they all formed a new team: [U][I][SIZE=5]Elite Warriors[/U][/B][/SIZE][/I] Okay, it begins: [B]Rad sat on the edge of the floating palace, or the lookout. For once he was wearing a red shirt, but he had no intensions of keeping things that way. He was hoping people would show up for training, so they could be ready for Leon. The skies where blue today, without a single cloud in them. "Hey!" A voice yelled behind Rad. Rad turned around, and saw Gotenix, the fusion of Goten and Trunk flying onto the lookout. "Good, where's everyone else?" Rad asked getting to his feet. Gotenix's voice echoed a lot like all the other fusions. "I dunno." Gotenix replied. Rad sighed, and sat down again. The Ex-X Legends lived up in the lookout, but the others had to always fly up. This time they would train a lot harder, because they knew Leon was not a push over. Looking downwards, Rad heard footsteps behind him. "Why're you so worried?" Gotenix asked. "Because the whole universe is at stake and if we don't advance a bit more, the universe is doomed!" Rad replied. "...Oh.." Gotenix replied.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Lance sighed heavily. "Nothing we can do... Open Fire!" Lance ordered. Jyvel smiled, along with some others. The ship in front seemed to be charging weapons too. "Uh... problem.." Victoria began. Lance looked over, hoping it was nothing serious. "Targeting... our target systems has been disabled by something." Victoria told them. Lance gulped, and put his hands on the keyboard. Hackers. Someone had hacked into their systems and disabled their target systems! Jyvel gulped too. "Didn't notice that!" He said. He looked up at the screen. "Uhh... they're opening fire!" Jyvel said turning to the others. Lance's eyes widened. "Try to hit them without a targetting system!" Lance ordered. Ralience nodded and clicked on a few buttons, as the ship fired off two missiles at the enemy. They missed by a long shot. "We can't do anything without targets!" Ralience said. "Even if we had deadly aiming by ourselves, the missiles are in an akward place." Ralience added. "Uhh... Captain we better think of something fast." JET said. Lance grabbed the controls again. "Too late." JET added as several missiles from the enemy pushed at them. Lance pulled the ship up with all his power, but before they could even reach the surface both missilles from the enemy hit them, making their whole ship shake like hell. "That just broke right through the shields!" Ralience shouted. "And... the Oxygen is... going fast..." Jyvel said. Lance tried too pull the ship up a little more, to the surface. "Tell me something we don't know." Victoria replied. "Okay... we're all going to drown if I don't get this thing up!" Lance told them. Jyvel clicked on their full speed, and their ship just pushed to the surface. It appeared on all the teams screens that water was flooding in, they had to get out! -- Before long, Lance was found pulling Jyvel and Ralience up from the ship, as they all stood ontop of it staring out to sea. Slowly, their sip seemed to sink. "What do we do now?" Erika asked. Lance sighed, as the ship sank some more. "Hey! Look!" Jeslai said pointing at the sea. There was a shadow hoovering just below them... it was the submarine that attacked them! As the submarine rose a bit more, a long pole appeared. "Okay team, we've got no choice! Jump onto this sub, then we have to find a way inside and stay low until we find a way to get out safely!" Lance said. One by one, each of the team jumped onto of the huge submarine, moping they could find a way in before it went below the sea again.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]I like them, though they do seem like some people from the 60's or something. I can't imagine them with curly hair on that picture, but overall it's good. The hair does look a little weird, though, it does.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]They're great sign-up's guys! MK you need to just add to your bio how they became a Z Fighter, that's all, just letting you know! You don't have many more to go now, just a few. I'll also add, that at the start it will be only a few Months pasted from the story I typed.[/SIZE][/B]

Ah, forget it, there is going to be no last RPG of mine, but I'll TRY this. This takes place after Z, not GT, so really this story will take the place of GT. [SIZE=1][B]5 years after Goku disappeared with Ubuu, the remaining warriors lived in peace, not really do anything to save the world or universe. It seemed, putting Majin Buu to rest, the universe had settled down and evil had been put to rest. Goku is still training with his young friend, while the other Z warriors either train, sit on their backsides or do anything a normal person would. But little did they know, or any one for that matter, beyond the Universe, beyond any Realm, beyond a distance you could think of, a race of extremely amazing fighters traveled planet to planet, universe to universe, Realm to realm in search of good fighters. They're not evil, they never where, just amazing fighters, known as X Legends. They came to the Realm right next to earth, and the news had spread very far about the Z Fighters. Since they hadn't found a way into the universe of Earth, they asked a few people who could get through to pass the message on. 10 years later, the remaining Z Fighters came to a tournament held in the next realm near them, bringing Goku, Ubuu and a few other fighters. The X Legends had 10 Warriors and the Z Fighters had many more, but only Ten fought. The tournament came to a halt when everyone was informed of a time traveler in the universe of Earth, who was taking over completly! The tournament came to a complete halt, and the X Legends team decided to go back to their universe for awhile, then continued on their way. It seemed that the fair ends of the universe where already in darkness, and planets where destroyed and reduced to dust. The time traveler known as Leon had taken the far end of the universe, taken over, infact, killing off races with his warriors and men. The Z Fighters only got to their planet in time, and it was only one year before Leon would make it to their section, but they could do nothing until Leon came closer. Before long, they asked the X Legends to join them. Being Legends, they said yes, and together they all formed a new team:[/B] [CENTER][U][B][SIZE=4]Elite Warriors[/SIZE][/U][/B][/CENTER] Simple. All X Legends are the same race, more information will be below. You can be any origanal Z Fighter, as long as they can fight, but you have to add a few years on, making Pan or someone a little older than in GT. You can make up your own character, as long as it has a bio telling how they became Elite's. X Legends are a race known as Rammincs, and they all look like humans most of the time, but sometimes having different colour skin and much stranger power. You can also make up your own race. Sign-up's: [I]Name: Age: Gender: (One or the other) Race: (Make up one, or Rammincs or any from DBZ) Abillites: (Moves do not apply, transformations, what they have unique to everyone else maybe) Signature Move: (Be creative) Other moves: (Make a list) Gadgets: (Things your character carries) Description: (What your character looks like) Bio: (History of you character) X Legend or Z Fighter: (What they where at first)[/I] Mine: [B]Name: Radilliuin, but Rad for short. Age: 20 Gender: Male Race: Rammincs Abillites: Mainly he has amazing skill, but strength to match. The only Transformation he has is Red Devil, which is like Super Saiyan, only his eyes and hair turn red, and his skin goes dark red also. He grows sharp fangs also. Signature Move: Tiger Claw - A lot like the Dragon Fist, but this is with the powerful soul a Tiger. It was said to be used only by the greatest of warriors, and was a technique in Rad's family blood line, and very powerful. Other moves: Fire Buster - Another hot attack, but not as powerful Devil Blast - An attack which can be fired to ways, in the form of a huge energy ball, or in a red blast. It's mostly an attack that is hot, deadly, and powerful. Gadgets: None Description: [IMG]http://animeworld.com/fanart/fanimages/virgilabuyen/acfe1.jpg[/IMG] Bio: Born in the land which all X Legends came from, Rad is their prince, believe it or not. He left with the few warriors to find great fighters, and is also the leader of the X Legends, and amazing at fighting. He was tought at first by a grand master of fire arts, and he trained in the hottest places. Rad fought along side his father at first, defending their planet, but when the time came Rad went off with the X Legends. In their first years, Rad made sure his team was heard of throughout every universe and planet they travelled too. The normally worked to help planets, and challanged their greatst fighters. Rad would always be the one to finish the match with his Tiger Claw attack, but after awhile it became his starting move to finish the job. As the X Legends grew, so did Rad. Being young, he still hand talent and was still the X Legend leader. At the time of the tournament, Rad was the last to fight, and when they heard about the new evil, he was very willing to help. X Legend or Z Fighter: X Legend.[/B] Sign-up away![/SIZE]

[SIZE=1][B]Overall Member of the Year: Charles Male Otaku of the Year: Charles Female Otaku of the Year: Babygirl Staff Member of the Year: James Funniest Member of the Year: Dragon Warrior Most Opinionated Otaku of the Year: Poison Tongue Most Likely to Be Here in Two Years: Adam Best Newbie: Arcadia Best Oldie: Sephiroth Most Likely to Become a Staff Member: Poison Tongue Most Improved Member of the Year: Vicky (I can vote for myslef, right?) Favorite Banned Member: Dayday Thread of the Year: Star Wars 411 Silliest Thread of the Year: How the James Stole Christmas [U]Random Awards[/U] Avatar Award (Best Avatars Overall): Charles Signature Award (Best Signatures Overall): James Best Location (Best Specific Location): Drix D?Zanith Best Otaku Couple: Queen Asuka/Piromunkie Best Looking Otaku: Babygirl, Juuthena, James Otaku Clique of the Year: Adam?s Angels, Best MyOtaku: James [U]Otaku Writers[/U] Poet Laureate: Mitch Writer of the Year: Solo Tremaine Orginal Story of the Year: OB: Enter the Net Role-Player of the Year: Arcadia Brawler of the Year: Raiha [/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B][U]Name:[/U] Leon [U]Age:[/U] 21 [U]Gender:[/U] Male [U]Race:[/U] Human [U]Occupation:[/U] Prophet, Blade Wielder [U]Weapon: [/U] [I]Staff[/I] A staff that has two shrap blades on each end, it's black and has a long thin piece of cloth in the middle. It was said to be one of a kind, but no one really knows. [U]Prophet:[/U] Earth, Beast [U]Skills:[/U] His special skill is to turn into any animal he has seen, to put it in normal terms he's a shape shifter. The only problem is his eyes stay the same light blue, sometimes giving him away. [U]Home Town:[/U] Unknown [U]Bio:[/U] His past below the age of seven is unknown to him, but he did grow up in the woods protecting animals and helping nature. At first, he was protected by wolves and other creatures, and before long he would run with them and help them also. All his life he loved animals, and he still does. At a young age he learnt the art of fighting. When he was 7 years-old, he was taken somewhere when he followed a wolf, and he saw a long black staff stuck in the ground. Being Leon, he pulled it out and swished it around for awhile. He thought at first he could use this to help, and he did. So, he would sleep for a few hours then train with it, building his power up and up. One morning he woke up, not remebering anything from the age of 6 and below. He also noticed he could shape shift into the animals he had seen, but he had no clue how he had that power. So then on he still helped mother nature, and animals. He grew and grew, using his staff to save them all. When he was only 12, he went out to train and see all other animals over the world to complete his transformation powers. Leon then met an old man, who promised to train him. Leon agreed, for he wanted to be trained. As time went by he learnt how to fight, and the old man took very good care of him. After this, Leon said he was ready to go out alone, and at 15 he did that. Leon travelled across the world, seeing many animals and helping them. He then knew that there was much more to the world than just the forest he grew up in, and he continued to learn about his powers, day after day. He didn't stop learning, and after some time he wanted to show his first master how he had improved. Doing this, he went back to his master. When he came to the old man's house, he learnt he was dead, murdered. Leon became angry, and went out in search of the killers at the age of 17. He never stopped looking, and everyday he would pick up clues to who had done the crime. He followed a trail one night, and found it had taken him to the forest he grew up in. Leon went in there, only to find most of the animals dead, murdered, even eated. Leon got so angry, when he found the murderers he made sure they paid, and killed them one by one. After this, he went on again, trying to forget. When he was 20, people seemed to be afriad of him. For some reason... Leon still used his staff, along with his power. But one day, someone came up to him and called him a killer. Leon wasn't sure what they meant. He was protecting the animals, the earth. Did revenge take his peaceful nature away? It made Leon hate himself, and for alongtime he wished he hadn't done it, then found out that the earth needed to protect its self, and he was just another killer. [U]Regular Appearance:[/U] Short, spiky gold hair that let's off a shine in the sun, and is just like the golden sunrise. His face is youthful, and he has two fangs that hang over his lip when his smiles. His eyes are light blue like the sky, and his face always shows a hateful or pittyful look. He wears a black shirt that has a leather strap which holds his staff on his back, and his arms show strength in them. His shirt is a little baggy at his shoulders, but tight at his chest. He wears black pants that are a little baggy towards his brown boots with go up to his knees, and act like protection for his shins. He isn't the tallest of humans, but that depends on the way he stands. [U]Prophet Appearance:[/U] His hair grows longer a little, and his eyes much darker. He then has a long blue cape behind him, he also has a black belt on, and his pants a the same but under the belt is a long t-shirt-like clothe that rapes around him and hangs down just above his thighs. His hands (from below the elbow) have red shin-like metal pieces on them, and his fangs grow longer.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Lance brushed back his hair, that always seemed to be getting in the way these days. He ran his hands through his hair again, shifting it out of both eyes. His eyes where green, and he wore the same clothing as everyone else around here. Suddenly, one of his friends sped passed him and grabbed his arm, dragging him along. "We're late!" Patrick, his friend said. Lance laughed and pulled his arm back. "I know, THAT's the whole idea." Lance replied. Patrick had black hair, and it was down to his shoulders. Shaking his head, Lance's friend ran off. Lance shrugged and looked down at the floor, thinking to himself. [I]What did I have next?[/I] He asked himself. It would be a lot easier if he looked at his schedule, but being Lance he didn't feel like it. He shrugged and thought it would come back to him in a few seconds, and continued to walk along. He suddenly looked up at the clock above him, and noticed he [I]was[/I] late. "Damn..." He growled shaking his head. He looked around to see only a few people, then ran to the class he had next, but he wasn't sure if he was right in what class. [I]I hope I don't get into trouble, and I hope I'll walk into the right class! No time to look at things now.[/I] He said to himself running down the corridor.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Everyone in my school is weird and imature. Normally you find us all chasinf each other in between classes, and sticking love hearts on the libary ceiling saying something like: Somone 4 Somone 4eva! We are all a bunch of idiots, from 11 year-olds to... 16 or something. Sometimes, most of us, you wouldn't weirdo's, you could call us rules breakers or disrepectful kids. The really, really mad person is unthinkable because we all have mad moments. The teachers are lost with us, it's fun. People think I'm weird because I call myself Werewolf, but so what everyone has a name for themselves.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]"I'll open fire." Ralience said staring forward at the screen. Lance didn't say anything. "You're not supossed to do anything without the Leader's orders!" Ryvel said tapping a few keys. Lance thought long and hard. Destroying the other ship might give them away, but letting it pass would also give them away. He gulped. "Maybe if we chang corse and go around...?" Suggested Jeslai. JET nodded also. "I think that would be a good idea." He said. Lance gulped again, he knew the ship had seen them now. "Lance?" Ralience asked. Lance sighed heavily, and finally spoke. "I'm not taking any chances. Don't do anything, I'm hacking their systems and shutting down their engines. When I give the word Jyvel, hit full speed." Lance told them. He clicked rappidly on the computers keys and looekd closer. "Lance... you... really better hurry..." Erika said. The ship in front of them turned and faced them, and seemed to have two large cannons ready. "They are going to open fire..." Victoria stated. Lance looked to the side, and then back to his work. "Just a little longer..." He mumbled. The ship ahead was really charging up weapons now, as Lance tried to go faster. He chanted to himself to c'mon, and gulped hard. "Now would be a good time to hack them." JET said. "Just hold on!" Lance shouted. If he didn't hurry soon, they where all going to die. Just as the enemy was about to open fire, the ship in front dropped into the sea, making a wave of water fly up in the air. Lance smiled. "Let's go on now..." He said to himself. "Same course?" Erika asked. "Yes." Lance replied.[/SIZE][/B]

[CENTER][SIZE=5]Earth?s Special Team.[/SIZE] [I][SIZE=1][B][U]The Team[/U] vicky as Lance Hakira as Erika Lonolai Arika as Ralience Wasabi as Victoria Louise FirePheonix727 Jyvel Hirokan Squall as JET-6115 RioLaskand as Jeslai Klilika Sweetreyes as Leonna "Leo" Leminx[/CENTER] At the start all of the team will be in the same place I list in the post, all of them waiting for the final announcement. All other characters (aka, Agents) can be anywhere. I?ll put some characters in this post to make it interesting. Here we go, then:[/I] Lance stared blankly at the half built robot he made. It had wires hanging down all over, broken bits, snapped joints and so on. He was meant to finish it, but he couldn?t be bothered. His mind fixed on one thing?. How this had all started. Here he was, stuck on a dust-ridden surface, while his training place lay dawn under the ground, and he grew up for war. If only the past would have taken more care? if only Lance could change it, but he couldn?t. He lent back slightly on the ground, while JET-66115, whom Lance called JET, and the others where behind working on something?s. Lance pushed himself up and whipped back his hair. He was frustrated. As he got up and walked away, he lifted his leg high and kicked off the metal head of the mangy robot, as it went rolling along the dusting floor. The other members behind looked at him in confusion, and JET could be heard talking to the others. Later that day, in the underground place for humans, robot, Cyborg and aliens a-like, Lance sat in his dark dank quarters, staring at the wall. He stroked back his brown hair and sighed heavily. ?Why didn?t I back out? Why didn?t I stop myself from becoming this? Being a part of this world is bad enough, but holding the fate of my race? No?? Lance sighed again. He clenched his fist hard and growled. Tomorrow morning each one of them team would be briefed on their first part of their mission into their fate, Lance was ready, but he felt restless. He jumped up and grabbed both of his black boots and armour. He pulled the black armour over his head and slide his foot into one boot. He stretched out his arms and began to walk down to the damp training room for one list run. As Lance walked along, he could see the figure of Ralience soon behind him. ?We?re setting off in the morning, shouldn?t you be sleeping?? She asked him. Lance sighed and turned around. ?I can?t, and I won?t. I need to train before we set off, I mean? I was appointed leader, and I need to lead people as I was trained for.? Lance replied. Ralience sighed as well, and watched Lance walk off. The training room door could only be entered if you had the password, and only the 7 on the team had it. Lance came up to the metal doors and typed in on the keypad outside. He clicked in a few words? ?Access Denied.? Bleeped the small computer. Lance growled and typed it in again. The same words came up? he had either forgotten it or was so pressured he couldn?t remember the right one. Though, he did have his hacking skills. ?Prepared to be hacked.? Lance said bending down. -- Morning -- The whole team had gotten up early and ready to start. Their first mission when they got there had parts and stages, stage one was to find the two weapons created by Agents capable of destroy the small hope humans had left, but do it so that they did not know there was a war coming. Not easy, but they had to stay in the lair of their enemy and complete the second task, hard? They would all go there in an extremely fast jet-like ship, where each person had their own job in it. JET in control of all the back-up?s and all the engines, Ralience in charge of the weapons fire and shields, Erika had control of all the sensors and tracking systems, Victoria in charge of weapons fire, Jyvel had the speed control and had to make sure everything could run smoothly, Jeslai had the seconary weapons and navagatior, and Lance was in the drivers seat. ?Remember our mission, it?ll take us awhile to get to our landing spot.? Lance said through his transmitter. ?How?s everything going?? He added. ?All engines online and purring like a kitten.? JET said. ?Weapons and shield are fine.? Ralience replied. ?Sensors are in working order along with the tracking systems.? Erika told him. ?All Weapons are ready.? Victoria said. ?Everything?s goin? smooth!? Jyvel said. ?Secondary fire are okay, and the coarse is set.? Jeslai said. Lance smiled. ?Good? now first, we ride to the nearst waters, and we travel under the sea, Jyvel, make sure ALL oxygen tanks are okay before we dive under the water.? Lance said clicking a few buttons. ?Rodger.? Jyvel replied. ?JET, get these engines to the max.? Lance said, ?It?s time we made history!?[/B] OOC: Have fun![/SIZE]

[SIZE=1][B]This is the only DBZ RPG I can find around right now, so I'll join, since we are friends also. Oh, and there's no space between to two names Bibidi and Babidi, it's just kinda weird seeing the names like that. Also, if you didn't mine, I just added a few extra things on my sign-up, because of the way my character is, it's only two things that I thought would be good to include considering my character. Also, if you want anything changed in my Bio (because it includes the 5 Elites on bibidi's side), I will, but I need to know if Ray can be bad then turn good. Name: Ray LiShadow Gender: Male Description: See attahcment, only he wears armour, which I can show you if you like. (added)Race: Zazzor(more info in the bio) Weapon: None, the two daggers in his description have nothing to do with this. Bio: From a planet where warriors where worse than Saiyans themselves, Ray was their Prince(sound like someone?). His father was the man who introduced the professional invasion on other planets, and turned the Zazzor race into more than blood thrusty warriors, but murderers with Pride and enough of it to destroy gracefully unlike Saiyans. Unlike the rest of his kind, Ray was more than that. He didn't have a rush for blood and fighting, he had a lot more than that. Rumors spread across the universe of an organized team of advanced warriors who took over several planets in a few days, a team known as the Elite Warriors. Ray decided to leave his kind and joined the army of Elite Warriors, where the best fighters where announced Elites Of The Universe. That, was what Ray was. After years of joining the EW, Ray took over as the master in the whole EW system, and became Super Elite Master, where they all bowed to him. With Ray now in charge, he ordered that the whole EW changed their whole fighting style to a sort of army march when they went into battle. This changed right away, making things better. As Master of the EW, Ray took control of many planets leaving other EW Elites in charge of them. After many years on, Ray and his EW where all going their own way. The Eilte's became a mere 5 warriors, and the rest became 10. They where all going away, but the Elites formed again under the comand of Ray and wondered the universe as the 5 Elites. They attacked many planets, and their evil never came to an end... The Elites, 5 of them, grew bored with the universe and formed a signature move. It was deadly, and known thoughtout universe umong planet. The made it so that only them five could use it together, and Ray was the only Elite able to us it alone. They called it the Elite Death Blast. As time went by, the group came to planets near earth, and where met by a wizard who offered them the chance to take on the strongest fighters, Ray was determand to destroy him, but the 5 Elites, decided not too... Also, he has a transformation, two: The first stage where his body turns red and muitiples his power, the second turning himself gold all the way, like SSJ but only more powerful and a lot stronger. Personality: Ray is the kind of person who never worries about himself, and is a master at team work. He and the 5 Elites have the same personality, they never take anyone lightly, they always get the job done, they always respect each other, and they never act if another member doesn't like this. Ray was a lot like Ei Shenron (out of GT), but only he knew when enough was enough. He is sometimes kind, and will let people live, but that's not very often. The most common thing the Elites have in common is their devotion to the signature move that could destroy planets in an second, the Elite Death Blast, which they all worked together to form it's ulimate power. Side: Can he be bad then turn good? (Added) Signature Move: Elite Death Blast, a beam which can be used by Ray alone, or all Elites. 2 stand side by side on the ground, two on either side of them a bit above, and Ray at the top forming the most power, and sending a huge blast of black energy in a beam form towards the foe.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Okay, everyone is in and I'll start this now. We have 1 Agent, which is fine, and 7 Special Team, so that's okay now. Arika feel free to edit your post anywhere, put please finish the sign-up if you can. Thanks for joining, and look out for this in the adventure section![/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Aranel walked slowly along the path, to where he was asked to come. He didn't know why, but partly he had nothing better to do, so he decided to go there. Aranel would rather walk all the way, then travel on horse-back. As he walked along, he held his dagger in his left hand, and every now and then he would flip it in the air and catch it. He sighed heavily to himself and looked ahead. "I wonder how many will come, and for what reason..." Aranel mumbled to himself stopping. With this, he put his dagger back on his belt and contined forward. He kept his hand on his dagger, though, making sure it did not drop from his belt. As he continued onwards, he noticed something in the distance. Aranel laughed to himself. "All this walking paid off." He laughed. He knew it had to be Govad Ithilmir in the distance, unless he had taken a wrong somewhere, but in his case that was unlikely. Seeing Govad Ithilmir in the distance, Aranel decided to run the rest of the way there, since it would be much faster. As he ran, he jumped onto a nearby rock and gazed forward, he was much nearer now. "Seems someone has bet me too it," Aranel chuckled. He jumped off the rock and sped forward again, still keeping his hand on his dagger which banged on his knee. As he came much closer he could see the figure much better now. Aranel smiled, and came to a hault as he stopped just a few metres away from the elf who sat there.[/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1][B]Thanks James, it's working now. I think the banner is really cool by the way, it looks great![/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE=1]OOC: Very funny Angelus, putting up a drama scene for me... *mumbles* lol, just jokin' around! IC: [B]Remus walked along besides Hermione mumbling to himself and crusing. "What's wrong with you?" She asked. Remus shrugged. "Oh nothing, just the fact that Malfoy has a big mouth for such a little shrimp and likes to call people he doesn't even know, AND the fact we just got homework and that I don't feel like it, AND the fact about the mail, AND-" He continued but Hermione stopped him. "I told you what I was going to do about the mail, and I can help you with the homework." Hermione replied. Remus walked over to Ron and Karen, then turned back to Hermione. "And what about snake kid? Malfoy? I wouldn't just let him walk around thinking he can do what he wants, if I where you, I'd have punched him in the nose." Remus said. "You should've then." Ron laughed. "I'd like to see him try." A sneering voice said from behind. Remus turned around, and saw Malfoy from before with two kids behind him. "How is that a munch of loser like you lot could even make it passed the train station, let alone make friends." He added. Remus clenched his fist hard, as he really wanted to punch him in the nose. Who does he think he is? The king of the world? King or not, anyone who bad mouths another person gets what the get.[/SIZE][/B]