darkrequeimX98

i didnt like the second poem either.it was just something i wrote down a long long time ago.as you can see ive gotten a lot better=)thanx for mergin the threads mitch!

you should check out the following songs:"Great Romances of the 20th Century" "Cute Without the E(Cut from the Team" "Head Club" and "Timberwolves at New Jersey" are some of my favorites.also if you like Taking Back Sunday you'll probably like the band Northstar if you dont mind the cussing in 2 of their songs.if ur interested in them download these songs from Northstar:"Broken Parachute" and"Rigged and Ready"(they dont cuss in these songs)

heres another poem i wrote!this one isnt so dark and evil:)although the form is like that other poem i wrote called comfort.this one is called "Beautiful" [COLOR=teal]she walks with an effortless grace like a ballerina with ribbons in her hair flowing like liquid in the wind while grass and flowers sprout from the ground where her foot lands as though shes a god beautiful shes an angel i know it her blue shining eyes her luscious red lips inhumanly gorgeous beautiful[/COLOR] tell me what you guys think!!! NO you cant have it!!!im just kiddin.you can use it.thanx for the compliment also.hey what kind of anime are you doin anyways?

taking back sunday is my all time fave band!!!anyone else hear them yet?if you havent, you havent LIVED!!!discuss about the band here!

that is AWESOME!i think you have a pure talent for writing.i completely understand almost everything except for only 2 lines.anyways i think anyone who doesnt understand is kinda stupid because if you can understand it anyone can=)hey can you check out my poems?the threads are called "a poem" and "another poem"they are by different user names because my first user name was darkrequiemX99. then i got banned so I changed it to darkrequiemX98=)

this is another poem i wrote.hope you like it!its called "Comfort" its so lonely the darkness its become an ordinary thing like the sun with its blinding light once was but the darkness is comforting demons shrouded in tattered rags colored gray staring at me from below grasping my legs with their dry spiky hands as i lay in bed but i stare at the blank cieling smiling for now it is comforting dark shades of black fill the walls of my heart its become a portable beating hell an infinite black hole that will not stop screaming of agony surprisingly comforting what a life it has been but now ill end it with a shrill of laughter for it has been some rollercoaster ride hmm.comforting

thank you!oh yeah i got banned because i offended some dungeons and dragonds people.sorry again!thus i changed my name to darkrequiemX98!original isnt it?anyways i was lost too so i pretty much just wrote things down that kinda rhymed but made little or no sense.i dunno what i'll do next.