BlackDragon465

So when is the next update on the story?

The story continues to be great so I keep coming back to reading it. It could use a litte touch up to make it even better but is alright as it is.:)

I manage to eat a diet with just about every vitamin I need with 300 calories out of 2000 the body needs(if not overweight). I loose a pound every 2 days usually since I don't put more than 2% of fat of that regular 100% just not eating nothing but my nutrients and vitamins and I don't feel hungry since my body has the supplement I need. I do this because during school year I gain weight since I leave at 7am and get back at around 5 pm so I need to eat and between and I have to eat any food greasy or healthy so I end up gaining weight since I am not a workout type of person and I try to loose it during the summer. Gotta tell you this stuff works. O yeah it costs around $200 to buy the vitamins and stuff and that is for half a month so is $400 a month so is not a cheap way to loose weight but it works so is good enough for me.:) If you can't afford this crap I do just don't eat greasy stuff and eat juice and fruits and vegetables and try not to eat things with lots of grease. Lay off the candy and it should work.

Finally some updates. :) I like how the story is turning out. Is it anywhere near close to the end? I am just curious of the lenght of the story. I hope to see another update soon.

Umm my parent's aren't really weird. But they can sometimes embarrass me or my friends. My mom talks a lot to my friends when she sees them. She also talks a lot to any of my classmates when she sees them. I find that weird and disturbing but maybe that is just me.

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Charles [/i] [B]I agree with the general consensus here thus far. I don't develop crushes on those I meet online. I've said it before and I'll say it again--there's no difference between males and females in the world of the Internet. You're all just text and pixels to me. I have a sneaking suspicion that any crush would be moot because, should I ever meet the real person behind the computer, the overall make-up of the person would be so drastically different from what I imagined that the crush would be kind of ruined. So, it's impossible for me to be attracted to web people in any way whatsoever. ^^;; Yet, I do have major respect for many people for different reasons regardless of gender. More often than not, the people I meet and get to know online have terrific qualities and talents that I can't help but to admire. [/B][/QUOTE] I am with the Charles man. I mean sure there may be nice members and all but he has said all for me. It's the internet. If I ever was to meat the real person it may be drastic. I met once a person and it was almost exact like I imagine it would be but what are the chances of that happening again? Probably not good.

*Doesn't know how to swim* Yep I am sure am not. Especially when you can't swim.:(

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Transtic Nerve [/i] [B]lol how quickly children change their minds. This is why young love never works ladies and gentlemen. The defense rests your honor. [/B][/QUOTE] True is not a relationship. They are with them 85% of the time because of looks. Not because they really give a damn about each other. Trust me I am turning 14 and I know what I mean. I see that everday.:cool: :)

Awesome story. Is not confusing and simple and easy to read. I think however you should fix some grammar and other little details. Also some more detail would be great but I like the story.[img]http://www.otakuboards.com/images/icons/icon14.gif[/img] Something got me confused on the last ones.. The falcon had 4000 plus a power up if I remember reading correctly. Meaning the falcons power was above 4000 and I doubt it only god a 100 attack power up while the other god cards get a 500 power up. Meanig the falcons power had to be atleast 4500. While the dragon was at 4200. Therefore I don't see how the dragon wins.

Considering I know no Japanese is hard to understand anything it says. The quality of the sound isn't very great either. I don't understand the song at all I will still give it a good rating since I am a fan of Japanese stuff.:)

I fear death a lot. It's such a mystery if you just really die and then just stay on the ground on till you disintegrate until there is nothing left of you.

I doubt it will work. Unless they have been friends since they were toddlers I doubt that relationship can stay. I recommend like the rest that you tell her to move on. Seriously it is young and is long distance so the chances of that working out are about 1 in a million.

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by PoisonTongue [/i] [B]I must say. I am very disappointed with society these days. The fact that someone can create such a movement to ban toy guns is ludicrous. Have we lost sight of the important battles in our country? Feeding the hungry, housing the homeless, making sure every American has someplace warm to live. Thoughts? [/B][/QUOTE] Yep society sucks these days. I just can't belive I can' buy a rated M game without being asked for my damn age and giving them proof. Sadly I am not old enough to be 18. I mean who gives damn if they sell rated M games to a 4 yr old? Sadly this dissapoints me of having such an idiotic people living these days. But those assholes can't stop me from buying M rated games. I just get parents credit card and order them online although I would really like to be able to just go to a store and get them there..:) I will end this with: Society is made up of 70% people who are idiots. I mean they ban such stupid stuff but they won't go and ban and get rid of tobacco and alcohol which is more harmful to people than a stupid rated M game which is harmless since is all in reality a stupid CD. Now I hear they fine $150 or $500 to anyone who sells a person under 18 a M rated game. Picture of most people in the society these days: :drunk:

*sees room looks like a pile of crap* I think I am going to tackle cleaning all my floor tomorrow after reading this thread. I am so freaking lazy so I hope I can accomplish it. I hate bugs for some reason. I am a guy and I get the creeps from them LOL!!:D

WOW!! Awesomde drawing. I can't draw almost nothing. So I admire people with that kind of talent.