Raiha

[COLOR=royalblue]Ahah, aha....very funny.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~[/COLOR] [COLOR=seagreen]Sabir: .....I'm not as weak as you seem to view me. Flash: ...Oh really? [i]In one fluid movement, she drew the sabre from her side and gently tossed it into the air, catching it near the hilt. She slowly polished the side, watching Flash's reaction carefully.[/i] Flash: Cute. Sabir: Think what you like.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]That's not the most pleasant of tales, but it gets to the heart of somebody's life. Sad but true. I appreciate your frankness.[/cOLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]Posessed from below, This heart is not my own, I wait for the release to come, But it is all for nothing. Send your demons, Away from my heart, And change my future, Into something special. I suppose I should thank you, For opening my eyes, But when I look back, All I can see is the pain you gave. It seared through my heart, Penetrated my mind, Corrupted my soul, And know I think it's over. No more will I feel happiness, No more will I dance and sing, No more will I listen to your lies, No more will I allow you to consume me. It's over, all over now.[/cOLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]Iris: What's wrong Chole? Chole: !! How did you... Iris: I've been here this whole time. You didn't notice? Chole: ...no.... Iris: It's okay, I've been a little preoccupied lately. Chole: Haven't we all? Iris: ...yes....Rena too. I hate to say this, but I am afraid. I'm afraid that we'll lose everything, and everyone we love. The city is already gone.....but you and the others are still here. Chole: Don't be so scared. Iris: I just wish things could go back to the way they were before.[/COLOR]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by stormwing [/i] [B]ooc: even though i have no idea what to post i won't let this die...it's too good an rpg to waste...i think we might need a new direction... it's going in circles right now... or...maybe finsh it off and start a second...*shruggs* new people mebbe? iono... but...we gotta do somthin...or haven't noticed you two were the onlt ones postin?...(2000th post! ^.^'') it dosen't help my constant WB either... [/B][/QUOTE][COLOR=teal]We should get Harlequin and Ravenstorture to join. They have a certain style about them that gets to the soul of this kind of story.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Valeigh listened to Spyder talk, still feeling the same distance between herself and the others. She retained her serious composure, but could feel her control weakening.[/i] Athen: Is something wrong? Valeigh: ...I'm fine.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]Name: Valeigh Estunanda Age when died: 17 Time in Hell: Unknown Position in former life: Assasin/Mercenary Position in Hell: Unknown Short bio of life: It's not that fascinating. She is/was a professional assasin, hunts demons, makes money, lalala... Appearance: 5'7", slender figure, silver hair, white skin, black boots, miniskirt, tank top. Red headband and gauntlets. Equipment: Longblade, cut crystal vial, twin silver daggars.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]Nice, but exceedingly difficultto read. You might want to consider making the whole thing into several paragraphs. It makes your story more "user friendly." And that'll also ensure you get more reviews. ;)[/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]No offense. But your story is some what vauge. If I were you, I would make the posts longer, as they give your story a little more weight, or signifigance.[/cOLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]No, it's not you. I can understand it. Your story is more advanced than alot of the stories and poems that people post here. Don't feel bad. I like it.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]When Espa woke up, the first thing she felt was Rena's hands tugging on her shirt. She looked down at the little girl...[/i] Rena: Maa... Espa: Hungry? Rena: Huuun.... Lupos: Huh? Espa: ...Oh brother.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen][i]Iris hummed the Kaddish to herself and silently opened the door to Chole's room. She stepped inside and touched his forehead softly. He stired, but remained asleep. She sat down next to him and tilted her head back, sighing gently. Then her eyes closed, and she was dreaming again. And time went by.....[/i][/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Valeigh: What is your desire Celestin? Celestin: ....Why are they here? Valeigh: ........we wage our battle on the Triad, not the Celestial warriors. Celestin: To do so would be foolish. Valeigh: I pray you allow us to pass your realm in peace. Celestin: If your aquaintences did not know of me, I would forgive them. Valeigh: They were misinformed. Celestin: Very well. I give you my leave. He removed his blade from Siren and walked off into the moonset......[/i] Siren: Whew. Valeigh: Were you afraid? Siren: Yeah. Valeigh: Rightly so. Celestin is more powerful than all of us put together.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen][i]Valeigh casually slipped one of the silver blades into her belt and another into the side of her boot.[/i] Harle: You're easy to please. Valeigh: I like traveling light. Spyder: What a contradiction...[/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]Aster: .....I don't like it at all. Little girl: I'm scared. Aster: Come here... [i]The girl quickly ran up into Aster's arms and wrapped her hands around her neck.[/i] Blue: You sure have a way with kids. Aster: I'm a lady, it's more comfortable for little kids.[/cOLOr]

[COLOR=seagreen]Iris: ...hey baby. Chole: Um....is this safe? Iris: ;) I have the 9mm, of course it's safe. Chole: That wasn't what I was talking about. Iris: Don't let me scare you...I'm harmless.[/COLOR]:devil:

[COLOR=seagreen][i]When Iris woke up, the first thing she noticed was the silence of the place....no sound reached her ears. She rose to her feet slowly, then opened the doors and found Liam sleeping outside, and several other doors....[/i] Liam: You're awake. Iris: And you should be asleep. Liam: You woke me up. Iris: Mea culpa. Where's Chole? Liam: Inside on of those rooms. *gestures*[/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen][i]Valeigh was immediatly set upon by several of the winged creatures. She raised both hands high above her head and screamed....electricity crackling around her....in the next instant, the whole room exploded into a writhing mass of blood, energy, and flesh.... In the middle of it all, Valeigh swung her sword, hacking through the lines of creatures, enjoying herself immensely...[/i] Rico: I have her! Valeigh: Stay there! I'm coming out. It's a madhouse in here![/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]Valeigh: ...Don't forget this. [i]She held up her hand and a small orb of blue electricity formed around her palms...it crackled then died away.[/i] Valeigh: I'm not that helpless. Athen: But how long can you keep that up? Valeigh: Long enough for you two to get out there and get Spyder to safety. Rico: Well... Valeigh: JUST DO IT!![/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]Iris: ....lol... Kool: You're scaring him. Iris: I must be doing my job well then. Chole: Job? Iris: Just kidding. :D[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Valeigh charged forward, then hit the side of the house with her shoulder, knocking the door wide open. Rico followed soon after, and they quickly barricaded the door. The creatures did not follow, but circled Harlequin and Spyder again.[/i] Athen: You made it... Valeigh: Where were you? Athen: I was on the roof when they came, I got here first. Rico: So thoughtful of you to warn us. Athen: Sorry... Valeigh: What do we do about them? Rico: We could make another run and get Spyder out with my help. Valeigh: Well....if you and Athen run and I stay here...it might work.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]Once upon a dream, The faeries could fly, The flowers could smile, And my heart was at peace. Once upon a dream, Hatred was gone, Pain was only a memory, And my soul could sing. Now in my life, Anger is life, Heartache is daily, And my mind is chained. Now in my life, I wish I could change, Let everything go, And life life once upon a dream.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]Kool: Eheh, this'll be good. Iris: Stop quivering Chole! You're not going to your death. Chole: Are you sure? Iris: ....well....it depends....[/COLOR] :naughty:

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Valeigh and Rico dashed over to Harlequin, weapons raised. They looked at the house, now a seething mass of disgusting creatures...Harlequin came out moments later, holding Spyder in his arms.[/i] Rico: Is she alright? Athen: Mostly. Spyder: Ugh. Valeigh: My thoughts exactly, let's get out of here. Harlequin: We can't leave the city yet! Valeigh: You have a better idea? Spill it.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen]Iris: Then they lose the game, we get the money. :D Kool: Exactly! Simple economics. Chole: But isn't that....cruel? Iris: Naw, they'll live. Unfortunatly. Chole: So....where do we hide? Iris: The waterfall. ;)[/COLOR]