Raiha

[COLOR=royalblue][i]She couldn't take it anymore. Iris snapped, her eyes blazed red, and she leapt upwards, coming down on Bill's shoulders....her knees digging into his neck.[/i] Iris: YAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! Rex: OH GOD! Chole: Wow. [i]She hauled Bill off the floor and started pummelin him, one two, one two......then she left off and pulled him to his feet by his collar, ripping off several buttons in the process. She snarled into his face.[/i] Iris: Bribery Eh? I'll give you bribery! Chole: Woah. *THONK!* Iris: *cough* Bill has left the building. Rex: ......ee....[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Peregrine looked at Viper slowly, her eyes narrowing, then opening wide. She drew her scabbard on her belt and turned to the door. But before she did, she walked over to the small table next to her bed. She opened a small laquered box and drew out a pair of silver hoop earings and a pair of light blue gems.[/i] Viper: They're beautiful. Peri: *puts them on* They were my Najeh's. I knew my Taitai would leave them here for me.......so I would always remember. [i]She shut the box carefully, as if she was closing a part of herself. Then she pointed her boots towards the door.[/i][/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]Mayor: Now who are these other women? Moe: This is Sarah, my companion...and this is- Sabir: Sabirsing Sevenstar, Ambassador from Far Northlands. Mayor: Welcome. Sabir/Sarah: Thank you. Sil: *woof* Sabir: *gestures* Silvric the Wolf. Mayor: Um... Sabir: He says hello. Moe: So anyways...[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Valeigh leaned over from the top of the eaves.....she had been watching Rico's every move silently, waiting for him to say the words. As soon as his lips moved, Valeigh dropped down from her position, landing on her feet in front of him.[/i] Rico: ! Valeigh: You're welcome. Rico: .....have you been watching me this whole time? Valeigh: Yes. Rico: Why? Valeigh: ..... [i]She stepped closer to him, then drew her fingers across his face gently, then ran into the house, face flushing red.[/i][/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]A harsh cry tore itself loose from Rena's throat and she charged across the grass, then knelt and picked up a bleached out human skull. It's features were very small, as small as a childs. Rena cried over the last testimony of the genocide and Iris flew over. She placed her long fingered hands on Rena's shoulders and let her cry.[/i] Chole: What is it? Iris: ......children were killed here too. Siren: Just as I thought. Pi: That's disgusting. Rena: They never had a chance! Just like the kids in the city.... Iris: .....Never again.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=seagreen][i]Sabirsing focused her remaining energy inward, then let it explode into the air as Craig reapeared.....the two flew back about twenty feet, then surged forward, meeting halfway.....the sound echoed through the arena....Forty bulls charging around a stadium wouldn't of made as much noise. Filled with a concentrated fury, Sabirsing sparred with Craig, exchanging every punch and kick with one of her own......Several minutes later, Sabirsing fell to earth like a stone. Hitting the ground with an agonizing crack, she looked upwards at the sky and Craig.....[/i] "Had enough? Or should they start counting?" [Craig said this.] "I'm up." [i]Pushing herself off the ground with one arm, Sabirsing flipped forward, landing on the balls of her feet. She cracked her neck slowly, then raised an arm over her head and with the other, grasped it at the elbow.[/i] "You who cross between Earth and Sky, meet the place of transparency....Kadove, TOUMAN!" [i]A blast of ice flew from the sky and slashed through the air like a fallen sattelite. It hit Craig dead on, freezing him solidly in midair. He hovered for two seconds, then hit the ground, the frozen water melting into the ground......he stood up, shivering....Sabirsing smiled. The time that had taken had given her the time to regenerate.[/i] "You're terrible at sparring." "You're terrible at magic." [Craig said this.] "Fair enough."[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Valeigh cried out as the blade cut across her exposed collarbone, laying it open completely. Almost blinded with pain, Valeigh switched sword hands and went on the offensive, bulling into Seth like a towtruck......knocking him to the ground. She hauled him back up to a sitting position and slammed her fist into his chest. Then she turned on Dark, eyes blazing a brilliant shade of purple....[/i] Valeigh: .......Time to meet your maker... Dark: Yeah right. Valeigh: ......just wait. [i]Moving like a cat, Valeigh side stepped and vaulted forward, using her good hand to do a double front flip....she landed next to Dark and kneed him in the side, knocking him into the wall along with Seth.[/i][/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Hellcat flicked the side of her headpeice experimentally then talked into it in an annoying stage voice.[/i] Graie: Hello Hello, testing One Two Three. Kain: SHUT UP! Graie: F*ck you. Liam: What now? Graie: Have you seen your sis? Liam: No, why? Graie: She hasn't shown up yet, Kitty and I are getting bored.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Valeigh stepped out after Rico and tapped his shoulder. He turned and looked at her. She held out a slab of meat that could've easily passed for a very large steak.[/i] Rico: Thankx. Valeigh: Sure. I owe you. Still. Rico: *shrug* [i]He took the meat and Valeigh left.[/i][/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]I watched you grow, To be so bold, To wear your faith, Have it shine through your face. I see you as lovely, That none can compare. I see you as dancing, Although you cannot stand. And you have shown me how to know Him, And to trust Him, You, you gave me a fire, Want to feel life, And embrace life, And give life as though it were not your own. And there's nobody else, Who has shown me myself. And I see you as dancing, Although you cannot stand. I hear you,you're singing, Your passion, I'm feeling. It makes me and breaks me, I long to sing like you.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Valeigh tensed then swung a wide arc, hitting Seth across the chest...He fell back, his wound bleeding slightly. She smiled brightly at him and went on the offensive, bringing their sword hilts together....crossing and turning with the steps....[/i] Dark: Woo....what happened? [i]Valeigh gritted her teeth then punched forward with her left, knocking Seth into the cave wall....Stars exploded in his vision and the next thing he saw was Valeigh pressed up against him, her sword at her side and daggar cutting slightly across his throat.[/i] Valeigh: Give in? Seth: Ugmmmm... [i]A cruel smile glinting in her eyes, Valeigh dug her nails in....[/i][/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Valeigh touched her blade to the antelope and cut out a slice. Testing it with her teeth, she tore off a bite, chewed reflectively, then swallowed.[/i] Athen: Well? Valeigh: .....not bad. Syder: .....dig in. [i]They fell to the meat without ceremony, while Eps watched them venemously......Valeigh stepped back after several minutes, and wiped her mouth with the back of her hand......then she sheathed her blade and turned on Eps.......[/i] Valeigh: Why do you not eat? Eps: Don't want to. Valeigh: The chance won't come again soon. Eps: .......so what. Valeigh: *shrug* Go ahead and starve then.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]Well, the way I learned it is different. :p And the way my dictionary tells it, is different also. But still, I'll do it the WRONG way. ~~~~~~~~[/COLOR] [COLOR=seagreen][b]Unyielding fatigue[/b], Is taking a hold on me, Plauges my soul to death.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]When the evening comes, And moon rises, You can hear my cry, Beating through the trees. What it may do, Will kill the night, This is the time, This is the moment. You've waited for such a long, lonley time, Don't let it go, Don't miss the exit, Because another day may be too late.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]Unyielding is Six![/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]It doesn't matter if you're there or not. Six posts won't get your attention if you're asleep! Geez. That's the most pathetic excuse I've heard in a long time.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]It doesn't matter if you're there or not. Six posts won't get your attention if you're asleep! Geez. That's the most pathetic excuse I've heard in a long time.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Valeigh glared at Siren, her eyes freezing over......Siren took the hint and stepped back. Without another word, Valeigh's wings shot from her back with a swift brush of wind, knocking back lunar dust and rocks. She flexed them experimentally then rose into the air.[/i] Zylik: Let's ride. Shocks: YES! [i]Leaping into the air, Shocks did a full backward summersault and shot upright, coming next to Valeigh. Zylik and Siren glanced at eachother and the two rose into the sky to meet the girls. Turning to face the Earth, Valeigh narrowed her eyes, then let her aura flame into life around her.[/i][/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]Alright then........I look forward to the next part of this narration. However, are you planing on taking suggestions for further character names?[/COLOR]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Crazy White Boy [/i] [B] Um, no it doesn't. It has five syllables. :p [/B][/QUOTE][COLOR=royalblue]No, [b]fatiuge[/b] has two stress points. I checked in the dictionary. Fa-tigue.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]Welcome to my dominion. *giggle* Just kidding, I only keep order in this forum. And your story is not all that bad. Just work a bit on paragraphs, spacing, spelling, you know. And also: You've captured the true spirit of Vegeta. Congratulations. :D[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue][i]Valeigh flashed a brilliant grin, then tightened her grip on the sword.....several snakelike vines twisted out of the handle and wrapped themselves around her right hand....a slight humming noise emmenated from the blade itself and Valeigh breathed deeply then attacked. Moving in a swift pincer movement, she came up to Seth and caught his blade with hers.....the two struggled for control, then Valeigh shouted a harsh cry and they broke apart.....[/i] Dark: Woah. Valeigh: ........Heheh. Seth: What's so funny? Valeigh: ....you. [i]Mouthing the words, "You're so young," Valeigh stepped to the side and twisted her blade over her head, adopting her original battle posture.......or what we should really call a [b]taunt.[/b][/i][/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]Personally: The names sound like they came just out of Lord of the Rings. But that's alright. Your spacing and grammar are so-so, and you could use a few paragraphs now and then. But otherwise, I'm interested as to what happens next.[/COLOR] :demon:

[COLOR=royalblue]Unyielding fatigue doesn't count. It has six syllables. Change it please.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=royalblue]Okay..............broken neck. ALRIGHT!! NOW IT'S GETTING GOOD![/COLOR]