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Perhaps if you give a little more info on what the main plot is supposed to be? Sorry but without info the only other thing I can think of is revenge plot.

You could say that there is a great treasure/mint on the planet that the bandit wants to find/rob. When in doubt, use clichés.

Name: William ConDoin Race: human Age: 29 Gender: Male Appearance: Will is not a large man standing barley 5?6 and appearing as if he hasn?t eaten in a week (which may be true). He has green eyes and brown hair. He wears a dark brown tunic and pants over which he wears a hardened leather breastplate. Over all of this he wears a cloak of varies shades of grey and brown to blend into the land. His arms and torso are covered in battle scars. Bio: Will was born in the camp of a group of guerillas hiding from the demons. He spent his entire life fighting, hiding, and trying to survive. Due to the incredibly high turnover of the group Will learned to forge friendships and earn trust quickly. Will hates the demons with a passion and wouldn?t trust one as far as he could throw it. Despite his hatred his main concerns are rescuing human slaves and getting them back to the small community. It?s not a safe life by any measure, they are hunted, hungry, and lose more people then they gain, but they die free and Will figures that that, at least, is something. Weapons. A blessed Rapier and a sling. Spells: Heal. By placing his hands on another humans wounds he can heal them in minutes.

Sorry it took so long to get this up. Hope this thing gets off the ground because the last one was great. Name: Zuulan Gender: Male Age: 39 Species: Gran +1 Stealth, +1 People-Skills, -1 Health Class: Fighter pilot/ mole Team: Rebel Disadvantages: overconfident, stim reliant Advantages: none Homeworld: Corusont(sp?) Bio: Zuulan joined the imperial army when he was younger and became an accomplished fighter pilot. Several years ago when he was stationed on the Star Destroyer ?The Marauder? one of the mechanics converted him to the rebel cause. He is currently stationed on Redmeg IV and will attempt to meet the rebel strike team and guide them to the factory. Equipment: A custom ecchani pistol and his access card to the base Skills that need points: Ranged Combat: 3 Melee: 0 Stealth: 1+1 total 2 Grace: 3 Health: 3 -1 total. 2 Strength of Body: 2 Strength of Mind: 4 Piloting: 10 People-Skills: 2+1 total 3

Snapping out of his fright at seeing the Dragon and his shock at Tarpel?s display of power Jayne switched the rifle to his left hand and pulled Vera off his back and braced it under his right arm, after all accuracy didn?t really matter against something that [i]big[/i], and charged out of the building. ?Quick, spread out so it can?t get all of us at once!? He opened fire and as saw the bullets and energy bolts he fired struck the beast harmlessly the others attacked as well, not noticing in the heat of battle that Jayne was ?spreading out? in the direction of the academy to find a ship and get himself out of there. (OOC. Ain?t he a stinker?)

Jayne brought Vera up to his shoulder and set his sights on the nearest sith. He fired off a quick pair of shots as he charged, the Dark Jedi?s lightsaber flared up to block the blows. But Vera was not a blaster, but rather a more archaic projectile gun and when the energy beam touched the first bullet instead of reflecting it the bullet was reduced to molten lead that struck the Sith?s face a moment before the second shot tore through his shoulder. Jayne reached the Sith seconds later and laid him low with the but of his rifle. Seeing Kelko?s situation with the Rancor, Jayne switched to his blaster rifle to save ammo and shouted to Tarpal and Doblar ?Hairball! Frog! Finish off these jedi, I?m going to help Kelko with that Rancor!? With that he ran up behind the Rancor and shot at it?s back. The blasts didn?t do much to the massive beast but it did turn it?s attention from Kelko to Jayne who then took off towards the bunker that Rylon had pointed out as fast as he could. (OOC. What is this? I leave for a while and no one posts. I hope this defibulator(sp?) post works.)

(No fighting on holy ground!!!!!) I?ll sign up later and edit this. No time now though.

Jayne regained his conciseness and looked around. ?Tara? Where?d ya go?? He saw no sign of anyone nearby and when he reached for his comlink found that it was missing. He headed back to the others. When he arrived at the building they were hiding in Kelko came out and began hitting him with questions. ?Jayne! Where were you? Why didn?t you answer the comlink? Where?s Tara?? I went out with the jedi to scout ahead. When we were walking I head something behind us, so I turned around and saw this weird cloaked guy wave his hands t me and I went flying into a rock. That?s the last thing I remember. When I woke up my comlink was gone but since I?m still alive and they didn?t touch my guns I?m guessing they didn?t think much a me.? Jayne gave a small grin. ?I?ll show them. No one gets the drop on me twice!?

Jayne saw the jedi wandering off on her own and hurried after her. ?Hold it right there lady. Ain?t nobody wandering off on there own, specially not no dam jedi with an antique weapon.? Jayne gestured towards the light saber in Tara?s hand, ignoring the fact that his gun was even older. ?I?m coming with you.?

?Gladly boss. Hear that Ya hairball? Try that again and there won?t nothin? left of your head.? The Wookie growled back at him in a ?bring it on? sort of manner that Jayne pretended not to notice. (OOC. Sorry this is short don?t know what else to put.)

(OOC .which character was that directed to?)

Jayne thought about this for a minute. ?Ha! Dark side my #$@. I don?t believe in the force buddy. Wouldn?t surprise me if them jedi were cyborgs or genetic tests er somethin?. Honestly I trust you least, but if I needed to I?d shot everyone here without batin an eye. So I guess yer answer?s yes.? After finishing what he had to say Jayne dropped back a bit until he was near Kelko. ?Kelko, I didn?t tell you sooner cause of that ruckus back there but I heard something real unsettlin? back on that hill. ?The dark jedi know we?re here. They found the ship an? that?s why they sent that oversized bug out here. What should we do??

Jayne stared at the arrow stuck in the ackley?s head for a moment before turning a away as he started to reload his gun, muttering under his breath? Stupid force usein? frog thing. Next thing he?ll be asking what a rancor is.?

(OOC. Yes I can?t argue with you there. They canned it just when the characters interactions where really fleshing out.) Jayne saw Rylon?s plasma bolt streak by him and incinerate one of the beast?s front legs. The beast stumbled a bit and gave Jayne the time he needed to get to the bottom of the hill before it recovered. Taking a cue from his ally the mercenary hefted Vera and fired a half dozen rounds at the creatures remaining front leg. The first shots cracked the exoskeleton and the rest went clear through the leg causing the Ackley to collapse under the weight, vainly up with it?s remaining limbs and letting out an enraged shriek. Jayne turned to Ortega and said ?that was a pretty good plan, blowing the things legs off and all.?

Jayne pressed down the button on his comlink ? I ran into a little snag here Kel. Better tell everybody to get their weapons, this might attract some attention.? Before Kelko could respond Jayne dropped to one knee and took aim at the Ackley, witch had seen him and was now in a full run, and fired off three rounds at the thing, it reared up and the bullets struck it?s underbelly, cracking the plate but mostly just getting the thing mad. ? Ohh shit!? Jayne cursed as he got up and started running back to the others, firing behind him as he went but the Ackley was weaving back and forth now so most of the shots went wild. Edit(OOC. sorry phattmasterdj I was writing when you posted and didn't see what you said until afterwards.)