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[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]She had watched the man disappear into the shadows...But could not see nor feel his presence anywhere near now. [i]How...How could I have lost track of him?[/i] she thought: [i]If the Empress should happen to know...[/i] She stopped. Jumping down on the build's fire escape railing, she stood and began to walking the way she thought he had gone. Calmly as she went she took down her web of string lad traps. However going further and watching the shadows. There was something irregular about them. They moved not as the should went light hit them. Stopping; she heard her name said lowly. [i]Zenjia...[/i]; it then drifted away in an eerie silence, but soon returned again. "Irie?" she asked to the shadows. There was a faint, hunting, shrill like laugh in the darkness. Zenjia pulled the string around her figures tighter. Not noticing how it cut her fingers. "This isn't very funny." The shadows began to take shape. "Your not very fun." "Who are these others, here?" she looked at the blood dripping from her hand, "I've not seen them before." Irie smiled slightly, she replied; "Their some of Nicoleta's assassin." "So then, the Empress has returned..." Zenjia trailed off and looked upwards. "You've been out longer then I." "I would have came back on my own." Ghost stepped forwards, "We're heading to the 'Paine's Museum'. And were to look out for you." "I see." Irie motioned forwards, and all of them went together further down the dark alleys. Heading on their way. But as they went further questions began to pop into her head; [i] Should I go report back to Nicoleta? The RGSD memebers are doing new things to extermenate blood thirsty vampires. This can't be the saftest thing can it...[/i] Zenjia stopped. The others went on a few steps but stopped too and looked back at her. A shiver ran threw her, she grew hesitent about her choice in words, "We'll be caught..." But the others couldn't hear her. And started again, Zenjia ran to catch up to them. [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1][b][u][i]SIGN - UP[/b][/u][/i] [b]Name:[/b] Kenmei Z. Lei [b]Age:[/b] 13 [b]Gender:[/b] Female [b]Crest:[/b] [URL=http://onlinedigimon.com/images/love.gif]Love[/URL] [b]Crest Weapon:[/b] Pair Love Boh [i] - A basic wooden boh that has been extended one inch further. It has three different other improvements; on the center hand peace that has her crest symbol that rings around the whole radius and leaves to a gem in side. Which allows for a better grip. On top end it simply lined with two mental pieces sustained with to metal clasps. Helping to focus concentration. On the opposite end, there is a chain that wields up to the holding area. This is there solely for safety measurements.[/i] [b]Attacks:[/b] [u] Love's Sorrow[/u] [i] - During a critical point in a battle, the chains around her boh that twist to her hands unravel. Allowing the boh to strike...Then hit for a second blow with the freelance chain. The chain will rap it's self around the target and try to cut off the movement for a few seconds.[/i] [u]Binding Winds[/u] [i] - Using the air currents around her, and the love from within her. She manipulates the two to merge within the center of the boh. Concentrated; Kenmei spins the boh releasing the power as a strong wind force that causes a horde of small insertions cutting lightly into the enemy.[/i] [u]Healing Breeze.[/u] [i] - A fairly simply, combination. Using her own health, Kenmei spins her boh gentle. Causing a light breeze. As it's spun a light enchanting whistling sound coming forth. If the breeze should touch anything that is hurt, it heals them. If it should hit something "evil" it will be reflected at her in small shards of glass.[/i] [b]Appearance:[/b] Standing at exactly 5 feet, and weighing 86 lbs. She has a frail build, and a pale completion. But light pink cheeks. Kenmei has short, limp, black hair, that she has a white streak the falls to the side and rounds her bangs. Her hair is held back by a thin, pink, spiraling, head band. The rest of her hair falls back behind her, rigidly, coming three inches above her shoulders. Dull mellow green eyes, that have a vivid pink creeping in from the out black border line. She wears a black vest, that has a pink flower in the right hand breast pocket. Underneath the vest she wears a long sleeve white shirt. At the end of the sleeves, the cufflinks are usually buttoned together by a golden heart pendent. On her lower half she wears a sleek black belt. The buckle is black and cannot be seen. She wears a black skirt that ruffles near the end. White stockings, and black ankle boots that have a small frail chain rounding the heel and hooks back on with a heart leaver. On her right hand, and only her right, she wears a, black, glove, that has chainable chain locks that makes a connector to her boh. [b]Personality:[/b] Generally quite, and always with a light smile on her face. Smart and intelligent, but she has a problem with having to talk to many people at once and shies away at the chance to voice her opinions. After a while and the discussion moves on; Kenmei usually regrets this action. Yet she never choose to change this in the future. Because she knows that everything will probably turn out right. Have a bit of a problem with self esteem, which she's been trying to fix. Still, going away from all of this; she tries to make the right choices and do what's better for the others. [b]Bio:[/b] Original born in China she lived there until she was 12. Living in a family with 2 brothers, 1 sister, and both her parents...It wasn't the easiest because the economy was doing badly. But her father and mother were both offered a job in Japan. The jobs paying very highly; much highly then for others and China and high for those in Japan. They took the job and moved there. Thus she's lived in Japan for one year, and has somehow managed to skip a grade. Still making everyone in her classes older, she doesn't reveal her age. Not too social, but has made a few friends and cares for them deeply. She's also on a track team and team Y.A. Martial Artist, for international reasons. Since the move; she's enjoyed her life much more. But her eyes always seem sad and tell a different story. [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=slategray][SIZE=1]very cool, I play iRO also. *will be pming you* Anyway, very nice banner. High quality, and looks great with the cut out job and saving it as a GIF. Banner: iRO Monk I really like the bg. It's very fitting for the class of Monk in iRO. You've done a great job matching her up to the contrast of the blue, white, and black background. I also like your cut out. It's very neatly done, giving it a completed look. I like the fact that you were able to keep the spirits animation. And still manage to have it looking like it is when your at the RO site or during playing type. Good job with text placement because of the fact that it's closer to the artist drawn image of the Monk. I like how the text isn't completely smooth when it hits the white-inline sides. It helps more to make it stand out. However there is only one thing I find odd. There isn't a complete border. On the right hand side of the spirited monk the black line border is missing. Looking like it was cropped off. But this is actually the only thing I don't like about it. Other then this, I find it simply perfect. Great job.[/COLOR][/SIZE]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]She looked up to the sky, it was black and faded to gray in certain places. She smelled the air as the snow fell down. Playing with the string within her hands, looped within the "Chained Hang," she put it over her eyes. This she found helped her in the cold to smell. Ashes, humans, and one smell familiar. The scent of one RGSD member in particular. Although she knew not who he was, before she had walked past him on the street. Removing the string Zenjia stared at the ashes on the ground. She had awhile to spare until she would have to go back to Empress. Therefore, what better to do then this? She sat ah top a buildings roof, every so often getting the snow out of her hair. Looking down upon what had drawn her, the RGSD and the current event of his mission. The main missionary was leaving. Quickly tying the string back to her belt, Zenjia jumped down to the ground. Landing on her feet palms to the ground she started off. Fallowing behind the RGSD member always a few feet behind. Going down two streets, they came to a cross. The light turned red and the man looked behind him and smirked. He turned his attention forwards again, the sign turned green and the man walked across. [i]"Did he...Did he know I was here?"[/i] she whispered to her self. Running quickly across she disappeared into an alley. Taking out her string she climbed up a fire escape and to the roof of another building. Currently three building away, she began getting closer dwindling the string. While at the same time, getting any tangels out. Ready to play a little game. But he stopped; like he was waiting. Zenjia ran to four more buildings ahead further down that turned inwards spliting off to four different alleys. Swiftly she ran setting a stringed trap in three of the alley ways. [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]As always, very nice work Conna. The ones I like most are banners; 1, 3, 5, and 8. But I'll get to the reasons why soon. But simply about all of them, I like their borders. Even the no-bordered number 6. All high quality and good. Err...Oo Happy reading. --------------------------- [b]Banner:[/b] 01 You've done a good job with the grid effect, and having it coincide with the type of "shadow button" border. Something that isn't really easy to pull off as along the lines of "will it go well with the color scheme, and the over all feeling." The shades of blue go well with the character's expression, and the way the girl is angled inwards/downwards. You've also done a good job with text placing. The shade of black for the lettering helps bring out the pigments of gray in the shadowing border. [b]Banner:[/b] 02 The imaging goes well with the border. (I have no comment on the border since it was used in the above banner) The positioning is done well because of the fact that you've done a good job with the merged colored letting. I like the color of the bg, it kind of reminds me of a blinding light that she's trying to get away from. The font is good. But I dislike how the "A" is farther from the rest. It might just be the fonts it's self...I don't know which font that is... [b]Banner:[/b] 03 Personally, I think this banner has a wonderfully done border. Since it seems to me that the black and yellow seems to overlap and switch at some point. The font is absolutely perfect. It goes along with the eyes of the wolf and the howling image. Heh, I really love the fact of the howling wolf is in there. ^.~ [b]Banner:[/b] 04 A nice job on using the area round area. I like the blind effect and that it's not too strong or weak to contrast with image of the banner. Since the blind effect/fliter is there, it helps the banner to look more organized with the three line border. The area around the text is just fine, since it helps to define the text. I think it was a neat effect. But the area around the "G," "H," and "T" seems to be a little more pixelated then the rest of the lettering. [b]Banner:[/b] 05 First of all, I love the fact that this banner is "short" in terms of length. Having it go "longer" wouldn't have allowed it to give off the same feel. That being said, I like the angle of the character/image. It's a beautiful CGed one, and the expression just adds on to the banner size. A good judgment for the length. A good one lined border and the vertical lining going down on the right hand side is good. [b]Banner:[/b] 06 Not much to say about this one. I like the image because it goes well with the font. It could use a border line on Ed's and Ein's end. But no where else. [b]Banner:[/b] 07 Very pretty image you found there. The BG is beautiful and makes the banner look more elegant. I like the white lines going in back of the neko. And how the black border is about 2 pixels closer to the inside. Rather then laying it on the edge. But the font is iffy. Since it's the shade of white on a light blue area...It just looks a bit odd to me on where the light hits on some of the curves. [b]Banner:[/b] 08 My favorite out of all of these. The a liniment of the image goes great with the quote. So do the colors. I like how it's in a blue hue and a bit of grayscale at certain points in the banner. I really like the border and how it's like a clear inner line between the two. The font goes great over all. And the text shadow, drop down makes it remind me sort of like glass.[/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Out of three banners, this is the one I like move. Let me know if you'd like any changes, or to see one of the other banners. PS - Sorry this one isn't animated. The file was to large to be uploaded.[/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Shinji...Learn to be nice. Raizio; I'll try, but I'm not very good with animations. So it might take me awhile. Also could you pick a song and tell me what lyrics/verse you'd like to have on the banner? (I don't normally listen to LP, nor do I know their song lyrics.)[/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Sam pushed threw the crowd to see what was going on. He saw the banged up car, and...Kelsei's Mustang? The crash must have been the sound he had heard just a bit ago. Sam made his way to the front faster. Coming near he could see the back side of Ally and Kelsei. "Hey!" he yelled from the crowd. "It's Sam!" Ally turned to see Sam make his way out. "Are you all right?" He hugged Ally, "Your not hurt are you?" Releasing her, his sister nodded her head. "I'm fine." "What about you, Kelsei?" Kelsei, "We're fine, but the girl isn't..." Kelsei tilted her head forwards to the girl being examined. Sam took a step forward, and kneeled. Taking a closer look at the girl, he could only see less then half her face clearly. Since her head was being slightly angled away from him, and what he could see was covered in blood. [i]How...Why?[/i] Sam, quietly, whispered to him-self. "Will she be all right?" "....We'll need more itme to know for sure, we'll let you know." For a few seconds he stared at the girl, and for a slight second; he swore that he saw one of her eye lids flicker. [i]No...Just my imagination...[/i] He stood back up and walked back. He stood along the two girls side. Silent. [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1][b]Name:[/b] Sammuel - "Sam" [b]Age:[/b] 17 [b]Appearance:[/b] [URL=http://www.psycko-manga.com/gallery/guy/3-5.htm]Click[/URL] [b]Personality:[/b] Intelligent, and smart...But not always using his intelligence to his best. Sam is highly protective of his little sister Ally, and would like to see nothing more then her happy. He knows a lot about his little sis and tries to do the right things trying to be somewhat of a remodel for the band. He does this, because, he, him-self expects this. Cares greatly about his friends, and tries to make sure everything is right. Although at sometimes that isn't possible...He still tries his best. Generally quite and self-completive. He's not one to be too temperamental, he goes with the flow. Sam can worry about the others a bit too much at times. [b]Bio:[/b] Currently living with both his parents and little sister, Ally. As long as he can remember, he's been trying to protect his little sister. But all while still allowing her to be her self, let her make her own mistakes and decisions about the way she wants to live her life. His best friend, Matt, has also become like a brother to Sam. The two can usually be seen corresponding along each other. And both happen to know about Ally's feelings to Matt. So, although Matt is like a brother, Sam tries to avoid the matter a bit. Since they both work in the same band, Sam really doesn't want anyone to be hurt by the love triangle and rumors. Sam has a great deal of feelings for Ally's best friend, Kelsei. He's been struck down so many times while trying to convince her to go out with him. But, he still tries. [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Very nicely done for a first attempt, Rei_Man. I particularly like it. Rei is a good character and one often used and known at that. I like the color scheme, and I think the quote/text goes nicely to suit her personality. You've done a good job getting done the merge effect. However, there are two things, I think, that can be fixed. You should really change the way the text is done. If you have white hit the end of text that turns white at the end. It's a bad idea, as said before the color of the text. White + shade of white = No visibility The second thing is, a border. Banners will forever look better with a border. Avatars, too. It keeps them looking neatly done and helps them more to please the eye. No fancy border need either simple a black line. Once again, very good job. I look forwards to seeing more of your graphic work in the future. [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]I tried, although I'm pretty sure I lasped on the; "I would like this banner to be the greatest and most awesome I've ever seen." [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1][b][u]The Sign Ups[/u][/b] [b]Name:[/b] Zenjia R. TechAmoray [b]Age:[/b] 361, looks 25 [b]Side:[/b] The Blood Brood [b]Gender:[/b] Female [b]Species:[/b] Vampire [b]Race:[/b] Other/Jamaican/Mandarin Chinese [b]Description:[/b] Standing at exactly five feet, and weights 110 lbs. She has a light browned skin that almost seems gray depending on the lighting in the room of which she's in. Giving her a ghastly like appearance. Zenjia has dull brown eyes. However her right eye has tints of vivid green creeping in from the outer edges in, often times making them both looking like glass. One is indeed a glass eye, the other is real. But it contrast to her short black hair and her neatly cut bangs; that falls closely to the top rim of her eyes. Her hair is straight, but there are to cut off selection that are bond in bright green "x's. These both hand in front of her ears and curl. Cause them to acent her face." She has a slender, light, figure. Generally wears something that is often misjudged for something similar to a black suit. A long sleeve, thin line turtle neck, black shirt. It comes 2 inches below her waist line, it gets thinner in dimension near the end. To give it an effect, like it's part of the pants, or looks like a black suit. Zenjia wears a black figureless glove on her right hand; so that the scar underneath is never exposed. One her lower half she wears tight black pants, that gets looser near the cut off. Some look like bell bottoms, but are just really end cut offs. Around her waist she wears a belt, with loops holding her weapons. [b]Personality:[/b] Although she is part of the Blood Brood, she is somewhat different. Fairly naive, she can be considered more intelligent then them, because she is better at choosing her battles. Zenjia chooses to think them through a bit...But usually fallows the stronger vampires around. This caused by some fears of the ones with more strength then her. Since she's more intelligent then some of the rest she specializes in long range fighting. Also a bit more caring; but for her, there is no one to care about. Every now and then...She'll cover for one of the other Blood Broods when their wounded or dead. And still...No signs of feelings ever come across. She'll kill whom ever may get into her way. Often seen as childish, because she plays Cat's Cradle with her string, and mocks the people in towns, cities, etc. for fun. When in truth she's doing this to get to know the area. But over the years, she's learn she's terrible at close range battles or enclosed in small areas. [b]Weapons:[/b] Generally, Zenjia uses a Tail Whip, grenades and string. [i]Tail Whip -[/i] Exceptional Whip made of a animal tails, and snake skin. The handle is twisted leather strap, at the tip of the end of the threaded skins it weaves in and curls for grip. [i]Grenade and String -[/i] Used as an extension of the whip. When in far range she'll rap the whip around and toss, so as though not to be hit by the after effect. Or she'll use string to try to ensnare stupidity prey. She also just sets up webs of it around the cities to watch people trip and fall. [b]Place of Birth:[/b] Tibet, China [b]Biography:[/b] Born in Tibet China, religion does hold something to her...But not very much, the monks had all been on the other side so it had never directly interfered with her life for some time. Her father was Jamaican and another ethnicity she knows not of, but her mother was of Chinese decent. Reasoning for living in China. Her family never moved, but lived farther off then most people. Taking into consideration that the people of Tibet generally didn't want the family near. They all had seemed so desolate to Zenjia, never being able to interact with others really didn't help either. Since she wasn't allowed to interact she was home school for nearly 10 years, then took studying onto her own. More time passed, she noted that every one was gone that she once had seen gone by. Her family didn't seem to age a day. But 2 more years went by, and when she was 15, a group of monks had came and took her parents away. The monks had wanted to kill her too, but took pity on her. They knew not that she was a vampire as her parents were, since she had no traces, and smelled not of sin. After that day, she knew she was a vampire and knew that she could never be near any humans. It'd be too difficult for her to be near them, knowing the lust for human blood would emerge fair quickly in her then it might in other vampires. Soon 20 years went by, Zenjia came to the realization that she could no longer stay. Going out side she lined the outside with oil, walking away she set it a flame. Not being able to watch her disgrace, passing as a human. She left the only place that give her any of that sickening place. Eventually, she mad her way through the world and resided in an small house in England. But during the night she watched and watched as more "terrorist" attacks seemed to happen. After a few times of watching this, she took notes and moderated what had been going on. All signs leading to more vampires, all attack humans. For this she felt...Happy. Watching all of this made her feel joy, something she had not felt in over 100 years. Soon she left the place she resided in, and burned it to the ground trying to get ride of the human lies that riddled her head. She no longer cared for anyone, not for human, she couldn't relate to them. Other vampires, no not them either, she had lied and turned her back on many of them...All that were in favor of humans anyway. She joined the Blood brood, purely for joy. [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Edit: Thanks for explaining it to me, Rhym. I had been wondering about some of that stuff. By the way AI is another commonly used name for Cyborg and or Robots. Or anything else that is not bio-genic. ----- [b][i]----Sign Up----[/i][/b] [b]Name:[/b] Lei Yazu [b]Sex:[/b] Female [b]Age:[/b] [i]N/A[/i] (looks; 20) [b]Race:[/b] Cyborg [b]Hair:[/b] Platinum Blond [b]Eyes[/b]: Slate Gray [b]Skin:[/b] Light Brown [b]Build:[/b] Medium [b]Clothing:[/b] Standing 5'2", weighing 110 lbs. Her light brown skin contrasts with her white hooded jacket, which stretches down to the black of her heels. It has no sleeves so that it may help lower body heat and the clash of the heat from the desert. On the ending hood front, the corner sleeve-less, and the flowing trail end of the jacket, it's embroiled in a golden cloth then enters a red embroiling. The hood ends together two inches below her neck with a golden loop crossed in chains lining from the front all the way around 2 times. Making a hanging cross in the back. The waste-area is enchained also. Underneath, Lei wears a skin tight black short sleeve shirt. However, it has a taller collar then usually seen, almost like a turtle neck. The top of it if lined in white and comes down the front in a cross ending mid-breast line. She wears black pants, that end three inches below the knee caps. Foot wear consists of black boots, that are lined with steel on the out-side. But it only covers part of the front legging and the heel in the back, the rest is black. Increases force for kicking. Other: Only her right hand is bond by the Kaiser, her left hand she has chains looped around and trailing. At the end of the chain is a silver pendent in the shape of a 8 eight pointed star. [b]Weapon of Choice:[/b] Fist, Kaiser Knuckle - Claw Blessed By Zephyrus, it covers the back of the hand. Consisting of long leather straps with the Kaiser Knuckle covers most parts of arm, ends two inches below the shoulder blade. It's, an pure, pasty shade of white, the spikes are colored in silver. [b]Vehicle:[/b] Glider - Color: Red, Speed: Excellent, Maneuverability: Poor, Armor: Poor. [b]Vehicular Weaponry:[/b] (will need help on this) [b]Bio:[/b] Growing up in a more; officiated and methodical, type of home. Lei grew up around other Cyborgs and a few Robots, her guardians were usually preoccupied. Thus she was able to grow up wondering around the town during the day with no notification of approval from the adults or "elders" in her life. This of coarse made her fairly happy, she was able to go and bug the locals and government officials. After some time though...Lei had gotten tired of wasting her time in such away. She began wondering farther and farther from home, until one day she was lost in the desert. Lei isn't able to remember what happened between the blank memory loss but she never saw home age, she had somehow ended up in another town, with another family. They weren't a [i]real[/i] family though, they were actually just three Vigilantes, who were close enough to think of each other as family. Lei was lucky enough that they'd let her become part of their family too. She was six then, after a few years she left them. Lei had become a Vigilante, too, and was sure they'd meet up some day again. Currently, she rooms around hunting others. All the money she makes, she uses for her self and if she doesn't need it at the moment she'll find someone in need to give it to. Except, she tires to steer clear of many Robots or Robotica. Over the years Lei developed a fear of them, but will have contact with them when necessary. Even considering all of this; she's still as light hearted as a child. [b]Political Alignment:[/b] Vigilante [b]Reputation:[/b] Known for being very intellectual, and smart, Lei is most known for her strategies in battle. And the way she acts out of them. Reason being, her tactics are surly, and uniquely based for a within a short amount of time. They are [i]usually[/i] fairly good, but most of the time they have some fatal errors and she may mess up a lot, not knowingly. Usually serious in battle. Out of battle, however, she acts serious but not so as when in battle. When she's around those who cares for her, and she cares for them she'll try and cheer them up. To strangers she's actually quite nice to them too. [b]----Reputation II[/b] [b]Anti-Mechanoid League:[/b] Slightly Distrusted [b]Domo Faction:[/b] Disliked [b]Robotica:[/b] Mutual Distrust [b]Mutants For a Better Life:[/b] Distrusted [b]Prospectors/Merchants:[/b] Distursted [b]Righteous Lightning:[/b] Despised [/COLOR][/SIZE]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Nope, it's only 17.3 k and it's dimisions are 150x80. Format JPG. Try saving it to your own computer, and reupload it. It should work then.[/SIZE][/COLOR]

[SIZE=1][COLOR=SlateGray]Glade you like it, Mage15. And here is the avatar you requested. Once again, if you'd like anything changed. Just notifiy me.[/COLOR][/SIZE]

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[SIZE=1][COLOR=SlateGray]Very cool work, Transtic Nerve. Although, I've never personally seen the series, yet, I like the style in which it was drawn in and hear that the plot is pretty good. The banner has a beautiful background, because the shade really fits into the over all look of the banner. I like the way in which you had a larger image and faded into the bg. Considering the shades of green, and pin point type of light...The simi-glowing effect worked out around the two. You were able to keep the word ".Hack" still, nicely, coming through. The fact that the Kite and Black Rose aren't directly in front of the light is good. Also, a nice touch on how you made it so that the two weren't so [i]vividly[/i] colored but are toned down a bit.[/COLOR][/SIZE]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]*cough* Mag15 is correct*cough**cough* The reason you two might be confused is because, [spoiler] the creature known as "Skeith" is appears in the game; .Hack//Infection. Then as the rest of you know Maha from the series; .hack//sign. Also known as the phase "Mia"[/spoiler] Yeah, >>....Anyway, I tried, but both characters run fairly low on image media on the net. I hope you like it, though. If you'd like any changes or and avatar let me know. [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Their was a bright red and white out fit. Picking it up, Lei examined it. Satisfied, she tucked the flower in her hair leaning off to her ear. Walking behind a large thick bunch of curtains, Lei changed into a white and bright red sweater, skirt, and shoes. She tugged at the edges of her skirt making sure it fitted right. She turned and to her delight their was a small bit of mirror straight to the side from the opening of the curtain. She brushed her hair back a bit; since it got a little fiddled while changing but the flower had stayed perfectly in place...But it was dfferen't now. The out-fit fitted her better then the one she had just changed from. Lei's eyes were now green and her hair seemed tinted red. Shaking her head; she surgged it off and began to fold her close. Adjusting the strings to the hood she walked out into the main part of the room where it hit and breached off behind curtains. She walked over to the entrance and took a seat. Lei took the flower from her hair, staring it she found no damage had came to it while changing. The petals still their bright blue, the center still a deep black incrusted with vivid yellow, and the steam and two leaves still as green and health as ever. Happily she looked up and waited for the others to come. She began to think: [i]Once...They all are done, I'll have to remember to thank them all for being so nice to me.[/i][/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Zoma stopped running, and watched the shadow as it disappeared. She stopped, simply because the singing stopped. The only thing left now was mummers. And those we're slowly fading away from what she was capable of hearing. Zoma begun to walk through the alleys till she saw a ladder leading to the top of the roof. Once again she went out; just like before she flew off in the direction of the cathedreal. Over head she saw a girl eating and drinking some cappechino on the steps of the cathedral. She was staring up wards, Zoma dodged back and forth trying to avoid her view so as not to startle the girl. Studying the girl, without being noticed by her...Was certainly not an easy thing to do. Especially if the sun decided to suddenly move and cast her shadow. The girl finished eating, and after rearanging the plate and cleaning up a bit; Zoma decided it time to make her self apparent. Slowly she came down farther and farther into the girl's view. [i]Maybe..She'll play with me, where's my scythe now?[/i] Zoma though to her self. The girl looked over in Zoma's direction; she blinked a few times uncertain... Zoma smiled and waved as she began to fly down towards the girl. "And what if your name; may I ask?" Zoma said, still a few inches above the ground. The girl stared blankly, "...Devi." "Nice to meet you Devi! I'm Zoma, " she stepped to the ground, "Wanna play a game?" [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Lei walked down the street, she then cut off and went down a breaching road. The surrounding a more scenic route lined by trees on both sides. Although she had never taken this route before; she knew where it should lead to. After a few minutes of walking she came to a dead end, she had seen the sign a further back. But...She had believe someone had made a mistake...Couldn't they? Looking up at the clear blue sky, Lei took a seat and on the dirt road and stared at the trees ahead. Trying to look deeper in it got darker at certain points but very bright at the end of her view. [i]If I walk a bit more...this way would probably take me home...[/i] she thought nodding to reassure her self. Standing up she took a look behind her, hoping, she turned. Walking she began to sing with a skip in her step, Lei walked deeper into the forest. But the deeper she got, the farther she got she became sleepy. Stopping, Lei stared down at the ground. The grass was green and flowers were becoming fuller, merging into a meadow of blue shaded flowers. "A rest wouldn't hurt, would it?" she asked her self. Taking a seat she dropped back on the ground and stared up as she out stretched her hands. Clutching a baby blue flower in her hand she fell asleep. ***Time passed bye... Awakening, she saw the same thing she had as when she had fell asleep. The sky still blue; she could still feel the flower's stem clutched within her hand. But now...She heard the call of, gentle, moving water. Sitting up, she shook her hair. Getting ride of anything that might have gotten tangled within. Standing she looked down at the flower in her hand; it was a "Forget me not." Smiling she began to walk towards the sound of the flowing water. After a few minutes she emerged out of some dark green bushes. She found more then she had been looking for. One the other side of the stream was a group of people; mainly girls and one who she thought to be a male. She wasn't totally sure though, reaching her empty hand up she called over. She then called out; "Hello!" [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Glade you like it, and here's the other avatar. The reason I didn't post this one is because it's from the video game: NGE: Girl-Friend of Steel And don't know if you've ever played the game before. Within the game explains why she dressed as a maid in the screen cap I used for the avatar.[/SIZE][/COLOR]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Alright, here's my try then. I have another avi if you don't like this one. Just let me know if you'd like to see it, or would like any changes to the banner or avatar. I tryed to have the banner match your name a bit.[/SIZE][/COLOR]

[SIZE=1][COLOR=SlateGray]Very nice poem, callmegoddess04. I like the style that you've written it in. Also, the feeling it gives off through out the poem; from start to end. I think you've done a great job on both of the two's personalities, and that the girl...Really does want to be apart of the boy's life. But there is a bit of a flaw in your grammar in the line; But if thats true then why Won't you talk to me? You could have added a bit more effect of wanting with the girl saying why at then end of the sentence and then at the begging of the question. Plus "thats" should actually be "that's" For the compound word of "that is."...But both flow very nicely within your poem. [/COLOR][/SIZE]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]I'll make it, but I have a few questions first. Since your not very specific in your request... Would you like a certain character? (Asuka, Rei 1,2,3, Shinji, Gendo, Kenji, etc?) Do you have a preference for colors?[/SIZE][/COLOR]