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O.O.C.: Hey Jubei Yagyou, here's a place you could come into the story if you'd like. _________ Zoma looked down as the women was on her knees now. The women had started to pray for her child as soon as Kovu had left. Zoma hated to even hear one prayer, ever, even if it was right before death. It was just incessant rambling to her. As the women prayed Zoma's eyes grew to a brighter red, till they were almost glowing. "Shut up!" Zoma yelled at her. The women stop, and looked up at her. As she stared up, she saw Zoma's face. But before she could see anything else, a red haze came over the women's eyes. She then felt a sharp pain going through her. Then the women saw nothing more and her pain was gone. Zoma held her sai.s pointing up to the sky. She stared at them, the blood of the women streamed down the blade. Dropping silently to the ground. Zoma then heard foots steps behind her, she turned to see who it was. Kovu had returned, yet there were still foot steps in the far.

Aubrey had changed into her beast form. In this her senses became higher then they had been. The vampires with their guns, and blades attacked the beasts. As some came with their sword two of the beast dropped out of sight and came up behind the vampires from behind. While the other two had came from the front dodging the bullets. And got in for a strike, as two came from behind attacking. The two were able to leave a slight wound on the vampires. Yet it wasn't deep enough to kill them, or having them stop fighting. As this was the vampires took their blades and swiped at the two beast. Only one vampire making contact, Aubrey made a distraction so the other could get away. Then took her leave to have a different attack. The other two attacking from the front forwards had the bullets to worry about. More bullets shot and more swinging of swords along with them. Which just enraged the beast. Aubrey then went into the attack from the side on one of the vampires. While the others took on different ones. This one had a gun, meaning she'd have to be more careful in this fight them she might have. The gun-slinging vampire stood taking and shooting while, Aubrey dodged from side to side. then coming in closer enough to attack. she took the attack and struck the slightly off the top of his right arm. And then back ready to come into another attack.

Zoma stared at the women's child, "1...2...3..." Zoma contuied to count, but as she did she went slowly. So as to give the women a chance to re gain her self and say yes. Kovu looked on, Zoma had been nearing the number of ten. Kovu drew out her weapon and pointed it the mother's head. She had just said the number 7, tears started streaming down the women's face. As she was about to say 9, the women came to her senses, and her baby started crying. "Please! I beg of you, both, please!" the women yelled out, "If you must, kill me, but let my child live on not as a deamon but a human! Please!" "So your willing to let your child live on at the coast at your own life, then?" asked Zoma. "Yes, just spare my child!""Since you've spoken then," Zoma said, with a smile, "This is not my choice to make." Kovu walked closer with her weapon,"If you both do not become deamons you die, even so..." said Kovu, "Your willing to die if your child may live on as a human. That is of a different story" Zoma took two steps forwards and took out her sai's. "It's the same as a coin," Kovu stated, "One side is always life, the other side is always death. There is no in between, you understand that don't you?" The women nodded her head. Zoma then spoke, "And which one would you prefer?"

Having come darkness, because of the lies. And all else one had done to you. Like they planted things in your head, and took them and turn them around. So that the one who was hurt gets lost in pain, and the only thing they can do is laugh at the person's death. The thought is good. And get's out clearly, that the person some what tricked the other. Then just having the fun of wtaching them die. I like it.

The story seems to have hidden messeges, like morals. Yet at the same time keeping them convealed and hidden away well. the pain that comes out from the story and the feel of it is great. Getting to feel such a sense of pain from the author is always good. As in what your doing here, the reader gets to feel the same sense as the authors feeling. having the phycietrist coming in to view was a great idea. You've done a great job on having explained his kindness. And how other people just use him, only to discard him. And him still keeping that kindness, like he can't hate. It's great.

Sign Up Sheet ___________ Name: Wisteria Age: 27 Race: Full Saiya-Jin Character Replacing: Radditz Signature Technique: Rage of Gingetsu History: Will edit later. Appearance: Short black hair (like Videl's), brown eyes, is 5'2", weighs 119 lb, has a red scouter covering left eye, and Saiyan armor Personality: Quite, cold, and aloof. Wisteria ignores what most say, unless it has to do remotely with some sort of battling or the task at hand. Although she may seem cold and heartless, she'll fight for her what or who she believes in. Cares only for her team mates, and won't abandon them. Powerlevel: 1200

Oo yes, a voodoo curse...I see. Anyways...I like the avi.s. In the first one I like how you have Tuskasa faning down, and then having it fade in the middle near the bottom. On the second one I like how the light gose across, and then the text comes in at the bottom. The text is kinda hard to read at frist, but then after looking at it long enough I was able to read what it had said. Other then that their both great. 10/10 9/10

As DBD had said Clamp, Tokyo Pop. A few others are NDP, Comic House and Meng Chuan Qi. Or you may want to see what you can find under Comic Japan. Comic Japan is a search for finding publishers, but theres a down side. It won't help if you can't read Chinese.

Name: Aubrey Age: 361 (looks 21) Height/Weight: 5'4"/119 Breed: werebeast Answers: 1. d 2. a 3. b Decription: Human; Short black hair, long shaggy bangs, pale skin, brown eyes, slender, weres a dark green army uniform, had a hat that tilts to the right side, hat has four gold squres, two patchs on the right side shoulder, black boots, and black gloves, Werebeast; Has sharp green eyes, fur lining down her shoulders, disappers as it nears her hands, tail, dog ears, other then that keeps her normal look. Bio: Aubrey is a Felion werebeast. In this she has better senses then some, she's loyal to the leader she's following and would die from them. But with the better senses comes a lack of view. Which may often cause problems when scanning an area. Yet for the fact Aubrey is in high regards in fighting. Having a high intelligence level, Aubrey is often out to gather more information. So that tactics and info may be planed out on pin point for a better out come on the battle. Class: A Felion or cat like werebeat. Has super speed and acrobatic ability. And is very intelligent as well.

Estall regained her balence. Coming in this she charged at Sou Roc Hoi. He swung his sticks trying to hit Estall but she dodged them and did an up-wards x-strik. But before she was able to strike he swayed her off by quickly ducking. Coming up wards stabbing her with one of the sticks from underneth. Sou Roc Hoi then threw her up and swung the stick. Forcing Estall to come crashing to the ground, Sou Roc Hoi then started walking towards her. So Estall rolled off to the side and got up. As she did she went near the edge of the ring. "Planing to forefit, then?" he asked her. Estall shook her head, "Of course not." Once he was close enough to swing and make a hit with his sticks. Estall docked down and went behind him. As he turned Estall grabbed hold of the stick in his right hand. Knowing that he'd not let go, she used all her might to turn him. Doing this as she swiftly turned, she had her left leg swip at his knees. Causing Sou Roc Hoi to fall forwards. But as he fell she got hold of the other stick and used his own weight to her atvantage. In this she used her body like a point and flong him forwards. Sou Roc Hoi slamed into the ground with a large thump. Not moving nor having the will to get up, he lie there. The announcer came up and that Estall had won. She then started to leave the ring when she noticed that Shai had left. Estall walked over to Micheal, and asked, "Where'd Shai go?"

Heh, even so pratice makes perfect. Or as nearly as perfect as one can get. It just takes time is all. When I had first started making banners they were nothing compared to yours. It's all of a matter of time. If you rush through it you may not like the end result. But then is you take your time I'm pretty sure you'll like what you come out with. A matter of trying your best. P.S. The DBZ banner is pretty good. I like the text but in some places it comes alittle blurry, but it can't really be seen. So yeah, good job.

That's a good one, black_Snake. I like how the two faces are to the side, and another one in the middle while being in back. Sorta hangs there like a b/g, yet still foucesd on. Having the black strips in the back makes it look really good also. (to me anyways) All your other one are really good too, your doing great for a beginner.

Sou Roc Hoi held his two long sticks, smiling. But it was his smile, it was like he was laughing at her from the inside. Estall started to think about what could make him have a smile like that. Getting lost in her thought she never noticed him rasing his large sticks. Sou Roc Hoi took this time and struck her down, which brought Estall back. As he rased them to strike her again she rolled off to the side. But as she did she swiftly moved her right leg. Making Sou Roc Hoi go off balance, as she got up she went into a fighting stance. By this time Sou Roc Hoi had regained what he had lost, and swiped at her. Estall dodged one but the other came landing a hit on her left arm. When he with drew it had left a bruise on her arm. Sou Roc Hoi tried to hit again but Estall dodged. She went in for an upper strike. Landing an upper cut in his stomach with much of her power, he shifted back wards. Yet he was still smiling, this just made her puzzled. "May I ask why your smiling?" asked Estall, ready to attack. Sou's grin grew wider, "What a stupid question!" With this he then banged his sticks and came charging. He swung his sticks trying to his Estall, but she ducked out to the side. And attacked his with a right hand jab. Forcing more power then she had done before. He backed up holding his arms across his stomach. Estall then came attacking in with a drop kick, just barely making it did a high block using one of the sticks. He then forced it upwards and forced her to stumble back wards.

O.O.C: Ok, people now remember here. the character Matt no longer is with Siaga, stop putting him as so. Siaga is on her own! Sorry bout that Lrb. _____________ Siaga stared at Mia, she smirked. Siaga turned and started to walk off a different way. As soon as Siaga had gotten out of Mia's view, she cocked her head to the side. A clow card was out on the loose just waiting to be tamed. Yet she felt that it wasn't as strong. [i] I don't need a new clow[/i] :Siaga thought to her self: [i] but it'll be fun to see what those others can do.[/i] She then started running, towards where she had sensed the clow. She soon was able to see others near by. They hadn't seen her yet, and Siaga planned that they not. She hid behind a tree and scanned the area. There were most of the girls all but Mai, and Yoshimi. But Siaga sensed that Yoshimi was on her way. But that posed no threat because she'd be coming from the northern way. That was the only way she could come to where Nisha and friends. There was a boy sitting up in the tree, she choose to not make her self apparent to him either. So she leaned against a nearby tree. Unseen by the rest. She'd now get to find out the true powers of the other card captors.

Sign-up Name: BlackArachnia [IMG]http://www.transfandom.com/sos/bw/media/images/profiles/s1/barach.gif[/IMG] Allegiance: Predacon Function: Saboteur Alternate Form: Black Widow Spider Armament: Leg guns, cyber-venom Biography: This femme fatale is a combination of beauty, brains, and cyber-venom. As a strategist she is a cunning and lethal adversary. As a warrior she seldom sees defeat without inflicting great damage upon her enemies. She is loyal only to herself and the group that serves to benefit her personal interests the most. Though she holds Predacon ideals in high regards, BlackArachnia does not especially see Megatron or any other Predacon as a suitable leader.

Um....Throwing stars...in the game it's totally midevil, arrows, staffs/rods, swords, lances, fist, magic, etc. Just to let you know. *screams out long live Lloyd and Lavitz* Ahem... _______ Name: Zoma Age: (unknown) Weapon: Divine Rod, Dragon B. shards Dragoon: Dark Dragoon aka Black Monster Appearance: Short black hair, with two silver streaks, long shaggy bangs, orange eyes, wings colors vary from black to white tips, black cloak, black boots, black pants, black long sleeve like top, vest with silver flamed edging, black gloves, and collar with dragoon pendent (as you can see I love Lloyd) Bio: Zoma is the wingliy who was chosen to become the next Black Monster. So far since she was told of everything, and forced to believe she is truly the original Black Monster. Zoma dreams of nothing but to hear the scream of the moon child as she dies. She aims to make this dream come true, and to rid the world of what might bring about another Super Virage or have someone stripped of their life. Only to have their body used as a pawn like Zieg Feld had once been. In this she's been chasing around any traces of the moon child. Sadly this moon child has no twin, which has made her harder to track down. So Zoma teamed up with others who would help her destroy the moon child.

O.O.C: Sorry it's taken so long to post. I had gotten lost a few times. Estell leaned back against a wall, watching the match. The upper hand jumped around between the two. Which just made it an even better match. Here she was watching two good fighters in the same ring. Surly the one with the greater skill would come out the winner she thought. She closed her eyes quickly and tried to make out in her mind which would be the victor in the end. But soon found her self lost with no answer. So Estell just continued to watch the match. Around the some of the other fighters and people who were allowed to watch the fight. They were betting on who would be the winner of the match. Yet the other watched and stayed focused on the fight, and nothing else. They all watched with a glance in their eyes. Their view shifting back and forth between Michael and Tito. Scanning the area Estell saw nothing else. But suddenly to of the corner of her eye, she saw a shadow like figure. It had seemed like Lou, but the figure disappeared all too quickly. It might have been some one else, thinking it was useless she went back to the match. And still it seemed like the fighters were equal. But Tito looked as if he was starting to loose his energy.

She removed the right sai from the fractured skull of a human that she had inserted it into. The body then fell to the ground. Another one dead, getting rid of the fools that had opposed the force of hell made Zoma feel a small glance of happiness. She then went over to the other body of the one before, and took the left hand sai from the body. She then walked over to where the others were. Zoma watched as Kovu laughed, she then walked over. She stared at Kovu then at the child's dead body. A smirk over came her face, she shook her head. "First come first serve," Kovu replied, "If your not fast enough, then it's your own fault." "Heh, that's true," she said, as she rolled the body with her foot. "This place is in ashes, there's nothing left to kill." said Zoma, looking up, "Shall we leave for a new place to destroy?"

Did any one see that word? He said [u]feel weak[/u]. Not that it makes him weak. Although from what people have been saying I'm not good at heart. Since I haven't cried for over 3 years. Although since you have been proven the chain reaction if love was gone. And has been stated all that'd one be lost if all humans lost the emotion of love. It just makes me want to erase the human emotion love even more.

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by ShadO MagE [/i] [B]I might write more later. If any one even bothers to read this.[/B][/QUOTE] You should have known that I'd read. Anyways...very descriptive and in-depth. You've captured the real human emotion in this, it's almost as if it had happened before. Having it hard to stop reading. In the way they interact with one another is true to what humans do. Like it was based off actual people around you. The fact that the man telling him in the dream to die, that'd it be painless, so simple, yet not telling him what would happen if he really was to die. The what would happen to all those people who care about him, like the character Whitley. Back in the place he left. Would probably be in a dream like his. It seems to be such a Tragic story, although it hasn't even gotten to the end. Like only sorrow is to come, yet at the same time because of the sorrow/pain and pace. It will make some want to keep reading on. It's really beginning to be a great story to me, if you do happen to post more I'll be reading.

That's ironically cool, if such a thing. It seems like Noah isn't very use to walking or not being able to use magic. Lisa being able to sing very well, and hotel dude not beleaveing her is great. It even got to build up some character in him, that he could often time when seen come off rude. Having a spell that could make them older could have some pro.'s and con.'s. Yet it could come in handy to get out of a few things. I like it, Odera sounds like such a cool place to vist.

Edit: Ok, how's this then? _______ Siaga slowly picked her self up, as she did she started to laugh at Evean's attack. "Come now you can do better then, that can't you?" she asked smiling. Siaga stopped laughing, and glared at Nisha and her cousin, Yoshimi. Siaga walked away from Mia, and closer to Evean. A smirk then came over her face. [i]This should prove to be.[/i] She thought to her self. Siaga stared at Evean, she then gripped her hands into a fist. Reeling them up into the air in a fighting stance, she did a right leg crescent kick knocking Evean. Causing him to slid back. Siaga then came charging at him with a left hand jab.

I'll be a good guy, or I can always change my sign up and side ----Sign Up---- Name: Estell Laylind Age: 26 Height/Weight:5'4/96 Description: Short black hair, bangs off to the side, brown eyes, pale skin, skinny, wears a silver ring, black pants, white long sleeve shirt, and black ankle boots Race: Korean Bio: Estell was born in Korea, there she lived with her father. A short time after giving birth to Estell her mother died, the reason being that she quickly grew frail after Estell's birth. When Estell was a kid, her father was out most of the time. In this he signed her up in classes for martial arts, so that'd she have something to do when he was away. She had first learned te, Estell spent five years learning this. She then later on she studied taijutsu, and finally found someone willing to teach her taekyon. Which she continues to study even now trying to perfect her form. But when in the time she was able to spend with her father he taught her taijutsu and how to love martial arts. At age 16 he was the one who first introduced her to M16, while she was with him on a work trip. So she tried until she believed that she was strong enough to join the team they had told her that they'd be forming later in the future time. That time has now come, and she's been gathering as much info as she can about Fire Island. Martial Art(s) : Te, taekyon, taijutsu Weapon: tonfa Attitude: Quite, void, and smart. Estell always thinks of what to do first, and thinks of what the out come maybe. Which may cause her to hesitate in battle. Is good at gathering information.

Hey, Tsukasa hack...I thought you were gonna let this thing die or something. And I'll change side to hell so that it's more equal in teams. Also the rest of my bio/sign up so it fits in.

Yep, go ahead. By the way thanks for asking, most likely if you wanna use one. Just ask and I'll say yes, if some one else isn't using it. *stares at kid Calintz* The kid calintz kinda looks off though now that I look at it. If anyone wants that one I can always fix it.