Zeos

I've began writing a fiction novel anime thingy.. Called Satuskiyami.. If you would be so kind as to read what I have so far, and give me comments or ideas or whatever about it.. I would appreciate it. I have around three chapters so far.. Here's a link to it. EDIT: New link It's my first go at it, so it may be a bit crappy.[URL=http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1435343]http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1435343[/URL]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Conna_da_fox [/i] [B][SIZE=1][COLOR=darkblue]Oh man Zeos, I didn't know you were so good at poetry. I love both of them, I think the first is my favorite. But the second one was just as touching. Keep them coming, I think I'm hooked. ^_^[/COLOR][/SIZE] [/B][/QUOTE] [size=1]That's sweet Conna, thank you.[/size]

[size=1]I have had similar thoughts as well Gentle.. My thoughts are: "What if human beings have something inside of them, locked up, waiting to be released? And what if someone discovered how to tap in to this "Something" inside of them? What would be the result of it?" ... This "Something" could be psychic abilities, increased strength, a inner Demon or: "Monster", there are so many possibilities.. I believe some people know how to tap into this Something inside of them.. It's all very fascinating, to think of all the possibilities..[/size]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by CharmedImmortal [/i] [B][size=1]Both of them are so awesome! Especially the last one, ooo, very touching. It makes me cry. Write more please. ^_^[/size] [/B][/QUOTE] [size=1]Thank you, it feel's good to hear positive comments on my poetry.. I'll be writing more soon.. [/size]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by MeNaCe [/i] [B]sometimes when im tired i close my eyes and i can see joey wheeler's face,i dont know why,its really weird,then about fter 2 seconds it goes,when i close tem again the face is bac [/B][/QUOTE] [Size=1]..That's just scary.. As for your question Inuluvr1, yes, sometimes I do see things that arn't there.. Most of the time, it's because I'm tired, and need rest. But sometimes, I'll see things out of the corner of my eye, but that's just normal.. But, if you are seeing things at your grandmothers house, and it?s happening continuously, you may have the same problem as your brother, that you mentioned.. Maybe you should see a doctor about it, I know I would.. Well, I do somewhat believe in ?Ghosts? .. But I wont go into that subject right now..[/Size]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Dagger IX1 [/i] [B]I'm a girl. :P But other than that, Mitch is absolutely right. It's true that your parents make the rules as long as you live under their roof. However, some parents tend to go a little overboard. And though their intentions are good, their actions may end up having more negative effects than positive ones. All I'm saying is that it's a bit ridiculous to use parental controls on older teenagers. Generally, the kids will be more technologically intelligent than their parents, and will probably figure out how to disable the software. Plus, although the parents may simply be attempting to protect their children, it's pretty naive to think that they can still moniter their lives as closely, once the children have reached a certain level of independence. ~Dagger~ [/B][/QUOTE] [Size=1]Forgive me, I didn't know.. But you are absolutely right, but parents, will be parents.[/SIZE]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Hakira [/i] Um, Zeos? Is this some sort of a dating service? I'M SINGLE! Hehe...But I donno if I'm looking or not. Hehe.... [/QUOTE] [SIZE=1]Well, no. This isn't.. I just want to know more about everyone here, so I feel more at home.. It's very interesting, finding out more about all of you, I can't wait to learn more about everyone else..[/SIZE]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Mitch [/i] [B][size=1] He's old enough to drive, as am I. How is this being "protective"? I think I have enough sense, I mean this October 12th (Sunday) I am 17. Whatever.[/size] [/B][/QUOTE] [SIZE=1]Oh, I had no idea he was that old.. Your parents must be over protective.. Well, the only OTHER thing I can think of is this: Your parents make the rules as long as you live under there roof. That's what my father says anyways..[/SIZE]

[SIZE=1]Congratulations on your achievements. ..Though, I really don't have anything to gloat about.. I hardly ever gloat anyways..[/size]

[SIZE=1]If you don't mind, I would love to learn about everyone here. What I mean is, tell me about your self. Here's some stuff about me.. First Name: Zack Age: Fourteen Hair Color: Bleached Blonde. (Natural color is black) Eye Color: Brownish Green Height: Around 5'7 Wardrobe: I wear alot of black tee-shirts and jeans, and dark sunglasses.. Personality: Very mysterious, and most of the time, quiet. Hair Style: Spiked Hair Favorite Music Type: Rock, Metal, and some classical stuff. Favorite musical Band/Artist: East West(Hard Rock) Demon Hunter(Heavy Metal) And Enya(New Age/Classical) Hobbies: Making RPGs on the computer, writing poetry, drawing, playing some video games, and shooting. (Marksmanship) [/size]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Dagger IX1 [/i] [B]I was just curious.... have anyone else's parents installed a parental control program on your computer? Alternatively, if you have AOL or another browser that enables parental controls, do your parents actually use them? My dad recently installed a program called "Net Nanny," which is intended to restrict which sites I go to (I believe it blocks those with excessive amounts of bad or sex-related language), and how long I spend online. It's a mild nuisance, since half of the sites it blocks are perfectly okay. I've never been interested in online #### or gambling or whatever, so I don't really see why parental controls are necessary. They're irritating, because it makes it seem as though my parents just don't trust me. Of course.... my dad didn't exactly get much bang for his buck, considering that if I want to shut Net Nanny down, I can just go to Windows Task Manager and click "end process." So it's really not a very big inconvenience. What do you think of parental controls? ~Dagger~ [/B][/QUOTE] [SIZE=1]Your parents are just being protective of there child.. Like most parents are.. No, I don't have parental controls on the Internet.. But, my father does check what kind of Web Sites I visit. It doesn't bother me at all, really.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=1]These are some new poems of mine.. There supposed to go together.. (I havn't written anything in awhile, so I'm a bit rusty..) ------------------------------------------------------------------ [b]And Now I See The End[/b] [i]I close my eyes.. Darkness is coming.. I regret many things.. My soul is cloaked in sorrow.. My mind begins to recall.. Everything that has happened in the past.. Painful memories overtake the good ones.. I find myself wishing I had never lived at all.. But then.. I think of you.. The one who brought me through.. All the hard times.. Times I thought I wouldn?t be able to live through.. For that moment.. I?m happy.. But now.. I see the end.. The end is near.. My final breath is here.. And with it.. I say.. ....Thank you....[/i] [b]She Cries[/b] [i]A tear falls from the woman's eye.. Her love is gone.. He was consumed in darkness.. And only at death did he see the light.. What can she do.. Without the love of her life..? How can she go on.. Without his love..? Thoughts run through her mind.. Thoughts of killing her self.. Maybe she could see her love again.. Somewhere.. No.. She can?t.. She has to go on.. She has to continue.. Where her love left off.. She turns around, and walks away.. She knows, she will see her love again someday.. ..She Cries..[/i] ------------------------------------------------------------------ Yes, I know they arn't that good.. I just felt like I should write again..[/SIZE]

Those poems, are very good.. You must be proud of them.

[SIZE=1]Hmm.. Well, I say this all the time for some reason: [I]"Where's your shoes, newb?"[/I] I don't know why..[/SIZE]

[SIZE=1]No.. I've never had a deadly desease before.. I havn't even had the chicken pox yet.. But.. Conna, your story has enlightened me.. It makes me happy, to be alive. Perhaps some day, I will catch a deadly desease.. If I do, I'll still have hope.. There is always some reason to keep living, to keep going on with life.. There is always a reason, even if it cannot be seen, it's there, somewhere, waiting to be discovered..[/SIZE]