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  1. [CENTER][SIZE=1]Amazing. Utterly amazing. I must say that I don't like how the background was done, though. It doesn't match the scetch, really. I will edit momentarily, I have to do something...[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  2. [CENTER][SIZE=1]Nice. Shippo-chan is awesome anyway, but this banner really seems to have worked with his unique personallity. No text. Meh, I have the same problem with most of my banners, so I won't comment. I'm just judgemental, not a hypocrit ~_^ (By the way, if this banner was a touch smaller and Shippo was scooted over to the left, it may look fine without much text at all.) The background looks purposely kinda grainy, and that's not really a bad thing. The stock is super nice and had great quality, but there is one problem with it. Look arond the hair, do you see it? It wasn't smoothed out right somehow. It looks like you kinda just went around his hair with the little circular eraser brush. Nice banner overall. I'd give you a [B]7.5/10[/B][/SIZE][/CENTER]
  3. [center][size]This will be short and sweet since my internet is acting up and I therefore don't want to be kicked offline before I've had my chance to post. [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v150/unmei_shinpai/catcffile.png[/img] (****, photobucket resized it again! This is just a load of crap if you ask me...) Horrible, I know. Not much I can do about that, it was thrown together very quickly on my little brother's comp. Hope I don't get kicked out, but it would be better than having to disqualify myself! (This is the worst thus far, at least. I will probably lose this round anyhow, but if I'm going down, I'm going down kicking and screaming! Hell yeah!!)[/size][/center]
  4. [CENTER][SIZE=1]Love the font you used. Just had to say that. Anywho, since this piece was obviously made for more of a reason than just 'Check this out' I'm not gonna critique the good/bad artwise stuff (It's really all good, anyway ~_^) Well, I have no idea what it's supposed to mean but here's my shot. (I'm a bit dull, so forgive me ^_^) The Grim Reaper is standing staring at a shooting star with the words 'Did I dream it?' underneath him. Now, if you keep in mind your Jerry the Loon animation, this is probably a crazy guy who thought he was the Grim Reaper. He wakes up and somehow realizes he isn't and thinks it's a dream, lol. Seriously though, from the pose he's in it makes him look... Like he's wondering about something. Like, 'What's that doing there?' or 'What the heck!?' So from that, I'd say it signifies 'Death' (The Grim Reaper) waking up from a fantasy about something a bit brighter. Alright, that's my shot. I really have no clue lol.[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  5. [CENTER][SIZE=1][B]Kitty-[/B] Wow, this has to be one of your best pieces. I love the logo and the background. (Not to be a broken record, but) Like Retri said, it is a bit over-done on the right side. The black just contrasts too much with the light gray. It looks fine in the top right, but it isn't as thick with black strokes up there. Maybe if it was blended a bit better... Also, you might have wanted to go with a plain 2-dimentional looking font(s) for the 'Music, Take a Listen' text. The 3-d-ish look doesn't fit the theme at all. But the lyrics were a nice touch. [B]Sean-[/B] I like the colors. A lot. Again, I'm being a broken record, but it really does look grainy. Something else I would suggest is making the piece more banner-like (Cropping out the large areas of black and white) to focus on the colors and music notes. The font is pretty plain, but it matches, so I can't complain. There really is no focus, though. It is hard to make an image where the font is the focus. You did it pretty well ^_^ However, my vote must go for [B]Kitty[/B], merely because I think it flows better. Kitty, you are a genious. *Notices both Sean and Kitty are tied =)*[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  6. [CENTER][SIZE=1]I watched the Rainforest. I have to hand it to you, that was the best. Both funny AND meaningless! Jerry the loon happens to fit that description, as well... Lol. This made me laugh so hard, I watched it five times before I could stop. WWWOOOOOOOOOO *BEEP*[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  7. [CENTER][SIZE=1]I use PSP, too! (I have 7. I just got 8 recently, but haven't used it out of attatchment to 7...) Imi, I just love all of your work. You are getting better and better and I do hope you keep it up ^_^ The mini banner things are probably my favorites out of everything you've done.(I really like Xion and Retri) I have nothing bad to say about any of these banners because they absolutely rock. Please fogive me- Wow, I love how you did the blood on that. Absolutely amazing. I would suggest maybe having just a solid red on the Please Forgive Me font and a more clear one on the other. That is the only critique I have on these (The black bg is a teensy bit bland, but it works with the image not against it ~_^) Keep it up![/SIZE][/CENTER]
  8. [CENTER][SIZE=1]Hello all. I'm afraid I'm having technical difficulties with my laptop. It won't let me get online and it won't let me do much of anything. I attempted to fix the problem, but ended up deleting my virus protection and I am afraid to get on the internet with it out of fear of losing all my graphix and all the stuff I have done in wordpad over the months. Until I find my virus protection software or get the chance to go out and buy more disks to transfer my poster onto this computer, I am afraid I will have to withdraw from the competition. If I find it, it will be by tonight. Consider me officially dropped out by tomorrow if I haven't edited this post. Yet again, I am sorry. This makes me quite sad T.T But you can bet on me participating next year!!![/SIZE][/CENTER]
  9. [quote name='Jim_Hawking][font=Tahoma']My current/first job is in Fast Food. (CURSE YOU, DAVE THOMAS!!!) I've been there over two years, and have only gotten one government mandated raise. Yep, I still make minimum wage. On top of that, seeing as how I've been there longer than a good 85% of non-management crew, you'd think I'd at least have a full schedule right? WRONG! I get fewer hours than the ********ng n00bs that were hired a week ago! My last paycheck was $150. [/font][/quote] [CENTER][SIZE=1]*Huggs* Me too! I've been asking for a full schedule for... Since I got the job! My boss just doesn't get it. I know I can't work full time during the school year, but you'd think I'd work more than I am. My last check was $170. It wouldn't be that bad, but he's hiring MORE POEPLE TOMORROW!!! I just don't understand it.[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  10. [CENTER][SIZE=1]My favorite candy bar would have to be those S'Mores bars. The marshmellow layer is kinda funky, but I love the 'golden grahm' layer... I wonder how they make that. It has the slightest hint of a brown sugar/honey taste to it. Next would be any kind of chocolate. I actually like dark chocolates the best because they are so rich. Not too sweet ~_^ The only candy I like that isn't chocolate or some kind of chocolate bar would have to be Jolly Ranchers. If you've ever had one, you know what I mean.[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  11. [CENTER][SIZE=1]Noone has any problem with new members. Occasionally, people poke fun at 'nOObs'. Mostly they are at those who obviously haven't even glanced at the rules and post things that are offensive or have absolutely no meaning. Those are the only 'newbies' that members of OB seem to have a problem with. I have not been a member very long comparitively. *Thinks back* Well... I've been a member for almost 8 months now I guess ^_^ I had no problems when I was new (I didn't post much back then. Just mainly in the RPGs I was in) By the time I took full advantage of being a member of OB, my title was already 'Member'. I hope you see why people don't have much tolerance for the people who blatently disreguard the rules and see that noone has any problem with you. Everyone is friendly here on OB. You'll see once you've been around the block a time or two ~_^[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  12. [CENTER][SIZE=1]No problem! That was really fun. I did it all from scratch with no tutorial or anything. I might use it for something else ^^ I'll have it up tomorrow if that's all right? (Do you want the main color scheme to be pink or red or what?) I didn't realize you just wanted an image. I think I was thrown by the word 'set' thrown in there. ~_^ edit- Here's one. Like I said, I'll have the one I was working on up by tomorrow but I found those pics while browsing through google and I couldn't resist throwing one together real quick. It's pink again... [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v150/unmei_shinpai/abstractimage2.jpg[/img] I know this one sucks, but do tell me if I'm on the right track.[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  13. [CENTER][SIZE=1]Lucky number three. [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v150/unmei_shinpai/theromancer1.png[/img] (Photobucket resized it somewhat, so it isn't that great.)[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  14. [CENTER][SIZE=1]I think it was mostly anime, way back. I remember sitting down with my little brother to watch Card Captors and Dragon Ball and Sailor Moon way back when. One thing that really shaped us growing up though, was the Simpsons. We never missed an episode. My bro and I pretty much do the same thing now. I'll pop up some popcorn and he'll get out the icecream and we'll have a little sibling-hang-out-day and sit in the basement in our night-clothes watching the seasons over and over again, laughing. Simpsons are pretty much the only things we connect on anymore, sadly. *sigh* I also still watch 'Kiddie shows'. I find television a great way to settle down any little kid that I may be babysitting after a few hours of running and playing. It helps them go to sleep. A good thing for me![/SIZE][/CENTER]
  15. [CENTER][SIZE=1][I]Yoda[/I]- Wierd Al. Lol!!! I just pulled out my folks' old record player and I've been listening to John Denver, Micheal Jackson, Def Lepard and Wierd Al since lunch. The little kids I was babysitting really got a kick outta that (They just left.) Wait... *30 second pause to turn off the player and open Media Player* Now I'm listening to [I]Harder to Breathe[/I]- Maroon 5 -- My current favorite song.[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  16. [CENTER][SIZE=1]I apologize, but I basically skimmed through most of the posts. After four or five, I just couldn't stand people bashing Christians anymore. You may call THEM sick (And they most certainly are!!!) but none of you have any right to put down my religion. This is most certainly a cult and should be investigated and shut down. [quote name='shinji172's brother']Christianity is the evil, not homosexuality!!!! [/quote] *Shakes head at the utter ignorance in that quote*[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  17. [CENTER][SIZE=1]I make all in Paint Shop Pro 7 (Though I've used 8 and temporarily had 6) I'll try to see what's wrong with the images...[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  18. [CENTER][SIZE=1]Yay! More art! City nights- This one is basically the same as Looking Glass, since you [I]did[/I] use the same effect ~_^ I do like this one. Not quite as much appealing as looking glass, but a nice piece. Since that effect makes everything so... Well, liquidy, it may be a good idea to either go light/colorful or dark/muted, since light/muted would look bad and dark/colorful (What yours is) doesn't flow as nicely as the first one. (looking glass) Yet again, may just be personal preferance. Crimson- I really like this one. The contrast in the dark feel and the brigt red (Being the only color) is pulled off AMAZINGLY. Also, I notice she is wearing a cross around her neck. Is this meant to have sybolic meaning, or am I just reading too far into things? Lust- I have nothing bad to say about this one, it's simply awesome. It perfectly portrays the danger, anger, ugliness and heartbreak that follows when you let lust lead you rather than love.[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  19. [CENTER][SIZE=1]Hello, all. I was bored today and made a few banners... Hoping for some input on them. random purple thing- [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v150/unmei_shinpai/animeban32.jpg[/img] This is the seventh purple banner I've made in two days. I guess I'm just in a purple mood lately. *shrugs* pink catgirl- [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v150/unmei_shinpai/kitty5.jpg[/img] Well, I just kinda edited my Graphica entry into a banner. Just testing stuff out. abstract- [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v150/unmei_shinpai/banners%20and%20avvies%20for%20you/abstractbanner1.jpg[/img] I made this one for someone in the request forum. Originally, it was gonna be purple. Then I realized that I was stuck in a rut. Anywho, this one has no font or stock merely because that was specifically stated in the request. c&c welcome![/SIZE][/CENTER]
  20. [CENTER][SIZE=1]An abstract way to describe shopping... That would definitely take talent to do that without text or stock! I went kinda more [B]hyperactive[/B] than anything else with this set. Hope you like! av- [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v150/unmei_shinpai/banners%20and%20avvies%20for%20you/abstractavi1.jpg[/img] url- [url]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v150/unmei_shinpai/banners%20and%20avvies%20for%20you/abstractavi1.jpg[/url] size- 150x80 filetype- jpg ban- [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v150/unmei_shinpai/banners%20and%20avvies%20for%20you/abstractbanner1.jpg[/img] url- [url]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v150/unmei_shinpai/banners%20and%20avvies%20for%20you/abstractbanner1.jpg[/url] size- 150x80 filetype- jpg It didn't turn out exactly how I wanted it to, but whatever. There go! [i]edit[/i]: The images were being screwy, but it should be OK now.[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  21. [CENTER][SIZE=1]Wow, these are quite impressive. thicker than water- I really like the fact that you actually drew this one. Two weeks is a long time... Anyway, you did an awesome job on this one. You are apparently a good artist, and I'd love to see your freehand sometime. looking glass- Also nice. It looks a bit forced on the bottom left, like you were trying to make it look like the rest of the image. It looks kinda like you tried too hard to make it match the swirls on the top right. *srugs* Maybe it's just me, but I think that's why it looks particularly grainy in that area. Other than that minor detail (Though details count, that is one that is just personal preferance, so don't worry about it.) You have done an awesome job! You mentioned taking a collage course. How long have you used PhotoShop?[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  22. [CENTER][SIZE=1]I'd just like to say that I absolutely love the first one (Of Kabuto) It's amazing how you used such a character with pink and made it look good. But on a not-so-happy note, I noticed a few... Mistakes? Or were they on purpose? Well, I notice there are a few random, pixelated splotches on his hair and on his face. That could have been used to make it look grungy, but how it was done just doesn't fit this image, if you even meant to do that at all. Another thing, look around the edges of his face. The background is kinda... Leaking into his outline. You did a good job with it in his hair, but not-so-good on his face. It just looks messy. Other than that, I just loves it. 8/10 I love the second one as well, it just isn't as appealing as the first because of the usage of pink. This one would have looked much better if the stock would have been above the white stuff. The bg just eats him up! It's really a nice piece, but that could be worked on. I'll comment more on it later, I have to go to work.[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  23. [CENTER][SIZE=1]Aw, ain't that just darling? I think it's really cute. Something that I would recomend is making the frames go slower so you can read it all better. This is very hard to grade on since there isn't much there. Still, it'd brighten my birthday![/SIZE][/CENTER]
  24. [CENTER][SIZE=1]This one isn't bad, I personally like the underwater girl more. This one looks kinda... 2-dimentional. There isn't any dimention in her eyes. Her outfit is really nice lloking, but 'clean' isn't the word I'm looking for, mostly owing to the fact that this is a more scetchy piece. Don't get me wrong, this piece is brilliant, but you want to get even better, right? Well, you get better by practice and listening to crit. Another thing I'd like to mention is the realistic feel of the hair and clothes. These were done perfectly, and match the background really nicely. Probably the only thing I'd change is the eyes. A different shape might fit this better, and definitely some more sparke and dimention.[/SIZE][/CENTER]
  25. [SIZE=1][CENTER]revised- I like it much more this way. I like the little glow-dot-things, and the text looks a whole lot better now. Also, the background doesn't look as bare with the duplicated layer of Daisuke! Good job on that one, it looks super clean. read between the lines- This one I also like. One thing that could be changed about it though, maybe the lines could be a bit thinner so that the text doesn't look like it's trying to escape from between the blocks. The stock you used is awesome, but it's a bit more scetchy. Maybe the lines should be too? Ah, that's kind if personal preference. Well, I do like this one alot. I think it deserves a 9. Like I said, you're getting better by the minute. Keep it up and you could be great![/CENTER][/SIZE]
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