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?When Shadows Disappear? The sky at twilight Holds no one specific color.. It?s blurred, as if being seen through the day?s tired eyes.. A gentle breeze drifts in through an open window.. The curtains rising and falling.. It reminded me of looking to that sky through younger eyes, The eyes of someone who didn?t have to care.. This is the prelude to a time of darkness.. The time between the sunset and when they turn on the street lights.. It?s when our shadows leave us.. Leave us and find someone else to cling to..

Well, I thought it would be a good point of discussion, how many times he uses magic, and why he does. Or, why he chooses not to when he could..Don't mind me throwing out my ideas though. Sorry if this is irrelevent and no one wants to discuss it..pardon me for trying..^^

This has been an excellent read! Many of the stories I read here seem..passive. Yours didn't have a single wasted word. I'm..not so good at giving people Ideas, but the flow of this story is probably it's strongest point beside it's parody-ish-ness humor. 12/10 (as in twelve out of ten!) ^_^ Keep writing!

-Thank you for your feed back. I was thinking of putting in another stanza, --------------- Whispered word spreads of Temptor's goal, To uproot the Saint, to outwit. Evil courses through blood and soul, Candles of Stolen wax are lit. --------------- putting it between the current first and second stanzas. Also, I replaced the current first stanza with --------------- Secrets are passed from Earth to Tree, They Mourn for human kind's spirit. Nature is Pure, always will be... Candles of Stolen wax are lit. --------------- -By the way, this is a 'Kyrielle', a poem with a refrain at the end of each quatrain stanza and eight sylables per line. This would be the result should I make the changes I proposed. Secrets are passed from Earth to Tree, They Mourn for human kind's spirit. Nature is Pure, always will be... Candles of Stolen wax are lit. Whispered word spreads of Temptor's goal, To uproot the Saint, to outwit. Evil courses through blood and soul, Candles of Stolen wax are lit. Mortal men seek refuge in vain, While Hell Fire thrives in its pit. Wide-eyed Innocents pray for rain, Candles of Stolen wax are lit. The Flame ravishes youth with Sin, Leaving nothing Pure behind it. The Devil wears his Mangled grin, Candles of Stolen wax are lit. Temptation leads, We lift the Latch, Giving in to It bit by bit. Sinners all over Strike the Match; Candles of Stolen wax are lit? --------------- -Any feedback is greatly appreciated..

Screaming winds mourn for fallen trees, Whispers bind the breezes Spirit. The Oak cries bitterly, hands on knees, Candles of Stolen wax are lit. Mortal men seek refuge in vain, While Hell Fire thrives in its pit. Wide-eyed Innocents pray for rain, Candles of Stolen wax are lit. The Flame ravishes youth with Sin, Leaving nothing Pure behind it. The Devil wears his Mangled grin, Candles of Stolen wax are lit. Temptation leads, We lift the Latch, Giving in to It bit by bit. Sinners all over Strike the Match; Candles of Stolen wax are lit? ---------------- -Sorry Lady Asphyxia for not puttng a rating on the thread before. -I'll be making constant revisitions to this poem as new ideas come to me. ^_^

Okay, I'm looking for answers, and I have a explaination. How many times does Tsukasa use Magic in the show? I know why he/she refrains from using it whenever possible, and I think s/he uses magic..erm..Once. In the second-to-last episode, he acts as healer when the group is confronted by another 'monster'. I'm not quite clear on that though (my DVD is missing..>_

I think this could turn out really well! The idea seems to have a lot of thought put into it, and it was nice to read...the only problem (Not that I have this problem with it) is that it could become controversial...I look forward to reading more!

Well, my cousin Nick Szmyd (He has blue hair, is heavy, and the hair is long, but not like a pony-tail, like a Beatle's long) went to that same convention, and he's taking me next year...or at least he said he would...he said it was awesome...does that mean you live in MA too?

Your avatar looks very...*Racks brain for the right word* foreboding...It makes me feel as if I've done something wrong, and that I will be punished for whatever it is I've done... At first glance, your banner made me actually turn around, and I expected to see something evil, but there wasn't anything there...of course... 8.5/10 - 9/10

What? I was only trying to say that this is about .hack//SIGN, not //INFECTION, or //QUARANTINE, or any of the games. And I know that I'm no mod or anything, I just don't want this thread to be closed because of off topic posts...

Well, I thought that Scary Movies 1 and 2 were funny, but also disgusting. My favorite though, was definitely The Breakfast Club! I totally recommend it to [I]everyone[/I]! There was a lesson behind it...Everyone is a part of something in highschool, and these groups have different classes, the jocks and prom queens at the top, followed by the bad ***, the brain, and the strange girl...Each of the teens in the movie represented their own group, and it was entertaining to see how they all interacted with eachother... [CENTER][IMG]http://altura.speedera.net/ccimg.catalogcity.com/200000/205400/205477/Products/7617295.jpg[/IMG][/CENTER]

Hey! Isn't this supposed to be about the series? The last few posts have been about the game!

That was great! It really was like a mini sitcom, but with the same amount of funniness! The fact that the entire series follows a storyline is definitely a plus, and just for this, I'm supporting you instead of PiroMunkie...(Don't kill me!)...and I'm really looking forward to episode 8...*Goes to get a DW banner*...I made this, and it isn't really that good...but, I'm damn proud of it!...Hey! I'm not a New Member anymore!

Thank you...I was starting to think I was seeing things...I definitely have to work on the parts where I change the pencil's direction when shading...and I think Mimiru's hair is supposed to be that high *Double checks*...and I just want everyone to know that I know that there's magazine text in the backround of the drawing of Subaru...I put a magazine over the pic to keep it flat on the scanner...I'll scan it again when I have the time...Thanks everyone!

I just decided to make this thread after having seen the Six Flags commercial and lmao over it (Boy that old dancing man cracks me up)...I just wanted to know what the other members here think the funniest commercial is, and why... [IMG]http://img51.exs.cx/img51/8025/untitled74.jpg[/IMG]