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[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]Fheng Lei was getting hyped up by now. He was going on his first mission as a new recruit to the Angel Wire. Getting to fight air born mechs with the new soul module sounded fun and sounded like a challenge at the same time. Hearing that Charon was the Squad Leader didn't really bother him because he is getting to see what he is up against. So Fheng was mentally prepared for the fight so he finally left. This time he actually ran to the second hanger in anticipation. He was running through the halls with disregaurd to anyone who he might hit on the way there. He had only one thought in his head and that was the fight. He is going to get to see his team in action. He came to a pair of doors that slowly opened. The first sight he saw was the six mech animas. They had a sleek and shiny look to him. He was awe struck and he would never forget this moment. Then he noticed a man walking towards them. He introduced himself as Professor Stian but Fheng wasn't interested. He was still in awe of the mech pilots. Few seconds later it was his turn to get the Soul Module. He stepped up to the man excited. "Hello,Lei. You have been assigned the Falcon. Now you are able to pilot it." The man said seeing the amazement in Fhengs eyes Fheng looked at the chips' ellegant hazel brown color as it shined. It almost seemed alittle transparent. "Thank you" Fheng said showing great grattitude He left the hanger and headed to the Mens Locker Room. He went to his locker and put on his suit that seemed to hug his body. He left the locker room and ran back into the hanger to his Mech Anima. He looked up and smiled as he climed but the ladder to get into the falcons chest area. He opened the cockpit and quickly hopped in. Fheng was amazed at the sight of the controls as he closed the cockpit back. He pulled himself together and pushed the Soul Module into a slot that appeared to the right of him, then identified himself. Everything seemed to light up as he sat there. Then a voice came up. [I]"Lieutenant Lei, Come in."[/I] A calm male voice came in "Yeah, yeah Lieutenant Lei here." Fheng said quickly [I]"I am Lieutenant Swiif, and I will be your statistic observer. You can call me Swiif for short. 'Cause if your trying to tell me something in a threatening situation saying Lieutenant Swiif would take alittle long, eh?"[/I] He replied chuckling alittle "Ha ha, alright you can call me Fheng." Fheng said trying to sound friendly [I]"Ok Fheng, Get ready for launch. Just activate your mechs skeleton"[/I] He said There was a sleek keyboard to the left of him. He looked at it then started typing quickly. "O.K, I'm ready for launch!" Fheng said in a jolly manner [I]"Great!"[/I] Swiif said starting to feel excited The Falcon was lifted into position as the lights slowly turned from red to green. The Falcon started to launch out, and the gravity lock started to get less of a grip. The Falcon was finally torn away from the gravity lock and launched out to space. Fheng Lei loved Space and how it felt so majestic to him. He strayed alittle to the right so he could get out of the way of others as he waited to see how everyone else piloted their mechs. He was definantly excited. __________________ If there is anything wrong with this post (or if I'm missing anything pm me! [/SIZE][/COLOR] ;)
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Discuss Project: True Destiny[RESURRECTION/] - [M-SLV] - [UNDERGROUND]
naota replied to Redemption's topic in Theater
[B][COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]Yeah, the other reason was because of home work and art projects..........so I really didn't have time.[/SIZE][/COLOR][/B] -
[CENTER][COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1] OOC:: Jeez school is a monster >
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Discuss Project: True Destiny[RESURRECTION/] - [M-SLV] - [UNDERGROUND]
naota replied to Redemption's topic in Theater
[B][COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]Ohh, my char doesn't go to the part. That's why I haven't posted.[/SIZE][/COLOR][/B] -
Discuss Project: True Destiny[RESURRECTION/] - [M-SLV] - [UNDERGROUND]
naota replied to Redemption's topic in Theater
[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]"Besides Axl was Clyne, the only other girl in the entire squad. Unfortunately, it seemed the boys in their squad outnumbered them 2 to 1. So when it came to social events, there was a lot of arguing about whose date was whose. But it always managed to work itself out by each of the girls taking two of the boys. Then there was Trysten, Vermillion and Artek, Rusti?s friends in the flight division. They weren?t bad guys to be around, and Rusti found them to be very good comrades and friends in the air. So much so that she felt she could trust them with her life, something that didn?t come to her easily. And lastly was Switch, [B]Fheng Lei[/B] and Chase. These three were Emi?s comrades in the ground division. Another trio of good guys. Emi had always said that these three were the best guys to be around in training. Rusti, having never actually gone into mock combat with them before, wanted to know if that was true." :lecture: [/SIZE][/COLOR] -
Discuss Project: True Destiny[RESURRECTION/] - [M-SLV] - [UNDERGROUND]
naota replied to Redemption's topic in Theater
[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]Am I an air division or ground division. Cause I think you posted that I was in the ground division. I think falcons were air.......... [/SIZE][/COLOR] -
[CENTER][COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]OOC: Redemption, I thought I was in the air division with the falcon...? :animeknow [I]"Our next graduating cadet who shows extreme potential, Fheng Lei" [/I] Fheng Lei smirked and walked across the stage slowly. He was alittle nervous because he always had stage fright but pushed himself anyway. He was thinking if he should say anything or just nodd and say yes like a mindless idiot. Even with all these rampant emotions he still felt proud deep inside. He was thinking of how his father feel and thinking if he's ready for it. He took a deep breat as he stepped over silently and stopped in the middle of the stage. [I]"Ahh Fheng Lei, You are an amazing cadet showing extreme ability and potential in what you do. You always works with this is mind : The Element of Surprise and Efficiency. You focus on Speed, Stealth, and efficiancy which are some of the more important points when it comes to flying. Using the latest technology he is able to destroy an enemy in a group with out any of their team members noticing. Utilizing new technology you can destroy someone with out even knowing who it came from. He tries to fly swiftly in the wind not leaving a sound while always managing to get the target. Also has the sense to not rush into things and think it out strategically. Your one in a million Fheng, and we would be glad to have you aboard." The air cheif said proudly. Fheng Lei looked him in the eye as if they were communicating with now words. The cheif had a look that said congradulations to him. Fheng Lei was alittle nervous but also felt very proud. He started to think about how his father would feel and what this means for his future. He he started to think back and look at how far he's come.But then he saw the cheif about to continue so he started to focus again. Will you except the invitation to join Angel Wire?" The air cheif marshall said with a deep voice trying to leave more of an impression.[/I] Fheng Lei with out a doubt said" I accept!" He was quick to except the invitation but couldn't help but think about all the other cadets that were invited too. It seems that the cheif has faith in all of them but Fheng Lei really wants to proove himself. He wants the cheif to be able to depend on him with anything at anytime. [I]"Great, we'll be glad to use your many abilities" The air cheif stated.[/I] Fheng Lei shook hands with him feeling accomplished. He walked off the stage with a smirk on his face thinking of all the possibilities. But suddenly a voice in his head said you've come far. [/SIZE][/COLOR][/CENTER]
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Sign Up Project: True Destiny[RESURRECTION//] - [M-SLV]
naota replied to Redemption's topic in Theater
[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]edit, lol nevermind. I read your title.[/SIZE][/COLOR] -
[SIZE=1][COLOR=Sienna] ~*~*~*~*~*~**~*~*~**~*~ The Twin Assailants ~*~*~*~*~*~**~*~*~**~*~ Far into the future there have been reports of new time travel technology being abused to let whom ever mess with the space time continuum. When news about these incidents were released it made people ,unaware that they had the power to do this, try it out for them selves. So the government had a meeting where it was officially announced that a new law was placed saying who ever messes with the space time continuum will be sentenced to life in jail. But they needed two people with the power to do this job. Our heros sign up for the job and take a test on power, mind, speed and teamwork and pass with flying colors. 3 years after they got the job there were rumors that a man,a famous scientist who goes by the name of Dr.Ralph Greenhorn, has created a darkmatter gun that's able to completely destroy the space time continuum. But only has a prototype. The two new Twin Assailants go to investigate and put an end to this rumor but run into trouble. ------------------------------------------------------- This is going to be an illustrated rp by me and Vicky. Right now me and him are drawing up our characters. I have the drawing ready but I'm gonna re draw it and Vicky is working on his character. So what do you think so far guys? [U]EDIT::: [/U] [B] Name::[/B] Fhang Lee [B]Alias:: [/B]The Monstah [B]Age::[/B] 22 [B]Gender:: [/B]Male [B]Weapons:: [/B]Fist, Enviornment [B]Personality:: [/B]He is a playful person. Sometimes instead of fighting he'll try to talk it out first. He trys to get on peoples good side and he loves to talk. He is big on family and friends and loves to have company. Isn't selfish at all , he always puts people before him. But when fighting he's focused and determined. Doesn't talk at all unless they are taking a break and he always thinks it out. He likes to be alittle tactical. He always takes note of the enviorment to see if he can utilize it when fighting. His fighting style is based on speed and efficiency. He punchs alot but his kicks has more power than his punch. His fighting stance is a stance that allows him to punch faster. He trains as much as he can because you body can break under pressure when time traveling and to keep his body in shape. [B]Fight Style::[/B] He calls it Leet Kune Do. [B]Defense::[/B] Will be explained during the story. [B] Pic:[/B] [IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Enoki/final.png[/IMG] sheesh, forgot to rate this. >< [/SIZE][/COLOR]
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[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1][B]Original Name: [/B] Dragon Lei [B]Order Name:[/B] Dragon Lexi [B]Number:[/B] VII [B]Code Name: [/B] Lexi, the beast [B]Element:[/B] The Gravitational Element [B]Weapon:[/B] Two Jade Katars. Has a long handle and 3 blades coming from it. He uses his weapons with his element. If something is too hard to cut he uses his gravitational force to swoop down on it. He keeps these weapons on his belt and covered in tapes so it doesn't catch attention. Ohh and the there is a trigger that you squeeze on the handle to twist it. When stuck in someone you twist it to make sure you did the job. [B]Nobody:[/B] Mini-Dragons (Salous Scales are what they are called). Little creatures who are dependent on stealth. These creatures have see through jade colored scales making it possible for them to almost blend into the enviornment. While they don't blow fire they do have sharp claws that they can use to kill enemies. In some situations they can feed off of Lexis gravitational powers to make themselves lighter to help when trying to sneak. Or if entangled in a fight they with add force to their blows with the gravitational element. When focues their eyes glow a green misty glow. [B]Appearance:[/B] He is young and has light brown skin and clear jade eyes.Long braids with a clear dark brown color. He is of average height (5'8) and is not overly muscular. He tries to keep a hard body but not to overly muscular so he has room for speed. He has a jade earring and ring that he has. [B]Personality:[/B] He has a calm collected personality and sometimes likes to be tactical. He will think out situations instead of just rushing into it. He likes to have conversations with people and is sometimes accused of talking too much. He likes being around people but doesn't mind when he's alone. He always treats people like equals instead of thinking one person is better than another.When fighting he is deeply concentrated and focused so he can let out powerful strikes with his gravitational element. He likes to keep a clear mind. This is how he usually gets his one hit kills when needed. He fights swiftly,efficiantly and quickly. His fighting style is one that isn't used much. It focuses on Speed, Efficiancy and and swiftness. The point is to go from point a to point b and still do damage. When fighting he waits for the opponent to make a move. So he can make a counter. If they don't attack then he'll contemplate a way around it. When hurt he shows not sign of weakness. He will just smile cause that's how he was raised.When in a delicate situation he is a light stepper thanks to his element. Very hard for him to be heard which is the making for a very stealthy approach. His love for jade is a mystery that not many people know of. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Good enough?[/SIZE][/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray][SIZE=1]naota, I deleted your previous message. You must not double-post, that's what the [B]Edit[/B] button is for[/SIZE]. [B]Ezekiel[/B][/COLOR]
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Sign Up Project: True Destiny[RESURRECTION//] - [M-SLV]
naota replied to Redemption's topic in Theater
[SIZE=1][COLOR=Sienna] Fheng Lei was feeling alittle tired so he hopped into bed and slowly started to fall asleep in his bed. After having weird voices echoing through his head during the training. All of this made him feel alittle paranoid. He drifted off to sleep and found himself as a child looking at a picture of his dad and crying. He drops the picture and finds himself in a immediatly caught in a trance flowing through nothing but darkness. It had a very thick mist coarsing throughout the place. It made no sense for him to open his eyes because he couldn't even see his hand infront of his face. He was starting to wonder what was his purpose of being here and why this was triggered by looking at a picture of his father. Then suddenly he felt himself dropping as deadly speeds. He looked down and saw a bright purple light with an enigmatic figure there closely observing him. He was wearing a black tanktop, ragged black baggy jeans and a pair of exclusively made sneakers for sneaking and stealth situations. There was a loud scream that came from the figure and slowed him down enough for him to get a clear and clean landing. "Who....scratch that, WHAT are you?" Fheng said alittle shaken. The figure stepped forward and it was a falcon with long elegant slate grey feathers with an indigo stomach and head. It's eyes glowed a jade green color as Fheng felt alittle weird inside. Something was pulsing through him that made him feel a little light headed and he soon collapsed. Through telepathy falcon said" I am a falcon as you can see. It seems like you aren't very good at critical thinking eh....anyway you are the one who will be able to use me, you have to power to you me in battle." His voice echoed through out his head as if it were being beamed through speakers. "I know all about you, you are 21 years old and you specialize in the air unit. You like to fly quickly yet efficiantly. You have strong feelings for what you do because on your fathers death bed he said he wanted you to be something special. I also know you want to follow in his footsteps." A light so bright emmited from Fhengs chest that if you looked hard enough you could see his skeleton. With out notice he was thrown on his feet. The falcon left him with this thought " you have the power to use me. But will you......". Fheng thought about it for a second then he decided to hop on the falcons back. A big bright door opened up with a light overflowing from it. The falcon gave a look at him and right there Fheng was reminded of his dad. When next to the falcon he feels warm inside. A smiled cracked across his face as he screamed LETS GO, as they flew through the darkness guided by the light emitted from the Falcon. He woke up from his nap in a good mood. He got out of bed and started walking down the hall into the close quarters combat simulation room to get his daily training. He stepped up to the door looked at the electronic device, voice controlled, to state his information. " My number is #007984 and I my rank is Cadet and I specialize in the air unit." he said. "Information correct" the electronic device confirmed. He entered the arena to start his training. He found an instructor there waiting for him. "State your name!" he said. "Cadet Fheng Lei, Sir!". "You seem like your in a good mood, you better get your mind right. This is time for training." The instructor said. Occ: Good enough? [/COLOR][/SIZE] -
Art Syk3 The Corroded Reindeer [Special Animation For All OB]
naota replied to Dragon Warrior's topic in Creative Works
[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]Hey dragon warrior, I can host your "how the james stole christmas" clip if its under 10 mb. Just send me the file.[/SIZE][/COLOR] -
[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]The soul thing doesn't sound like Inuyasha to me. Well it does alittle but its pretty original.........are you even still going to go out with this idea?[/SIZE][/COLOR]
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[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]Can I get the links to because I need some too! I been looking for them for a long while! Also can I get a link to you manga or see a pic? I just wanna see how it looks like.[/SIZE][/COLOR]
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[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]I am leaving the otaku boards to go to the polykarbon boards now. So I won't be posting here anymore because I will be drawing up manga pages for the DRAWN out rps over there. So good luck with this rp because I will still be reading your posts :D .[/SIZE][/COLOR]
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Manga Sutaru's Gateway? (A manga that I can't think of a name for)
naota posted a topic in Otaku Central
[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1] Well, I have always wanted to make a ninja comic book before so I am going to attemp to make this one. ~*~_____________________________________________________________~*~ - In the days when ninjas roamed there was a ninja named Sutaru Derukasu. He was no special ninja he was just a teenage ninja that was one day walking through his village coming back from his ninja academy when a big portal opened up right infront of him. It looked like a huge black hole except that it was navy blue with some shades of red in it and it was spinning furiously and fast. This portal was blowing out very warm air and then multiple big dark green arms started to stick out of the portal. Then a man that was glowing red jumped out of the portal with the arms trying to hold him back. But he still jumped out of the portal then landed by sliding across the ground. Thats when a glowing red key in his hand became visible. The red man held up the key and pointed it to the big portal and out shot a red beam that hit the portal and closed it. The red man turned around and saw the ninja there standing still just watching in amazement. In the blink of an eye the red man disappeared then in another blink of an eye he reappeared in front of Sutaru. He hit Sutaru in the head with the front part of the key and knocked him out and then disappeared into the air. When this ninja wakes up he is in bandages in a strangers house. _______________________________~*~_________________________________ - A long story short this is about a teenage ninja Delugar who gets clonked in the head and then his head will get a marking on it which is a gateway and monsters from an unknown world starts to come out of it. This is when he starts to search for the man that came out of the portal to get some questions answered. When "the man" found this out he started his own team of criminals to make sure he gets killed. ~*~_____________________________________________________________~*~ - Yeah poor storyline ehh..............yeah I am bad with those..........and also to sticking with one online manga at a time lol. Well lets just say the last online manga pages I did were a preperation for this one. Well comment this if you like.[/SIZE][/COLOR] -
[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]Ok, if the person who can administrate the forums read this and actually will put this than look at this website. [URL=http://p084.ezboard.com/bpolykarbonbbs]The Idea[/URL] This is a forum where you get to brush up on your sequential art skills by trying new things. Instead of brushing up on your writing skills you can do it on your drawing skills if you put this forum in. It should be in an different forum because it would look more neat? Anyway it would ease some confusion and to me this sounds just fun. Since I know people have better ideas then me maby they can make an drawn adventure or battle out of it.[/SIZE][/COLOR]
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[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1] [B]Name: [/B]Sutaru Niwa [B]Gender:[/B] Male [B]Age:[/B] 24 [B]Appearance: [/B]Sutaru has short, bushy spikey brown hair that his partly covered by a head band that is over his left eye. The head band is black with a white frame around it and a spiral where is eye is supposed to be. He has light blue pupils and bushy brown eyebrows. He is slightly muscular and he wears a tank top that is all black with a white frame going around it. It is very baggy and on the back of it, it says "blade pilot" in a white circle that only has an outline. He wears a wrist band on both of his hands that are black and has the words " The North Star" in a fancy text because that is the name of his Zoid. He wears a big black belt that is slanted and has has white shiney buckle. Along with long black baggy pants that have very deep pockets and a pair of black boots with white laces. [B]Personality:[/B] Sutaru is the type of perosn who will risk his life for any friend he has. Even if its a bad friend, also he gets perverted around girls he like and actually know. (But not the nasty pervert type). Sutaru is very intelligent and doesn't play around in a serious situation. He jokes around out battle and is very serious inside of battle. [B]Pilot Ranking: [/B] [B] Z.B.C Registration Number: [/B]ZRN-19834-AC [B]Biography/Personal History:[/B] Sutaru was born with his dad being a famous Zoid Pilot known as "Takenshi Niwa and The North Star". He was born expected to be a famous zoid pilot because of his reputation and at first he actually hated to practice using Zoids. When he was five he got a zoid pilot suit and his father was reading him tons of books on how to be a pilot and how to use a Zoid. When Sutaru turned six his dad felt Sutaru wasn't listening to anything he was saying, and he gave up on teaching him. Thats when Sutaru went to school like any other kid would but he was a dork at the school and was teased and bullied for that. Sutaru was reading any book that he could get his hands and thats when he came upon a book about his father. When he read it he found out how good Zoids were and how good they were. He also found out what a man his father was and thats when he said from here on I will practice to become an Ziods pilot. (Thats how he thought it was spelled.). When he came home he told his father about this and thats where he got his intense training. He was transfered to a Zoids academy to learn even more. When Sutaru was twelve he was in the seventh grade he was a grade a student for the zoids catagory. But thats when a zoids war was in the process and his father was needed. Sutaru promised to take care of his family while his father was gone and his never came back. Even after the war, and he was pronounced dead four years later. His body was hard to find and when Sutaru was home morning his fathers death there were multiple thumps. That was " The North Star " on auto pilot and it was sent here for Sutaru to take. When it got there a star came out of it which was what powered it up and made it run. Thats when he decided to become an official Zoids pilot and follow his official pilot. It has been eight years since then (he is twenty two) and he heard about a compettition. He thought this was an good opportunity to get some practice and get better at piloting so he joined. [B] [U]Zoid[/U][/B] [B] Type: [/B]Blade Liger [B]Top speed:[/B] 645 mph [B] Appearance: [/B][URL=http://www.zoidsunofficial.coolfreepages.com/Zoids_VS_LZX.jpg]" The North Star "[/URL] [B] Height:[/B] 19 meters [B]Length:[/B] 14 meters [B] Weapons:[/B] Dual Impact Cannon, Laser Sniper Rifles, Laser Repeater Cannons, Laser Gatling Rifles, Laser Armaments ,Hardened Alloy Claws and Teeth, Hardened Alloy Laser Blades [B] Special Abilities: [/B]High-Intensity Blade Attack, Armaments Conversion System, High-Intensity Force Shield, Frontal Force Shield, Blade Attack, "North Star" [B] Support Systems:[/B] Light Vulcan Gun, Dual Light Vulcan Gun [/SIZE][/COLOR]
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Manga Sands Of Time (Online Manga & The First Page is available)
naota replied to naota's topic in Otaku Central
[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]I got the third page of my manga up on the website. Thanks for posting your feed back and I wish I could draw like FLCL. I actually tried but I couldn't lol, anyway I hope I get people to actually keep reading my manga every day since I will have a page up each day...........or atleast I will try. This is the last page I will keep up for today tomorrow I will try and get two or more pages up. Also if you want to see the first version of the second or first page you can pm me and I will send you it. Also this goes for the third page also. //Edit\\ -Fourth page is up now![/SIZE][/COLOR] -
[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]OOC||If I have done something wrong with Maya or Canathael please pm me and I will fix it. ~*~ Sutaru was coming towards Maya as she reached for her gun and shot. Sutaru didn't even bother to dodge because he was so tired so he got shot straight at his left and right on the muscle. There was a loud crack and Sutaru let out a scream of pain as he dropped to the ground. He was on his knees staring at the pavement grabbing his muscle tightly trying to take his mind off of the pain. The blood was slowly dripping and flowing down his arm and onto his hands and mixing with the heavy rain as he stared at the pavement with anger. Maya and Canathael were staring at Sutaru in fright as he was on his knees not knowing what he would do. Sutaru slowly raised his left arm and slammed it onto the ground making blood fly into the air along with a loud crack breaking some of the pavement. "W-whats wrong with you" Sutaru splurted out in a slight rage "This city is filled with violence so we had to be on alert" Canathael said trying to get Maya out of trouble "I'm sorry...." she said calmly Sutaru slowly stood up and ripped off a peice of his pants making the right side of his pants shorts. His peice of pants quickly got full of blood and started to drip down his arm still. Sutaru slowly walked away not trying to start any trouble not knowing what he would do with a wounded arm. He then turned around and just decided he was going to take a look around this dangerous city. "I'm going to try and get to know this city better" Sutaru said in an angry voice "......." was the silence that Canathael and Maya were doing as they watched him walk away. He was drenched in the rain as his clothes were dripping wet and he was bound to catch a cold. That was the risk he has for wearing no shirt and just boots and pants. Sutaru felt like he was being followed as he walked down the street, hearing the loading of a gun behind him. Sutaru then started to run quickly down the street not looking to harm anyone and not wanting to get hurt.... [/SIZE][/COLOR]
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Manga Sands Of Time (Online Manga & The First Page is available)
naota posted a topic in Otaku Central
[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]The sands of time is about a teenager who stumbles upon a stone building and in that building there is a magical hour glass that allows whoever who bears it to controll time. The teenager will take this hourglass and gain the power of time and other powers as well. Now this teenager will have a great responsibility to hold because if he uses the slighted peice of his magic wrong he can mess up time itself. Now this boy is in search of a legendary jewel called "The Red Sun" that will give him great power in knowledge and skill which will allow him to rid himself of this horrible magic. Along the journey he will be joined be one male two females who will help him find The Red Sun. I got the first page ready which is right below and I got a website for the manga so I don't have to post it on The Otaku even though I still will. Website:: [url]http://www.freewebs.com/deimosp/[/url] Manga Page 1:: [IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Enoki/MangaPage1.jpg[/IMG] (The Normal Version) [url]http://www.freewebs.com/deimosp/Scanned%20Photo-1-4.jpeg[/url] Manga Page 2:: [IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Enoki/MangaPage2.jpg[/IMG] I will post the normal version later and the rest of the manga you gotta view on my website when I put it there but right now my stupid brother is kicking me off. If you want more information just ask. I am working on page two right now the first page was just a flash back which will be happening randomly in the manga. ||EDIT|| -I added effects to the 2nd manga page to spruice it up lol. I think it looks more like an explosion and it looks more dynamic please give me your feed back people! [/SIZE][/COLOR] -
[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]OCC::Ok, So we aren't together right? ~*~ -Canathael turned around when he saw Maya and behind her was Sutaru quickly running down the street. Sutaru wasn't looking for anything and didn't know if he was supposed to but he was looking for a place to stay. He was topless in the rain so he was bound to catch a cold.The side walk was broken up and the houses were broken up and filled with graffiti. Sutaru stopped running and started to brush him self off as he heard a gun shot. He ran into a valley because he thought it was safer there. [I]"Pit Pat Pit Pat Pit"[/I] Was the sound Sutaru heard as he was wiping the water off of him and he was getting alittle suspicous. He then saw a rock roll out from the corner of a house and then a group of men in orange baggy clothes and guns. Sutaru disappeared because he was so fast they couldn't see him and then he appeared right behind them and he grabbed one of them by the neck. "What do you want..." Sutaru said calmly and curiously "Give us all ya goods" They said pointing a gun at Sutaru "Like I have any" Sutaru mumbled Sutaru was drenched in the rain as they pulled the trigger putting bullets through their own gang member and Sutaru made a run for it. He tried to trace his own tracks so he could find a team member like Canathael or Maya. Sutaru then started to move fast so no one would see him since he wanted no more trouble. Sutaru had blood all over his chest, stomach, and face as he didn't even bother to wipe it off... [/SIZE][/COLOR]
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[SIZE=1][COLOR=Sienna]Wow, I haven't even checked this thread yet and I am kinda surprised. Lol, I would join your rp (Unless I am not the Daisuke you are talking about?). But I am sick and packed with rps so sorry.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
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[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]OOC|Who is left in the group? Sarek and Canathael left,and Peiter just left......so thats just me and maya right? I dunno if I am wrong I will delete this post also if I did anything wrong just pm and I'll fix it. ( I think I know I did something wrong for some reason....) ~*~ Sutaru and Maya watch Peiter a while as he was bashing one of the taller mans head into the bar table. Sutaru patted the pouch he recently bought that held peices of metal and other material. It was for his alchemy, it could help him make some dangerous weapons. "Ok,lets go!" Sutaru said "Gotcha!" Maya said quickly as they started running They were running as great speeds straight through the city with no direct direction. They just chose a direction they thought was good and stuck with it, as they ran through the city more and more people were crowding it. Some people were getting shoved out the way as the raced through the town and saw a figure that looked like Canathael. They were almost at the end of the city already and thats when they saw Sarek stop or what looked like Sarek stop. Sutaru seemed to think this was getting intresting, as they got closer the figures got clearer and it was Canathael and Sarek for sure. They were right behind Canathael when they stopped running and started to walk next to him. " We found you Canathael" Maya said calmly while gasping for air "Lets hurry up and get Sarek already so we can get this over with" Sutaru calmly but also gasping for air They all arrived right behind Sarek and infront of him was a beutiful forest that Sutaru never seen in his whole life before. It was made up of pink leaves and pellets and if you walked close there it you would see a fog with a beutiful mountain behind it. Canathael walked closer to Sarek as Sarek slowly turned around and he seemed to be offended. Sarek raised his hand and back smacked Canathael, Sutaru thought he was going to punch him hard but it was probably because he didn't want to hurt him. " You insult me then you have the nerve to follow me?" Sarek said in a deep voice Sutaru was rolling on the ground laughing and then he remembered to do something. He took out a metal bar from his pouch and put it in between his hands. He did fancy hand movements then his hand glowed a misty purple color as a sheild appeared in his hands.......... [/SIZE][/COLOR]
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[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]OCC||If I need to fix anything just pm me. ~*~ Sutaru was standing close to where the portal first spawned on the ground laying down unconcious not nowing the group left. Sutaru slowly opened his eyes later and gained his conciousness back and covered his eyes from the sun,as he sat up looking around lost.Sutaru got onto his feet and took a small but thick book out of his deep pockets and started to read it. It was a book on how to use and master alchemy because he thought it might come in handy for future uses. He went to the third page and then started to quickly run north while reading the book, he was running aimlessly since he didn't know where any of the team was and it seemed that the team didn't even remember him. Sutaru quickly ran foreward as he seen a rise in the ground which was a hill and it gave him some shade. He started to jog as he was enjoying the moment then he saw a group of figured on top of the hill standing there. He then picked up the pace and quickly ran up there and ge was relieved to see that it was Sarek,Maya,Canathael and the rest of his group there. When he stepped up Sarek heared him and he quickly turned his head to see who it was. "........Hi?" Sutaru said embarresed and curiously "Why are you even apart of this group?" Sarek said coldly Sutaru and the rest of the company ignored Sareks remark and pointed all of their attention to the man that Canathael was helping and treating his wounds. Sutaru didn't know what his name was but he didn't care, he thought he was an ally since they were helping him out. Sutaru was wondering what and why was Canathael humming but he tried to ignore it. "Who's he?" Sutaru asked calmly "John" Canathael quickly answered Canathael slowly and gentally cleaned Johns leg with a clear soft liquid that he rubbed on the wound,then he ripped off a peice of his sleeve and wrapped it around the wound to keep in sealed. Canathael stood up slowly and stopped humming to show that he was done treating Johns wounds. Sutaru raised his hand and put it over his eye because of the brightness and because of the heat and was starting to sweat bullets as he was waiting for the response from John. "Follow me,I will take you to the closest town" John said relaxed "Finally....." Sutaru mumbled to himself angry with the heat No one else said a word and just followed him with no remarks told and no questions asked...... [/SIZE][/COLOR]