Albel the Wicked

Well, in posting in a judged fight in an RPG, there are certain things. One, you can't god-mod too much (A.K.A say that your opponent is losing horribly) Another is the winner is decided on post quality and length. Now, since this is a team battle pretty much, there will be some changes. Since it is two members fighting three members, then this might be a little complicated. But, if you need a good example of a member against member fight, then search for the Ultima Tournament posted by Ultamilz. As for this mech battle, there is something else that I feel there should be. There are only five gadgets/moves on each mech, so that the fight doesn't come to a never ending gadget using fight, with each mech having fifty different gadgets.

This is where you share thoughts and where Dragon Warrior will post the match results of the mech fight. C ya

"Well, it is most likely my friend, that they are going to be using cloaking for a surprise attack. Luckily, I invented this eyeshield to track invisible things. It has an attachemt to the mech, which I used to track it the first time it turned invisible. Sadly, the attachment takes up a lot of power, so I can only use the scanner for about three minutes when used in the mech. Then I have to charge it. I'll show you how it works, turn on your cloak." "No" "Come on" "No, we are wasting time!" "It'll just show you that I can detect it when it's invisible." "Fine, only if it'll make us go" "Alright" Sako turned on his mech's cloaking device. "Alright, now, move around or go up in the air or something." The mech did something that wasn't visible to him yet. Drake took the cord from his eyeshield and plugged it into the Falcron. Drake looked all around him and didn't see anything. He looked up and saw the Hunter mech, but, he also saw something that caught his eye. He saw the Griffin mech, which was currently preparing to fire at the Hunter. "LOOK OUT!" He said. He fired a blast from the Falcron's wrist gun, which was a direct hit to the Griffin. It would've done more damage this time then it would've when it didn't have the cloak. Like Drake observed before, cloaks take up all the shields power, making every blast taken at full force. The cloak started to disappear and the Griffin was visible. "What the hell!?" Sako said. Drake tried to patch a communication with the Griffin. "Now listen here Kitty, I know that Mech isn't yours. You shouldn't take things that aren't yours" "Listen to your own advice. You're the one who stole my wallet!" "He's the one!?" Yelled Gray. "Just lookin out for number one! Besides, you didn't seem to care enough about your wallet to put up a reward! HA HA HA!" "ENOUGH! I will destroy you for violating Kitty!" Gray said. "I'd like to see you try son. I'm a very experienced mech pilot." "I don't think that a Falcron Blurprint mech will do to well against a Griffin." "Ah, but this is a CUSTOM built Falcron. More expensive, more powerful. It may come to you as a surprised, that this mech may have some gadgets that aren't on a regular Falcron. I hope it doesn't have to some to the Orchist Beam though. Well, let's start this!" said Drake, as he had and energy sword come out from the top of the Falcron's wrist. MECH BATTLE! OOC: DW agreed to ref this match, so, go and visit the Underground thread to find out basic rules for a fight like this.

[QUOTE=Lady Katana][color=darkblue]Sara is very much correct. You really need to calm down about this. One of the purposes of this forum is to provide feedback on manga ideas, which you asked for and received. And just as Sara said, since it does contain certain aspects that are similar to those in Inu-Yasha, it's going to be compared to it. There's nothing that you can really do about that unless you change the storyline. But the main focus of this post is to tell you to simmer down a bit. These posts are merely opinions. You can take them and leave them as you please. They're most certainly nothing to get bent out of shape over, so please try to control your temper.[/color][/QUOTE] Yeah, I'm calm now. It's just that it was a little frustrating, to just have the same thing stated, over and over again. Try to understand how that would be frustrating. I really appreciate the constructive critisism, but please, leave something new people. What it seems like is that one person said that it was like Inuyasha and the others just agreed. I wouldn't have minded if you actually compared it with something else. Like my thread in the Arena Underground where I asked if it would be a good RPG on the OB. Despite that it was pretty much me and Beoruhn talking, someone actually posted that it sound like something else. The fact that she said it sounded like something else BESIDES Inuyasha was good. If people just point out how it is from one show instead of other things, then it could still sound like a rip off. So, that's how this thread would've been better off with just ONE 'It kinda sounds like Inuyasha' comment.

Beoruhn, the only reason that I'm getting irritated, is because I've been seeing the SAME THING for just three pages of this thread. People don't to even TRY to go beyond the fact that it sounds like Inuyasha. If you take 20 broken records, make them all say "it sounds like Inuyasha" you basically just have this thread. Personally, I don't think that it sounds like Inuyasha. I wasn't even thinking about Inuyasha when I came up with this. It all started out with the drawing of the Double Edge sword. You know that too Beoruhn! Now, on to the fact of the love thing. Yes Yutarin DOES fall in love, BUT before you start throwing full wine bottles at your computer screens, let me fill you in on something. I'm still dwindling on if the main girl should or shouldn't fall in love with Miroshi. But either way, Miroshi doesn't fall in love in the first series. If the main girl fell in love with Miroshi, Miroshi wouldn't feel the same about her, for he has no soul. I think that THAT might be the first time that has happened. Besides, you guys don't even know the full thing of this. I'd put it on, but personally, I don't feel like typing for an hour just to get half of the story on this thing. I basically told you guys the summary of it. Now, if I hear that this sounds like Inuyashsa ONE MORE TIME, I SWEAR I'm gonna have to start bustin some heads. MAN! Now you got me all cheesed off! Forget you guys! I'm gonna play some Temple of Abshai! I don't even think that people would all three pages. Wanna know why? Because all three ****ING pages have the same ****ING comment that it sounds like ****ING INUYAHSA!

OOC: I better post, before people start complaining. IC: Albel and the girl stood in the grass as the sun came up. Albel looked off into the distance and could've swoar that he saw a dust cloud go by. This cloud was traveling in just a blink of Albel's eye. He tried to make out where it had gone. With Albel squinting his eyes, he saw just a very small spec far off in the distance. "There's something far off in the distance" "Really?" "Yes" "I can't see it" "Trust me" he said. He picked up the girl and began running as fast as he could. It wasn't as fast as before, but still, it was faster then the average man. Albel ran for about an hour until coming up to the spec. Turns out that it was a laboratory. "I think that this is the lab that you got that coat from." "Maybe" "I hope this will give some answers." he said as the two walked in. They walked in and saw that no one was around. There were just corps lying around. It was scary. They were burnt to a crisp, there was still smoke rising from them. "Wait, if there is still smoke coming from them, then that means what caused this is still here. Prepare yourself." he said, putting his hand on his sword. He walked down the hallway, until he heard someone typing on keys. He walked down and saw someone on a giant computer. Albel walked and the figure turned around. "Who are you? Are you the one that did this to these people?" asked Albel. "Ah yes, I indeed did scorch these fools. But for the sins that they were doing, they deserved it." the figure replied,"But, enough about me, tell me who you are." "That is none of your buissiness" "HA HA! Just as I figured. You don't even know who you are. But I can tell you. You are Hashu Tonaka. Your life wasn't the best in the world. You were going to end it, until some men came up to you and took you away. They took you to a lab, where they transformed you into experiment 3173 or better known as Hacker. They genetically enhanced you, along with many other experiments. Your power was the installation of hyper mode. But, a side-effect of the experiments was enhanced stats as well. Your purpose was to look like an ordinary human, then set off to hyper mode and destroy the opposition, but since you had those side effects, you were going to be an assault weapon. I see that you still keep the interests of Hashu Tanaka. He was always a fan of Japanese Swords and liked to combine it with a claw." "What? How do you know so much?" "I have been searching this computer's database, to find out who I am." "Then who are you?" "I am project Aprales. The super experiment. I am what you and all the others are. Whatever powers you and the others have, I will have. I was meant to be the greatest among all of you." "No way!" "Yes. I also see that you found Miss Lily, AKA, experiment 1886. Experiment name, Ghost. Given the powers to turn invisible and go through solid objects. You weren't in the same lab as me, so I don't have YOUR powers." "What?" said Lily. "I know that this may be shocking to you, but this is true. You were made into experiments, because no one in the world wanted you. It was that which led me to believe that all humans are evil. Join me, so that we can kill everyone. We have the power, so join me." "Not all humans are evil. There was one that took me in. She housed me, sheltered me, and gave me a place to stay for a while. I would never agree to such nonsense!" "You don't have much of a choice. Either you join me, or die." "HA! Me die to you!? That's a laugh." Hashu said, as he charged towards Aprales, with his sword drawn. Aprales just dodged every attack Hashu let out. Aprales was growing tired of this and sent out a force through to whole room. This force was strong. It sent Hashu all the way through the walls of the lab and even farther. Hashu couldn't tell where he was going to land at the speed he was traveling. Finally Hashu landed and everything went black. He didn't know where he was or even if he was alive. OOC: Aqua, you can go ahead and decided what happened to Lily.

Drake waited for the Falcron to come to him. It seemed like it was taking forever. He started to wonder if that Sako guy got his message. He just saw that he got a message from that person. Luckily, he was near the Rhino, which could be used to read the message. Drake climbed up in the Rhino's cockpit and went to the control panel. He looked at the screen and it said that he had to pay 100 zen to read the message. He had enough, so he decided to. He read the message. It said as follows. [i]I do not collaborate ahead of time. If I run into you durring the job, then we might as well work together, but I'm not going to come looking for you. If we happen to meet, we'll work together, but if we don't, then whoever does the job gets the cash. Nothing personal, Drake. That's just how I work.[/i] [i]Sako[/i] Drake laughed to himself and decided to message back. He knew that he would probably need help with this. He typed and make his message say. [I]My friend, I KNOW who took that mech. I have met them before. There were three people, so I'm asking for a truce. If there is one thing that I've learned, it is to always prepare for the worst. Most likely all of those peopel are bound to have a mech. So, if you would join me, then that would be 3 vs. 3. I may have not mention it before, but a friend of mine is going to be piloting another mech of mine. So naturally, we have two people, but she is not the best mech pilot in the world. If the enemy were to find that out, they would double team her and she would fall. Even I can't take on three mechs, so I'm asking you, I know that we can't do this divided. I could arrange a meeting place if you would like. Please, we need this truce. Drake.[/I] After this, Drake decided that he would keep the Rhino down here. He waited some more, until his ships came down. They were carrying his glorious mech, the Falcron. It's silvery wings and great frame, made it Drake's best mech yet. You could say that his luck skill played when he invented this. It was indeed a mech that ranked into the class level of AAA. It was the highest you could go. There were not many mechs that could get to AAA. In fact, that Griffin mech SHOULD only be a level AA, but never underestimat players. Drake's crew dropped of the Falcron and started to go to the Rhino. He patched to them and said," You won't need to pick up the Rhino. Kay is going to be flying it." "Are you sure about that sir?" "Yes I am" "You don't want us to bring down the Sea Serpent?" "No, I don't think that we'll need Omega. Our opponent isn't THAT tough. But if we do need to use the team mech, then so be it." "All right." Drake directed for Kay to get in the Rhino, she nodded and got in. Drake went inside the Falcron. He looked inside and he felt like he was right at home. The cockpit was designed just for him and only him. He started up the Falcron and took off into the air. Drake started to laugh, "Here Kitty, Kitty, Kitty, Kitty."

OOC: My my, people seem to be a little 'irritated' by Drake. He he he. *Devilish laugh* Oh, by the way, yes the currency IS zen, NOT zenny. IC: Drake and Kay stood on the street corner bathing in what they thought was their greatness. Drake STILL had the money he stole. Some Rhym guy thought that he was a hero, getting those wallets back, when in reality, he helped them be hunted by moderators. He replaced their money with fake zen. The use of fake zen at a store, will have their pictures, profiles, and names on the wanted list, making them hunted by moderators and bounty hunters. Drake wasn't a bounty hunter, but as it was shown, he would do anything for money. After all, money is a type of tresure, so Drake would hunt it. Drake was waiting for them to be on the missions list. He couldn't wait any longer. Drake pressed some buttons on his utility band, that wrapped around his wrist. He searched the missions, but didn't find anything on use of fake zen. It surprised him. Unless they were REALLY observent, only store NPCs could tell that they were fake. BUT, he could've raised suspission, considering he gave the wallets back without lifting a finger. When Drake searched more, he DID find a mission that seemed to catch his eye. It was one with quite a hefty bounty on it. It involved the stealing of a Gryffin-blueprint mech and the one that wanted it back was Kasharo. Drake pressed some more buttons on his utility band and patched a communication with him. "What? What do you want?" " This is Drake, Kasharo" "Oh, Drake. It's been far too long." "Yes yes, we all know that it has. Look, I noticed that you have a mech missing." "Ah you read that. So, what about it?" "....I can get it back for you." "Overconfident in your skills as usual eh Drake?" "You know that I can do it." "Yes I do, but, fact is, someone has already taken the job. His name was Sako" "So, only one person can take the job? How do you know that he can do it or that he'll bring it back safley?" "I don't, but I guess if you do it before him, then I'll give you the reward as well." "What if we do it together?" "Then I guess it's split 50 50." "Sounds fun. Well, whether or not I join forces with this guy, you know that I'll be there to make your mech safe and sound. Drake, over and out." he said, closing the communication. "Sounds like we got a caper on our hands" said Kay. "Not this time Kay. I'm doing this alone." "What?" "He he, got ya!" "Figures. You never go on a mission without me." "Well, I'm going to send a message to this one guy. As for who has the mech, I already got an idea." "That one you saw before?" "Yep" "Figures. It's the only Griffin-blueprint mech we've seen." "For this job, I'm going to call down Falcron." "OH GOODIE! The Falcron!" "Don't expect to drive." "I know I know, it's your baby." "Damn straight." said Drake, jokingly. He pressed a button on his eyeshield and spoke in the mike. "This is Drake, ready for you to pick up the Rhino." "Yes sir" "And while you're at it, send the Falcron down here as well" "Yes sir" Drake closed this link. He started to send a message to this 'Sako' guy. The message contained this. [I]I know that you have taken the mission for the stolen mech as well. I say that we make a truce. You and I should work together and then split the reward 50 50. If you refuse, then I'm going to say that ALL is fair in this game, meanine that I'll kill you if I have to. Just keep that in mind. Message me back with your answer ASAP. Drake.[/I] OOC: It's up to you Takuya. For the record, the reason that Drake is so confident, is that he's been in Aqualaria since it started. He just didn't battle much to level up. There are two types of leveling up. One, which is the obvious, battle for experience or two, which is the slower but better way of leveling up, is using your skills as much as possible. This is slow, but more effective. Drake has just used his skills a lot, so he has more efficient stats.

OOC: Man, I guess it's been a while. IC: Drake was finishing what was left of the opponent's army in the Rhino. It had completley dimoloshied the army, along with Kay's support. The Rhino had no damage counters on it. Drake fired the Buster Cannon, at what SEEMED like the last mech. It exploded in a giant firey ball(That was visible from space LOL). Drake looked around in his mech and he saw nothing. "Whew" he said through his pilot's helmet, "That was a workout" he said. "Yeah right. You don't even have a scratch" "He he, I guess you're right Kay. Let's go celebrate" "How?" "We'll buy some drinks and stuff." "Too bad that I can't actually taste them" "Yeah, but your character is most likely to like it." "Not really, MY character is watching her figure" said Kay, swinging her hip in Drake's direction, then laughing. "He he, if you don't, no one else will." "Shut up Drake. You're such a teaser." "You know me. Well, let's go celebrate" "Drake, what's that in the sky?" "Hmmm?" He said, tilting the mech's head up. He saw that it was another mech. It was actually a Griffin blueprint mech. He wasn't sure if it was a surprised from the enemy. Most of those enemies were actual players. There was never an event planned for this area. He was about to fire at it, until it turned invisible. (He he. A cloaking attachment. It IS true that the cloaking device can completley hide a mech, but converted all the shields power into that cloak. BUT, with my custom made eye shield, I can see such invisible things) Drake took a wire from his eye shield and plugged it into a slot in the Rhino. The Rhinos windshield started to glow green, as Drake looked for the mech. He saw that it was on top of a great brown building. He decided to send a message to the pilot's. He couldn't get through with a communication, so he decided to send a Letter Message. After that, he parked the Rhino and went into the street. Drake didn't worry about the Rhino, since it could only be activated by an access code, that he NEVER told anyone. Not even Kay. Drake and Kay walked around the square, they saw a girl and a boy talking. (My my, what a fine looking girl) thought Drake as he walked up to the girl. "He he, looks like we have a fine looking piece of meat." Drake said, patting the girl on the butt. "AHHH! YOU PERVE!" said that girl, having her slap Drake as hard as she could on his face. Drake went flying back. "OW! He he, that probably took down at least half of my HP" Drake said jokingly. He walked up to the girl, still with a red mark from her hand. "Hope there was no hard feelings. I'm Drake and this is Kay." "I'm Kitten and that's Zisagawa. What were you just trying to pull!" "Sorry, you must expect that a Tresure Hunter could pass up such a prize." "Whatever, lecher" she said and walked off, as well as the boy. Kay walked up to Drake and told him,"Man, you're such a flirt" "Actually, it's just as I said. A Tresure Hunter couldn't pass up such a prize," said Drake as he tossed up two wallets. "I couldn't resist. Took it from them when they didn't look. Should my class be Tresure Hunter or Thief?" "I'd say both." "Well, whatever. We might need to get disguises, before they find us." said Drake. They went and got some panchos and some sombreros, since it seemed to be the look of a dessert planet. They started walking around keeping their face covered with the hats. OOC: HA HA! Kitty, Drake just pickpocketed you.

OOC: This is ridiculous.....or is it? :devil: LOL IC: As Drake watched, he was stunned. His mouth was about to hit the floor. He couldn't believe this. This was udderly ridiculous. But, I guess it wasn't a surprise. This coming from two VERY competitive girls. But, it was kinda ridiculous going to this length. Drake didn't want to watch this, so he finished what he could and then left. Throwing in his opinion wouldn't do a difference, for it was obvious to everyone that he would've said Beth had a better body. Drake walked outside to see what he could do. He soon found a kid in a fighter outfit meditating on a rock near the lake. Drake walked up to him slowly. As he got close, the kid turned around quickly. "Oh, hello. I don't believe I've seen you around. Perhaps we haven't met. I'm Drake. Drake Estel." "I'm John" "Well, pleased to meet you John" "Yeah, sure" Drake went to sit next to John. He'd find out more about the kid, then John would have expected. As he sat next to him, he started to ask questions. "SO, what's your family like?" John just sat there, not saying anything. "Got any friends back home?" Nothing came from that either. "How about a girlfriend?" THAT question, didn't get anything either. Although, it DID make John open his eyes. Drake had done this before. " So, you guys gone on your first date?" "What the? I don't have a girlfriend." "You're a bad lier. I know you do. SO, what's her name?" "What buissiness is it of yours?!" "I'd like to know more about the inmates and from you saying nothing, I actually know a little bit about you. Here it goes. You are troubled, by something and it's going to happen soon. You're family died by something, I don't know what though and since your family died, it caused you to harden at heart, making you not have many or ANY friends. Now, about the girlfriend. Either you are not sure if she is your girlfriend OR you are having trouble with that girlfriend." John just looked at him with a greatly surprised look. "Is that mostly right?" John's mouth was just open as much as it could go. John was speechless by Drake's interogation. OOC: I actually did that to one of my friends. His reaction was sooooo funny.

OOC: Thanks for breaking the ice Sakura. I didn't know what on Earth to post. I never can conclude romantic posts to good. IC: Drake and Beth went inside....still holding hands. As Drake went in, he saw Sakura making hot chocolate. Drake chuckled and said to Beth," She has such a free spirit. She can be just like a child at times. She can be pretty hyper too, huh?" "Yeah a little" said Beth still blushing. Drake was blushing as well. It was a little embarassing having someone to break their romantic moment. Drake looked around to make sure that everyone was in bed. Although he was sure that anyone would be able to get to sleep after that. "Well, I guess that we should get to bed as well, right?" Drake said. " I guess so." replied Beth. Drake kissed her on the cheek, just before she went to her room. Beth turned around and their lips met. They stayed like this for a little bit, then Beth went into her room. Drake went out a little ways to his room, when he saw Alan watching Sakura make hot chocolate. (Oh ho ho. Looks like SOMEONE has a secret cruuuuuusssh.) Drake thought. He went up to Alan. "So, what ya doin?" he asked "AH! No-nothin!" "Oh, sure" Drake said. He was going to do something a little devilish. He went to the kitchen and whispered in Sakura's ear. "Prepare two cups of hot chocolate, k?" With that, he went to a table and pulled out a chair. He then ran back to Alan and spoke to him. "Well, Sakura seems afully lonley. Maybe you should join her" "What?" "Come on" "No!" "You're just going to have hot chocolate with the girl" said Drake, as he pushed Alan in the kitchen. "I don't want to!" Alan said, resisting. "Oh, now that just mean. Why don't you like Sakura's hot cocoa?" "I never said that!" "Good, then you'll have a cup" "NO!" "Look, she already has a cup of it ready for you." Drake forced Alan into the chair that he pushed out. "Now, I need to go to bed. Have a head injury you know" said Drake as he walked off with a devilish grin. (You'll thank me later Alan.) Drake went in his room and went to sleep right away. (Man, what a night) though Drake.

[COLOR=RoyalBlue]Name: Drake Estel Age: 16 Gender: Male Country: USA USA! Bio: Drake is a very good guy. He is good academically and physically. He is one of the best standing in his class. His favorite sport is soccor. He loves soccor and will never back down from a challenge to it. Drake is one of the best at soccor. His family is also very smart. His mother is a doctor and his father is a lawyer. Drake is also very active. Just this summer, he was in another villa experiment (~_^) that was it France. *WINK WINK* There he had one of the best times of his life. He had made friends, and more. He was always the one to think of fun activities for the villa. He hopes that he'll have as much fun at this villa as he did the last one. Appearance: This is what Drake usually wears, unless it is a special occasion. He will wear an over-shirt, over his regular shirt. His jeans, are just regular blue jeans, or he may wear some baggy pants on rare occasions. Drake has blue eyes and smooth blue hair. Personality: Out-going[/COLOR]

[quote name='Tozoku']Okay, glad you like it. ^^ Do feel free to edit, I just put the name in because the empty space was bugging me. ^_^;;[/quote] It wasn't edited much. I think that it looks pretty cool. I just got rid of the screen name.

Well, you guys are in. Just for the sake to save time and effort, if I don't say anything about your profile, them you can just pretty much think that you're in the RPG.

YAY! I'm glad that SOMEONE likes the idea. I agree completley with him. EVERYTHING will sound like Inuyasha. Having someone fall in love in the plot would make it too much like Inuyasha. I say, it was a good thing that you like the idea. I was getting REALLY tired of listening to a broken record. Well, Double Edge IS currently in game production by me using RPG maker 2003. So far, it is around 45 minutes. I'd have to say that that is pretty good. But I had to cut out a character, since only four members can be in your party. It DEFINETLY won't have the Kingdom Hearts battle system, on account of the games graphics and that RPG maker only allows turn based combat. But, I'm going to try to be a game maker and have Double Edge come out. Even if I have to make the game by myself, with no help, I WILL create Double Edge.

OOC: I must've not payed attention, because I didn't know that those guys knew his name was Hashu, when HE doesn't even know his name. Well, this is my first post as the Helldog experiment. IC: As project Helldog travelled through the land, in search of something that would answer his questions. He ran as fast as he could, which made him run faster then anything on this world. He ran at great speeds, with the combined speed of 3173,3715, and 3136. His speed was faster then light itself, which made him a deadly threat. As he ran more, he finally came upon a lab. It was on the plains, vast plains. Helldog went inside the lab without tripping any alarm. Walking in, he hacked into the nearest computer that he could find. Helldog, was into the lab's network system within a matter of five minutes. Helldog was in the computer database. Looking on the menu, he decided that he ought to search for exactly what he was. There were many things that he could have went into, but he didn't know exactly what. He went into many files, but none led to what he was or who he was. He went into 'Genetic Experiments', but there was nothing on him in this lab. He let out a groan. Then he said to himself," I'm not from this lab though" He then started to search for a lab that was in the dessert. There was only one result, which was the Hitokari Research Facility. He went into the genetic experiments for that, but, he had been found out in the system. Every alarm in the facility went off. Helldog hid in a dark corner and turned invisible from 666's powers. The security came in as quick as possible. Helldog wasn't going to deal with this, so he used the Pyrokenisis, a great gift from experiment 3193. Everything living was burnt to a crisp. Now Helldog could find out what he wanted in peace.

I like the way that you edited the sword. That looks AWESOME. The outer edge makes it look like it is an ice blad and the inner part certainly looks a whole lot cooler. I think that I might take this, given that I just edit it a little. Such as how it says my name. I kind of change my name frequently, so, I might get rid of the name.

Yeah well, how about you give some examples. If you don't give examples, then I'm afraid that you're just saying a blank statement my friend. At least SOME people think outside the box. I don't think that it sounds like Inuyasha. Getting the pieces of the soul lets him lock into more of his power. See, I guess in this people can cast spells, depending on how strong their soul is. Plus, only a whole soul can unlock Double Edge's true power. I don't know! You guys ask too many questions!

Will someone make me a banner? I want it to have this sword. Can it also say on it,"No soul.......no pain" or ,"No soul......no fear". I would appreciate it to go with my new signiture. Please make it in a cool font. If you can make the sword look better, then I'm nominating you for an Otakuboard award! [color=teal]I haven't been very good about enforcing this rule, but we ask that you place the topic of the banner in your thread name. Since yours doesn't really cover a particular franchise, the fact that you have a picture to use is sufficient enough and helps to be mentioned. ^_^ -Syk3[/color]

Well, a couple of things. First, I think that you need to edit your class. It sounds too powerful. Just plain swordsman will do. There are no angels in this RPG I'm afraid. Now, second thing, your stats still have three points left to add. Unless you want to make a special skill, then you can add to your stats.

OOC: Well, let's see..... IC: Albel looked at the girl. She looked very beautiful in the moonlight. Her slender figure, that gorgeuous face. Albel couldn't take his eyes off her. Albel shook his head and started to come back to reality. He shouldn't stare at her, but he just couldn't help it. She was so beautiful. He started to blush as he walked up to her. "Well, my apologies miss, but we haven't been properly introduced. I am Albel and what may I call you Miss?" "Ummm, not sure." "Hmmm?" "I'm not sure what my name is" "You too eh?" "What do you mean?" "There were tons of us that didn't have a name back in the dessert. I just made one up for myself, since I don't remember mine. Maybe the lab that you work for can help you" "What?" "You're wearing a lab coat, are you not? You must be from somewhere." "Well, this isn't mine. I stole it" "From where?" "I'm not sure. My head is foggy." "Hmmm, maybe this lab that you stole it from might help us" Said Albel, with a devilish grin. "Come with me. We shall learn of our past." As Albel started to walk, he fell to the ground unconsious. He started to visualize a memory. [I]Memory[/I] There was a boy in a lab. This lab had great facilities and gadgets from the looks of it. The boy, he was on a table, being treated by.....something. It looked horrible. There were many needles going into the boy. The boy was struggling and letting out moans of pain. "ARGH! Why are you doing this!" "You accepted our terms and now you are our subject." "I never agreed to these" "You had no choice." "Damn...you!" the boy said, still strugling. "Proffesor, his levels are at critical. Maybe we should let off." "No. If he is strong enough, he will survive." "What, are you doing to me?" "We are making you better. The world had no use for you, so we gave you one." "So, you're saying that I'm not wanted?" "Exactly" "ARGH!" The boy pulled his arm as hard as he could. The holds that were at his wrist were starting to crack. "He's starting to break free!" The boy broke through the holds and was about the go for the doctor that was doing all the talking. But he was stopped. He felt a prick go in his right arm. When he looked, he saw that it was a dart. Everything started to go black. The boy collapsed. "Continue with the process. He shouldn't be awake for another couple of days. That'll be enough time to finish." [I]End of memory[/I] Albel got up. "AH!" both the girl and he screamed. "Ugh, I had, a weird dream. But, it seemed more like it was like life." "Huh?" "The boy in the dream, looked like me. He just had partially blue hair and it wasn't as long as mine. I think that that kid WAS me." "Maybe you're right. This lab just might give some answers to us." OOC: There I posted, now will you people stop bugging me? Sorry that it may seem long.

OOC: OK, I don't know why people haven't posted, but I am NOT going to let this RPG die. This post is bringing it back to life. Since Halo 2 is out, Halo 2 rules will apply. That means dual wielding, SMGs, Battle Rifles, etc. NOW that fun begins. IC: Master Chief looked at the remains of the Autumn 2. He slammed his fist into the ship, making a dent. "DAMN! I didn't want this to happen!" he stood there in silence. Everyone was staying in silence, as the chief was looking out the window. After five minutes, the cheif turned around. "Set the ships coordinates for Earth. We're going to get some supplies, then....." everyone watched without words," we're going to take this fight to the covenant themselves." "HELL YEAH! That's what I like to hear!" said Jacks. "Let's kill those alien bastards!" yelled Talon. Their ship started to head towards Earth, trying to evade the other covenant patrols as well. When they got to Metropolis, they went to their armory for some weapons. Going in, the other Spartans and Marines readied their weapons of choice. The chief, decided to get the Assault Rifel. "Sorry cheif, for some reason, the Assault Rifle isn't being manufactured anymore. But there is something close to it. They just barely came out with it while you were gone. Say hello to the Battle Rifle" Looking at the Battle Rifle, the cheif took it in his hands and it felt almost the same as the Assault Rifle. He also grabbed the shotgun for his second weapon. He stocked on grenades and ordered Scorpian tanks, Warthogs, and some of the new Gauss Warthogs. The Covenent weren't going to get away with the damage they caused.

Drake and Kay were doing mass damage to the opposing side. Kay was firing bombs like crazy from her weapon and Drake was firing electric blasts from HIS big gun. They had a lot of mechs and forces of their taken down. Kay, looking at how low her ammo was on her gun. "I hope you have something else planned Drake. My ammo is almost low!" "Don't worry, the Rhino is getting prepared! We just have to hold them off until it gets here!" "He he, the Rhino eh? Sounds like you want to have some fun" "Oh yeah!" he said firing another energy blast. "Though, it'll take about another half-hour before it'll be dropped off! So, I'm gonna ask them to drop some ammo off." "Either that or a different gun" "Well" said Drake, as he put up a sniper scope and pushed a button on his gun," There is that arm-mounted cannon that you also like." "Which ever one you think we should do." "Hmmmm, how about just more ammo. I know that that gun is more powerful, but the only problem is, that you go through the ammo pretty quick" he said, as he shot a blast of energy through a windshield, killing one of the enemy. "Here, hold them off until the ammo comes." Drake said, handing his blaster to Kay. He pressed a button on his eye shield to open a communication. "This is your captain speaking. How are the preparations for the Rhino?" "Well sir, we just need about five more minutes. It didn't take as long as we expected. If you can just hold them off for that long, the Rhino will be down there." "GOOD! While you are finishing preparations, Kay wants you to bring more ammo down for the Boom-Cannon" "Yes sir, we'll bring that down as well." "Good, ending transmission" he said and the communication was blocked. He ran back to Kay, who was firing at the enemy like crazy. "They said that they'd be here soon and they'd bring the ammo with the Rhino." "Good, this thing is almost out as well." Kay said, handing the gun back to Drake. "Let me see that Boom-Cannon for just a sec." he said taking the cannon from Kay. Drake reached into another leather pouche and brang out a round looking explosive. He pressed a button on it, making it armed. It started to beep slowly, as Drake loaded it up in the cannon and took aim. He waited for the beeping to get faster. "Drake! Fire it before we get blown to bits!" "Not yet." he said, letting it beep faster. "DRAKE!" "Not yet!" it got faster. "DRAKE, SHOOT THE DAMN THING!" "NOW!" he said, firing the explosive at a mech. It traveled fast and went right into the windshield of that mech as well. Almost as soon as it hit the windshield, it exploded taking the mech's head with it. Just then, a small ship came down. "Yes! They're here!" he yelled. A beam soon transported Drake onto the ship. He ran quickly to the hangar of the ship to find a big mech there, waiting for him. Drake grabbed his helmet and climbed on. He started up the mech and went out of the hangar. Landing, he saw that Kay was already getting ammo from a capsule that the ship dropped as well. They were both ready to cause mass destruction.

I was thinking more about like a Kingdom Hearts kind of battle system, to make it have pretty good freedom. Well, I think that I might start this as an RPG in the Adventure Inn. PS: He's from the modern day, so that he actually IS weaker then all of his decendents. Living in the modern day is going to make him like the weakest thing there. So, that's why he is going to be from the modern day.

IC: Drake watched as Kim and Aria were hurt. He wasn't going to let these guys get away with this. First, he was going to make sure that they wouldn't run like mice. Since the burglar with the knife was unconsious. He whispered in what he thought was Beth's ear,"You and the others distract the last one, I'm going to make sure that they don't get away." Beth's figure nodded and she with some of the others, started to charge the men. Drake went for the unconsious burglar with the knife. "Don't think that you'll be using this, so I'm just going to take it." he said as he grabbed the knife. He went to their black van and shoved the knife into all four of its tires. "There, now not only are all of their tires flat, but using the knife has made it go dull." he said, tossing the knife away from the fight. He looked to see that the other burglar was uncosious. Seems that they took him down pretty easily. He walked up to them. "Is everyone alright?" "No, Aria was cut by the burglar." "Where?" "In the cheek" said Aria. "Let's start getting that wound treated, anyone else?" "Just some bruises" replied Beth. "Well that's good. They sure seemed like amatuers. Surprises me that they weren't all armed with some sort of weapon" "Drake watch out!" yelled Beth. Drake turned to find that one of the burglars got back up. The man struck Drake right across the forehead. Drake fell to the ground. Nothing....but black was seen by Drake. The last thing he remembers, was the feel of stone hit him in the head. Now, all Drake saw, was black. Black, all over.