Dielover

Wow... All thing considered i like it. It is a very original idea. I got one idea from a dream of mine for a story, but mine is more serious, but if you make it big with that idea i would not be surprised ;)

I think the begining plot is good, but the story line moves too quickly. That and it makes little sense. I hope you don't think I am being rude. I have one question. When another one of those lines appear the ones that look like ~*~_______________________________~*~ does that mean it's a differant story or is that just a divider? :confuse2: