Cruelirony518

Thank you, everyone, for replieing with helpful comments! I've begun work on the script so if anyone is curiouse to see how its going then feel free to ask me for my progress. I'll happily accept feedback on where I'm going with it and whether or not a different direction might be better. Comments along those lines. Thank you.

I did the same thing. . .hehe. . . I am acting really confused today. Thank you for the feedback. Actually, your prediction was not to far from the truth. I am planning that for a time he will be completely taken over by his ancient, evil persona. Convienently this occurs just when the Cloud King's powers are needed to fight an omni-potent foe possibly stronger then he. The linguistics (I guess they could be called that. . . .) for the title Cloud King came from me originally considering things like Dragon King, Demon King, Devil King, or Serpent King. These however were boring and over used names. Then, somehow I thought of Thunder King, it was ok but I didn't like it since thunder is harmless (although so are clouds) so I though "What about Lightning King" but that did not sound good so I combined the two with Cloud King (though now that I think about it I could have called him "Storm King".) I also like it because it isn't an expected or immediatley understood name so it will make my readers think a little bit. *the horror* Also clouds are significant because they block out the sun, and the name also might suggest that the Cloud King's origins are not of this world. (Or that world, as the case stands.)

I have begun development on a plot for a manga I would like to write but I'd like some feedback on it first. At the moment I am with out a name for the manga or any of the characters in it, so bare with me please. (Suggestions for those would be appreciated. :animeswea ) The setting I'm still not entirley sure of. I want it to be set in a modern, if not more scientifically advanced world. I have not descided if I want it to be a modern fantasy world. Or one more like our own, that has matured past the existance of dragons, elves and other mythical creatures. Of course, suggestions for this would help. The main character is a highschool student who is just beginning to really seek purpose and meaning in life. He is also trieing to achieve a level of normality, and hoping to settle into a slightly conformist life at last, where he can live in peace. He is kind, intelligent and and strives to do the right thing. He does have a small bully problem at times because he is of a slightly smaller stature then many but he doesn't let that bother him. Recently a new student has joined his class. This student is very peculiar and gives the main character an odd amount of attention. He also has displayed some mysterious subtle talents. One day he tells the main character that in a past life the main character was one of the cruelest, most omni-potent tyrants the world have ever known, called, besides his real name, The Cloud King. After pressing this fact on the main character for a little while the main character descides to humor him. In doing so he learns that during the Cloud King's bloody reign, an order of rebel monks selected seven warriors to whom they gave awsome supernatrual abilities. After an incredible battle (in which one of them was destroyed and her soul banished to another dimension) the Cloud King was defeated. The six remaining warriors put their powers together to cast a spell that made it so should the Cloud King return in another life so shall these six warriors. The new student is one of the six and has come to seek and destory the Cloud King. The main character, beiing of a kind and benevolent nature, is seriously distressed by this information. The new student does not kill the main character because he understands that a change has occured in his soul, although secretly the main character begins to feel the Cloud King's essence taint his mind. (And gradually awakens his terrible powers.) In the mean time, slowly, the other five warriors make themselves known, and most of them attempt to kill the main character, not understanding that he is good. Also, the Cloud King's demon hordes are imerging, and assembling. They sense the end of the world may be near and they seek out their lord to lead them to victory. Whether he wants to or not. That is pretty much it. How does it sound? I'm hoping its original, although it being my idea, I no doubt have my biases. :D I do have a more extensive and intricate plot planned but I figured that this post is already long enough. But still, and example would be that there is a signifigance to the seventh warrior being banished to another dimension. Well anyway, I'm hoping to here what you think!

A very interesting idea. It can go in many directions. It could be a story about a guy who is simply trying to liberate humanity from the "Twisters" or it could meanwhile have this guy also trying to peice together his past and figure out if his memories are really his. . . . . And maybe with in his real past lies the key to defeating the Twisters.

[quote name='ranfan][COLOR=DarkRed]what about a story about a flatulent guy hoo can go through wals cuz hez part[/COLOR][COLOR=Black']DEMON![/COLOR][/quote] Hmmmm. . . . It could work, can you expand on it a little? Any one else who is willing to submit some ideas, please do so. :animesmil

Hello, I am interested in making a mnaga unfortunatley I am blank as far as ideas. The manga I'd like to make would be an action/martial arts story, set in a modern setting or a futuristic one, possibly a fantasy/sci fi setting. I have made attempts at manga in the past but they did not turn out well (due to art work) however I have become a munch better artist and am ready to try again. I'd really appreciate it if you can give me some ideas. Thank you!