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really awesome! sorry, I was a little slow with the last post >.< I love the story though.

OMG! totaly dropped that one on my head. It was awesome, Kakashi dies? *tear* You noted that Ino, Sakura, Kakashi, Shikamaru,and Rock Lee were dead, but the only one you really explained was Kakashi's death. Are you going to explain the others in future chapters? I'd like to see that. Yet again, great work with the personality keeping. I love it when stories do that. :D

Wow. Yeah, I'm guilty of putting in my own charaters. Dreaming to actually be in the anime...or is that just me. Here's my main OC: Name: Kyru Windwaker age:17 hair: balck, waist long. Silver bangs line her face. eyes: ice blue with a dark blue rim around the iris. Personality: Kyru is childish most of the time. She has two main modes 1) bitch 2) blonde. sometimes she goes somewhere in the middle. Kyru is loyal to those close to her and will do anything for their safety. other: Kyru is one of the three WInd sisters (see stories on fanfic for more details. author names: KattKyru and Insane Creator) She is half wolf demon, her mother being the demon. She shares her father with a half cat demon, Katt Riverwind, and a half fox demon, Austi Windwhisper. As a child, before she met Katt and Austi, Kyru was ignored because of her abnormal features. She has a tail and ears of a wolf. She was not excepted by the demons because she is part human and the humans shuned her because she was half demon. Because of this she tries to stay away from people. sorry for writing so much. let me know, though, if you want to know more.

wow, personally I think this is a great story. I don't know much about Naruto so I was impressed by your knowledge of the characters and their personalities. I also like how you knew the names of the weapons and the techniques. I enjoyed it and hope you post more soon. As for rating, I'd say atleast an 8 or 9...but that's me. I really liked how you kept Sasuke's character even when he was in a sort of romance thing with Sakura. I think you did great in keeping the charcters with thier original personalities, unlike most fanfics. TTFN.

Kyru sighed and got up. She wondered where Maius had went. She followed his scent to a tree and saw him sitting against it. "Are you all right?" She asked.

Well; if you do accept me here's my character: Name: Kyru Windwaker race: half- wolf demon. apperance: Hair: Balck with silver bangs lining her face. Eyes: Ice blue, dark blue around her iris. Tail and ears. background: Kyru is in search for someone woh will accept her for who she is. When she was a child, she was thrown from the human city in which she lived in with her mortal, now dead, father. She found the demon tribe that held her mother's home, just to be rejected to. She is unsure of new people but doesn't hold grudges of acts to others. weapon: arm daggers.

(( Can I join? Do you want a character lay out?))

Woot! I give it a 10! Though there were some spelling errors and words that should have been used differently. Also, I think Sessho-Maru's fur was a blueish.

Kyru looked around at the bunch with a smile. "Wow, what a bunch I've become tangled with. Hey, Kagome right, can you do that sit thing again?" Kyru asked with sarcasim. Her wolf ears twitched as the wind picked up. She looked around agin and then to the trees behind her. Deciding there was nothing better to do, she sat at the base of a tall tree and glanced at her new group. "So, I know mabey three of you...but what about those two?" Kyru asked gestering to the monk and demon slayer.

I'll play, I can barely read your writing though. Uh....I guess this is the part where I describe my character?

"Yes, quiet lovely. I'm Kyru Windwalker, as you can see I'm a wolf demon." Kyru said looking around at the group. "I was in a different time zone before, but I was brought back here. I to, intend to fix something. Is that good enough?" Kyru asked.

"Me?" Kyru asked looking at the group. She looked at Inu-Yasha. "Mabey." she said slowly.

Kyru screeched to a hault a she smelled a scent of a dog demon. She searched around and found a young girl, a female, and a man with silver hair.She studied them unsure of what to do. Finally decideing she asked "Who are you?" *ok it was short but hey it's all I could think at the time.*

Name:Iris"Death"Kamir age:21(looks 19) gender:female clan:Toreador(inconnu) Physical discription:Black hair down to her knees with various small braids in the front.Bangs hovering over her amber eyes and thick long lashes.A white hankercheif on her head.She wears a tight sleevless black shirt and a pair of old jeans with the knee cut out.Through the holes you see a different pair of tights every so often.Her black boots have belt straps and the tatoo over her breasts show the beginings of a rose.on the other side of her neck is scar of what is obviously shown as a bite mark. Her cocasian skin glows heathily as if she was still alive. -Mental discription:She is very outspoken and has a tendancy of getting very physical.She has a habbit of draining the blood of only those who won't feel it(sleeping,drunk,ect.)She is very outspoken and ambitious.After being embraced she had a downfall of her musical career.Since then you can find her at any late-night dinner theatre or rave. Physical:2 Mental:2 Social:4 Phychic: 3

Kyru Windwaker watched in horror as she saw her classmate dissapear."What the hell?!"Kyru pressed herself against the wall to hear and see the criminal.Her footing fell and she hit the floor making a loud thump.She looked around to see the criminal who had warped the other kids,do the exact same thing."Your not taking me back!I escaped once,I'll do it again!"Her silver bangs hung over her ice ble eyes.The blue rims were shining through jet-black hair.Ears and a tail popped out as her normal girl apearance became a dilusion.Before she could brake out her rapier from her backpack she was wisked away from her normal standards and took back to her original time period. She looked around and cursed under her breath."I'll go visit my good friend,Inu-yasha."She chuckled and jumped over the ravine."I have to have that damn amulet!"