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Snow pounded heavily on the floor of the kids home planet. Surounded by a black cloak he moved through the snow crunching noises every tim ehe stepped. He didn't know what he was doing here. All he knew was his name and how to use the blade strapped to his back. Since the extreme winter, he needed money and so he put himself up as a bounty hunter or a mercenary. Today's job was to hunt someone who had killed dozens. He looked down at the map and then up at the snowy plains. "Next towns getting close..." he murmured to himself. About a half an hour later he set first footsteps into the town. He looked through the book he had full of wanted posters. He moved under shelter and pocketed the book and removing his hood. He grabbed the hilt of the blade at his back. This was a normal day for Kre.

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" Ow" Hikari said. Her body was frozen stiff. She tried to look up, her head stiffly went up. She looked at the wall ajacent to her. "What's happening to me?" She mumbled to herself. OOC: Sorry its short I had to do it on my PSP >.

Hikari was now back to relaxing in the chair again and was looking kind of depressed. She was pretty bored and felt kind of lonly since no one had talked to her or came to sit with her. She got up and went over to the food table and grabbed a plate of chips. Going back to her seat she nibbbled on them slowly and she took forever just to finish one. After she got up and poured herself a glass of water from a pitcher and went outside to see the backyard. She looked out into the grassy lawn finished with a pool, some trees, and woods in the back to top it off. She walked over to the pool and checked the thermameter(sp?). "Might have to go swimming soon..." She said to herself. She turned around and some people opened the door and walked out. She casually walked back in and finished her cup of water and threw out the paper cup and sat back down on the chair.

Hikari pulled up onto the driveway of Drou's house. She parked her bike and dropped it on the lawn. More people were coming up now, in fact a whole group of them. She stepped up onto the porch after everyone was inside and she knocked on the door. The the Drou guy answered the door and motioned for her to come in. "Take a seat if you'd like" he said. She went over to one of the walls and plopped down in it. She looked around at the group of people the party had so far. She looked around at all of the decorations and food and other wierd things Drou had set up. She went up and got some food cause she had a light breakfast and went back to the armless wooden chair. She looked at her cell phone. "Hmm.....6:15 a.m., I woke up that early?" She said to herself. She relaxed more in the chair and sighed. She notice some people sit down in the chairs next to hers. She noticed other people talking to each other and looked for [U]some[/U ]of the people she knew. OOC: Sorry for short post >.

Hikari stiffly got out of bed. It was the second week of her being in the town and to tell you the truth she didn't much like it. She stretched and stood up. "Nice day, for a party" She mumbled to herself. She spied a blur out the window. Kredion and another girl zoomed by. and sh elooked a little puzzled, he stopped and waved. "HEY HIKARI" He yelled out. Hikari screamed and dropped to the ground. She peeked her head out the window "PEEPING TOM!" She pointed at him and he looked confused and sped off again. She threw on some clothes and ran downstairs. Grabbed a piece of toast that just sprawled up from the toaster which had belonged to her older sister, who yelled at her as she ran out the door. Ran to the side of the house and hopped on her bike and started speeding off to the location while eating a piece of toast.

Name: Kaneda Hikari Age: 15 Gender: Female Description: [URL=http://www.discountanimedvd.com/dvd_images/19739.jpg]Hikari[/URL] ( In like modern say clothes of course and is the red haired one >.

God Body Name ? Suzu Pronunciation ? Sue- Zoo God of ? intelligence and level? o.0 Age appearance ? 16 Sex ? male Race ? Half saiyan half WTF? Height ? 5 ft. 6 Weight ?180 Hair color ? From being transformed into a god his hair stays pink tipped purple Hair style ?All stands up except for one bang that goes over his right eye. Eyes? eye color Body ? Medium Skin Tone ? White Clothes ? A white tunic with sleeves form the elbows down. Distinguished marks ? 'X' scar on his left cheek for some time. Weapons ?I huge arse 12 foot Great Sword Special powers ? Can swing his sword with ease, he's the only one who can and The Unknown Handicaps ? Most are stronger than him ;-; Transformations ? SS1 SS2 SS3 SS4 and Unknown Transformation Special moves ? Sword of Light- A second sword of light appears into his hand Cure- heals a wound. Paralyzing blow- If hit directly, paralyzes that limb. Bio ? When he was blown away form the others he noticed a difference. He didn't feel the same power. He has been living on his home planet with the villagers who don't recongnize him. Mortal Body Name ? Kre Pronunciation ? Krey Age appearance ? 12 Sex ? Male Race ? Half Saiyan half WTF? Height ? 4 ft. 6 Weight ? 75 Hair color ? Brown Hair style ? A mop that just points down. Eyes? Grey Body ? Kind of frail but his speed makes up for it. Skin Tone ? White Clothes ? Same as the god clothing except a few sizes smaller xD Distinguished marks ? The same 'X' shaped scar.stuff here that doesn?t fit into any of the other categories, like having other body parts or lack of body parts Weapons ? The great sword, but takes effort to swing as he is only 12 Special powers ? The Unknown. Handicaps ? He isn't that strong, or tall. Transformations ? SS1 SS2 and a weak form of the Unknown Special moves ? Read above, except for cure.

I find this a really nice story. One thing I do like about it is that the first chapter is a lot like Samurai X. It's very detailed and another reason I like it is because I'm into that kind of stuff. Any way overall you story is nicely done. But I do have to agree on when you introduced Shizuka.

Rin was walking around the Soul Society, just doing her normal patrol. She hated the streets, they were so confusing after all. She constantly held onto the Zanpakutoh at her waist. She grinned with happiness as she rounded one of the towers and back into the maze of streets. As she finished her patrol she rounded her way into the training dojo. She whipped her sword from the sheath and started doing some training excersises. "Hey you!" Some boy from across the room yelled at Rin. She looked at him puzzled and stopped mid-swing. "Yes?" "Would you like to spar?" He asked"Sure" She got into a ready stance and he followed. She charged and he followed as well. He swung down vertically she dodged. She swung her bar of steel in a silver arc horizontally. He crouched dodging it and countering with ans upward slash. One thing he didn't see coming was Rin flipping over him and putting her blade to his neck. "I win" She said as she smiled.

Name: Rin Age: 15 Group: Shinigami - The keepers of balance and peace in the world. Also known as soul reapers or grim reapers. This group has a very organized system of captains and ranking to keep order through out there world and ours. All members that are Shinigami have a Zanpaktou the source of much of there power. Rank: 3rd Seat in 13th Company Style: Zanpakutoh Sword name: Miya Shikai: Show the Night, Miya! Bankai: Not there yet but is getting closer Destructive Magic: Basic. Demon Magic: Basic Biography/Origin: Rin was born like any Soul in the Soul Society. When she was 8 years old she decided she wanted to becoma a Shinigami. When she was 13 she entered the Shinigami Academy. By the time she was 14 she had made a successful student and had a chance of being accepted into the 13 Divisions. A week before she turned 15 she was accepted into 13th Company and sat at 5th seat. In the month following she had made herself a 4th seat and had been practicing with her Shikai daily. In another month she was brought to 3rd seat. This is when the present takes place. Personality: A friendly and loving person. She acts humurous(sp) around others and caring around her friends. In battle she is focused and doesn't give up which makes her kind of stubborn. Description of Looks/ Picture: [URL=http://www.animecubed.com/animegirls/825.jpg.shtml]Rin[/URL]

Seth was beginning to be assualted by the oncoming Dusk Nobodies. Cutting one in half it dissapated(sp?). One attacked him from behind he turned right in time to have the attack glance off his Keyblade and nick his upper arm. He was now back to back with Sora. He gave him a glance to crouch for a sec. Sora looked puzzled but did it anyway. Seth rolled across Sora's back sweeping up about 3 Nobodies. "Winged Angel!" Suddenly two Keyblades appeared in his hands. Running right into a crowd of them he began attacking. His two Keyblades flashed with each swing. "One, Two, Three, Four,Five,Six,Seven,Eight,Nine,Ten!" He said each number with one attack. As the attack finished one came up with a stab motion he dodged it with ease. It then brought the attack to make a slicing motion its claw arm thing cut into his side. He swung down onto its head killing it. He then looked back at where Sora, Riku,Kairi, and the two other people were.

Whats an OWA? o.0

[COLOR=DeepSkyBlue] Before Riku had stepped in Sora and Seth were [B]trying[/B] to fend off Xemnas. In the process Seth had been injured two,and almost three times. On th ebeach again he was recalling the memories. It all started when Sora attacked Xemnas and Seth jumped over him trying to attack but was thrown back. Sora was then thrown back and Seth attacked again he did three attacks and all of them were parries going for a fourth he spun and was cut across the thigh. On his way down Xemnas went for a fatal attack at his stomach, but only ended up cutting his shirt. As he hit the sand Xemnas brought another attack at him, he had just enough time to block it. Xemnas hit his hand with the side of his Keyblade. Yelling with pain the Keyblade flew from his hands. Xemnas brought another one down. Seth rolled as the attack came down but didn't make it in time for his shoulder was cut open. Just as this happened Riku stood back up. [I]" Sora,your friend's back"[/I][/COLOR]

I have to say this series was great. I finished it only a few days ago( Yes I did a Rurouni's Anime Power Hour x.x) and I have to say this is one of my favorites. The violence did die down after episode one but came back around ep 10. The way the artist draws the characters makes them look so cute but dangerous. Out of all the character I'd have to say Nana is my favorite just because of the way she acts. The series also has some very humorous moments. Now, let's talk about the OAV. If you watched it closely it was majorly about Nana trying to work better with "Lucy-san" or in this case Nyuu. The OAV is pretty humurous at the beginning. By the end you even learn a little more abou tLucy's past :3

[quote name='Doublehex']I don't mean to sound rude, but with KW's permission, I think we should have Jokopoko delete ALL of Deathseye and Keyblade Splitter's posts because they are not only utter crap, but are totally messing up this otherwise finely crafted story that KW had formed for us.[/quote] I agree with with Doublehex they're makin the story confusin x.x

[COLOR=Blue] Falling.... Falling... Seth looked around as he flew down he reached his legs down to feel for fotting, none. He looked around frantickly(sp?). He grasped the handle of the Keyblade in his hands. It burned, the tip felt like it was on fire. He closed his eyes trying to relax. Still falling he began to worry. "One Winged Angel!!!" He yelled. Next he knew he was falling in fron tof an island, a tropical island. The beach was painted little specks of people, a speck of light in the mountains signaled there was a person there too. [I]Splash![/I] He hit the ocean hard. Floating on his back. He eventually felt th epressure of sand against his firm back. He looked up to see two kids. One who looked exactly like him and a brown haired kid. "R-Riku! Look! That kid ljust washed up on shore!!"Yelled Brown-Spike "He even has a Keyblade!" EDIT: Ok I edited the appaerance X3[/COLOR]

Name : Seth Age: 14 Side: Sorry KW but Light Story: He is a kid from a different time(Not the same as Alex's).. Anyway, in his time a Keyblade was rare and there was only One. This person was called the "Unjustified Light" . The Keyblade picked Seth as its owner and granted him the Keyblade Winged Angel.(Yes I know its not a real Keyblade but I'm getting to it x.x). Seth vanquished Heartless all over the world. But they just kept coming and he was getting tired of it. Hearing the news of someone else with a Keyblade destroying towns, plunging cities, burning villages. Seth sought this man out. He winded up finding him in the dessert. The man Introducing himself as "Destroyer of Darkness" began to fight with the "Unjustfied Light". The sound of Keyblade up against Keyblade could be heard from all over the world. In an attempt to finish the fight The Dark One came in fast knocking Seth's Keyblade out of his hands. He jumped at him bringing the Keyblade onto what looked like his head. Instead a Metal Bar with a grip and Keylock at the end was there. His Keyblade had returned to his hand "Y-You can call on you Keyblade at will?! How?!?" The Darkness yelled being destroyed. But it wasn't over the second KEyblade flew into the first fursting into reddish sparkles "The One Winged Angel" Seth muttered. A voice was then heard. [I]You have defeated your Darkness, for that we grant you One Winged Angel[/I] The ground started crackling and breaking and it shattered. Falling, Seth called out the name of his Keyblade. Next thing he knew he plunged into the ocean by Destiny Islands. Floating,,, Personaility: A friendly person, he's a comedian as well. When it comes to battle he's serious though and never flees no matter the odds. It also makes him stubborn when he goes after something he doesn't stop till he has it. Weapon:[URL=http://www.kingdomhearts.be/images/media/keyblade1.jpg]One Winged Angel[/URL] Magic/ Ablities Sense- He is able to sense a person health and when they are going to tire or fall unconsious Winged Angel- The two Keyblades split apart and he dual wield them for 10 consecutive attacks that are unblockable. Dodge Roll- Easier than a parry he rolls to the side, in front, or back to avoid an attack. Picture:[IMG]http://www.absoluteanime.com/rave_master/haru.jpg[/IMG] OOC: Hope I didn't over do it n.n' OOC: Edited Appearance. OoC: Edited story a bit. Hope its ok n.n'

Think about this. It took Al's WHOLE body AND Ed's arm if you tried you dbe totally sucked up into the void so my answer is no.

I'll put a fight up for Roxas. :> Name: Roxas. Age: 16 Side: Light History: Roxas is the nobody of Sora notice if you take the "X" out of Roxas and scramble the words you make out Sora. At first Roxas wasgetting horrible dreams. They frightned him and he kept getting curious why they were happening. Later did he know that that process was Sora wakening up. Once he found in the Mansion a secret passage to a lab where he found the resting body of Sora. Roxas and Sora then became one and took the form of Sora. But before all of that Roxas was Number XIII in Organization XIII. He left the organization and has two small quarrels with Riku. Now for th eWar Roxas has come out in his own body. Personality: Roxas acts a lot like Sora. He friendly and always there for his friends. He seems to lik eif not be in love with Namine or Kairi's counter-part. He's serious in battle and isn't th etype to run away. Weapon: Sora having taken the Oblivion now leaves Roxas only with the[URL=http://www.khinsider.com/gallery/data/media/22/oathkeeper.gif]Oathkeeper[/URL] Magic Abilities: Thunder: Roxas points the keyblade tip up in the air and Lightning shocks a group of enemies from below. Key of Destiny: Roxas's ultimate move where he calls on a black version of the Oathkeeper along with th eorginal to dual wield for some time. Blizzard: Roxas points his Keyblade at and enemy and ice sprouts forth toawrds the opponent freezing them. Picture:[IMG]http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/9452/roxasen2.png[/IMG]

[B]Kokiri Swordsman[/B] Name: Jas Gender: Male Age: 14 Race: Kokiri Appearance:[URL=http://ernesto.chez-alice.fr/thomas/link_h9.jpg]Jas[/URL] He wears green hakamaish pants and no hat so his blonde hair points straight down. Plus he has no shield. He is 4 feet 9 inches tall and weighs 74 pounds. Personality: He's a friendly person and likes talking to people. Making new friends is what he likes doing. He's sarcastic and has a humurous attitude and is hardly serious about anything. When battle starts that's what he conncentrates on the most. And he doesn't like most of the tecnology so he uses a blade. Abilities/Items: His one ability is: [I]Vorpal Slash[/I] : Magic type energy gathers around the sword and he jumps up and brings the blade to the ground smashing a deep crack into it. Weapon: A 4ft sword almost as tall as him. That's pretty heavy for him so he wields it as a two handed Claymore. [URL=http://tbp.smith.dropbear.id.au/tiki/img/wiki_up/Claymore.jpg?nocache=1]Pic[/URL] Background: Jas was born any normal Kokiri and acted like a normal Kokiri. He met up with his guardian fairy Teltal. They became best friends together. The did everything together. Went to the Deku Tree when he was alive, play outside, go to the shop. Everything. One day when Jas was around 10 he wanted to leave the forest and adventure. So he waved good-bye to his friends and left. Only equipped with a Deku shield he traveled to the market and got his sword. Still though every so often he goes back to the forest and visits. OOC: Hope it's ok so far ^.^

Name: Jas Age: 17 Gender: Male Blood type: O Negative Physical Appearance: [URL=http://www.ff7-2.de/cloud_05.jpg]Jas[/URL] But wears a grey and green cloakbeing hooded most of th etime. Special Ability: He's trained in stealth so using his cloak he can turn "invisable" to most people. Weapon: The sword in the pic and a 9mm Handgun for job that are out of sword range ( Also comes with silencer) Personality: Calm, quiet, and mysterious are some of his qualities. He doesn't befriend most people and likes staying to himself most of the time. Biography: Jas was born somewhere around NYC. He acted like a normal kid wanting to go outside and mess around with friends. His dad was part of the S.W.A.T. team and that's where he inheirted his 9mm when he was 15. He found his sword a year later in his attic locked away. Then mysteriously his dad vanished. His mom heart broken decided to leave. He was all alone and has been living like that till present day. Character Snippet: December 20, 2007 7:42 PM 5th Avenue New York City,New York Jas had been out for a walk. He stared up at the starless night. It was like an empty black space just coming right at him. He sighed a sigh of relief. "How boring.." He said to himself as he kicked a rock forward. He rounded a corner and a shadowy figure came at him. As he got closer it started hissing. He looked up and the face he saw he knew too well. His father? But something was different. The being started coming at him and he knew form the past that his dad bested him in hand to hand combat. The creature grabbed his wrist, pushed his shoulder, and let him trip over his feet. [I]Arghh, The basics of CQC[/I] Jas thought. He got up and his dad grabbed his right arm again. He reached into his cloak and pulled a hand gun from it. "Remember this?" Jas asked the creature that was once his father. It wouldn't let go of his arm. Five seconds later Jas blew a hole the size of a golfball into the creatures head. Blood sprayed forth and stained the brick wall behind it. Jas walked away in horror of what he had seen and what he had done.

Suzu awoke. His torso and arms bandaged form the fight earlier. He layed back down and sighed. "You can't beat him" A voice from across the room spit out. "What?" Suzu sighed. "Your moves, they're good, but you can't beat him with those" Suzu looked shocked but relaxed again "For the next ten days, I'm putting you through hell!" OOC: Sorry about short post but ..... You get it -,-

Well, let's see. I'm good with banners and other images. I'm not too bad at writing stories or backgrounds either but I can't make spritesor anything like that so... Yea..

Name: Kosuke Ochira Birthdate: 9/22/2007 Gender: Male Username: Ledah Appearance:[URL=http://sorasdomain.net/marc/tgs/cloud.jpg]Kosuke[/URL] Faction: Light Class: Fighter Weapon: [URL=http://www.n-p-s.net/image/iaito/iai-muramasa-01.JPG]Muramasa[/URL]The blade known as ThunderWeaver. Very long at least 4-6 feet in length giving almost perfect space to cut. It's light weight for a sword that size so it's pretty flexible giving the weilder speed with the sword. Known Spells: Dragon Hammer Strike- Where he jumps up and brings the blade down with immense strenght and speed causeing a deep cut into the opponent. Holy Strike-Where Light magic is enfused within the weapon and is used to attack if it's an undead enemy it's vanquished other than that it does more damage than a normal attack. Heal- Heals a selected players wounds a little and his own wounds a little more. Stops bleeding and heals the wound forming it into a scar. Skill Level: Has been playing for 3/4 of a year. EDIT: Alright, I added some more detail to the spells