I might join. I'm not sure what to ask, though. I'll ask some questions when I think of some.
I agree with this person, too. ^^;
[QUOTE=Chikara Kokoro]It's nearly impossible for anyone to give real feedback on this with so little to go off of.
Write the story. Make it not take place in Japan. Change the title accordingly.
That's all I can say. I would like to say more, possibly positive, things, but how can I when you aren't even willing to write up information on the manga idea before you try to start a topic about it?[/QUOTE]