Hyptosis

[img]http://www.lorestrome.com/weekly/albums/userpics/10001/sokka.jpg[/img] Sketch of Sokka, took about an hour. Also recorded it! [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U2KTB9fmkUU[/url] [INDENT][SIZE=1][COLOR=DarkRed][B]Hyptosis[/B], how about some indication as to why you posted this? Are you looking for feedback, or suggestions for improving it? You need to clarify this since simply posting artwork without a clear reason will result in the thread being closed. ~indifference[/COLOR][/SIZE][/INDENT]

Thank you! ^_^ Yeah, it might look odd, I'll touch it up and see what I can do. =] ---------------------- I made some changes, removed the border too, think it was crowding the image. [INDENT][SIZE=1][COLOR=DarkRed]Another thing to keep in mind [B]Hyptosis[/B], if you wish to add something use the edit button located in the lower right hand corner of your post instead of double posting. ~indifference[/COLOR][/SIZE][/INDENT]

[URL=http://www.lorestrome.com/weekly/albums/userpics/10001/cinnacat_rundle.jpg]Picture[/URL] Took about 6 hours form start to finish. This is Cinnacat and Rundle stealing an egg from this nasty lizard guy. Dunno. =] I hope to someday have enouhg free time to do something with these characters. Also, here is a video of the making, although it didn't turn out very clear after the save. Don't know why. [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZbAuuZhcatM[/url] Youtube also seems to have screwed the video up, not sure what happened but the music is off and parts of the video are missing. Good fun! I've uploaded it several time and each time after it is uploaded it is different, so i have no clue what youtube is doing to the video to mess it up. Also, here are the first images I'd ever drawn of these characters. [URL=http://www.lorestrome.com/weekly/albums/userpics/10001/rundle.jpg]Image one[/URL] [URL=http://www.lorestrome.com/weekly/albums/userpics/10001/cinna.jpg]Image two[/URL] [INDENT][SIZE=1][COLOR=DarkRed][B]Hyptosis[/B], I changed your images to a link. For future reference, when posting a large picture, especially when it stretches the layout of OtakuBoards, please use a link instead. Thanks. ~indifference[/COLOR][/SIZE][/INDENT]

Here are a few newer pages. ^_^ [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa03p03.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa03p04.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa02p17.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa02p19.jpg[/img]

Just a little update ^_^ [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa02p07.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa02p08.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa02p09.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa02p10.jpg[/img] There are tons of other pages, but didn't want to spam. ^_^

Just a little update. ^_^ [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa02p06.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa02p07.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa02p08.jpg[/img]

[QUOTE=bluemarble]Well so far I'm really interested the things I would fix are the skin colors? What's up with that? Is there a good reason they're all grayish? At first I had thought they were zombies. Second I would work on your figures it would help alot more. The comic is paced really well, I love the way you drew the enviroment in the second to last page first panel! Work on your consistancy aswell, there are problems with characters in relation to their enviorment sometimes and other times it's not there. The figures also look good sometimes style wise but other times we can see that you made a mistake that wasn't meant to be there. You're great. Keeping doing what you're doing.[/QUOTE] Well, I wanted the characters to be sort of pale. I've added more color to them since these pages htough, no one seemed to care for the skin color. As for the figures, yes, I just hope to get better at it by the end of this thing. =] Here are a few newer pages if anyone is interested. [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa02p01.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa02p04.jpg[/img] The rest of the pages are uploaded on the site if you're at all interested. I'd love to know what you guys think. ^_^ Thanks, stay cool everyone. =D

[img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p11.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p12.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p13.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p14.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p15.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p16.jpg[/img] Thanks for looking guys. Is there anything I could do to make the comic more interesting? As it is I get a few thousand pages hits a day, and tripple that on update days. But I'd still like to make it better, you know? I'm working on becoming a better artist, but that is only half the battle imo. Thanks, have good days. =D

Thanks monk. That means a lot to me, I hope to finish it in the next few months, but we'll have to see.

Thanks so much. My host is fourbucks.net They're cheap and fairly reliable. Only goes down two or three times a year in the past three or four years.

Should I have posted this under Art Studio? I wasn't sure since these pages are essentially finished. Sorry if this is the wrong forum.

[size=5][align=center][url=http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/home.htm]Homepage[/url][/size] [size=3][url=http://www.lorestrome.com/forum/index.php]Forums[/url][/align][/size] I'd love to know what you guys think of the comic. Thanks for looking. I'm going to update once a week, on monday from here until I finish the first story. It has been relaly hard work. Crits are welcome, but regardless I'd love to just know what you think about it in general. Thanks. =] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p05.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p06.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p07.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p08.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p09.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/therealmsofaegis/loa01p10.jpg[/img] There is more at the home page if you're interested. Thanks again guys. =]

Thanks man. =]

Thanks a million guys. I'll work on the comic some more and try to make it better. =]

Well I won't be doing all of that, no =] It'll be in color, and made like this because I read left to right. =] The only Manga I read is blade of the immortal honestly and the american version reads like an american comic. Thanks and have fun. =P

I don't know if I'll have time to continue much more I would very much like too but I'm still waiting to see what people say. Also, isn't this already a manga? Or are you referring to it being in color or something? Isn't manga basically a comic, or 'funny pictures' or sometihng like that? Anyway, thanks guys. =] I don't know when I'll have new pages, maybe soon if I get caught up on my work.

Thanks, but i'm not sure how much more i'll be doing. If enough people like it i might keep going on it, or if someone is interested in putting it to print, we'll have to just see I suppose. Thanks a million for the kind words. =] EDIT: I repaired some pages, page 4 espeically, thanks for looknig guys. =] Hope it reads better now. [color=darkblue][size=1][b]In the future, please use the Edit button to add to your posts, as souble-posting isn't allowed on OB. Thanks. ^^ -Lady K[/color][/size][/b]

Thanks so much guys. =] This is all I plan to do, and since I'm starting a new job soon I'll have even less time for personal art. But it was fun to play with, and hope it doesn't totally bore all of you. =] If I do somehow find time in the future I might pick this back up, in any event, let me know how you feel about it. [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/weekly/albums/userpics/10001/loa01p01.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/weekly/albums/userpics/10001/loa01p02.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/weekly/albums/userpics/10001/loa01p03.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/weekly/albums/userpics/10001/loa01p04.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/weekly/albums/userpics/10001/loa01p05.jpg[/img]

Thanks guys. I don't have plans fo rit at all, and really there is little story. This is it in fact. The characters have blue hair because when their race was created, their god favored blue, and tied them closely with that color, and water, which is why they are called Undine. But meh, I personally don't usually do this kind of art, so I've no doubts stuff looks off, none of it was on purpose that I know of. This is really my first attempt at 'anime' art of any kind. Thanks for the awesome feedback guys. I spent about 6 hours on each page, so I'm sure there is more than enough room for improovement. If I did get good at it I wouldn't mind trying to get it published.

This is just a small comic i was thinking about making. I'd love to know what you guys think. I don't know much about manga's honestly so it'd be a huge help, thanks =] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/weekly/albums/userpics/10001/loa01p01.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.lorestrome.com/weekly/albums/userpics/10001/loa01p02.jpg[/img]