O' Forgotten

[SIZE=3]Please Comment.[/SIZE] [B]The Tempest[/B] This ocean has overtaken me A new life begins on this ship that is my heart Set sail for a horizon drenched in flames Yet show no fear And in these times of torture Hold up your hands in hope Break apart the chains that bind you to this despair Opening your eyes, soaking in what is before you Let's ride through this storm prepared for the worst Maybe one day we will reach the shore Always know that I will return to you Before this is over we shall know what it is to love again Now gaze upon what I have placed in front of you Take all you can, ask no questions All that is left is you, me, and the rest of the world Let's conqure the seas Take ease in knowing that I'll be here Take comfort in the trust we share Always know that I will return to you Before this is over we shall know what it is to love again Unleash what you hold Unleash everything that you've been told Unleash these emotions that you keep within Unleash it upon me once again Always know that I will return to you Before this is over we shall know what it is to love again Until we reach our destination, know this: A seige shall befall this vessel Can we stay afloat? Will we make it to daybreak? Grab this wheel and guide us to oblivion I'll navigate this immaculate tempest Hold up your hands in hope Hold up your hands Always know that I will return to you Before this is over we shall know what it is to love again

We speak of my life What shall I do? I'll be here If home is where the heart is. Well then home is nowhere These walls confine my desires Constrict my lust of escape I need you with me I need you to aid this journey to hell Abandon All Hope, Ye Who Enter Dante said it best I'm way ahead of him My hope was shattered long ago And how we missed this once again I'll never know These walls confine my desires Constrict my lust of escape I need you with me I need you to aid this journey to hell I'll break this mirror Maybe lady luck will run my way These walls confine my desires Constrict my lust of escape I need you with me I need you to aid this journey to hell Something tells me it's all over for me...

[CENTER]Here are two songs that I wrote today. They have no rhyme scheme, so bear with me. [B]Untitled[/B] She sits by her window, gazing out into the world She knows not what he sees in her He lays on his bed, delved in strenuous thoughts He knows not what she sees in him Now the two become inseperable A love known by no other She can't see the beauty she holds He strives to make it known to the world The boy brushes paint over a blank canvas His outlet of emotion Her face never leaving his heart This canvas no longer empty It bares his endless love for her The girl moves a pen across her notebook Words slowly appearing in the form of his name She notices a picture on her dresser Eyes piercing her own from this portrait of her love These two Seemingly worlds apart Unknowing of the others devotion Can they ever realize what they hold? Do they see? The girl on her windowsil The boy on his bed Nothing but opportunity between them One day they will see One day they will join And this day it shall be known ++++++++++++++++++++++ [B]Victim[/B] I love to see those eyes filled with torment from the mirror She flees this scene of a personal crime Only to find she's running from nothing And now she closes her eyes (close your eyes) Realizes theres no turning back (no turning back) Before she hits the ground Her beliefs are shattered under the weight of this pain Her desires befallen a cloud of fear Shrouded by this unneverving feeling Do we all get justice in the end? Not on this night, not by her death And now I close her eyes (close your eyes) Realize she couldnt't turn back (no turning back) Until she hits the ground I watch helplessly as she fades away Her beautiful lie becoming her only safe haven Her fall from grace proven deadly And now she closes her eyes (close your eyes) Realizes theres no turning back (no turning back) Before she hits the ground Her beliefs are shattered under the weight of this pain My eyes tearful at this horrible sight An angel once proud, now gone She lost all her strength in that one moment Now she will never return to this world again Her beautiful lie becoming her only safe haven Her fall from grace proven deadly [/CENTER]

Hey guys. I was wondering if anyone else is in a band. If so. What kind of music do you play, what do you do in the band, what's the name of your band, and maybe some lyrics to one of your songs. Well, my band, [B]Blood Red Grace[/B], is a hardcore band. Some of our influences are Killswitch Engage, As I Lay Dying, Norma Jean, and the like. I am the vox. We currently have 3 original songs done. Here are the lyrics to our newest song. Serenade Of The Fallen The sun rises after a bloodbath A new revolution becoming the new regime We can only watch as we become taken over An invocation that summons the angel The serenade of the fallen The siren song of the underground My voice resides on these mountaintops An avalanche of all you know and love I shall bring to you all you seek Shattering it before your eyes How does it feel to become souless? Devoid of all emotion and passion? The time has come to destroy you again and again Burning the reason for you to stay You finally return home only to find Your home set aflame by our armies of your dead The serenade of the fallen The siren song of the underground My voice resides on these mountaintops An avalanche of all you know and love Shatter You will know our wrath Shatter You shall know our pain Shatter You shall know our desire Shatter You shall know our bloodlust The time has come to destroy you again and again Burning the reason for you to stay Break!

Actually i'd like it to be like a silhouette of either white or black. And yes, the more dramatic the better.

Hi there. I was wondering if someone would be able to make a logo/banner for my band, [B]Blood Red Grace[/B]. I would like it to feature a deep red and black color scheme with a fully white or fully black angel in the background. The text would just say "Blood Red Grace" in white or whatever color could go better with the rest of the logo. Thanks! [I][B]+ Jake +[/B] [/I]

Hi there guys. I was wondering if anyone could help me out with a banner and avatar. I was looking for someone to take this image and make it all black and white, except for the eyes. I'd also like some text in the bottom left corner in a cursive-ish font that says, "Lonely Eyes Watching..." For the avatar, I was looking for the eyes from the above banner, and "O|F" somewhere. Thanks again! [IMG]http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e317/ToTheirGraves/eyes.png[/IMG]

Here is another poem that I wrote today. Hope you enjoy. Happy Valentine's Day, Love And in these eyes I will know the truth Revealed to me in a blanket of bullets The final stroke from the pen The final breath from my lungs All goes black except for the light before me Now you bring me back Before you say "I love you" These tears of crimson tears fall faster than you think My valentine became my killer My valentine became my killer Bring me from this mercy, oh valentine Absolution lies in your arms I turn to face you in this black night Only to be met by your trigger

Hah, thanks. I'm flattered. And yes, you were spot on with the analysis. I'll probably have more up on here soon. Thanks again for the comment.

This is my first poem on OB. I hope you guys like it. Reply with some comments for changes if you see some that are needed. [B]"Watch As We Fall Apart"[/B] Tonight will be the final departure Of a love once lost upon the mountain Now as we decend into the ashes of what was lost so long ago My eyes closed tight upon the impact of sanity Everything we ever wanted to become All the times we spent in this unholy deadlock This black vice lingers over my head A new requiem for this dreaming soul A new song for the masses of passing wandering men A turn of the page of the book of redemption Now I shall watch as the two of us become broken Shards of the love we once shared upon this snow-capped mountaintop Dropping faster and faster as the tears begin to shed A branding of the eyes of the bystanders Now as they stare I become entombed