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  1. I can't pretend to be a fan of Spongebob since I haven't seen it in like 4 years, but I can definitely say I'm a D_W fan, so I'll be sure to look out for this one. I like that some of the characters seem as though they may have retained the member's personality at least somewhat, as trying to put OB names on already made characters has been shown to cause some problems in past stories such as Otaku Fiction... I can't wait to see how it goes.
  2. I've noticed that plenty of sigs, such as my own, offer links to threads created by the user. Sometimes they ay have their myO or mySpace as well. Recently several members have begon placing their RP characters in their sigs as well. So here's my question -- does it work? If you see someone's story, RP, or thread in their sig, do you check it out? Personally, I tend to look at them and if the title doesn't catch my eye I usually loose interest. I don't do many RPs, but I do usually click on the stories people put in their sig and check em out. I'm guessing that mine has worked cuz while there aren't many comments, its got live 400 some views. So tell us OB -- do you pay attention to these things or not?
  3. Posting in this thread feels so weird... cuz you know you've lost... and yet you're posting and stuff... it just feels weird...
  4. i lose quite frequntly at this... Hm... I just noticed that 'lose' has the 'oo' sound despite having only one o. i hate the English language.
  5. I can loose just by thinking? Well hell, if I'd known that I'd already lost, I'da posted earlier.
  6. i did it twice, once with ending tracks and once with beginning. No repeating bands. [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue][B]FIRST:[/B] New World (Acoustic Version) - .hack//LEGEND OF THE TWILIGHT OST Death of a Martian - Red hot chili Peppers City Hall - Tenacious D Shuggah - System of a Down She's In Parties - Bauhaus Prosthetic Head - Green Day Left Hand suzuki Method - Gorillaz Beware The Little People With Terrible Visions - Bad Acid Trip Ride On Shooting Star - the Pillows I Don't Want To Go Back Empty handed - Serart Rainbow Cruise - Taizo Takemoto (SSBM ST) The Willing Well IV - The Final Cut - Coheed And Cambria The Summer Of Guns - Amen Jeffery Are You listening? - Axis of Justice Third Eye - Tool[/COLOR] What's funy about that one is that I like pretty much all of those bands, but those are some of my least favorite of their songs XD. Some of my favorites made it in there... I could honestly care less about Axis of Justice, bauhaus, .hack, or SSBM. The others are all great. [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue][B]SECOND:[/B] All The Love In the World - Nine Inch Nails CK Killer - Amen Warning - Green day Prelude 3.0 - Slipknot Hell Intro - GWAR ??? - Rurouni kenshin Intolerance - Tool Prison song - System of a down Voices - Disturbed Second Stage Turbine Blade - Coheed And Cambria Re-hash - Gorillaz Testify - Rage Against The Machine Kielbasa - Tenacious D A god in An Alcove - Bauhaus Dani California - Red Hot chili Peppers[/COLOR] *sigh* I just knew I'd end up catching a frikkin slipknot song. Once again, a lot of my favorites and some I don't really care about. Most of these songs are intros. What does all this say? I'm into a wide variety of rock-genred bands. the only one of my favorites I really wanted to see on there but isn't is the mars volta...
  7. At long last, Chapter 6 is finally here! WARNING: this chapter features scenes not suitable for children. It is VERY dark and possibly disturbing. NOTE: This will be the last chapter to feature gratitous sex for a while. [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue][B]Chapter 6: Al The Killer[/B] [img]http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/4013/tek060816e6ec17it3.png[/img] [SIZE=1]Kiala's new clothes[/SIZE] [img]http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/6053/tek060816f1d446aq3.png[/img] [SIZE=1]Ria's new clothes[/SIZE] Kiala?s consciousness came back to her with a jolt and panic ensued. Atop her was a portly man, ramming himself into her. Screams attempted to break the air but she found her mouth covered by several wraps of cloth, letting out only a muffled sound. Stretched across the ground; her hands were chained to the concrete floor with only an inch or so of slack -- the same was true for her ankles. Struggling, tears began to burst from her eyes as she desperately tried to fight the situation but it was no use. The portly man was brutally raping her. ?You like that, white girl? Don?t worry? it?ll all be over soon.? Like the other inhabitants of the White Kingdom, the man had bunny ears and tan skin. His face was round and bore a short beard. Kiala?s desperation only increased and all of existence seemed to capsize on her as the impossible situation grew with overwhelming turmoil. Al stopped for a moment and leaned over her. Kiala?s eyes shot open as the bearded man licked the tears from beneath her eyes. His tongue continued to lap at her as he regressed towards his sex position. ?There?s no hope for you now. No one will save you. I?m gong to kill you nice and slow, white girl. Don?t worry about your little friend.? The portly man leaned sideways. Behind him Kiala could see a large stone counter. It was the only object in the room, a stone chamber about 20 by 40 feet in size. Peeking out from behind the huge stone protruding from the ground was a pair of bunny ears atop white hair laying in a pool of crimson. At that moment the terror in Kiala?s heart was all-encompassing. --- Ria awoke smiling as the sunlight bathed her bedroom. Sleeping peacefully beside her was the most beautiful girl she?d ever laid eyes on. Gently, she touched her hand to Kiala?s face. The soft shine of the sun accented her skin and gave her figure a luminescent quality. Ria drew closer, placing her lips together with Kiala?s. She hugged her tightly. Kiala?s warm body brought her a happiness she hadn?t known before. For once she felt like she had somebody. Her head slowly sank down Kiala?s chest and cradled itself over her breast. Closing her eyes, she let the warmth carry her into the world of her dreams. Kiala?s eyes opened hours later and her arms found their way around her companion?s head, reawakening her. Both pajama girls looked into each other?s face and brimmed with happiness. Once again, their lips met and their arms encircled each other as they rolled around on the bed, giggling. After fooling around for a little while, the two sat next to each other against the headboard. Ria, her shirt now open, reached her arm around Kiala?s shoulder. ?So? what ya wanna do until work starts?? Ria asked. The clock on her wall read 4:30 PM, but work didn?t usually start until at least 7 or 8 in the afternoon. Kiala?s head rested on her friend?s. ?I dunno? it?s your house, so why don?t we do whatever you want?? Ria?s forearm which hung over Kiala?s neck found it?s way down her shirt and the hand attached cupped her breast. ?Hey? this is our house now, okay? This is where you can call home.? Kiala blushed. Her new home had already surpassed her old one. --- All hope was lost. Kiala?s body had become totally limp and her pelvis had gone numb. Hours had gone by and the psychopath had not ceased to pleasure himself with her. Every inch of her body had been coated in his cum as he connected every part of his body with every part of hers. Kiala could feel her soul slipping from her body. ?What? You tired? Not exciting enough for you, white girl?? Al reached across the floor and grabbed a short knife. He placed the tip of it to her nipple and pressed down ever-so-slightly until it cut open. Kiala writhed as blood flowed down her breast, down her stomach, and pooled in her belly-button. The madman dramatically slurped it and enjoyed the fantasy that he was a more powerful being than merely human. Life rested in his hands -- surely he was a god. His knife-bearing hand followed her curves to the crevice between her legs. With a slowness uncharacteristic of being careful, rather meant to add cinematic effect to the madman?s pleasure, he broke the skin above her cavity and began hammering her once again, now flinging blood onto himself. ?Are you ready?? Al rose slowly to his feet, finally feeling as though he was done toying with this inferior being. ?It?s time for you to die?? his arms raised above his head, wielding the knife as if ready to stab right through Kiala?s skull. ?Die white girl!? --- ?Well then,? Kiala said to her companion, ?why don?t we go for a walk? I could use some fresh air.? ?Sure! I have a special path I like to walk on which no one knows about. It?s totally safe and it?ll be fun!? Kiala buried her head in the older girl?s shirt. ?You know? I?ve never had a friend like you. I never want to leave you.? Ria placed her hand on the younger girl?s head, petting it gently. ?You won?t have to.? For a few minutes the two were caught in that moment, but then they got up and decided to get ready to head out. Kiala dressed herself in a white tank top and white jeans. Ria wore a mini-skirt over a bikini. Once the couple was dressed, they headed through the front door, locking it behind them, and started down the road. Both heads turned at a sudden crash from behind them. An alcohol bottle had been thrown through the air and crashed in the street, taking both girls? attention. ?What the-? Ria began to speak but was cut off when her head and Kiala?s were bashed together, knocking them both unconscious. --- A gunshot rang through the air. Kiala?s eyes twinkled in amazement as the knife fell behind the portly man, blood spraying from his severed hand. Standing in a doorway on the far side of the room was Chad and Mr. May. Immediately after firing the shot from his rifle, Chad came running over and kicked Al in the head, sending him sprawling across the ground. ?Mother fucker!? Chad screamed, shooting Al again in the crotch. Mr. May rushed over and pulled the cloth from Kiala?s mouth. A cry erupted from Kiala?s mouth which was so monumental it shook the foundations of the Earth. Mr. May quickly undid the chains on Kiala?s hands and feet and helped her stand up. Bawling in tears, she clung tightly to his jacket. ?It?s going to be okay,? he said softly, patting her back. Chad continued to brutalize the now-terrified killer by kicking him around and blasting off appendages. After a minute of so of crying into Mr. May?s chest, Kiala?s attention turned to Ria, who had been bleeding there for several hours. ?Oh my god? OH MY GOD!!!? Kiala screamed and bawled a gut-wrenching cry as she fell atop her best friend. She pressed her face into Ria?s back and crying, yelling ?NO!? and rubbing her head on her. Mr. May rushed over and began checking Ria?s wounds. His face turned to surprise. ?She?s alive!? He exclaimed. Kiala shot up. Slowly, Ria?s golden eyes began to open and a faint smile crept across her face as she pulled herself back from near death. Al had tried to stab her in the back as part of his movie-drama, but he managed to miss anything important. While she lay on the ground bathing in pain, she managed to tear parts of her clothes off and wrap the wound. She wouldn?t have made it ten more minutes. Kiala wrapped her arms around her head and pulled it close, trying to avoid the chest or stomach area. Cries of fear and joy carried on for minutes until Mr. May lifted Ria and hurriedly rushed her back to his apartment along with Kiala. Meanwhile Chad continued his torture of the psychopath. ?Fuck! Shit! Bitch! Motherfucker!? Every time he kicked the sobbing fat man, he screamed an obscenity. ?You?re Al the killer! You?re the one who took Marta! You BASTARD!? Chad carved things into Al?s flesh, burned his eyebrows, and put needles in his eyelids; raped him, and finally killed him. --- After a week of lying in bed, Ria was finally able to get up and move around. Neither her nor Kiala moved from the bed at all, and were only kept alive by Mr. May watching over them. Mr. may and Chad had been hunting Al for many months after Al kidnapped Chad?s girlfriend, Marta. Marta had been found broken to bits, cut up, and eventually stabbed in the head. The name ?Al? had been carved into her stomach. ?I cannot thank you enough,? Ria told Mr. May, hugging him tightly along with Kiala. The three of them were laying naked on Ria?s bed. ?This is thanks enough,? he replied, pulling their slender frames toward him, ?I?m going to miss you guys a lot.? ?I?ll miss you too, Mr. May,? Ria replied, ?But I won?t stay here any longer. I?m ready to finally escape this town now that I have someone to go with.? ?I only pray you two have a safe trip? and make sure you look out for each other, alright?? Ria?s tongue lapped at his rock-hard chest, sending shivers up his spine as he spoke. Kiala, who?s arms and legs were wrapped around one of his arms, brought her head into his neck. ?Are you sure you don?t want to come with us? We could use the extra muscle? surely you can?t expect us little ladies to go alone?? ?I?d like to but? I don?t know if I want to leave my home behind? and if I go, Chad has to go, too.? Ria sat on top of him, placing her hands on his chest. ?Pleeeeeease?? she begged. Mr. may thought about it for a minute. ?You know what? I think I will come! After all, I can?t pass up an opportunity to go on a big adventure.? ?Yay!? both girls exclaimed. ?We?ll leave first thing tomorrow.? Ria announced. After their little threesome was over, the trio fell asleep.[/COLOR]
  8. In the past I would've said [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]RPGs[/COLOR]. I love RPGs because they have great story and that's what I like to see. Most of the games I own are RPGs and I know a lot about them. But recently I have just stopped playing them. for the most part, RPGs just can't hold my attention for long enough. A lot of them are far too cliche and boring... I simply haven't the time when I could just read a book or something. Lately I've been dedicating more time to [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]action[/COLOR] games. I like the flair and gratifying experience of unleashing huge moves on my enemies en masse. mind you I only like really good action games. [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]God of War[/COLOR], [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Devil may Cry[/COLOR], and [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Onimusha[/COLOR] are a few of the great fighting games I enjoy. They are fun, can be played briefly, and help relieve stress. I am also a fan of some fighting games, namely [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Guilty Gear[/COLOR], [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]DOA[/COLOR], and [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]SSBM[/COLOR]. The only FPS i've ever gotten into were [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Halo[/COLOR] and [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Halo 2[/COLOR].
  9. Alannie, I don't really see how that's dark... I have mucho dark poems which I'd like to share. This one's more of a song but it was easier to find. It's essentially about escaping troubles through sex. [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue][B]She Seems So Slippery (The S Experiment)[/B] So sorry sin seduced souls so simply Sorrow shouldn't succumb so seemingly Something should stay such sadness Something should should save some serenity Seems so slippery Seems so so strikingly similar Seems so slippery Seems so strikingly similar Sanctify such sorrowful sonnets Sacrifice such smothering sounds Save souls, so solemnity seperates Something SAVE SOME SERENITY So soft She's so seductive She's so saintly She's still so slippery! Such shimmering... silloughtette Such shining... speaking sex Such slithering... shifting So slippery... she slides sideways Seems so slippery Seems so so strikingly similar Seems so slippery Seems so strikingly similar SHE SEEMS SO SLIPPERY SHE SEEMS SO STRIKINGLY SIMILAR SHE SEEMS SO SLIPPERY SHE SEEMS SO SIMILAR TO GOD![/COLOR] I was really bored, so I decided to post another. Once again, it's technically a song... w/ lots of screaming... [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue][B]This Time We Do It Correctly [/B] [M-LV] Another time it may have been fixed Another time it may have been dead Another time we may have rewritten the script But lets focus on this tie instead Your fault, my fault, what the fuck, who cares It could've just been one of those anonymous flares The bomb went off, damage was done, it cannot be repaired The time has come to forget anyone was ever there But it could've been fixed! (it's over now) It could've been saved! (it's over now) It could've been spared! But it's over now, and I don't fucking care Your fault, my fault, what the fuck, who cares It could've just been one of those anonymous flares The bomb went off, damage was done, it cannot be repaired The time has come to forget anyone was ever there But it could've been fixed! (it's over now) It could've been saved! (it's over now) It could've been spared! But it's over now, and I don't fucking care Another time it could've been - Another time it would've been - All of this time it could've been - All of this time it should've been! It's over... it's over... it's over... it's over... It's over now - It's over now - It's over now - It's over now Your fault, my fault, what the fuck, who cares It could've just been one of those anonymous flares The bomb went off, damage was done, it cannot be repaired The time has come to forget anyone was ever there But it could've been fixed! (it's over now) It could've been saved! (it's over now) It could've been spared! But it's over now, and I don't fucking care It's over now - It's over now And I don't fucking care![/COLOR]
  10. I was always embarassed about sex... I learned some stuff in sexed but not much. I really began to learn stuff from porn, which I took a long time to, how should I put it, study. You see, I, at first, was only able to lok at softcore porn as, well, I was scared to go deeper. Only about 9 months ago I started seeing naked (anime) chicks and go t a little deeper. One night I came across a porn on TV which was actually free and I watched it. I learned a lot about positions and such, but I still had a problem... I didn't know exactly where the woman's private was as it never showed it in the movie. Eventually I found out that my mom's old, virus-ridden computer had a bunch of porn on it and that helped clarify a lot of things... i still have many questions though.
  11. Maybe they found that pink crystal which is used to bring your pictures to life in that episode of Ninja Turtles and wrote their stories while wearing it/holding it.
  12. It very much reminded me of something you'd see in an Adult Swim show, more speciifically 12 Ounce Mouse. It was totally random and strange, but it that way cool. I didn't laugh... but then I don't laugh at 12oz.Mouse, and I still love it. Your story is pretty cool.
  13. I'm excited! I first heard of this while watching the video/song "Someone Tell Sam Jackson He's My Bro" and Im sad that I couldn't have been hyped for this earlier. Still though, after seeing some of the Snakes on a Plane week of Attack of the Show, I'm totally pumped for this release. Get these motherf****** snakes of this motherf****** plane!
  14. I honestly don't fraking know anymore. All I want in life right now is to find someone to hold... I don't even care if we have a true relationship... all I want is love. Boy, girl, whoever, I just need to hold someone. I don't know how much Im ready for, though I'm prepared to handle whatever comes.
  15. I'm guessing you're into the hardcore stuff or what I call 'good' anime (hehe). Well, let's see... you are obviously a fan of mechs as you have much mech anime, but I think you got most of the good ones. Definitely go for[COLOR=DarkSlateBlue] Big O[/COLOR], as that is a great mech anime with great story. Branching away from that I support Blase's reccomendation for [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Lain[/COLOR], as well as reccommend [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Paranoia Agent[/COLOR]. PA isn't hard to understand like [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Lain[/COLOR], but it is still very phsychological and has a lot of unique elements like [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Evangelion[/COLOR]. Usualy these two are mentioned in the same breath as [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Boogiepop Phantom[/COLOR], but I have only seen a couple episodes of the anime. While on that note, [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Boogiepop[/COLOR] also has a series of novels which are freaking brilliant, the first one being my favorite book ever. there is also a short manga based on the first book. Also, while it is very much comedic, go watch [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]FLCL.[/COLOR] A lot of people take one look at it and brush it off, but it really is deep if you pay attention and the story is great. Until I saw EVA, this was my favorite anime. It's only 6 episodes, and you should definitely watch it on adult swim next time they play it, oor it may even be on the adultswim fix on their website where you can watch it for free. Also, don't get Escaflowne. I dont know about the series, but the movie was just bad, and the manga is just sorta... meh.
  16. Big boobs creep me out. They take up all that room and cloud out the rest of a girl's features. I mean, what the hell are you going to do with them? They're too big to hold... they could probably knock you sprawling across the floor if one hit you in the face o.o plus being locked between them just seems like it'd be cramped and you'd suffocate. Personally, I like girls with smaller brests. For all the aforementioned reasons.
  17. I do vocals!!! I really want a band, but there are little bands searching for a singer... I also write songs (I have like 50 frikkin billion saved to my computer) and I practice singing constantly. I have pretty good range as well.
  18. Analogy time. Look... when a movie doesn't do well, it gets pulled from theatres, forgotten, and they don't make a sequal. Your story does not need a sequal, it needs a makeover. The first five chapters of this story are without quality... they are not good. They need to be pulled from existance. Before you build onto this story, you need to fix what's here already. Even if your new chapters are great, it won't matter if the beginning sucks. Keep your story, but retool it. As far as the 5 chapters Ive read go, don't even try to repair them, just totally redo them.
  19. I don't mosh, but I do go freaking crazy during some music. in fact I'm especially proud of one instance where I headbanged hevily for 17 minutes straight through 2 Japanese metal songs and had a headache lasting 3 days *does devil horns* and my brother and I rocked harder than anyone else in the ampatheater at ozzfest (the crowd sucked so bad...). On another note, what is a hardcore dance? ^^;;
  20. Once again, you have yet to cease to amaze me. i have no idea how you could've possibly come up with something so different, crammed it into such a small space, and made it good, but you did. Upon realizing that the speaker was a pancake, it officially gained the stamp of awesomeness. Just the little things... like the waffle sitting on a pepsi bottle cap, made it great. The sitcom part was wierd and random and the ending came from nowhere. Melikes.
  21. Ah, that one was good. Retarded southerners are always worth a good laugh. For reasons undefined, it always cracks me up when hillbillies talk about being married to their daughters and mothers and such. At least Jack seems to have some sense... I am reminded of Squidbillies.
  22. Ah... Jeez, where to start. First let me state that there are tons of spelling errors, but I feel I have no right to complain as I misspell all kinds of stuff. Anywho, let's begin with the dialogue. As I told you in the PM about CH5 the dialogue is totally unrealistic. This is especially true in the 4th chapter. People who are in the middle of battle don't speak as if in mid-conversation, and by no means does anyone say the word ass that many times. In fact, the spider dude actually said. "Ass." WTF does that mean?! Your characters do not act like regular people. They go into each situation like it's normal, regular crap and thy seem totally unphased and uninterested. They have no emotions, apparently, either. Their reactions to DC's true identity was totally underwhelming considering he is their best friend. Also, why does Hijar apparently hate the sister he is trying to save? While on the subject of your characters, I don't care about them. They're all just totally uninteresting and unmemorable. Hijar seems like he's supposed to be the cliche leading male anime character, but he doesn't have enough showtime to support that. Tala just doesn't seem to have any personality whatsoever. DC is obviously a tank, but that's all we really know about him. The new girl seems to have a bit more personality, seeming to be the cute, spunky type, but her lines are just horrifying. Now, as I said before, your descriptions have got a little better, but still - to be rank - are poor. Things just happen way to fast and don't give time to visualize or comprehend. for instance, the fight scenes are just like "he trew his chain and caught his leg. Then he threw him. But he got up and slashed." It's just not all that exciting to read. I actually got so bored during CH2 that I started skimming paragraphs. Speaking of paragraphs, your formatting is confusing. At times I can't tell who is talking and due to some missing quotation marks, text and dialogue are sometimes confused. Try breaking pparagraphs at qutation marks or bolding them or something. Keep practicing, dude. At the very least, you're getting better.
  23. A lot of people like to sing their favorite songs... sometimes to yourself and sometimes to others. So heres some questions.... [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]If you like to sing, what songs do you enjoy singing most? Who do you sing to? How often do you sing? Do you consider yourself any good?[/COLOR] Personally, I love to sing. ALL the time. I'm almost always listening to music, and I know all the words to several hundred songs so I have a huge repitoire. My brothers hate me singign all the time around. My bro complains 'you're a good singer, I just get sick of hearing you'. Personally I take great pride in my singing capabilities, but no one ever compliments them, so I prolly suck ^^;; The songs I like singing most are anything by [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Coheed And Cambria [/COLOR] because I've mastered the voice and their really catchy, fun songs.
  24. I picked up vol. 1 the other day and I was amazed. This manga is great, intelligent, and fast paced and I like that. Many manga spend too much time explaining things, complicating things, and generally taking a long road to a short destination. this one kept me on the edge of my seat, wanting to know what happens next. Light is a great character, albeit slightly insane, but then again when your bored WTF else are you gunna do? I admire his aspirations. Also, i love Ryuk, he cracks me up XD I wish vol. 2 wasn't out-of-stock at the local Waldenbooks!!!
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