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  1. [QUOTE=RiflesAtRecess][font=trebuchet ms] [url="http://www.risingsun.net/albums/megacon2005/friday/source/mc2005-0031.shtml"]Not after seeing this.[/url][/font][/QUOTE] That is pretty darn bad... and he should be with Starfire not Raven :o But oh well. I'd still be Robin because he is t3h shiz. And because I'd get molested by Blase : D Anywho, if I did decide to go to animecon instead (whic would make hella more sensse since Im not much into comics but Im WAY into anime/manga) I'd totally go as Boogiepop. I could buy shojo manga and not feel awkward because some greasy old dude would be buying it too XD plus I have friends who go to anime cons as well. And also I could meet famous anime dudez and that'd be t3h shiz. It also helps that I'd be able to recognize all the characters being cosplayed.
  2. Oh boy... this is gunna need some work ^^;; okay, for starters, there is one major thing I need to point out. When a character is talking, you absolutely NEED to put a quation mark (they look like this ") before and after what they say. Otherwise, it is impossible to know that they are talking. If they're thinking, it helps to italicize it (like [I]this[/I]) so that you can tell it's in their mind. Also, there are a lot of typos, but I do a lot of typos myself, so I can't complain ^^;; For the way your story is written, it's very confusing. Firstly, you've written this story as if you're just telling it to someone over dinner or something. The biggest problem with this is that you have not described anything at all. I have no idea what the characters look like, what their house looks like, or any of the like. You don't have to be overly descriptive, but I've really got nothing to go on. Also, simply saying 'he is goth' doesn't really count. Also, you really need to eplain how he is a 'dark magician'. What, precisely, IS a dark magician? When you say that, I imagine the Yugioh card ^^;; As for the story itself... what is this meant to be about? The stuff at the beginning is all very confusing, and I don't know who any of those characters are, but I'm guessing that it's all explained in your other story, so I won't worry about that. Chapter one brings us in on what Im guessing is a relationship between Del and Zara. Then theres this other guy... is he coming into their house, or what? I mean... arent the couple naked? That'd be rather awkward XD and then they go to meet his sister who i guess is really hot, but I was a little lost trying to figure out where exactly everyone was. The same went for chapter 2, I couldn't really tell what the hell was going on ^^;; is someone running for mayor? I just don't get it... what exactly are they doing?! Also, you should probably make the chapters just a little bit longer or combine them, or something, as it seems like in both of these chapters nothing really got accomplished and that's not good. Anywho, I definitelly think you need to look at some other people's works and take some notes and try to improve your writing ^.^
  3. it was 'hentai rots the mind' dude and your is the brak show omibel utis nadgum HINT: Anime with like 20 series
  4. mine was 'rush, tootl, and coheed' your is titanic lupp ctonfi HINT: Jules and Vincent
  5. Dungeons And Dragons shur, loot, nad hedoec HINT: 3 progrock bands
  6. I always play as my own character, it'd be pretty lame using someone else's creation. Even if I'm playing with a licensed series, I always make up my own character and wedge them into the story. I like to have total control over my character's personality, appearance, and the like. After all, as a writer, it's my duty to design characters.
  7. If I had to choose between anime con and comic con... I'd pick E3. Because E3 has all the best games coming out for the next year, I get to see the execs, and I could jump at and possible touch Shigero Miyamoto. Then I'd never wash that hand again. Also, I'd get to hang out with the cosplay booth people. And if the person dressed as Kasumi is American, I can be disappointed. But given the coices, I think comiccon since its so large scale and awesome. I'd cosplay as Robin.
  8. Th Elder Scrolls Oblivion sypthana rats linone HINT: awesome Dreamcast game
  9. Otaku Boards Rulez oenon etsba itcal lubes olocesns HINT: I am so full of myself XD
  10. okay, here's my attempt! Also, sorry for the calling thing, ive never done this before ^^;; [IMG]http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b269/MetalSonic700/mihoavi.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b269/MetalSonic700/mihoban.jpg[/IMG] EDIT: uh oh! Something went wrong! I gotta redo them! ACK!
  11. I am known for being something you don't see everyday ^^;; for most of my life it's been my long hair, although as a teenager a lot more people have it (bastards). Also, my name, Conrad, is fairly unique. When people see a long haired kid named Conrad, it's not easy to forget. There have always been more people who know my name than people I know the names of. Also, people have often known me to be weird/annoying but that's in the past... hopefully As for at home I'm known for being lazy (I try to get my bros to get everything for me XD) and manipulative and never giving up an arguement, and for falling asleep whenever the hell I want and being online constantly. Online, I'm known for being a writer of all sorts, and I'm known for being pretty smart about a lot of things and at times overly deep. On OB I don't know, I guess anyone else could answer that for me. I suppose I could be known for posting excessively and having, like, the 5th highest post count (if you combine all my accounts)
  12. [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue][B]Chapter 3: The Kingdom of White[/B] [img]http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4290/tek060727dfcb15qf0.png[/img] White Death is the nickname that many gave the Kingdom of White, and rightfully so. Cries of sorrow radiated from the slums of the ruined cities. Rotting buildings and rotten people decorated the once illustrious kingdom. Skies were disguised by thick smog, which billowed from the giant factories coating the cheaply bought grounds, manufacturing the products of all other kingdoms. Forsaken and forgotten, this was a dead kingdom laced with a slowly dying populace. Ria Ayella stepped out the back door of an apartment into an accompanying alleyway buttoning the top button on her loose, long sleeve, white, collared shirt. White Kingdom?s people were not quite the same as average humans, as they had long rabbit ears protruding from their heads, and were born with white hair and tan skin. Ria?s thin figure said ?anorexia,? her long laced stockings and lack of pants said ?whore,? and her eyes said ?depressed.? Separating her lower body from nudity was a pair of generic white panties and ankle-high white boots. Unbeknownst to Ria, someone else was sitting in this black, trash-ridden alley, hidden between two black trash bags. Picture a young girl in left in pieces, with leveled malfunctions. Clenching her legs to her chest as pain poured down her cheeks. Her sobs had fallen silent hours before, and all that she could find the power to do was shiver and weep. All that remained of her clothes were her little blue sneakers and ankle-high socks. Tangled and matted, her blue hair served as a pillow for her head, which sat cocked against a large black bag. Crinkling noises echoed off the ash-black brick walls of the two 5-story buildings creating the alley, catching Ria?s attention. Looking around, she brushed it off, guessing that it was merely some animal searching through the trash. Just as she turned to walk away, another noise cracked the stale air; this time a sneeze from what Ria guessed was a young girl. Cautiously, the medium-height woman with shoulder length hair tied in a bun, letting the bangs fall to the side of her face, progressed into the space where she could walk without stepping in litter. Fifteen feet away, she caught sight of a light-skinned teenage girl with human ears. Curiosity boiled inside her, and she rushed over to assess the situation. ?Are you okay? Oh? stupid question, here, take my hand,? Ria said softly, extending her hand. The tear-soaked young girl slowly extended a shaking arm and grabbed the woman?s hand. Carefully, Ria helped her to her feet. Her whole body shaking, the girl stiffly rose and stood a few inches shorter than the slightly older female. After a moment in a daze, the blue-haired girl jolted over and hugged Ria tightly, crying into her shoulder. Ria gently patted the teenager?s back as she squeezed herself against Ria?s small breasts. ?It?s going to be okay,? Ria whispered, ?Just come with me.? After a moment of sobbing, the younger girl released her tight grip and stood still, waiting to be taken. Taking hold of the cute young girl?s hand, Ria left the alleyway into the cold night streets. Anywhere was dangerous in this city and being accompanied by a nude girl was definitely not the best idea. Ria hurried down the street about a block with the girl and they entered a run-down apartment. Unlocking and stepping through the large green door, Ria welcomed the blue-eyed girl into her home. Living conditions all over the White Kingdom were ugly, and Ria?s place accounted for that fact. Bearing only a living room with kitchen attachment, a bathroom, and a bedroom, her home was actually slightly below average. The living room has furnished with a massacred green couch sitting in its center, and a small coffee table with a junky TV atop it. Green carpets, stained by cigarettes and all sorts of liquids covered the floors except for the kitchen which was cheep tile. The walls were all white and a single window was placed on the western wall of the living room. In the kitchen were a mini-fridge, a sink, a round table, and a stove, along with three head-height cabinets. No door existed to separate Ria?s room from the rest of the house, and inside the room was a block of a dresser, a twin-sized bed, and a large mirror. The only things which could be found out and about were cans of bug spray and insect traps. If there was anything Ria feared, it was bugs, and no bug survived in her house. Leading her over to the couch, Ria sat the girl down and fetched a glass of water for her from the filter. After allowing her to drink down the glass, the tan-skinned woman accompanied the teenager on the couch. ?Feel any better?? she asked. ?Thank you?? there was a light rasp in the girl?s voice. She cleared her throat and began again, ?thank you so much.? ?It?s okay? my name is Ria, Ria Ayella. What?s yours?? ?It?s Kiala? Kiala Tickle.?[/COLOR]
  13. Technically, this is supposed to take around 20 minutes to make, but it tastes just as good if you leave out a step. [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue][SIZE=3]BLT[/SIZE][/COLOR] Ever ant your own BLT sandwhich but don't feel like driving to Mcdonalds? If your fridge looks anything like mine, you can make one at home! [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Why you'd make this:[/COLOR] It's so awesome, you won't believe it was so easy! [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]You need:[/COLOR] - Chicken in a can (or fish, whichever you prefer) - Mayonaisse - Parmesean cheese - Bacon (precooked on the lunchmeat isle) - lettuce - tomato - bread [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]What you do[/COLOR]: Take a bowl and pour in the can of chicken. Throw in some mayonaise and sprinkle in some parmesean cheese, then take the bacon, tear it up, and sprinkle it in. Mix it all up. (according to the recipe, your supposed to put it in the fridge for 20 minutes, but it really makes no difference.) Now put some bread in the toaster and when its done, apply the paste and slap on some lettuce and tomatoes. [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Comments:[/COLOR] Tastes darn good and you get the satisfaction of knowing you just made your very own BLT!
  14. Im confused. Is this thread just meant to be about BMX, or what? Cuz you said 'how badass are you' and you kinda asked about us being into other things but... what exactly are we posting here? To answer your question, though, I do not BMX.
  15. Neon Genesis Evangelion, my personal favorite anime, definitely made me think. Okay, so when I actually watched it (in one giant marathon, and uncut b/c adult swim cut some stuff out) I didn't have any thoughts at all. I stared blankly at the screen with my mouth wide open through the last 2 episodes and just about cried as the answers to questions Id contemplated for months were answered. Anyway, the next day I thought a lot. It really changed the way I look at life and gae me the idea that perhaps life is all in our imagination and stuff. It helps that I relate to the characters so well...
  16. In 33 years? Well, of course noramally I think I'd say well all be dead or ruled by the forces of evil, or maybe we'll be just as we've been for all time, or whatever. Basically, my answer is that I'm not worried about what humanity or the world will be like, I just want it to roll around this way and I'll deal with what happens.
  17. This chapter was pretty good, once again it stands beside a few cliches but your writing is just fine and you seem to have a pretty fair story coming along. One thing you should definetally note, when someone is thinking, put their thoughts in italic, otherwise it looks like your just writing normal and its a bit confusing ^^;;
  18. Yay! You're writing poems again! This is great, you've always been my favorite OB poet ^.^ I will say this, these poems aren't like your old ones. The ones you used to write were always deep and full of big words and analogies and the like. These ones are much more simplistic, but they are still good. #1: This ine isn't bad by any means, and manages to be just a small step above average in my opinion. I especially like the last 2 lines. #2: I like this one a lot, and it sounds live it would be a verseto a Linkin Park song. I totally read it like I was Mike Shinoda XD very nifty.
  19. Singles, of course are the songs that get played on the radio and TV, usually have videos, and get released with a b-side in stores. So, what's your favorite single? I want to hear your favorite one on TV right noww, and your alltime favorite. Right Now: [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Gnarles Barkley [/COLOR] - [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Crazy[/COLOR] - This song appears to be all the rage now, and I, for once, agree with everyone else that this is an amazing song. It's catchy, sung beautifully, has a great beat, and cool lyrics. Alltime: this is a difficult one for me but I think... [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]A Favor House Atlantic [/COLOR] - [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Coheed And Cambria [/COLOR] - Coheed is currently my favorite band, and ths is one of my favorite songs of theirs. It's just plain fun and if I heard it while out, i would immediately dance (i do at home, too, but I mean I would anywhere with this song) it's sung with a super-high pitched voice which sounds just amazing (and, after much training I have mastered :D) and it's all-around great. This is one of the few songs that I praised as a favorite song before I'd heard any other music by the band.
  20. XD I like this chapter even more because the whole Gavin situation was just cool, and I liked how they were explaining that a true fan would've been there for the release. Is Gavin on drugs or something? He seems kinds weird XD The entire blowjob description was hilarious, dude!
  21. I CALL IT!!! Im a huge Megatokyo fan! Someone esll have to do the wallpaper, though
  22. I apologize for having so many posts, I keep finding out about more people who are totally awesome ^.^ Also, Split Keyblader, you are now officially awesome XD [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Doublehex[/COLOR]: I haven't really had the chance to talk to this dude yet, but the guy is awesome. He's a great writer and he and I have a lot in common. Plus he's an EVA fan, and that's always cool. He's even inspired me to go buy Elfen Lied. I think that if Doublehex and I teamed up we could form a superduo of writers and compile a great story.
  23. Hai, normally I am not much of a fan of this sort of fantasy tale, but then again your story has only just begun and so far it's pretty good. I like how Brirana seems to be rather annoyed by her current position. I've seen scenes quite like this before where a spirit will be disguised as a girl and help a wanderer in need, but I think this is the first time she's been helping him just to keep him from contaminating the water. Not bad, though I don't think I can rightfully judge it until I've seen more.
  24. I've never seen any of the movies of the Clerks series, but I gotta say, this was funny as hell. The entire Solid Snake arguement was wonderful, and I never thought to compare Snake's codename to an erection O_o. By the way, Snake totally beats big Boss >_> Power to the mullet!
  25. [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]A Manual Dexterity Soundtrack Volume 1[/COLOR] - [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]Omar A Rodriquez-Lopez [/COLOR] - Part one of the soundtrack to Omar's movie, which has been 'postponed indefinetally'. It's pretty damn cool, featuring 100% musical numbers asde from the last song and all great music. Mostly is has a sort of blues guitar focus, but there's some salsa like stuff in there too. It's great, and really out there.
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