takashi tao

thanks i really dont know if im gonna use american names i havent decided yet..... manga wise,im back at the begining :animestun i just cant seem to come up with good [U]animation[/U] so im gonna go "CLAMP" style and get some helpers

acually i have worked on this :animeswea but im not getting far though i added a new character hes a spy for the dragon race who makes freinds with takashi and when he reaches a certin point he executes an attack on everyone.Takashi(kenny) was devestated so that drove an even bigger drive to go defeat the dragon race. The spys name is taharu segauwa(havent figured out an american name yet) but all i know is he follows kazuki from episode 1 and has dragon and pheonix abilitys.The acual manga, im still working on, i got 2pages done(not even inked yet)and im thinking about redoing them :animestun .

[QUOTE=Chikara Kokoro]I?m really glad that you?re taking advice and changing the names; that?s much more than most people would be willing to do. At the moment I don?t have any huge critiques of the story. It seems cliché to me (mostly because of the alternate universe), but I?m coming to terms with the fact that there?s not really anything new under the sun. It would be nice if you could clarify how the main character gets dragged into the alternate universe and whether or not it?s possible to go back and forth between worlds. Things are never as simple as good and evil. Try to flesh out both the dragons and the phoenixes so that they both have reasons for their actions. That way the reader can decide for themselves who was in the wrong. It?s fine if the characters voice their opinions and say that one side is evil, but showing the opinions of both sides would help out the story quite a bit. Why does the girl have to be saved? I?m just being feminist, but the whole damsel in distress thing bothers me. If nothing else, make sure that she has a strong personality. This is the twenty-first century, and women have learned how to take care of themselves. Consider her feelings realistically; don?t just let her wait around for someone to save her. Overall this shows promise. Keep on working at it, and over time it could develop into something quite interesting.[/QUOTE] acually thats good advice :animesmil iwas thinking janet(kimi) could reject him then later on get kidnapped, but her character is strong and she does get away at one point, but she gets caught again(sorry :animeswea ) the whole reason she was captured was to bring out takashi(kenny). I am gonna have them go back and forth between worlds(only after huge battles for recovery and also for training) i was gonna make it in ending result pheonix powers being no better than dragons(who are trying to take over)ethier that or practically the entire pheonix race gets wiped out maby even add both powers being destroyed. janets feelings are a big part of the whole thing and in the end...........says no to kennys feelings (that is if kennys alive). P.S kimi isnt really damsel in distress, in some point she sudeces kaze(chase) :animenose cause face it hes still a guy :animeswea as a matter of fact thats who she wants to be with(teenage crush in a way)(this is also mainly comic relief) but this will definatly only come in a side story(it would srew up my already messed up storyline)

[FONT=Comic Sans MS][COLOR=DarkGreen] hey i wanted to know who everybodys favorite love hina characters were. mine are: 1. naru- cause shes funny when shes mad :catgirl: 2. seta- because he acts like keitaro but at abetter level :p 3. kentaro-because i like his smart *** additude and how he gets put down by it :animeknow [/COLOR] [/FONT] [INDENT][SIZE=1][color=#007520]takashi tao, welcome to Otakuboards. Keep in mind the [URL=http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=38208]Official Threads Directory[/URL] and if you want to talk about one Anime, use the thread from the Directory. You might also want to take note that 'favourites threads' are usually not permitted since they tend to generate spammy posts. This is usually overlooked if the first post is exemplary. Your first post, although really not bad, could have been expanded. ^^ If you have any questions about posting in Anime Lounge or anything else about Otakuboards, feel free to PM me or any of theother moderators. -r2[/color][/SIZE][/INDENT]

[QUOTE=only1specialed][COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=4][FONT=Impact]Uh oh bro, You?re in the red zone now. You see the fire in their eyes?. :laugh: Anyway Kei does have a point. Why not just use regular American names. Hell to make it even more interesting put in a beaner name like Jose, Juan or my favorite Jesus. :laugh: All joking aside the story does seem interesting. I was kinda confused reading it thought (dang moderators were right?hehe :animeswea) if anything that link that Kei should be providing will be really helpful cause a manga is not something you can just up and decided to start. It takes tons of planning before you start on page 1. then again? I really don?t know anything about making a manga? I just really know how to make some decent stories but the basic Idea should be the same though.[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR][/QUOTE] yeah your definatly right (though i hate admitting it when im wrong, you all definatly made a point :animeswea) as for the beaner names uhhhhhh....to soon ill stick with english :laugh: . umm how about insted of takashi its kenny,or kazuki,jason and then kaze be chase (this is working i think :animeswea )kimi could be janet (ive acually thought hard about this) thanks if you have any ideas as to add in my comic fell free to commit :animesmil

ok the top games i think that should become an anime are definatly dragon quest andharvest moon [color=#56995e][SIZE=1][FONT=Comic Sans MS][B]Takashi Tao[/B], I know it must not be hard but please try to improve umpon your punctuation and grammer. A couple of periods and capital letters wouldn't hurt as well. ~Ikillion[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR]

thanks :animeswea im sorta new at the fourm thing so ill try better well thanks for the comments.I thought about it yester day and i forgot to add the stuff you guys told me :animeswea (i always forget) ok umm..... where do i start...umm ok i hope i explained takashi enough but as for kazuki(pheonix master) he has a long history of fighting in the war (mainly kaze[dragon master]) he comes to earth for training takashi and he does help out with the acuall battles later in the story. Hes about 24 and while on earth has "friendship" with takashi's mom(whos not really a main character but is added in there)im still in planning so i havent gotten completly done but im still working out plot holes.Kaze is kazukis brother who joined the side of dragons for more power after the death of thier parents(there not shown though) he is possibly the most poweful of the brothers(in chapter 1 kazuki gets the mess beat out of him). As far as the two races well the war got started after an alliance was destroyed when dragon leaders thought pheonixs were planning to over rule them(this was mainly a misunderstanding)when the original dispute was on the virge of ending rebals of both sides had killed one another so the alliance was broken and it contiues for decades.over the years dragons began overwelming pheonixs and started after world conquest.The story starts out when Takashi asked the girl hes liked since 1st grade out(her name is kimi shes been friends with him since that long,shes way more athletic than him and shes definatly smarter)the dragon leaders scope out kazuki who they had been spying on to see what was happening by sendding a agent hes a vital part of the manga because in the begining(sorry again about the spelling do you have a spell check?)he makes friends with takashi and end the overall result he kidnapps his girlfriend(kimi) and takashi along with kazuki have to save her and end the war. i hope this filled up any gaps and sorry for the long post :animeswea

hi im new here and i also wanted to tell everyone the storyline of my manga and wanted to know what anyone thought about it :animesmil . ok the story is about a boy named takashi tao(ironic isnt it :animeswea)well hes just a normal high school student and he got dragged in to a huge battle in another demension(i cant spell :animesigh )between two races of dragon(evl) and pheonixs(good), just as soon as he asked out the girl hes been drooling over since 1st grade(her name is kimi masngi)well a guy named kazuki takimora(pheonix leader)tells takashi how he has a hidden power that can help the pheonixs win the war.....at first takashi says no but when dragon leader kaze finds out he kidnaps kimi so its up to takashi to save her. this is my story so far it doesnt have a name yet so if any suggestions plez respond i know the story has major plot holes but can you tell me how it is?