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[Color=DarkBlue]I'm hooked. The plot's simple enough, although I don't expect it'll pan out so easily. I can't point out any huge mistakes, so keep up the good work, and don't let it die before I do. ;)[/color]

[Font=Arial][B]Name:[/B] Alexia [B]Callsign:[/B] Boom [B]Age:[/B] 33 [B]Team Position:[/B] Heavy Weapons/Demolitions [B]Bio:[/B] Alexia grew up in the big city. Chicago to be exact. Her family was big, considering the small suburban house they lived in. They were seven in total, two boys and three girls, with the parents included. Alexia was the oldest and in that respect, the quietest. She never really connected with any of her siblings, because by the time Riley, the youngest, was born; Alexia was in her last year of high school. Her sister, Beau, was the closest in age to her, but in same ways, the furthest away. She slept around, bragged about it and even went so far as to do it in public. The whole thing did not impress Alexia instead disgusted her. More than once, Alexia was forced to slap some sense into the girl. It wasn?t until the year that Riley was born that things in Alexia?s house changed. Beau got pregnant with Alexia?s boyfriend?s baby. Alexia just quietly let the poor sap go and instead turned her anger onto her sister. Her sister thought she was cool with the entire thing, but deep down, Alexia hated her sister. She hated her open legs, her open personality and most of all, she hated her for the support she received. Alexia?s parents cared for Beau?s every wish, made her life easy and just seemed to want to help Beau. That for Alexia was the last straw, she decided to run away and join the military. This was at 18, dropping her promising career elsewhere in the world. The military quickly accepted her and she entered training. Fueled by her anger and hatred, she quickly surpassed her entire class. Her specialty was of course in explosives and heavy weapons. The feel of controlling things made Alexia feel just that much better. She knew when to use what and what kind of damage it could do. Many people could never begin to imagine that feeling. With this, Alexia continued to excel in the marines, impressing many a people along the way. This was how she received the nomination. Her superior approached one day with the question and Alexia immediately accepted. Why not? It was the chance of a lifetime. Although, there was one thing Alexia wanted. Her family to believe her dead. Sit just so happened that on a routine mission, the bomb Alexia was setting went off immaturely, killing her. They did not find any remains. Now Alexia sits in the group, comfortable with people who care about each other. Now if she could only get her first kill off her heart? [B]Backstory[/B] Alexia was sitting in her room, enjoying a book. It had been a long week of missions and Alexia was content with her book and a beer. Even though alcohol was not normally allowed in a soldier?s tent, Alexia ignored the rule and kept her beer hidden. She sighed and turned a page. She had not even been able to blow anything up. It was all search and rescue, which got boring very quick. As it was, war was not looked well upon, but now with the feud over whatever, there was always that chance that Alexia would be able to blow something?s top off. That is what helped her carry on through the sludge known as search and rescue. Hope was all that anyone had when in a war zone. Alexia would have never thought that Lt. Peterson would approach her tent that day, nor actually catch her with her beer. However, fate had other plans as he swooped in, causing Alexia to drop her book and spill her beer upon it. ?Whoever the hell that was is going to be blown to kingdom come.? Alexia raged. ?Hold your horses major.? Peterson said smiling, knowing well of Alexia?s little temper. ?Oh, sir. I?m sorry. I was so caught up in the book..? Alexia babbled. ?It?s alright major. I?m here to see you about something very important. Is the tent..? Peterson started. ?Clean as your whistle sir.? Alexia snickered. ?Right, you?ve been recruited into the Rapid Recon Response. They want you to start your training immediately. Do you accept?? He plainly stated. Alexia?s face went blank as her thoughts raced. She would finally have the chance to serve her country and as an added bonus, in the most powerful group in the world. She could finally?well, that would come later. For now, she had but three words to say. ?I?d be honored.? Peterson stood up and was about to leave when Alexia quickly exclaimed, ?I want to fake my death. My family doesn?t need to know what I?m going to do.? Peterson nodded and said, ?It?s being taken care of as we speak. Your flight for training camp leaves in two hours. Pack up and leave your beer with me.? Alexia nodded and smiled as she scrambled to pack. She was finally going make something of her life and her talents.[/font]

[Color=Indigo][B]Athena[/B]- Knowing Athena has been like being without glasses and getting some all the while needing them. She's opened my eyes to so many things that I don't think I'll ever be able to repay. She's been there for me through just about everything this year and for that, I'm more than grateful. She's also not afraid to make her opinion known and never takes back what she says. She's my idol, one could say. But more importantly, meh sister. Well not really, but you get what I mean. [B]DeadSeraphim/Hevn[/B]- This is one in love pair of kids. They've sustained a relationship for a year and are now engaged. I'm very proud to say I know Hevn and I can only wish her the best. [B][URL=http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=46912]Sanity's Gift's Crew[/URL][/B]- You guys stuck me out. That right there earns you a nomination. I realize the whole thing died, but just seeing the dedication from Corey and Sakura brings a tear to my eye. I love you guys! [B]Solo Tremaine[/B]- Many people have mentioned this great guy and I'm not surprised. He's one of the greatest people on OB. He always has an open ear for a problem, no matter what's going on in his life. He's also always eager to help in whatever I need help with RPG-wise and I don't think I'd be able to stay on OB if he wasn't here. [B]Lady Katana[/B]- Lady K. as a mod has to put up with alot. Maintaining the Manga Workshop can't be an easy task for anyone that has more than two brain cells. I seriously respect her for keeping her temper with even the most persistent of n00bs (read here losers). [B]Sakura[/B]- Sakura's more than just a RPG'er. She's a great strategist. She and I really bonded through Game On! and all the plotting we did was fun. *confetti* anyone? [B][URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=51508]Crimes of Hate[/URL][/B]- This OB parody is possibly the best in it's genre. Where Enter the Net plays on puns and inside jokes, Crimes of Hate makes you think and shudder. Murder is never something one expects, but when it starts striking a minority, the mystery always takes many twists and turns. Here's to a great story. EDIT: I forgot someone! =o Oh noes! [B]Raiyuu[/B]- He's a webcomic guy, that makes him cool. He's also really nice and likes his fans. Go Raiyuu. ^^[/color] [Font=Arial]As always, my almost late nominations. More than last year, but then again, I only had to compile a list of 10. XD[/font]

[Color=DarkBlue]Good luck everyone, I'm especially rooting for Sakura and Raiyuu. One of you better win this. Or else. I look at it this way. The best was taken out first. :) Once again, good luck everyone, and no hard feelings.[/color]

[Color=DarkBlue]Hey hey hey! Don't blame me just because I took the furries out of the lead!!! (No offense meant of course. :p) Yeah, great job White and Doukeshi. It's good to see someone from the Heroines won. XD[/color]

[Color=Indigo]See Charles, how hard was that to type up? :p But yeah, this is why I like feedback, because it lets me work from there and [B]improve[/B]. I will look into that for Mitsurugi's interview, although, I'm still wondering how much of a personality he has. Jiggywigg's not going to answer anything I send, so anyone else?[/color]

[Color=Indigo]Ada was seriously getting annoyed at falling off the track. She could not count the number of times it had happened so far and Ada could see that it was really starting to get on Mog's nerves. Well it was time for Kickarse to take first and stop falling off the track. "Shadow, run over the item box and then we're switching. I've got a plan." Ada said, bracing herself. Shadow nodded and did what Ada said. Ada had only a second to get a look at what she recieved, but it was exactly what the doctor ordered. She laughed and kept driving. She rode into the curves before the pipe with ease. Shadow was not sure what Ada was up to, because she was not putting the pedal to the metal. He did not want to question her for fear of her "womanliness", but something was up. Ada smashed into another box and quickly asked, "Whadaya got?" "We've got a Lightening Bolt. I'm using it." Shaodw said, throwing his hand back. "Stop, we're switching, I've got a plan." Ada sternly told Shadow. He shrugged his shoulders and waited for instructions. "OK, here's how it's going to go down. I'm going to let this blue shell go and we'll switch. Once Furry Flurry recovers, you'll let your lightening bolt off. From there, we drive like crazy and pray it works. Ready?" Ada asked. "Let's go." Shadow answered. **** It happened suddenly. Crash and Krystal were cruising along and unexpectedly, the shell hit, catapulting the pair into the sky. They still had the lead, so once they landed on the track, they just kept driving. It was then that the lightening bolt struck. Once again, it just slowed them down, nothing too big. Yuna and Ling were starting to catch up, but they were as small as Crash and Lara. ****** Unlucky for Ada and Shadow, Mario and Lara were going up the pipe, so they were unaffected. Mario let loose with a Chain Chomp that he could barely hold onto as soon as they landed. The Kart shot off, the Chain Chomp quickly catching up to and knocking out Ling and Yuna. They fell off the track and the Chain Chomp was ripped out of Mario's grip. It was only a matter of time before the Chain Chomp would get Krystal and Crash as well. ***** Krystal saw it coming, but unfortunately, it was too late. The Chomp slammed into the back of their kart, sending it spinning off the edge. Mog raised them back up, but not until Lara and Mario with Ada and Shadow on their tail passed them. The race was still on.[/color] 1. Plumber and Plunder 2. Kickarse 3. Furry Flurry 4. Oriental Beauty

[Color=Indigo]Ada roughly pulled the cart into the turn as Shadow let loose a red shell at Yuna who swerved off the road. The more people they could take out, the easier it would be to get a good lead. "Shadow, anyone up front?" Ada asked. "Yeah, look like Mario and Lara. They look like they just got it bad. Got anything to make it worse?" Shadow called back wickedly. "Oh yeah. If I can throw this right, it'll make things no fun for both teams ahead of us." Ada said, smiling. Ada tossed the Bowser Shell onto the track and laughed cheerfully as it slammed into Mario and Lara, sending them perilously close to the edge, while Shadow knocked them off. "We're so going to get that back." Ada thought as looked ahead backwards the approach of Yuna and Ling. They both seemed dead fixated on Ada as Ling let a red shell fly. Ada quickly tossed back the green shell she had picked up, canceling the effect. It was then that Ling let the second shell fly. Ada could only shout at Shadow he swereved to the middle of the track to prevent falling off the edge. Ling and Yuna quickly moved ahead, but were stopped by a red shell from Lara and Mario. A new group of item boxes meant new surprises as Ling let loose with a bomb that wiped out Ada and Shadow, giving them second place. Lara let a banana peel fly that stopped Yuna, so they were now in second. Of course, none of the three teams currently duking it out saw the Bowser Shell come back at them. All any of them could do was pray they were knocked off first as it wiped all three teams out. Ada could only get mad with herself as they started again. She had set the thing loose after all. A blue shell flew past the car and made Ada feel a bit better as she heard the accompanying explosion. That'd keep Crash and Krystal from keeping a huge lead. A mushroom brought Shadow to the pipe, both teams hot on the trail. It was war now.[/color] 1. Furry Flurry 2. Kickarse 3. Oriental Beauty 4. Plumber and Plunder

[Font=Arial][B]Name:[/B] Hyuuga Junko [B]Age:[/B] 12 [B]Gender:[/B] Male [B]Appearance:[/B] [URL=http://www.shadow-dragons.com/characters/kiba.jpg]Here[/URL] Junko usually wears a pair of dark green shorts and a matching shirt. He also wears his protector as a belt, to keep it clean and to protect a secret. A very deep and disturbing secret that not even Katsuo knows. [B]Rank:[/B] Rookie Genin [B]Personality:[/B] Junko is a very subtle young man. Although known for speaking his mind, he does not do so in any ordinary situation. His opinions are strong ones that not everyone likes to hear. So in a way, Junko?s a very blunt person. He?s also been known to converse with very few people. Imi, who he affectionately nicknamed Katsuo is probably the only person he honestly can talk to. This probably comes from her headstrongness, which only seems to feed into Junko?s ego even more. Around Katsuo Junko feels like he can talk about whatever he wants without really insulting someone. Most people seem to think that Junto is a total jerk, but he really just stays by the opinions he creates about people. That?s one thing Junto?ll never change about himself. [B]Equipment: [/B] Like every good ninja, Junko keeps a kunai holder, although his sits on his shorts. He really does not have much need for them though, because once he gets started with his Byakugan, it?s all about his hands. He also carries a belt with a pouch of smoke bombs and soldier pills, for when he needs to get away quickly. [B]Main Weapon/Technique: [/B] Being a Hyuuga means, Junko?s main talent is his Byakugan. In easy words, when activated, it increases his vision abilities, giving him 360-degree sight with his only blind spot being right behind his thoracic vertebra. He can also detect anything with a 50-foot radius around him. The most deadly part of the Byakugan is when it combines with charka. It allows Junko to see his opponent ?inner coil? and allows for his most deadly technique, ?Gentle Fist?. With his Uncle Neji and Aunt Hinata, he has concentrated on perfecting his juken (Gentle Fist). At the moment, it?s fairly deadly, although he hasn?t achieved the station that his Uncle was at, at his age. The ?Gentle Fist? technique can shut off an opponent?s charka flow when it strikes the appropriate place on the body. This is where the Byakugan comes in handy. It allows Junko to see exactly where he needs to strike. He can also create a very weak Hakkesho Kaiten (Eight Trigram Palms Heavenly Spin) which creates a shield around him using his chakra. He has not mastered it either, although he hopes to soon. [B]Biography/Writing Sample:[/B] Junko was born a bastard. Conceived in one night under pretenses he still to this day doesn?t understand, he was left fatherless with his mother. Although his sister was gone, Junko always had someone to look up to and strive to be like. His mother wanted Junko, the first boy born from her womb, to grow up into something. His training started as soon as he showed his skills with the Byakhugan at the age of three. First, he was sent to a teacher to learn, but he quickly surpassed what the idiot had to teach him and by age five, he was training with Hinata. The training with Hinata lasted for four years, inbetween, Junko began school and met his first and only friend, Imi. They met normally in class and immediately felt the tug of friendship. It was not until Junko got into his first fight at school that he truly saw how helpful Imi was. Junko had told a couple of the soon to graduate kids what he really thought about them and was then jumped upon for it. Junko, how had barely began to learn anything at the time, could only swing at his attackers with his kunai, which didn?t do a whole lot. Imi, who came upon the fight, tried to step in, using her kunai more effectively than Junko. The fight was then more spread out as it became more evened out, with both of the kids taking on the same number of older ones. It would have ended a lot bloodier, had Iruka-sama not stepped in and ended it. All of them were punished, but Junko and Imi could only celebrate their little victory. It was then that Junko bestowed upon Imi her nickname Katsuo ?victorius child?. Hinata who scolded Junko severely and doubled his training did not view it as a victory. Her view on it was that Junko should have been able to take at least one of them with a well-placed Fist before they all fell upon him. Junko slowly began to improve, finally reaching the point where he could challenge Hinata in combat and come close to winning. That was when he was ten. It was then decided that Neji would need to be called back to train Junko even further. That was the point Junko would never forget. Neji?s incredible skill brought Junko to work harder than he ever had in his entire life. Watching his uncle let loose with his Hakke Hyaku Nijuha Sho (Eight Trigrams On Hundred Twenty-Eight Palms) was inspiration enough for Junko to keep going. Which he did, until the day of his graduation, which is only a few hours away. With the test passed and his training looming on the horizon, Junko has a very hard path ahead of him. Extra Notes: Friends with Imi Related to Neji and Hinata Hyguua[/font]

[Color=DarkBlue]I'd like to second Sandy on the fact that all seven of you guys have played hard and it's been great fun working with all of you. I figure I'll get the mushy stuff out of the way beforehand, so I don't add to the clutter of the goodbyes later. ;) Oh, and this is really a plug for Talkback, the talkshow where the deleted characters answer the question you all want asked. [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=51754]Here[/URL] despite the fact that the titles been written incorrectly. I'm working on it, I swear.[/color]

[Color=Indigo]I'm not great at giving good advice art-wise, but let's see what I can come up with. [B]No Words, No Voice, Just Music[/B]: The first thing that pops up in my mind is, the entire word "Music" can't be read. I know that most people would just assume that it was music, but I personally would make it so that the entire word was readable. Actually, to me, it looks like the splatter is the same hue as the guitar which could be bad and good. If you want to be empahsis on it, then it's good, but if not, then I would suggest toning it down a bit. Other than that, I really like this piece. Good job. [B]Puppet[/B] The only thing that pops up here are the chains to the head, is the thing chained to the table by its head? Other than that, I really love the background, it looks so awesome. Another great job. All around, a great job. ^^[/color]

[Color=DarkBlue][B]Samus and the Metal Hand[/B] [B]Diddy Kong[/B]: Hoohoo! It?s me! Diddy Kong! I?m the host of the show! [B]Producer[/B]: Diddy! Once more with more feeling. [B]Diddy[/B]: I?m give you one more time with a banana where the sun don?t shine. [B]Producer[/B]: Hey, just because you didn?t make Survivor and now you have to talk with everyone that?s been deleted doesn?t mean you can get snippy with me. Besides, I know a certain pretty boy that?d love your job? [B]Diddy[/B]: Whoohoo! It?s me! Diddy Kong! I?ve been chosen to host this year?s edition of, ?Talkback?. Our first guest tonight is? [B]Producer[/B]: Samus Aran. [B]Diddy[/B]: Samus Aran! Let?s welcome the bit?I mean bounty hunter. [I]Samus walks on stage, her visor still up. She walks up to her seat and sits down, noticing the empty chair beside her.[/I] [B]Samus[/B]: Who?s the other chair for? [B]Diddy[/B]: What the?That?s for your guest you were supposed to bring with you. [B]Samus[/B]: I?m a bounty hunter. Why would I bring any with me? I kill most people I know at one point or another anyway. [B]Diddy[/B]: (in secondary microphone) You have to be kidding me. I?m not going to do work like this! [B]Producer[/B]: You stupid monkey. You?re on live right this very second. GET BACK TO THE SHOW! [I]Diddy chuckles nervously and grabs a banana from the bowl sitting on his desk.[/I] [B]Samus[/B]: Where?d that desk come from? [B]Diddy[/B]: I?m the host here and with that in mind, I make/read the questions, understood? [I]Samus lowers her visor and the male audience swoons.[/I] [B]Samus[/B]: This things always loaded. Don?t you dare push me you little?monkey. [I]Samus locks her cannon in the ?loaded? position. Diddy laughs.[/I] [B]Diddy[/B]: Right. Well, anyway, Samus, how was it being on a team with the same people the entire time? [B]Samus[/B]: Ling and Ada and I seemed to become really great friends through the entire thing. Voting off Mitsi and Dante was hard and I almost felt sorry for CJ after he voted off after the Pokemon challenge. [B]Diddy[/B]: On that note, you seemed to not catch a whole lot of Pokemon in that challenge, any reason why? [B]Samus[/B]: I did not want to ?catch ?em all.? [I]Samus put the phrase in quotation fingers, causing Diddy to giggle.[/I] [B]Diddy[/B]: What did you think of the opposing team? The Heroes, I mean. [B]Samus[/B]: They were a bunch of pushovers who couldn?t find their way out of a paper bag. We kicked their butt in every challenge up until the race, in which they had an advantage. [B]Diddy[/B]: Yeah, that vote put you here in this seat right now. [B]Samus[/B]: The guys won?t see this until afterwards, correct? [B]Diddy[/B]: I guess you had better hope that. [I]Samus, with a smile on her face, aims her arm cannon and fires it directly at Diddy, causing him to duck. Samus clicked her visor over her head once more as she begins to fire into the audience, at Diddy, and even the camera man[/I] [B]Samus[/B]: I?ll stop when I got the promise that my last statement'll be stricken from the record. [B]Diddy[/B]: OK, OK! Whatever you say. [I]whispered[/I] stupid crazy biatch. [B]Samus[/B]: You saw what happened to CJ, now I can finally beat someone down! [I]Samus jumps up and down as she begins to chase Diddy down.[/I] [B]Diddy[/B]: CUT THE FEED! CUT THE FEED! [B]Producer[/b]: No can do. This is too good. Have fun my monkey friend, this is your last show. [I]As the screen fades black, Diddy is shown, flipping the camera off. His face quickly changes as Samus?s metal coated hand meets his face.[/I] [B]Kirby[/B]: Next time, on Talkback! We?ll talk with Mitsurugi, the first idiot..I mean player that was deleted. I?ll be your host! [I]Kirby tries to look as cute as possible as the commercial ends. The screen fades to black and you change the channel.[/I][/color] [Color=Indigo]This is the first in a list of hopefully 16 interviews that I?d like to write for each ?deleted? player of Game On!. Now, of course this one was a bit off, but you got to know, Samus just got back into the real world, she?s still out of it. ;) All the new ones?ll be a bit crazy and that makes it all the more fun. If anyone's interested at all, post a comment. If you don't like it, tell me where I can better myself. Comments are wanted. :> PS: If you have a question you want me to ask mitsurugi, post it. I'll take the best two or three along with a couple of my own each interview.[/Color]

[Color=Indigo]"I'm starting to seriously feel the urge to strangle something." Ada muttered from the backseat as Shadow kept driving. "What?" Shadow hollared back at Ada. "Nothing! Watch out for the..." Ada started as a banana peel appeared on the horizon of the track. Only, the banana peel was about 20 times as big as the normal ones and it seemed to be smiling at Shadow as he swerved to avoid it. Ada glanced back and watched as Crash slammed into the banana and items went flying. Another banana peel and a mushroom landed on the track not too far from the Parade Cart, tempting Shadow. Shadow pulled a sharp turn and hit the mushroom, throwing the cart forward. Shadow had to turn sharp again to avoid falling off the track, giving Yuna and Ling Xiayou the lead. "Switch!" Shadow shouted, jumping into the items spot. "Right, now to get an item." Ada muttered. "Ada, box!" Shadow practically screamed. Ada drove into the box and finally heard the ecstatic "cry" of joy that was a good item. Shadow immediately tossed it into the air and Ada could only watch as a giant ball jumped out and started pulling the cart along the track. Ada could only stare in bewilderment as it knocked the Yuna and Ling Xiayou clear off the the track. Ada was so surprised the whole thing, that when Shadow let go, Ada jeered the car off the track. The pair could only watch as Yuna and Ling Xiayou followed by Krystal and Crash zoomed by. Mog chuckled at Shadow as he set the cart back on the track. "ADA! Switch now!" Shadow commanded. "I'll switch you up your..." Ada started as she jumped in back. "OK, now try not to screw anything up, ya hear?" Shadow yelled. Ada kept her mouth shut, not wanting to piss the little pin head off any more. A green shell popped out of the next hit box and Ada tossed it back, the shell slamming into the front of Mario and Lara's cart. Ada thought "whoo" for one second as they crossed the lap line. She and Shadow never saw the red shell that slammed into their backside. All the saw were Mario and Lara's backsides.[/color] 1. Furry Flurry 2. Oriental Beauty 3. Plumber & Plunder 4. Kickarse

[Color=Indigo]Make that four, even though it's not permanant! But seriously, at least Mimmi and Sandy somewhat close to one another. I feel so alone on the map. It's like, bamm! JJ. ;-; I feel alone. Very, very alone.[/color]

[Color=Indigo]Ada was already hating the track. Between the blinding colors and flying turtle shells, she had already almost fallen off the track twice. The turtle shells were not really the tracks fault, but Ada still felt better putting the blame there. As much as she did not want to think it, she had a real "thing" going with the others. That is, until Krystal let loose with a lightening bolt that shrunk everyone. Ada cursed loudly as their cart went spinning dangerously close to the edge of the track and they fell into fourth place. As Ada regained control, she finally noticed the blocks. She watched as Crash drove into one and Krystle got an item. Ada finally realized what the deal was and slammed on the gas. "Shadow! Get ready!" Ada yelled, not turning back. "Of course." He answered. Ada slammed into the block and listened for Shadow's yell of delight. When she did not hear it, she turned around for a second, causing the car to jerk towards the edge. "Watch where you're going! We're already behind, think you could speed it up a bit?" Shadow critqued. "What 'thing' did you get?" Ada shouted back. "A banana." Shadow replied, flatly. "Crap." Ada said. Ada kept driving as Shadow held onto the banana. Coming around another curve brought the pair face to face with the giant tube. Yuna and Xiayou were already on their way upwards, with Mario and Lara right behind them. Krystal and Crash still hadn't entered the tube, so Shadow took a chance and chucked the banana peel at them. It landed right in front of them and Crash could not go anywhere as the cart slid over the peel and went spinning off the platform. "Keep driving!" Shadow shouted before Ada could celebrate. Ada pressed the gas down to the floor as they ran into another box. Shortly there after, they entered the tube and felt the wind rush past as they were sucked upwards and spit back out on the track. Ada smiled as she saw Mario and Lara set back on the track. Shadow threw the green shell at them that he had gotten from the box beforehand and chuckled as they were thrown off course. "Shadow, wanna drive?" Ada shouted questioning. "Sure, how do we switch again?" He asked. "Ready? I'm pressing the button...now!" Ada said. The pair switched places as if they had done it a million times. Ada jumped to the back and Shaodw jumped up front. "Keep driving!" Ada shouted, pointing to the Flower Coach which was slowly coming back into view.[/color] 1st Place: Team Oriental 2nd Place: Team Kickarse 3rd Place: Team Furry Flurry 4th Place: Team Plumber & Plunder

[Color=Indigo]"Team Kickass." Ada said sarcastically. "Team Kickarse, although Kickass just sounds better." Shadow retorted. "Well, let's grab a cart and get ready to go, I think winning this is going to be a very important step in the game." Ada whispered. "Wait a second. We haven't ever worked together, how can I trust you to make the right decision?" Shadow quizzically asked. "Look you, you, hedgehog. I want to win as bad as you do. We're going to have to work together to win this. That means, actually listening to me." Ada explained. "Fine, pick the..." Shadow started. While Ada and Shadow had been discussing and walking, Shadow hadn't been paying attention. He had run right into his dream Kart. The sign above it said, "Parade Kart". Ada was a bit impressed, but she hopped in the driver's seat to make sure. "I like it." She said, flatly. "Who said you get to drive?" Shadow demanded. "I did. Besides, I'll let you drive halfway out. We're allowed to switch drivers I think." Ada answered. "You'd better, besides...? Shadow interrupted. "Can't you speed up this car anyway?" Ada questioned. "Oh yeah. I can. You'd better drive then." Shadow responded, chuckling. "So, we're at peace then?" Ada spontaneously quizzed. "Yeah, truce for now." Shadow answered, sticking his hand out. Ada stuck her hand out and the two shook. It was on.[/color]

[Color=Indigo]"Tema Kickass." Ada said sarcastically. "Team Kickarse, although Kickass just sounds better." Shadow retorted. "Well, let's grab a cart and get ready to go, I think winning this is going to be a very important step in the game." Ada whispered. "Wait a second. We haven't ever worked together, how can I trust you to make the right decision?" Shadow quizzically asked. "Look you, you, hedgehog. I want to win as bad as you do. We're going to have to work together to win this. That means, actually listening to me." Ada explained. "Fine, pick the..." Shadow started. While Ada and Shadow had been discussing and walking, Shadow hadn't been paying attention. He had run right into his dream Kart. The sign above it said, "Parade Kart". Ada was a bit impressed, but she hopped in the driver's seat to make sure. "I like it." She said, flatly. "Who said you get to drive?" Shadow demanded. "I did. Besides, I'll let you drive halfway out. We're allowed to switch drivers I think." Ada answered. "You'd better, besides...? Shadow interrupted. "Can't you speed up this car anyway?" Ada questioned. "Oh yeah. I can. You'd better drive then." Shadow responded, chuckling. "So, we're at peace then?" Ada spontaneously quizzed. "Yeah, truce for now." Shadow answered, sticking his hand out. Ada stuck her hand out and the two shook. It was on.[/color]

[Font=Arial][B]Throw Me Down and Fuck Me[/B] (Working Title) ?The mountains are beautiful, aren?t they?? JJ asked, smiling. ?Of course. Skiing in the Alps. Who would have thought both of us would get the time to do this?? she responded. ?Not me. So what are we going to do when we get to the top?? he replied, his smile growing. ?Ski, of course. What else did we buy new skis for?? she exclaimed. ?I?m already ready to go.? JJ said, looking out the car. JJ spotted something to his right. It was just a quick gleam of sunlight, but JJ recognized it instantly. It was the gleam of a sniper rifle. Two seconds was all he had. Two seconds. It was already too late when he threw her to the ground of the cable car. Blood was spurting from her shirt, spreading into her white jacket. Before they could leave the car, she would be dead, her jacket blood red. And JJ could not do a single thing. He let out a wail and brought the gun out of his pocket. She died, why should he live? It was time to eat the bullet. He stuck the muzzle in, closed his eyes and? shot up in bed. His breathing was rapid and raspy and the other two inhabitants of the room were awakened as well. ?JJ, are you OK?? the shadow on the right asked, turning the lamp on and putting on her glasses. ?Yeah, I?m fine, just a bad dream.? JJ replied. He wiped his brow. The shadow on his left just turned back over, but the woman on his right threw a pillow at him. ?Lazy butt, get up!? she scolded. ?Meh.. five more minutes Kei,? he muttered and rolled over. ?Hugo, get your lazy butt up. JJ?s had a nightmare and if we?re not careful he?ll keep us up all night,? she chattered as she got up. ?Haha. Just because I can?t sleep doesn?t mean you guys shouldn?t. It?s four AM and we?ve got ski plans for later,? JJ said, slipping into a pair of jeans. ?Kei, don?t argue, just do,? Hugo said. He rolled over to face the wall. ?Hugo, shut up. Just get your lazy butt up already so we can all get ready to go. We?ll be getting up in an hour or two anyway. Up and at ?em,? Kei exclaimed. She then threw a book at the lump under the covers. ?Hey! That was my book!? JJ grumbled. ?Yeah, don?t throw JJ?s books around,? Hugo moaned as he rolled out of bed. ?Both of you stop your belly aching and get ready. I?m hungry,? Kei stated, walking into the bathroom. ?Women. I?ll never understand them,? Hugo told JJ as he threw on a shirt. ?I don?t think we were meant to understand them,? the other boy answered and stepped into his ski pants. ?I heard that!? rang from the bathroom and both men chuckled. ?Yup. This is the life. Being able to ski, much less walk is something you really take for granted,? JJ started. ?JJ, I can tell you, after seeing you in the wheelchair, I had my doubts. You?re going to be pissed, but I though you had hit an obstacle you couldn?t get over,? the other man said solemnly. JJ just stared at Hugo for a second. This kind of statement was something he was almost positive Hugo would never say, unless something else was going on. It was then that he noticed Hugo?s winking. He could have beaten Hugo up had Kei not picked this moment to walk out. ?Hugo, I thought I told you not to talk about that,? She yelled. ?Kei, ixnay on the ellingye. He doesn?t need to know what?s going on under our roof,? Hugo whispered, winking at JJ again. ?Oh, so now you want to keep all of our conversation private do you? Shall I tell JJ about a certain person?s fetish for socks?? Kei asked with an innocent look. ?You wouldn?t dare,? Hugo started. ?Oh, don?t think I wouldn?t,? she replied, a smirk on her lips. ?You guys can go at it all you want, but I need to go get some fresh air. I?ll meet you outside when you?re done,? JJ said. With that he walked out the front door. He sighed as he heard more yelling, followed by laughing. He quickly moved away from the room for the sake of staying sane and getting the fresh air he required. The week had been going well so far and to top it off, he had not heard from the chief, which meant Annie was not on the move. Which was a very good thing. ?Have you sent anyone after the target yet?? Mimmi, a.k.a. the Pants Goddess asked. ?Yes, Team Flower is en route and it?s been decided that the target will also join their group,? Boss replied with a bow. ?Good, good. Annie dearest, you don?t mind, do you?? Mimmi questioned, turning around toward the bed behind her. Annie moaned as she sat up. Her outfit of the moment, a typical school girl outfit with hiked up skirts and tired up shirt, did not seem to display her mood A barely visible bandage snaked its way around her right shoulder. It was tinged with pink and dingy. ?I think I popped the stitches again.? she said after Mimmi shooed Boss out. The other woman walked over to Annie?s bed. ?We?ll just have that new nurse, what?s-his-face, patch it up,? she cooed. ?But should we really be doing anything, ?physical? before I get it patched again? I?m a bit worried about it still not healing,? Annie protested, lying back down. ?Well, if you?re that worried about it, I could scrounge up some entertainment for us. I think we found a traitor the other day who?s yet to be played with, shall I call for her?? Mimmi purred, feeding her a cherry from the dish sitting by the bed. ?No chocolate?? Annie asked innocently. ?You said you did not want to do anything ?physical? Annie dearest,? Mimmi teased. ?Who said I always tell the truth?? Annie shot back. She moved toward Mimmi. It was then a knock on the door interrupted the pair. Annie turned to Mimmi, who smiled. ?Looks like the package?s here.? Annie smiled back, although to anybody, it would look forced. In reality, Annie hated watching things like this, because most of the time it was someone she knew or somewhat cared about. The torture and pain that Mimmi inflicted had given Annie nightmares at first, but (?she knew?) it was all for the better cause. The heap of human the thugs dragged in this time, however, was not getting an ounce of sympathy from Annie. She could have spotted that face anywhere. It was her, Lemon. What a bitch she was. Always going on about how she would one day bring Annie down from her podium and become Mimmi?s favorite. Annie spat on her as she was dragged by. ?I hope you?re proud of yourself.? Lemon held her head high and said aloud, ?Annie, you?re a bitch, get over yourself and come down from your pedestal. Mimmi?s a cruel-hearted bitch and you know it. One day, it?ll be you sitting here and from wherever I am, I?ll laugh at you. I?ll laugh as you beg for mercy. I?ll laugh as she?? Annie could not take another word. She extended her hand and slapped Lemon. Hard. The woman went sprawling to the ground and Annie?s hand most certainly left a mark. Lemon scowled at Annie. She just smiled back. It was then that Mimmi and her whip came to Lemon?s attention. It was a simple leather whip, but everyone feared it. Lemon trembled and stopped as Mimmi bent over, placing her face to face with Lemon. ?Who did you send information to?? Mimmi asked, snapping the whip. ?I have nothing to say to you,? Lemon answered. ?Don?t make this hard on yourself. I can make your death a short one, or a very long, very painful one,? Mimmi threatened, snapping the whip a second time. ?Do your worst, bitch, you?re not getting anything out of me,? Lemon replied. She spat in Mimmi?s face. Mimmi, not one for taking things like that lightly, let her whip do the talking and quickly nicked Lemon three times in the face, drawing blood each time. The women shuddered, but never cried out. Mimmi began to circle the woman. ?Give up, this is just the beginning!? she shouted. She cracked her whip three times and relived Lemon of her shirt. Now Mimmi had more space to work with and she brought her entire force behind her hits (there?s something weird that last clause.). Welts appeared all over torso and face as blood began to freely flow. Mimmi paused. ?NOW!? Mimmi yelled, ?Tell me who you transmitted to. Now.? Lemon just stared at her. ?I won?t.? ?Well then, I think there?s something on the table that?ll help this. Annie, hand me the salt, now,? Mimmi commanded. Annie quickly scrambled to the table and tossed the other woman the salt grinder. She grimaced as Mimmi began to grind and rub salt into Lemon?s already open wounds. She screamed out in pain and Mimmi laughed. ?Annie, be a dear and hand me the water bottle as well,? she shouted over Lemon?s screams of pain. Annie scambled again and the screaming stopped. Mimmi had poured the water over the wound and washed the salt out, bringing Lemon?s nerves to peace. ?Now, we needn?t go any further. I?m feeling generous today. Tell me who you were transmitting to and I?ll let you live,? Mimmi cooed, causing Lemon to smile. ?It was the CIA. They hired me to pull every movement of Team Flower and Annie?s team,? Lemon practically cried, on the verge of tears. ?Good, good girl. Here, drink some water,? Mimmi said quietly. It was then that she struck. Annie never saw the knife enter nor leave the neck. All she saw was Lemon?s head rolling. *********** ?It?s been almost three months. I haven?t been there for the Shineys or Lancelot. I haven?t been there for myself.? JJ mused to himself out on the balcony of the hotel. He had been sitting there for about three quarters of an hour, but JJ did not mind. He had never seen Kei and Hugo so happy and he really didn?t want to spoil that because he was being a spoilsport. Besides, he needed to call the Shineys and James. JJ whipped out his cell phone and typed in the number. It rang three times and James picked up. ?Hello?? ?James, it?s JJ. Are the Shineys already asleep?? ?Nope, Purple?s been really, depressed of late, I think hearing your voice might cheer him up.? ?Put him on.? JJ listened as James in a soft voice told Purple who was on the phone. JJ smiled as he heard Purple put the phone to where he could hear it. ?Hey big guy, it?s me. I miss you a lot and I wish you were here. I sent you a postcard. And of course, I?m bringing you all a present. Keep being good and don?t be sad.? JJ said, wiping a tear away. ?Hello?? James said after a minute of silence. ?Yeah, is Lancelot there?? JJ responded, sadness thick in his voice. ?Nope, he?s asleep.? ?Don?t wake him. I?ll call, later.? ?JJ, stop it. You?re stronger than this. Stop letting everything get to you.? ?I know, I?ll call later.? JJ shut his phone and dried his tears. Kei and Hugo were coming and they didn?t need to catch him crying. ?You guys have fun?? JJ asked, chuckling. ?All we did was talk.? Hugo responded innocently. ?I think you guys just need to get your own room. I?m just disturbing your natural cycles.? JJ said, chuckling. Kei shot him a dirty look and Hugo punched him lightly on the arm. The group they had was something JJ treasured and would always treasure. Almost as much as he treasured his sister? ?Let?s go get something to eat. I?m starving.? JJ exclaimed as Hugo waved a hand in front of JJ?s face. Hugo shrugged his shoulder as Kei pointed in JJ?s direction. Hugo just followed JJ?s lead and went back inside. Kei sighed loudly and was the last to go inside, shutting the door behind her. She would never understand men. **************** ?That was all she said?? James skeptically asked the Step-in Chief. ?Yes, the Pants Goddess is sending a team to retrieve a student at a French boarding school with exceptional computer skills. His codename?s BJ. I?m activating JJ?s team to go after and retrieve the target before the other team. He starts now. Call him,? STI Chief told James grimly. ?You can?t just do this to him. He?s a freaking wreck as it is right now. He has no need to even think about going into the field. All he?ll do is put Wolf and Katze in jeopardy. Do you think that?s right? I respect your decisions Sam, but don?t you think you?re going a bit far this time?? James questionned. ?No, and don?t question me,? Sam replied quickly. ?Whatever. You?d just better hope the Chief gets better soon,? James said grimly, slamming the door behind him. ?Damn teacher. Always wants to protect the stupid ?kid?. I swear, the CIA had no business signing him up in the first place,? Sam muttered as he shuffled the papers on his desk. ?Who the hell are you to say anything like that?? James said, slamming the door back open. ?The guy your precious chief put in charge. Now, go call JJ or I?ll cause more trouble for you then you?ll know how to deal with,? Sam said. He slammed the file in his hand on the desk. Papers flew out in every direction, one or two catching James?s eye. He moved up to Sam?s desk. ?These?they?re orders. You?re sending in another team to kill the team Mimmi?s sending? Are you fucking mad? What if they confuse the teams?? James shouted. ?Tough shit,? Sam replied. ?You bastard. You call that second team off. It?s too much of a risk,? James demanded. ?No, and if you don?t leave my office this instant, I?m calling security and having you fired,? Sam calmly retorted, sitting back down at his desk. ?Whatever, asshole,? James said, flustered, as he stomped out of the office. ?He?s going to have to be eliminated, if this is going to work,? Sam muttered. ?Damn fire-blooded idiot. Probably in love or something of the sort.? *********************** ?Yeah, you know, eating too much isn?t good for skiing,? JJ said, patting his stomach. ?Right,? Kei chuckled. ?I never said anything of the sort. You?re putting words in my mouth,? he replied casually. ?What are you talking about JJ?? Hugo questioned. ?What, what did I say?? JJ asked back. ?Never mind. We need to go get our skis and boots, then catch the bus, then go ski. In that order,? Kei quickly said. Hugo and JJ nodded as they got in the elevator. At the last second, Hugo stepped out of the elevator, leaving JJ alone. He looked puzzled, but did not say anything. He had a key to the room and that was really all he needed. At the same time though, why would Hugo leave? He had been thinking a lot about Purple and the others, but he did not think he was that out of it. His next question was about the leaving incident. What had just happened? It was as if Hugo did not? ?Oh my god,? he exclaimed aloud. It was then that his phone rang and his theory was confirmed. Hugo and Kei had been hired by the CIA for whatever reason. He cursed aloud and picked up. ?What?? ?It?s me again.? ?James, you?re calling from work and you sound flustered, what?s up?? ?You?ve got an assignment.? ?Shit no.? ?Yup. The Pants Goddess has sent a team to retrieve one, BJ, from his boarding school in France. Your job, bring him to us. Not hard. Of course Kei and Hugo are accompanying you.? ?How long have they been working with the CIA? If I may ask.? ?Longer than you. They were a part of the team? well, let?s just say, they?re very established here.? ?Great. Great. You?d better have a good excuse on all this. Let me talk with the Chief.? ?No can do. Sam?s on Chief duty and I?ve already exploded at him. I really don?t think you need to.? ?I?m really starting to not care what you think James.? ?JJ...? ?When?s our flight?? ?Six hours from the airport you flew into. Just show your passport to the guy at the ticket counter 10B to get to where you need to go.? ?Right, look, you?d better be by your phone so I can call. I don?t like this mission one bit.? ?Right, and JJ?? ?Yeah?? ?Watch out. I... the shineys would not be pleased if you got hurt again.? ?Right.? ?Bye.? ?Bye.? JJ shut his phone and sighed again. Why was everyone acting so freaking weird today? He at least had an excuse, although when he got through with Kei and Hugo, they will have wished they had told him. He walked into the room. He never saw the shadow. He never saw the vase and he never felt it knock him unconscious.[/font]

[quote name='Goddess][size=1][color=darkslateblue']Giving a slight smirk, James twirled his cane once; Annie fainted.[/quote][/size][/color] [Color=DarkBlue]Oh the inside jokes that run wild in here. See, this is what my statement, "Inside Jokes Make the World Go 'Round." means. I'm not going to pull every joke out, but Annie, you rock. This story itself flows really well. I didn't see any big spots where the reader (aka myself) had to stop and think about anything. That in itself is a two sided dice, but for the first chapter, it's a good thing. All around great job, dear sister, and I do expect more great work from you.[/color]

[Color=DarkBlue]"We haven't even been here 20 minutes and we're already being ambushed." Ada said, sighing. "Not a good sign, I take." Krystal said, pointing to the hit man hanging out of the window. "Everyone down!" Ada shouted, throwing herself and Yuna to the ground. The others seemed to follow suit as the bullet ripped through the bus seats in the back. The ping of the machine gun brought Ada's thoughts back to the graveyard and Spain. She quickly considered her options and quickly moved up the isle. "Ada! What are you doing?" Lara yelled, looking back and trying to drive at the same time. "We've got to kill him before he kills one of us!" Ada yelled back, opening the backdoor. "Ada! No! You think he's the only one in the car?" Samus shouted. Ada faltered and stopped. "Yeah, right. The sound of gunfire at me seems to get me going." It was then that the guy with the gun let loose with another round. Ada threw herself to the ground as the spray hit and shattered the glass of the door. Ada cursed aloud and crawled back to the others. "What are we going to do?" Yuna asked, looking in Ada's direction. "Well, we have to stop the car entirely. Look, there?s the strip joint on our right. Lara, turn right up here!" Ada shouted upwards. Lara shot thumbs up and kept driving. The chasing car on the other hand, had another idea as they drove up to the side of bus. "I'm going to solve both our problems with one solid movement. Everyone hold on!" Lara shouted. Lara then proceeded to slam on the brakes, sending Samus and Krystal flying. They both slammed into each other and grabbed onto the bolt holding the seat to the floor for dear life. The Diablos went flying by and could not stop as Lara turned a hard left while pressing the gas. The bus seemed to moving parallel to the street for a moment as it slammed into the other car and sent it flying into a building with a fiery explosion. Meanwhile, the bus itself kept moving down the street, now with dents in left side. All six of the Heroines were out of breath as Ada and Ling stood up. "Good idea Lara." Ada said out of breath. "Yeah, don't ever do it again." Yuna said, wincing. "Well, we lost the gang, but who knows how many more gangs know where we are now. Everyone hold on, this is basically a big circle and someone could ambush us up at the next intersection." Ada cautioned as they passed under the overhead street. All the Heroines braced themselves as a police siren was heard. The police had caught them.[/color]

[Color=DarkBlue]It's great to see this back up again. I really enjoyed reading CoH the last time around and I was disappointed when you let it and your other mystery story die. I'm not sure how much has changed, but it almost seems like the last scene in the morgue was more detailed than last time around. Either way, I'm really grooving the ReMake and I'm all in for it not dying.[/color]

[Color=DarkBlue]Ada started to take off with the others, but the thought of leaving Xiayou alone did not stomach well for her. That, and the possibility that the Purple Tentacle could want revenge for the incident earlier with the Green one. Ada explained her concern to the others and turned around. She briskly walked back to Xiayou who had just found the plant. Ada walked up and Xiayou held it up smiling. "Look what I found to take back with us!" "Ling, that's Chuck the Plant. He's one of the suspects." Ada responded flatly. It was then the Pokedex decided to chime in, "Chuck the Plant, A Potted Plant. Chuck loves both tentacles and loves to exploit them. He's even gotten Purple into spiked high heels..." Ada sat down and let out a sob. The Pokedex was just going to annoy her until she was deleted and she had no other option. Damn thing. "Chuck, what happened to the hamster?" Ada asked, hoping she didn't look too stupid. Chuck rustled twice and Ada nodded. "Interesting." Chuck rustled for a minute and Ada's eyes become like saucers. "He did what? They were..." The potted plant had spoken, so he jumped down and walked away....somehow. Ada didn't stop to think about it as she grabbed Ada and charged down the hall. "GUYS! I think I have the evidence we need to find the killer!" She shouted. The others turned around and Ada, out of breath, began, "The plant, Chuck, says that Purple's not our guy! He's not our guy! He was set up!" "Taking the plant out of the question, who could have set him up?" Samus asked. "Beats me." Lara said. "Who knows." Krystal replied. "Anyone could have done it." Ling replied. "I hate this place more than the graveyard." Ada said flatly.[/color]

[Color=DarkBlue]Ada was not sure if she was more annoyed by the zombie challenge, or if this one had topped the cake. So far, now, they had met a creepy and or crazy teenager and a talking tentacle. Ada had seen alot through Raccoon City and Spain, but the thing standing in front of her took the cake. It was another tentacle, but green. It also seemed to be polite. Ada was not sure which was worse. It was then that Ada noticed the voice in her back pocket. "The Green Tentacle, the better of the two tentacles. This tentacle is polite and likes making food. It also plays maid for Purple and Chuck when they..." The Pokedex chirped from Ada's back pocket. "OH HELL NO!" Ada shouted, grabbing at the imaginary pocket. "Oh yes." The Pokedex said smugly. Ada could have killed the poor Tentacle standing there as he quietly mumbled, "C-cc-an I h-h-hhelp you all?" "DID YOU KILL THE HAMPSTER?" Ada shouted at him, standing up, face to tentacle. The rest of the team watched as the answer almost seemed whispered. Ada's voice seemed to hit the high mark as the Pokedex chirped again, "The Green Tentacle, the nicer of the two tentacles. When under stress it sweat on its suction cups. It also likes to take things..." "I swear to God, when I find which pocket you're hiding in, I'm going to throw you into a pool full of mechanical sharks." Ada replied; poison leaking from her every word. She then turned to the Tentacle, "So, did you kill the hamster or not?" "NO! I didn't. The plant wants his food. Bye!" The tentacle exclaimed, slithering away quickly. The group stood there, staring at Ada for a second. "Ada, well, let's get out of the dungeon." Yuna said nervously. "Yeah, we need to question some other people before we get a good idea, although I have an idea or two." Samus replied grimly. "Let's go." Ada fumed. Ada stomped off and the entire group behind her busted out laughing. They had never seen Ada like this bad, it was too funny not to laugh. "Well, Sandy, we'd better stop what we're doing before they walk in on us." A male voice breathed. "But Doctor, you need to finish your work!" The female voice replied. "No, it?s too important to lose to the meddling detectives." The voice responded. Ada, who had found the door while stomping, decided to open it at this time while the others were still lagging behind. "HAHA! You killed the hamster, didn't you! And Sandy! You're sleeping with the doctor, aren't you?" Ada shouted, laughing maniacally. The others ran up behind Ada and could only gasp at what they saw.[/color]

[Color=DarkBlue]I'd like to pose a question on the first two posters in this thread. Why exactly do you feel the need to carry guns on your person? I'll let them answer and post my opinion on the matter. I don't see any point carrying guns on your person at all. All it would do is fuel a fear war in which everyone wa afraid of everyone else. From there, people'd get shot, die and the world become a place of death and whanot. I also have never touched a gun and I really don't plan on it. I personally would never want to set my hands on something that could kill a fellow man. That kind of power is not one I believe we as people should have. I mean really, who are we to decide who dies and who lives? Yeah, this thread may turn out interesting after all.[/color]

[Color=DarkBlue]I figure I'll ask now, before I forget. XD Sage, do you think Ada could keep Pretty and her Pokedex? I know the Pokedex wouldn't help much because it's for POKEmon, but I figure, this thing's such a pain in the butt, it'd upgrade itself just to keep going. But if the Pokedex is too much, just Pretty's fine. If that even works. >.>;;[/color]