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i liked the 1st one a lot. Amazing is the word how I describe it. the 2nd was less good to me, but still great ^_~

but like in the old version of OracleRPG, they had the colour adding hack.... Maybe Rikku knows it Oo But if I can find a way to get u it, ill do cause I like to use red :p

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Rain [/i] [B][color=blue][size=1]James, I've been to a vBulletin board that had an option for 'permanent' colouring of posts. When you signed up to the board you chose the colour your posts would be. And you changed it by going into Change Profile, or Options or something. I thought that was pretty swishy. lol.[/size][/color] [/B][/QUOTE] Shes right. Ive been to boards where they had that also so.... If they can do colour, wouldnt it be able to do fonts? :therock:

OOC: I G2G so its a tad short -_-' ______________________ "Darn. If only I wasnt held up, I would've been in time!" [I]The man in the cloak who just said it, threw of his cloak walked towards the place where they were supposed to go. Then he looks up seeing someone who looks like a twin of Boromir and he stops.[/I] "Who are you?" "Im Naromir. And you?" "Aerow. I was supposed to go to the counsil meeting, but I got held up so im a tad late."

Name: Aerow Age: 872 (looks 23 though >_>) Race: dark elf Weapons: Twin Slayer [a weapon with two sides. Its black with red on the cutting edges of each blade], Blize (his dagger which the blade is the size of a flat hand and hes also black with red on the cutting edges] Description: He has a dark skin like every dark elf. he has one green eye (his left) and one totally red eye with a scar through it (his right). His leather armor is darkish and he has some piercings through his ears (4 in each). His hair is black and is long and hangs till his arms. Bio: Lonesome Warrior.... More will be reveiled in RPG. Other: -

I edited BTW, but still... Here in the NL its swearing -_-

Ok. Question. Sh*t is censored but theres nothing with god-dammit/damn. And at least censore Goddammit/goddamn -_-' EDIT: Ok... Then just only reply on the rest! >.<

OOC: I dont like FFVIII so much, but oh well. Ill just sign up... so.... R U supposed to be good? Cause.... Id like to be evil [B]Name:[/B] Aerow [B]Age:[/B] 23 [B]GFs:[/B] Brothers [B]Bio:[/B] He has been trained sinse his 3th. His life has been ruined. Father died. mother died with a broken heart and his old girlfriend has died also. That was probably the main reason why he stepped in the army that Seifer was creating. His father trained him the whole way up. Now he can unleash his inner anger in battle as a strong weapon. [B]SeeD lvl:[/B] 17 [B]Weapon:[/B] Double sided hell blade (a weapon with two sides. Its black with red on the cutting side of each blade) [B]Limit Break(1):[/B] inner wrath-[stores his inner anger in his blade to create a distructive slash] [B]Garden:[/B] Galabadia

OOC: Nobody gets in this battle okay? >.< Aerow: And now to show them what ive made off! [I] Aerow turns around and with humangous power, he jumps up while holding his hands up into the waterfall. The lava forming a ball and the waterfall stopped streaming.[/I] Aerow: They can have it back. [I]He again runs back to the three warriors but this time he runs arpund them so they cant see him coming. Before they know it, Aerow stands behind them and he throws the ball at Shin. You can hear Visor warn him, but it was too late. The damage has been done. And not a little damage. No. Shin was too exausted to block or even dodge it so it came fully at him.[/I] Tyron: How on earth?! Aerow: You cannot beat me! My powers lie far beyond yours! So give up! Tyron: Visor! Get Shin! Visor: What?! You're?!.... Tyron: Yes im going to fight him! Aerow: Allright! This could be fun! One on one! You two stay out of this or you'll be sorry! Visor: Didnt you see what he did to shin's attack?! Tyron: Of course I did! Aerow: Just leave. Tyron: Do it Visor! Visor: Okay.... Good luck! Tyron: Thanks!

1. I would add a bit off a storyline at it. Not just "Basically in this one Seymour Sephiroth and Ansem team up and escape from death to come and try to destroy the world. Only the team of guardians and cloud strife and his friends can stop them.They have been located at a castle planning their assaults while quietly one day the summoner and her guardians and Cloud and his friends are warned about their presence." 2. I dont think every spot'll be taken. 3. I would add a bit off a storyline at it. Not just "Basically in this one Seymour Sephiroth and Ansem team up and escape from death to come and try to destroy the world. Only the team of guardians and cloud strife and his friends can stop them.They have been located at a castle planning their assaults while quietly one day the summoner and her guardians and Cloud and his friends are warned about their presence." :p

Tyron: Oh well... Im not planning on following them anyways. Shin: Who? Tyron: The others of course! By now they must have the I.K allready. Shin: What is that anyways? Visor: Havent payed attention during lessons? hehe. The I.K is Valen's strongest weapon. He captured Tristam in it also..... Tyron: Hasnt Tristam waked up by now then? Shin: I dont get it... Visor: Oh well. Let them handle it. He aint THAT strong. I mean, Wolf did beat him easily. Tyron: But now the weapons arent under the chant of the justice blade anymore remember? Shin: Im lost.... Tyron: Ok. We beated Tristam. He was an evil uy, who was fighting sides of Lacroix and his little bro Indrid. Wolf beated him and Valen putted him in this little crystal or something like that. Shin: aha.... so you think they are now fighting Tristam? Visor: Or one of them was beaten or Tristam was, but at least one power is gone. Tyron: I still sence Valen, Wolf and Karina. And I dont think Tristam'll killthe little ones. Shin: ok. Then its okay. Visor: But.... [I]Before he could even talk, a huge explosion shook the earth. Shin allmost lost his balance and Tyron quickly dodged a falling tree. The sky was coloured.[/I] Visor: Lets go check out what happend! Tyron: Aerow! Visor: Allready?! We just kicked his butt and hes back allready?! Shin: Sounds like hes asking for more! [I]They run towards the direction where the explosion was. There Stands Aerow. Calmly with his palm of his hand at chest height, towards the city.[/I] Tyron: Aerow! Aerow: So you've came huh? Tyron: I couldnt stay and wait for you to attack me, could i? Aerow: You [I]could[/I]... But now you're here, lets say: Fight! [I]Suddenly Aerow charges forward, jumps over Tyron and slams Visor against a building letting a lot of rocks and rubble fall on Visor, in the same jump. Aerow turns around and kicks at Tyron, but this one dodged. Shin came at Aerow from behind, but Aerow noticed him so he kicked backwards. Shin, who could hardly dodge it, grabbed his Samaria and slashed at Aerow. He blocked it with the twin Viper and emmidiatelly jumped on a destroyed building and shoots an arrow at Tyron. This one dived, but it still schratched him at his cheek. Shin charged towards Aerow, but Aerow jumped over him and cutted him in the back with the Pain Dagger. Tyron and Shin both stood up while Visor tries to get away from under the rubble.[/I] Visor: Lucky shot! I didnt expect him.

Im not really into love poems, but it is quite good. I agree with Vegitto about the ending. But overall a very nice poem.

.... without the text I think it would look better.... the text doesnt really fit in my eyes..... Might be just the colour though.......

I think you write very well! Keep writing. Its far better than I could do! Oo

If you find the sig's room-taking, than I would suggest you use Solo Tremaine's advice. Yes, some use huge sigs which only exist out of smileys>enter>smileys>enter>smileyes etc. But not all sigs exist out of that. Other Members: :stupid:

I really liked the first one. But the second one less... I would give: 8.5/10 7.5/10

Are you on FFR too? O_O Why do people know eachother everywhere?! O_O

Very well written (both) ^^ I cant see any part I dont like in them both :)

Yay! New art! *pokes j00* how u got in the technical staff then? >_>

But ur allready technical staff.... O_O and Great iniyusha too ^^ (allthough I allready said it on ORPG)

:mad: why didnt you tell me you were here too?! :mad: And you're even Technical Staff! :mad: ehem.... Anyways.... I allready gave my opinion, but... Claw arm is a lil stiff (you now know what I mean ^^) and further I like it ^^

"If you knew us better, you wouldnt even opened your mouth that way." [I]Rajaah turned to tyron who had just said it and they stare in eachothers eyes. Fury dancing around in both their eyes. Rajaah turned away from him, and looked at the others, after a small moment that looked like ages for Tyron and himself. Tyron had a determend (sp?) look on his face and turned his face to the north.[/I] "How long were you planning to stay here?" he said sounding very serious. "You're right. We should go." Karina then said while standing a step further towards Tyron. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Run.... Far away.... But I will allways find you... Even after death, I will still hunt you if I must... run..." [I]Aerow stood in the shadows of the cave. He had closen his eyes. He looked like even a single piece of dust landing on him could get him unleashing all of his power in one time. But then. Suddenly he opened his eyes and turned around, facing the closed hole above him![/I] "Because I wont have mercy!!!" [I]He blasted an enormous ray (just full power Poisonous touch) at the place where the hole is supposed to be and it exploded open with a loud explosion. He jumped on the rocks under it and then jumped through the hole, landing in the open air.[/I]

"You'll be overwhelmed if you take me to easy." Aerow says while holding the Twin Viper with his right hand. "We'll see." "[I]lets go.[/I]" Valen allready started to sneak of while he whispered it. [I]Valen allready runs off with Ari and Vahn on his tail.[/I] "Like I said. You arent going anywhere." Aerow said when suddenly he shot a same kind of ray out of his finger as when he shot at the house of Karina's Parents. [I]the ray hitted just above their heads, but Valen kept on running when suddenly rocks fell right infront of it and he smacked against them.[/I] [B]BAM![/B] "Now let us continue our battle." "I think the same." Rajaah suddenly ducked for an arrow that Aerow had just shot with his bow. "Allmost hitted me there." he straighted himself again when he said it. "it was only meant as a warning." "So now I must be afraid now?" "If you want, you can, but you dont have to." "Okay. Now let the real party begin." [I]Aerow charges forward, raising his arm. He punches, but Rajaah had just dodged so he hitted the wall what made the ground shake and some small rocks with dirt fall down. Rajaah then tried to hit him in the back with his death scimitar, but Aerow blocked it with the Twin Viper. They both kept slashing with their wapon against eachother, when Rajaah suddenly attacked with his Winter Angel scimitar. Aerow could just hardly dodge and he tripped over a rock what made him fall against the rocky wall. Rajaah walked towards him with a grin.[/I] "Is this the best you can do? Someone with the Twin viper of Lacroix must be werthy enough to wear it. YOU are not." "You must watch your guard weakling." [I]Suddenly, Aerow threw his Pain Dagger at Rajaah what brought a deep cut in his left leg. Rajaah didnt seem so happy about it and he slashed with both scimitar's at the same time at Aerow. This one dodged though and when Rajaah tried again, he did the same.[/I] "If you are a descendant of Tyron; wear his mark!" [I]With that, Rajaah slashed with the Winter Angel at Aerow's face, leaving a scar through his left eye instead of with Tyron, his right eye.[/I] "Im afraid you are a tad blind. He has it through his right, i have it through my left. Exactly the opposite. It fits me anyways. hehe." "And then there was the silence." "*shakes his head* You will wish you have never been born..."

OOC: You obvisioully havent read Aerow's sign up sheet. HES EVIL. Why would Tyron and Visor stop him if hes evil?! (and hes not agressive v_v) Just needed to say that and I have no freeking idea what to post now so... ill shuttap ________

"wait." Rajaah: What? "You take those 2 and maybe the kids and I'll take my little family on." Rajaah: And who might you be? Tyron: Aerow... Rajaah: So.... Aerow. what gives you the right to tell me what to do? Aerow: Strenght. Rajaah: So you acctualy think you're stronger than me? Aerow: I dont think it. Everyone except you [I]knows[/I] it. Wailing Death: What are you waiting for?! Rajaah: Shall I dispose of this one also then? Aerow: If I were you I would first take a lifetime of lessons before you try that. Visor: [I]Lets sneak out while we can.[/I] Aerow: You are not going anywhere.