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[color=gray][size=1]The first three lines make sense. Then you start saying stuff that, to me, makes no sense. [quote] I think is Like a science A knowledge called As BloodLore.[/quote] You might want to change this to something that makes more sense. Unless there's some meaning behind this, which I'd love to know. And then you get to: [quote]Please no more i don't want... To cough out More Blood... [/quote] Interesting lines. The two quotes I gave don't flow in eachother well though. By the way, what's up with a smiley after a poem that sounds quite serious?.. The poem is short, too short to say what [i]you[/i] want to say.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=gray]The whole story is one big Dialogue. It started off nice by falling in with "what prophecies" and then talking talking talking. I hardly read anything of it at the end. Just to point out, this might be an interesting story, but remember that reading a dialogue aint interesting.[/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]I didn't expect this list... It's all random, but oh well. And I just have too much Evanescence in my library (I play it all instead of playlists) [b]1.[/b] [i]Evanescence - Fields Of Innocence[/i] [b]43[/b] times listened. Two other Evanescence songs. [b]4.[/b] [i]Mark Knopfler - What It Is[/i] [b]31[/b] " Three Evanescence songs [b]8.[/b] [i]Angela Taylor - Human Nature[/i] [b]25[/b] " [b]9.[/b] [i]Angela Taylor - Dirty Pretty Things[/i] [b]24[/b] " [b]10.[/b] [i]Metallica - Enter Sandman[/i] [b]23[/b] " Almost each Evanescence song I skip though >_>; I hate my most played list, I thought it'd be like [b]1.[/b] [i]Supertramp - Brother Where You Bound[/i] [b]2.[/b] [i]Queen - The Show Must Go On[/i] [b]3.[/b] [i]Supertramp - Better Days[/i] [b]4.[/b] [i]Dire Straits - Telegraph Road[/i] [b]5.[/b] [i]REM - Man On The Moon[/i] [/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]Tiger, your's was really nice. Great blending of the images and the lyrics. I like the Logo aswell, but like I said the "MUSIC, take a listen" looks quite bad ;( I wont say what I love most in the banner cause that would make me "go with the flow" ;_; Shawn, Nice colours, but too much white and black though and it's really grainy p_p I like the music thingies though. If you made the colours gray, it may look prettier :3 My vote goes to [b]Kitty[/b]. [/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]Do you realize that that's probably with vB included? The text you now have in your signature is just 490 characters. The vBcode is around 40-50 characters. Coinsidence? I think not, but an admin may tell. [/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]You... rock... so... much... I love the way you did the 'fish-eye' shape in the first image and the whole lot of details in the background. Each lamppost even has it's own glow o_O! I also love how you made yourself sepia-like while the background is very colourful. And... your expression is cool xP The second one is awesome aswell. I've always been terrible with cutting and pasting in real, so this really rocks me out of my shoes. It's really my taste of something I'd love to have on my wall ^^[/color][/size]

[quote name='Darker Alucard']Extremely outrageous. In this world peopled should get that there is no "Wrong way" Being gay is as Right as beeing Hetero. besides the bible was written by men sinfull man. and thye new testament was written by people who were born after jesus died. Like people call Hetero people Straight. i''m hetero and i find this to be disgusting. I'm atheist i couldn't care less for the bilble. anyway that's what beeing chrisstian is totaly outrageous and overthrown.[/quote] [color=gray][size=1]What the hell are you saying? I really think you should read through the thread once and work on your punctuation. I didn't get a thing of what you said except that you see the bible and all the christians altogether as [color=red]EVIL!!![/color] Think before you open your mouth, this is just bullsh.[/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1][center][b].4//Retribution[/b] [IMG]http://apoco.250free.com/4R.gif[/IMG] [IMG]http://apoco.250free.com/4RavT.gif[/IMG] [img]http://apoco.250free.com/4Rav.gif[/img][/center] The banner had some pixel numbers on it so I [i]had[/i] to dedicate it to Queen Altronidala ^^ [b]EDIT:[/b] avater on request x3 [/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]As far as I know, vB code -or anything between the codes- is not counted with the ammount of characters. This should not have any effect on the ammount of text you want in your banner. As for the 600 characters idea, I wouldn't care. The past few months I only had a banner and either a quote or a link in my signature. I'm still alive![/size][/color]

[QUOTE=Darker Alucard][size=1] [b]Silent[/b] I await, Silent. [color=red]((I'd make this "In silence"))[/color] Till the Day i die [color=red]((Not very original line.))[/color] Heaven will rest my soul but hell will make whole [color=red](())[/color] Burn[color=red][strike]ing[/color][/strike] in hell some say i shall [color=red][strike]Anyway[/strike][/color] i remain silent. [color=red]((Anyway? It aint a good word, especially not while theres only 5 lines between the last time you said it. Try putting something else down in its place))[/color] In the Hiding Moon. Hoping my death will come soon. [/size] [/QUOTE] [color=gray][size=1]I just quoted and adjusted the quote. Some parts like 'the Hiding Moon' may only make sense if you know the story you want to write, right?[/size][/color]

[color=gray][size=1][b]Le Banner Pour Ozy[/b] [IMG]http://apoco.250free.com/OrangepinkOzyW.png[/IMG] Toying with layers and colour stuff. I like it ^^[/color][/size]

[quote name='Sapphire Flare']Yes, you'll see in the OLD TESTAMENT of the bible that any man caught sleeping wtih another man as if he was a woman should be stoned. But thanks to jesus dying and the fact that we are more civilized means that we don't have to stone them.[/quote] [color=gray][size=1]You had to stone them if they did not love eachother. At the end of the roman empire for one, a lot of orgies were held in which men had to one another without loving, mostly even[i]knowing[/i], eachother. This is wrong, not men who love other men, or are just attracted to them. You can read the bible in many ways. Some just seem like to pick out the ones that can be read very negative.[/color][/size]

[quote][b]Sent[/b][size=1] Two can play a game, with a life and death name [color=red]((Life and death name? *has no idea what that is supposed to mean*))[/color] With on the line of love and trust, you were sent down here from above. But with my broken heart, I awoke with a start. [color=red]((Cheap rhyming that hardly makes sense))[/color] Realizing you was what held me up, from the coldest and dankest places, but As I lay here and cry, I am starting to wonder why. Why did you kill all of those people? How could you live and still smile so proud? As you tell me why, [color=red]((Again this [I]why[/I]))[/color] I look to the sky, and pray that I won't cry now. [color=red]((You rhyme with [I]cry[/I] but quickly put [I]now[/I] behind it o_O;; ))[/color] You turn to me and smile, that proud smile again, This is what you said as you turn and take my hand. [color=red]((I assume that person can remember what he said))[/color] "I'm a killer not a lover, And love me for who I am and not what's been covered. [color=red]((o_O;; What the?))[/color] I'm still the same person, But with a different version" [color=red]((O_o;; Different version? ))[/color] So again I sit here and wonder, wishing it wasn't true. That you hadn't killed all those people, And lied to cover it through. But,you did,just to feel what's it's like, to live your life in vain. As well as full of hatered and maybe shame. [color=red](([I]Maybe[/I] is mostly a word you should avoid))[/color] I begin to realize that I was sent here too. But my purpose was so different, I was meant to guide you. Down the right path, The good and not the bad. And realizing that I thought you were good, [color=red]((Okay, I thought you were here to guide him? That never comes back!))[/color] makes me laugh. It was because of you, that made me true. [color=red]((Cheap Rhyming))[/color] I can relive my life again. So,I walk down the lighted path, Away from the dark. Leaving back that solem dream, And you was a start. So I can live my life full and begin a new dream. Full of life,love and prosperity. [color=red]((The end was pretty nicely written))[/color][/size] [/quote] [color=gray][size=1]I figured this would be the easiest way to comment on your poem. Like Recess mentioned, you really intend to force your rhyming. That and the fact that the whole poem seems to have no point to it. First he is sent from above and then suddenly he changes into some murderer, which in my eyes makes no sense. Near the end you suddenly realize you're here to guide him, but that never comes back at the end. Instead, [i]you[/i] seemed to have changed. If this is based upon something that happened for real, this makes a bit more sense, but if it aint based on anything, please try to give it some sort of meaning. Oh and by the way. Could you either make your poems less long or sort them better? o_O;;[/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]Do you realize that Dragon Ball is considered just the Dragon Ball series, but also Dragon Ball [b]Z[/b] and Dragon Ball [b]GT[/b]?[/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1][b]Last updated: [i]Saturday the 25th of June, 2005[/i] [/b] Simple banner just because of boredness [b][Eyes On Me][/b] [IMG]http://apoco.250free.com/AtStyle.png[/IMG] [i]With text (taken away because it wasn't so popular amongst the croud ;P )[/i]: [url]http://apoco.250free.com/AtStyleT.png[/url] I wanted to do a collab with Sunny, but he couldn't use my image so I made something myself. This was originally inverted and quite blue/pinkish, so I edited it slightly. [strike]I don't like the piece by her nose, but am also too lame to get rid of it -.-"[/strike] [IMG]http://apoco.250free.com/FailedCollabOwnsNose.png[/IMG] I cheaply got rid of a piece of yellow near her nose. This is the unedited image: [url]http://apoco.250free.com/FailedCollabOwns.png[/url] Same style as the original image for the collab, but a banner :3 [IMG]http://apoco.250free.com/TheMoo.png[/IMG] Couldn't resist. Tis a something for Gurt. May she always be in your post-its when you make graphics. I'm not so fond of it, but I like the big text

[QUOTE=Ima][SIZE=1] 10/[b][I][U]10[/U][/I] [/B][/SIZE][/QUOTE] [color=gray][size=1]*cough* [b]Geometry[/b] is nice, but not perfect. Now it looks like the text is the main part of the banner. If it had been blended in more and a bit smaller I really think it would look better. It's too busy, but also too plain. This is probably caused by all of the pixels. If they would be less dark, the banner would be less busy. In reaction, the background would look less plain aswell. Last thing would be something really personal. I don't like the size of the banner. If the height would be cut down to 105 or 100, I myself think it looks much better. Don't get me wrong. It's a really nice banner, but Ima ticked me off with his uber rating. A 7.5 out of 10 would be more in place. [b]sun.FLOWER[/b] Strong colours, the circles look really nice and the pixel numbers give a nice last thingy to it. Different from the rest of your work, but in a great way. If I'd rate graphics this would come near an 8.5/10 (be proud, I never rate and if I do, it's quite harsh ;P )[/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]If you'd do anything around World War III, I'd recommend doing it [i]after[/i] the war. Would leave the world in a wrecked state and the climates would have been twisted. This because there would be more dept in the story than "a world on which second world war rages again, but with more advanced stuff and some parties that went over to the other side". And this way you also have more storyline to give. You could give the whole background story of the War. Also I'd recommend (if you're going to use that magecraft stuff) that the few people who know how to use it wouldn't be the main characters, but whole other people. Giving the playable characters uber powers unless every single one on the planet has them, is quite cheesy. That would make it more likely a superhero comic book.[/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]Then probably your last one was too big aswell. Banners may only be 500x100 pixels. This one is 400x1[b]25[/b]. If you make it less high, you'll be able to use it. [/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1][b]Ima:[/b] The background is quite nice, but the image and the text on it ruins the whole banner which makes the whole thing bad while it could be nice. [b]Rising Sun:[/b] Copy anything that Annie just said and add "w00t" to it. It's not as good as your Scorpion one (in my opinion), but it's really nice. But really... Don't make your pixel text stand out so much, it doesn't look right. I told you this before and before. Why don't you use a grey instead of black for the text? [i]Sun[/i] gets my vote.[/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1][quote=]I've got a healer and a warrior, but I'd like some more warriors and healers[/quote] I'll make my warrior a warrior/monk then ^^ For the record. Those who did not realize there was a new guild member (and for those who did notice, but didn't realize it was me) I'm [i]Boo The Evilness[/i]. [/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]I like the introduction splashpage thingy. I like bright, it's bright. What I don't like is the text. It stands out way too much and matrix doesn't really fit the image. The banner you made out of it could be a little less high. Now for the two new graphic thingies. The banner looks nice, though the background is a way different quality than the hand with the sword. This doesn't look right. The [i]Night Fights[/i] one is just a bit messing with effects and adding grass to it. Nothing much, but I think that it would've looked quite nice without the grass. [/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]I had just bought FFXI when James convinced me to buy Guild Wars >>' From what I heard of people FFXI's good for a month and then it starts to bore, so I'm happy with FFXI in my room (just so I have FFXI). First thing when I'm in a mediashop I'll buy GW :3[/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]The older stories were just the ones who came first with certain themes. If Shakespeare wouldn't have writ "Romeo and Julliet" someone else would've. People tend to compare stories a lot, which is very disturbing. Titanic could also just be described like "The poor boy who falls in love with the rich girl". Why do you need to compare it to "Romeo and Julliet"? New stories are hard to come up with if almost everything is done before. Writers will force their plotline and *abrakadabra* you have bad books. [/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]I shrunk the first banner and added new text. Small animated banners are funky, don't worry :3 [IMG]http://apoco.250free.com/Banner.gif[/IMG] Hope you like it [/color][/size]

[color=gray][size=1]Retribution banner is really nice. The text is placed well and fits the banner right. The background is abstract 2k, looks like an abstract painting or whatever. Sun's banner: It isn't really abstract. The background itself might have been, but there's a turtle pasted on it which takes the abstractness away. The "Rising Sun" looks nice, but the "GFX II" doesn't. I don't like the border either. You can do much better Sunny lad. [i]Vote goes to Queen Altronidala[/i] and yes I [i]did[/i] replace the deadline >:O[/color][/size]