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[b]Name:[/b] Boris [b]Age:[/b] 19 [b]Height:[/b] 1.90 mtr [b]Eye color:[/b] green [b]Hair color:[/b] dark grey [b]Life Bio inside the Matrix:[/b] I was like one year ago from my graduating. Most of the time I was spending on Tai Boxing. And when I wasnt training I was mostly studying. I didnt have much of a great appartment neither did I have a big saldo to spend. My life wasnt like you say a role model life but I kicked through it, not knowing it wasnt real... [b]Time of awakening:[/b] Just a small month ago. My hair has grown a bit. Just enough to cover my head skin a little. [b]Equipment:[/b] As soon as I got out of the matrix it was cold. I had to find clothing, so I found a small house. Looking through it I found a left fingerless glove. Of course this didnt realy keep me warm so I went upstairs finding a cloth chest. I looked through them, hoping to find something that wasnt ripped off everywhere and finally I found a pair of jeans with a whole in the right leg, a dark red and a little muddy, T-shirt with orange text on it and a black jacket to wear over it. Also i found some socks at the bottom of the chest. They hardly had any hole in it luckily for the others I found rarely had a nose. Behind the chest I found a pair of good black boots. With this clothing I left the house and when I let the door fall in his lock it totally crashed in bahind me.

w00t w00t! ur back! \../_(='.'=)_\../ *happy dance* Nice avy's. I recognized the one from the manga drawing book. (prolly cause I have it =P)

its prolly too big size ;) it dont work

that corner was a lil too dark so i cut it out =P thx anyways =)

Scetchy looks rules ;P Its Sora's (Kingdom hearts) suit Oo;; anyways. It is very cool. But the 2nd face is a lil... awkward? oO

Looky, THIS is a spar, only you are doing it in ur own =) You might wanna talk less and type more details of actions. Poems = less details, stories = more details. But the storyline looks good, just work on what I just pointed out =)

Like the title says: the banner is a little diff than the others i make. looky, comment, rate and anything else =) [IMG]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?postid=390777[/IMG]

Ok lets get this started =)

Well... I dont think the animation looks quite right. At the end it suddenly shoots back to the beginning and that doesnt look right... O.t.t. The banner is simple but effective. I like it. 8/10

ehm... who? hes prolly very nice Oo;; R.I.P

[quote]Spellcheck will catch things like that. "luckys" isn't a word[/quote] And the spell check would be wrong for Lucky is the name (its without cap L so thats why it looks like a weird word) Very nice story thingy (how do u call sumfin like that?). I dont know what to say about it actually...

What confused you? Oo;; oh well... Thanks for compliment anyways =)

Takuya. The answer was given allready, meaning theres no point of giving it again ;) (and the question has also been answered good so [strike]debby[/strike] desbreko can question now) Vicky: its at page 23 by now

I kinda did that in purpose cause first i had "Is it depression is it pain" but that wouldn't follow the 1st part of the stanza well... or... that's what I thought. Thank you btw. *edits "maybe" to "is it"*

Players: AAAAAAAAAH! HAIR BALL! (dude that sucked ._.) _____________ Mr. Whiskers: "I can do it! I can do it! I can... Uh oh."

The only thing I did was Judo.... for 10 lessons or such =.="

glad you all liked it. It took me a while to make (ask denny lol) but it appearentally turned out pwetty well =) [b]edit:[/b] i changed "water fall" in the last stanza to "water" so it flows better.

ok... Now u got me scared. I never thought of that really... Or not really good... *gets lifetime supply of coffee*

Very nice =) A little GospelSong kinda poem. Really nice. Dude. If you begin such a war, you should step out of the army, so theres no war to start. Let Bush and the Pentagon, fight Saddam and his "buddy's" fist on fist >=)

I like them a lot. I wish I could draw that style >_> Anyways: Like i said: I like a lot, but the smallest eye is too small with both =) 8.5/10

[u]Just a dream waiting to be dream[i]ed[/i] away?[/u] I liked that part. I dont know why, but i did. Anyways. The Poem thingy was very good. Just dont use too many question marks ;]

Work your grammar a bit (no im not gonna fudle all the spellings in it, out cause I dont spell to good myself either =P) But its a very good poem. I really like it. Good job. A poem bout a poema... nice ;P Anyways: Its good. it didnt flow very well sometimes, but it is good. Very.... Animalish =P

Thanks =) BTW: (about ur poems) I know. I was going to read them right after I posted it and I wanted to start off with Poem of Life.

[B]Unearthed humanity[/B] [size=1](thanks for name Denny)[/size] I feel alive yet dieing This feeling inside me, I keep denying. It kills me from within, cant keep standing. Cant give you the smile you are demanding. This feeling like an acid rain... Or is it depression, is it pain, is it bitter, is it vain, is it thunder, is it shame? What it is, I dont know. Im thinking about let it go. But I cant hold on, cant keep standing. Cant give the smile, you are demanding. But then it happend, something strange. My heart opened, the world changed. Water stream up, instead of down. My face becomes a smile instead of a frown.

get rid of txt and its pretty nice. The one in the midle could be cut out better I think ,but it is nice.