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yah when cotinue this or else [b][size=1]Please do not double post, or spam for that matter --Elite[/b][/size]

another great chapter I am looking foward to seeing more of it

greeat fanfic you should consider posting this story on fanfiction.net

Capitan Mike Steps out of the shuttle craft and heads out of the shuttle bay.He starts to head to a turbo lift but his attaion is on a padd in his hand.After walking to a turbo lift Mike pressed the button and when the door opened.Mike stepped inside and watched as the door closed."computer bridge" the caption commanded.As soon as mike said these words the turbo lift started it trip up.I kept going up for what seemed to be forever but in reality was only a minute.Then the lift stopped and the door opened and as Mike enerted the bridge he saw everyone stand at attion.

somone strt this I dont have the time ps:I did not name the ship becase I could not think of a name first one to post can name it

I will start this in a few min. ps:Warlock this was up befor there was a Sign-up Sub Forum

great story I can't weight to see what happens next

it is a great story and it dose not matter that ch 5 is long it is verry good and you have been doing a great job of geting this this out faster then the first one

it is geting interisting this is verry good

I just finished reading the hole story and it is good I hope you will finish this story becase it would be a shame to end it here

I said you have to be lower then captain

1)no 2)get better story lins and better bad guys basicly better every thing

I don't think it is real eather

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Sephiroth [/i] [B] yeah, I'd have to agree with you there, TN, I myself usually buy dvd's rather than tape's nowadays.... [/B][/QUOTE]I do as well

I used to like it but it have gotin so stupit I don't watch any more