jupitersun

hey everyone i don't think i've posted in a looong time well i have a poem i want critized...nicelyy or meanly...i wont get angry....^_^ ~*~Untitled~*~ Did you ever get the feeling you were dead, Gone from the world. So cold and lonely, Heart beats seems to cease to come. But you know your still alive, Ever get the feeling that nobody cares? The people you loved are gone, No longer there to comfort you. I've had these feelings so many times before, And even then I wished myself dead. But I was all ways to afraid, Afraid of what I'd miss. And afraid of what I was getting myself into, People talk about Heaven and Hell, God and the Devil. But Where does a gurl like me, Go when I'm dead, but still forever wondering. ~*~ANGEL~*~:tasty: -cute

uuuh....i thought policeman1 got killedO.o...neways very amusing...bravo gavin*sarcastically claps*

i've read better but it's not bad...very simple and loose i like it.7

if she doesn't like it she's gone mental...that is so sweet

No One Noticed She walks down the hallway, No one notices she?s there. She thinks about her life As she?s sittin? there. A young boy sits behind her And he taunts and teases her. She sits and thinks about her he life, And wonders why she feels this pain. While that young boy feels no regret, She runs out of the room cryin? tears of pain. No one notices she?s left, Not even Jane. Jane sits in her desk ever so attentively, A girl sitting beside her makes a cruel remark. Jane laughs along, She just wants a few friends. The girl runs to her locker, grabs her bag and books. She slowly walks to the window outside of her class and nervously looks in, Jane is sitting in her desk smiling and laughing with a new group of friends. A tear roles down the young girls? cheek, She runs out the doors. The very next day the young girl just wasn?t there, Everyone was crying even the young boy, but none was crying more than Jane. They all wished to have her back, to give her a second chance so they could be nicer and change their ways. Well you see what happened the night before, after the young run off to her home She went up to her room and locked the door, A shot was heard her parents run upstairs they tried to get in, but they couldn?t They knew something had happened, So they broke down the door They saw their young daughter lying lifeless on the floor, They call 9-11 but they were to late, the wound was just too great. They prayed that night for the very first time, ?Dear god please keep her safe, let her know she is loved and missed by everyone. They all say they are sorry for her pain??.. and please tell her we will always love her no matter what. And they did always love her. One Shot Catastrophic places in my mind, secrect thoughts people never find. caring not who i am, living life, being told to scram. Ruptured feelings they care not, i coulod take my life with juss one shot. A bang rings out, people scream and shout On life gone, then another, everyone runs and heads for cover. 20 lay dead mmany more to fall. not even knowing whats going on at all. secrect thoughts people never find, better their lives lost than my mind.

it's cool i just wanna see what happens when the woman he picks finds out he's not a millionare :devil: :laugh:

omg i love it i agree with LD it is a poem that can make you sigh*sighs*

melody- quite fighting we're a team not a bunch of enemy's!!! hikura-whatever.. karina-okay...... she argrees with karina about everyone taking enough time to build attacks it seems she can't trust anyone is the group and it worries her...... melody-are you all ready yet?!?!?! she waits tensing up more and more every second

i like it, it's really indepth, i think i know what you're try to express but then again i could be wrong but all to gether it's a great poem

i obsess over a lot of things like right now i'm obsessed with hp, luigis mansion(gamecube), butter finger and peanut butter cups(ne kind), anime,angels, and of course neopets...... the worst case of obssesion of seen except mine was a freidn of mine was obssesed with hello kitty and everything she owned had hello kitty on it it was nightmare!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i have a freind who is obssesed with butterflies........ and another obsessed with sparring and drawing anime*cough*siren*cough* and many more my freinds are pathetic when it comes to obsessing...but then again so am i:)

What was the latest album/single you got? i got 3 well there is the icp jeckle brothers, missi elliotte super fly, and a nirvana CD What's the latest tune you just can't get out of your head? i can't get any song i hear out of my head but the one that plagues my mind the most is an old one by linkin park What's your favourite and worst genre of music? well rock, punk, rap, and some country(my mom is the cause of this) are my faves, and i hate techno, and polka music(it drives me crazy Last, but not least what/who is your favourite band/singer? linkin park, avril lavigne, pink, metallica, nervana and queen

from the episode where the advertisments come to life Lisa-*to the crowd of people* DON'T LOOK AT THEM!!! *everyone stops looking except homer, because the donut boy is waving his giant donut in front of hmer homer-mmmmmmmmmmmmm donut........ lisa- Dad stop looking stop!!!*homer turns away the little donut boy frowns and falls to the ground* this one is in every episode *homer does something stupid* homer-DOH!!! the episode when bart gets a babysitter *bart makes a prank phone call and moe threatens him* Moe-when i find out who you are im gonna carve be name in your back with an ice pick Bart- mty name is jimbo and i live*says his address* *moe grabs the pick and leaves the tavern and shows up and barts house chasing jimbo around barts house* how did you guys remember so many?!?!?!?!

my favorite cards are these three dark witch-creature card magicain of faith-creature card change of heart- gives control over one of the opponents creatures