Loki

thanks man. thats how i look at it i have more so ill prolly put more on

Leaving Home Keep on walking Closer and closer Turn the knob Open the door Take a step Walk down the path Open your door To the car Get in, strap up Turn on the engine Drive off in The darken sky Your leaving home Now you?re alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home Don?t look back To a darken past Torn friendships Of long ago Your leaving home Now your alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home Your seventeen With no friends Dropped out of school To get a job It didn?t work You hate your boss Work for cheap And started drinking Now your angry At the world So you packed your bags And took of running Doing some drugs Always stoned Your not who You wanted to be Your leaving home Now you?re alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home Don?t look back To a darken past Torn friendships Of long ago Your leaving home Now your alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home What do yall think?

This is where we accept all cryticism and ask for help and what ppl think on our poems and songs. heres my poem i wanted to start it with Leaving Home Keep on walking Closer and closer Turn the knob Open the door Take a step Walk down the path Open your door To the car Get in, strap up Turn on the engine Drive off in The darken sky Your leaving home Now you?re alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home Don?t look back To a darken past Torn friendships Of long ago Your leaving home Now your alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home Your seventeen With no friends Dropped out of school To get a job It didn?t work You hate your boss Work for cheap And started drinking Now your angry At the world So you packed your bags And took of running Doing some drugs Always stoned Your not who You wanted to be Your leaving home Now you?re alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home Don?t look back To a darken past Torn friendships Of long ago Your leaving home Now your alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home

Heres my poem. what do you think Leaving Home Keep on walking Closer and closer Turn the knob Open the door Take a step Walk down the path Open your door To the car Get in, strap up Turn on the engine Drive off in The darken sky Your leaving home Now you?re alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home Don?t look back To a darken past Torn friendships Of long ago Your leaving home Now your alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home Your seventeen With no friends Dropped out of school To get a job It didn?t work You hate your boss Work for cheap And started drinking Now your angry At the world So you packed your bags And took of running Doing some drugs Always stoned Your not who You wanted to be Your leaving home Now you?re alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home Don?t look back To a darken past Torn friendships Of long ago Your leaving home Now your alone Off on your own Yes your leaving home

hmm those are pretty good i use to be into those kinds hell i still am but not as much ill try and post one of mine up here in awhile. im not new to the boards im just new to this name. ppl wont remember me prolly.