Writing My Dull Crayon Girl

[Biida]

[b][u]My Dull Crayon Girl[/b][/u]

[color=crimson]My Tears, Crimson Shades of Red.[/color]
[color=blue]My Heart, a Frozen Blue.[/color]
[color=seagreen]The Dress I Wear,
Sickening Green.[/color]
[color=sandybrown]My Hair, Ruined Gold.[/color]
[color=teal]The Colors Scribbled
On My Dull Crayon Girl:[/color]
[color=silver]These Are The Colors Of My Soul.[/color]

[Phantom]

I like the personification used with the color, it gives the inanimate words a sense of meaning other than lingual. They arent just neat looking, they are color coded. Very nice Gold_Angewoman. (im sure your name is brittney or somthing but 'im not on a basis with you..yet)

On to the english usage critique.

Freehand, short, but well compensated for. Your words are simple, but meaningfull and the thoughts are well entertained with your skillfull portrayal of the colors..keep up the creativity, and meaning.

[Biida]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Mystic's Knight [/i]
[B]Very nice Gold_Angewoman. (im sure your name is brittney or somthing but 'im not on a basis with you..yet)[/B][/QUOTE]

:) Thanks for the boost of confidence, today was..well..um......definitely not one of the best days of mylife. ~.~;

Oh, and yea, very close. My name's Brittany, but you can call me Britty. *Shakes your hand.* Nice to meet you. ^^

PS: *pulls out a pen and gets to work at finishing another poem* Where is creativity when you need it?

[Phantom]

*smiles* My creativity lays in the mystical land of boredom.

I cannot write with any sense of freedom unless I am sad, or extremely happy. Otherwise there would be a massive sense of qualm to my mindseye and it would prolly kill me to write somthing normal. hehe, just check my last thread...maybe write a reply to it.

Melancholy which was overcome by me eating a chocolate bar and being with my angel. hehe.

Just to answer your question. My creativity comes from being able to express my deepest sense of fears. I am a freehanded melancholist.