Writing This is a poem that i have written for a story i am in the process of writing.

[Guest demlinos]

One should not rely on the fact that the enemy might not come, but on your own readiness to accept him. And one should not linger on the possibility of the enemy not attacking, but on your own ability to defend yourself from him.


"I'm not sure if this would be considered a poem or not, but i thought it was cool. It has some deep meaning behind it, if you think about it. Tell me what you think!"

[Sui Generis]

Hey, well honestly its not really a poem. Its poor like a quote. Is this for "The Faith of Seven?"...If so you should put it in the front or something like an intro quote.

I like it however, needs alittle work, but nothing major! Good job.

[Mitch]

[color=red] Yeh, this isn't a poem. And the base idea of it is great. It could've been better written, but the base ideal of it is good. Just get rid of the 'yourself' if you would want, because you isn't really needed unless you are actually addressing someone within the context of the writing. Make it thyself or oneself...whichever sounds better.[/color]

[Guest demlinos]

okay to all. I will post it over, but with all neccesary changes. Thanks for the advice Bryan! We should post to each other (privately) when the other is not one to instant message. Would that be okay?

[Guest demlinos]

~The Faith of Seven~

-One should not rely on the fact that the enemy might not come, but on ones own ability to accept him. And one should not linger on the possibility of the enemy not attacking, but on ones own ability to defend oneself from it.-

[Sui Generis]

Yeah, by the way Chris you can't double post! ;)

So if you want to post something else you should edit the post you just made and put it in there! Just some friendly advice!

And I like it by the way! Yeah what Mitch said helped!

[Guest boogeta]

I dont like it at all in other words it sucks