Writing My Beloved..

[Biida]

[b][u]My Beloved[/u][/b]

Love is by far impossible to describe...
Poets have hoped
And poets have tried.
But all fell short of the truth.

They have tried with cupid, hearts, flowers and bows.
Yet this does true love injustice
And this we all know...
(Those of us who have truly felt it.)

So I will not
Cannot
Never shall try
To depict the messaage held not in parchment or sky
But in my heart and my soul
And my body.

All I can do
And all I can say
Is to tell you how I feel each and every day
When I rise to the sun and look out at the sky
And loving words float through my head
These words, by and by.
(That remind me of how much I love you.)

Ah, this poem does it injustice.
Quite far from great..
An invalid description
Of a miraculous state..

So now I shall close
And leave you with the truth.

You are worth more to me than gold or silver..
Sleep well my beloved..
Good Night..

(I love you...)
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Yes, I know it's quite mushy compared to my usual writings..but.. I suppose life always has its odd moments, does it not?

[Phantom]

Its great!!!!!!! *smiles* ..and not far from the truth...it seems to me that you are giving your opinion on how things word when trying to depict love..but if a poem is only being written because the writer is splaying his/her thoughts onto paper/text straight from the heart without any protocol to be inflicted...without any injustices to be considered...Love can be sorted out if pure...and can be fit into context...

[Mitch]

[color=red] Ahh, you never cease to amaze me with your poetry. All of your poems, as does this one, flow right off of my tongue like a buttered friction. Wonderful. I also liked the ending, very nice. Keep it up.[/color]

[Zaeon]

mmm....I like it better then your darker stuff, I can be just as bad as you...not in poetry, you outmatch me by far.

heh nice poem, and you said you could never make these flow. I think...but I can't remember, anyways talk to you lata Britt.

[vegeta rocker]

honestly i like your others better
but this one is just fine
im not a hopless romantic myself so i warrant my opinion
doesnt hold much interest

[Pressure]

[color=purple]Beautiful expression Britty. Heartfelt. :love:[/color]

[Mina]

I love it. It was so sweet and kinda sad.

[Mist]

[color=crimson][size=1] Wonderful in words alone. I'm sure you are sick of hearing how great and wonderful it is, as I know I always am, but it truly is a great piece. Keep writing. ^_^[/color][/size]