Writing Need help for a love poem

[Guest boogeta]

Theres this girl at school and well I cant come up with a good poem to give her can someone make me a good poem please thanks in advance:love:

[Silent Death]

I PM'd you a poem to use. tell me if it's any help.

[Phantom]

Haha, make it up...if she means anyything to you the words will flow like a river...but if you want to use this one ..lol Ile wing it...but it wont mean anything for u to that girl...cuz its meant for my girl..else I'de not be able to write it... :)

Risking it all in a world of naught,
Your eyes stand out before me,

Taking life to its extreme, wholely,
Fully your glazed globes of love are,

They stand out before me,
Like a facade of vibrant colors,

But one instance of punctuation,
And the being is but ended, over,

Your arms coincide with mine,
But they dissolve, away from me,

Oh what I would give,
to taste your taste once more,
to feel your skin and praise it,
to touch your heart and and claim it,
to share your soul, to explore,

Oh what I would give.....

[Mnemolth]

You want someone to write you a poem so you can give it to a girl you like at school to tell her how you feel about her? I see....

Is it me, or does anyone else feel just a tad bit sad?

[Phantom]

Mne.... I feel like crap :)

[Guest boogeta]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Mystic's Knight [/i]
[B]Haha, make it up...if she means anyything to you the words will flow like a river...but if you want to use this one ..lol Ile wing it...but it wont mean anything for u to that girl...cuz its meant for my girl..else I'de not be able to write it... :)

Risking it all in a world of naught,
Your eyes stand out before me,

Taking life to its extreme, wholely,
Fully your glazed globes of love are,

They stand out before me,
Like a facade of vibrant colors,

But one instance of punctuation,
And the being is but ended, over,

Your arms coincide with mine,
But they dissolve, away from me,

Oh what I would give,
to taste your taste once more,
to feel your skin and praise it,
to touch your heart and and claim it,
to share your soul, to explore,

Oh what I would give..... [/B][/QUOTE] I have wrote a poem but it sucked and I got the pm that last verse scared me and this is what I wrote its prety stupid

Roses are Red Violets are Blue
I like you I was wondering if
did to

[amibasuki]

[FONT=arial]hey MK, that was a pretty good poem. but coming from a girl's POV, if a guy I hardly knew gave me a poem like that, I'd be slightly scared off. or maybe that's just me, lol. I'd save that for later.......a lot later....... it might come off looking like insincerity, if he hasn't known the person for that long. still a good poem though.

and other doode, don'tcha think it's kinda cheap mooching poems off of other ppl? don't be lazy :whoops:. if the words don't come, just tell her how you feel in person, you shouldn't have to need a poem to impress her.[/FONT]

[Phantom]

[quote]myself
cuz its meant for my girl[/quote]Loook....lol I wrote it to my angel.. not to some girl that I do not really even know...but yea I TOTALY see where your coming from.. lol

*Laughs at the whole Cyrano idear*

Boo...Get your mind straight..u prolly dont even like her if u cant come up with something yourself.

[Mitch]

[color=red] This does sound rather sad, and also it only makes a facade of you to the girl which would recieve it...but, hey, it's not my fault, so why not?

[i]If I were to grasp thine eyes
keep a grasp, keep my time
I would give all that thee hath to need
without thou pain which bears to bleed
therefore I doest ask,
is my offer of love seem to grand?
if that be true, then give way a chance
for without a stance there is no place to glance
for, your eyes are spheres for me to view
larger in shed than earth hath impeade
my mind is but a wish to become
beset hath I my eye to done[/i]

Rather...quickly written, but, use it if so you wish.[/color]

[amibasuki]

[quote]This does sound rather sad, and also it only makes a facade of you to the girl which would recieve it...but, hey, it's not my fault, so why not?[/quote]
[FONT=arial]it doesn't mean to go along with it though, lol.

I also really like that poem too, by the way.
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[quote]Boo...Get your mind straight..u prolly dont even like her if u cant come up with something yourself.[/quote]
[FONT=arial]completely untrue. just because somebody doesn't have a knack for writing doesn't mean that s(he) can't like that person. believe me, I would know, lol. I'm going to tell someone how I feel about him tomorrow, and I have absolutely no clue what I'm going to say. the thought of me trying to write him something is mind-boggling, and frankly scares me shi....crapless. I go by the 'actions speak louder than words' deal, lol. so I don't wanna hear nona yo lip, foo! :mrt: :p
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[Guest boogeta]

Thanks guys mostly silent Death I gave her the poem and now were going out :love:

[amibasuki]

[FONT=arial]eh, cheater :modrod: does she know you didn't write it?
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[sydney]

does anyone else have any more? I have a 1 year anniversery comming up TOMORROW! If anyone could spot me a poem that would be nice.

*note that the poem goes hand in hand with a flower*

[Guest boogeta]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by amibasuki [/i]
[B][FONT=arial]eh, cheater :modrod: does she know you didn't write it?
[/FONT] [/B][/QUOTE] Yay I told her that someone wrote it for me then she said that you will have to make up for it by writeing me another one so I'm already starting on it I'll show it to you when I am done

[sydney]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by sydney [/i]
[B]does anyone else have any more? I have a 1 year anniversery comming up TOMORROW! If anyone could spot me a poem that would be nice.

*note that the poem goes hand in hand with a flower* [/B][/QUOTE]

whooo, glad I could make one up on my own! I drew here on the sheet of paper and put the words aound it. She told me she was going to frame it and she cried alot.

either it was that good or she is just an easy crowd

[Guest boogeta]

I never realy knew you,you were just another freind,but when I knew you noticed me ,I let my heart unbend,I had to forget pas memories because they made me cry :bawl: I had to last love , and give love another try, now I have fallen in love with you,and I'll never let you go just had to let you know

[amibasuki]

[FONT=arial]that's actually pretty good. knew you could do it ^_^.[/FONT]

[Guest boogeta]

Thanks it took me a whole day to write it