Writing I dont know where else to put this and still get some feedback..

[Phantom]

Misunderstood

You take all you have and crush it,
You hold all thats close and kill it,
You look for your truth but there isn't,
You see your fate and its rancid.

I feel my death but I'm lucid,
I want nothign else but a soul,
I steal all I own and give nothing,
I partake in hatred and discuss it,

We all see it from a different angle,
We all take it in from a side view,
We all fight for our own reasons,
We all die for our fated treasons,

You take what you find and delete it,
You hide all you have and beseech it,
You find something free and resell it,
You look at me and are disgusted,

When I look back and cry,
Why I look back, I dont know why,
Who you see and what I am,
What I am is nothing you expected,

Where it lays is within the past,
I am told, and I am shown,
That when the light was,
Shawn into the darkness,

A creature would stirr until a breaking of the lightness...

[Lady Asphyxia]

[color=darkred]MK, the flow is really good. I can imagine it as a song, but for the second last stanza. It seemed to break the flow a bit. Otherwise, good going![/color]

[Phantom]

Thanks...

IT was more a rambling of expression on-the-fly than a poem, because I put no thought into it other than what was streaming my mind at the moment.

[Lady Asphyxia]

[color=darkred]Fair enough. I do that occasionally, but not often. Poems don't agree with me.[/color]