vegeta rocker Posted November 25, 2002 Share Posted November 25, 2002 Sing Me To Sleep Sing me to sleep like you used to before I learned that words could hurt me before flinching became a reaction to a hug before the stars were raped by astrological maps before it took labor for a tree to grow in a forest before you leave sing me to sleep This is a diffrent way for me to write, I don't usually focus on these kinds of emotions so tell me if it sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sui Generis Posted November 25, 2002 Share Posted November 25, 2002 Hey thats good, I like it. The emotions in it are very well put together. I like it alot! Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spike speigel Posted November 30, 2002 Share Posted November 30, 2002 Great poem. I thought it was exceptionally brilliant. I don't know why, but I loved it. I'm not a big fan of poetry, but.....Damn, that was excellent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mist Posted November 30, 2002 Share Posted November 30, 2002 [color=crimson][size=1] Oh...my...goodness! That...that was awesome! I don't think I've ever read a poem that was that well and simply written. I really liked the title; it reeled me in from the beginning. I like how you laid everything on the table, and did it simply, and not making it fancy with big words. [b]Very[/b] good job! Winks![/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vegeta rocker Posted December 2, 2002 Author Share Posted December 2, 2002 well! Thats shocking, I am glad you all like it. Maybe i should work on more in that style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkfreak0304 Posted December 2, 2002 Share Posted December 2, 2002 the emotions ar pretty powerful, dude, i like the poem alot it's pretty nice good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted December 2, 2002 Share Posted December 2, 2002 [color=red] It seemed so thought roving, I loved that. I liked how you just threw it all in our face, and made us decipher what it all meant. That I think is one of your better poems, VR. I'd stick with this type of style, and see how it grows. It may just be your thing.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted December 3, 2002 Share Posted December 3, 2002 Well.... Everything is said that I would've said so ill just put it simple: That is [size=5]GREAT![/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makai Kite Posted December 5, 2002 Share Posted December 5, 2002 *cries* That was beautiful! I want to read more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vegeta rocker Posted December 5, 2002 Author Share Posted December 5, 2002 I really hope i can write more in that style......don't want to lose a fan base! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikey Posted December 6, 2002 Share Posted December 6, 2002 That was great. I think I almost went to sleap when I read it. Great job. Just a little punctuation checks, and it'll be perfect. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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