Writing Cataalysm (Digimon fanfic)

[Unknownmasterx2]

This is my digimon fanfic, it takes place in about the year 50,000, in the tamers world, sometime after the events of the show, a cataclysm ocurred, this is a story of the future. There is no more digital world, it was destroyed, and humans and digimon have to share a world, a third race emerged after awhile, the digi-humans, they are part human part digimon, they have some of the powers of their digimon parents, but do not digivolve like a pure blooded digimon, and on another note, digimon are made out of flesh and blood now, and not data so they don't live forever, tell me what you think about it.


Prologue

"Elder can we hear the story of the before times again?" A little child asked.
"You young'uns sure like hearing that story," the Elder said.
"Please Elder please," all the children pleaded.
"Oh come on Elder please!" Kilis said in a mocking voice. "We never tire of hearing those fairy tales." Kilis was a young man of 17 years, he
was a digi-human of some kind.
"Oh please you were the same way when you were a kid," Lorel said giving him a jab in the ribs. "Besides I like hearing the stories." Lorel
too was a digi-human, a feline of some kind, she was 16 and the beauty of the village.
"These are not fairy tales I tell Kilis," the Elder said. "Every word of them is true."
"Yeah sure get on with the story," Kilis said.
"Long, long ago in ancient times," the Elder said. "Back before Humans and Digimon shared this world, back when they each had their own
worlds. There was an evil, so powerful that it could destroy just by touching an object, nothing was safe from his power, then one day
before his control over the two worlds was complete, four valiant humans became one with four Digimon, and with the help of the digital
gods, sealed away the evil. But a few years later the evil broke out from his bonds, he attacked again and nothing in the digimon's world
was spared, then he came to this world."
The children all gasped, like they did whenever the Elder got to this part.
"The four brave humans and digimon fought him again, but his power was much greater then it was before. They fought each other to a
stand still, until one day a battle broke out on the top floor of the tallest building in the world. Something in the building reacted to the
battle and a great cataclysm occurred, the ancient people were all but destroyed, their cities lay in ruin, their way of life gone from this
world forever. Only humans who were under ground at the time of the cataclysm were spared, the few digimon who survived the evil were
thrown into this world, forced to live with the humans. And that as they say is that." The Elder stood up and left the campfire. "Now it is
time for all you young-uns to go to bed."
Several hours later after the children were all asleep, Elder, Kilis, and Lorel were all still up talking.
"I swear upon my parents graves that the story is true," Elder said.
"I believe you," Lorel said.
"I know because it's your father that told me this tale," Elder said. "Long ago, back when you two were just babies. Your two fathers
went out to find a cure for the berry poison, as you remember Kilis you ingested the berries. Your two fathers left the island and never
came back for weeks, we assumed that they were lost at sea. But one day, Izule returned with you Kilis, and he told me of their exploits.
They entered the lost sea, and actually encountered the ancient evil and his minions."
"You can't be serious," Kilis said.
"I swear that it is true," Elder said. "After Izule returned and told me the tale, he left you Kilis, and returned to find your father."
"Why do you tell us this now?" Lorel asked.
"Because I feel that it is time for you two to go out and find your fathers," Elder said. "Izule left interactions for me to send you to find
any kind of signs of them. I also feel it is time for you to have this Kilis." Elder took out an object wrapped in cloth and unwrapped it. "This
sword was you fathers," Elder said. "It granted him the power to protect the village from danger. I hope that it will grant you the power
to protect yourself and Lorel."
"Why must we leave for this quest?" Kilis said.
"Because it is your destiny," Elder said.

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