darkfreak0304 Posted December 2, 2002 Share Posted December 2, 2002 Hey this is the first time that i've posted poems on here before so yah just tell me what ya think, sry if you don't like it. Abyss only darkness crawls in here fear is the only essence known live within the dreams forgotten baned to this place long ago look into the endless chasm echoeing the cruelest thoughts sick ambitions and selfish goals only await those who approach within you within in me it is everywhere that we can see inside us all is all of this in the back of our minds, is the abyss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinobi Posted December 2, 2002 Share Posted December 2, 2002 :wow: WOW :wow: That is...WOW....WOw....that is amazing, great work *stands up and claps* Honestly, it is great! The only thing is the "Within you, Within me" i kinda got confused, because it ruined the flow, but, it is still amazing, great work. The flow was constant and brilliant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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