Writing My first tries at poetry

[Turkey]

Keep in mind they are written in Spanish:

[B]Poem of the North Star[/B]

Ando por un camino
Buscando al amor que he perdido
Un hombre a quien amigo llamé
Me traicionó, y muerto me hizo parecer.

Nuevas fuerzas surgen dentro de mí
Y me levanto,
Tengo nuevos deseos de vivir
Ya no aguanto.

He viajado por muchos lados
Buscándolo a él, rey de los malvados.
Shin, con ese nombre yo lo conocí
King, con este nombre él iba a sufrir.

Muchos hombres trabajaban para él
Torturando, matando.
Pero teman, yo los destruiré
Golpeando, atacando.

Uno de sus secuaces era tuerto
Gritaba: ?¡Muere!?, siempre contento
Pero él ignoró el terrible portento
De saber, que ya estaba muerto.

¿Mi nombre? Es Ken Shiro, un guerrero confundido.
Con siete cicatrices Shin me dejó
Creyó dejarme muerto en un mar de dolor

¡Pero el verá! Sí, el verá.
La fuerza que me ha dado
El amor que me ha quitado.

El Hoctoshinken el quizo exterminar,
Y ese mismo Hoctoshinken es quien lo matará.


[B]Terranigma-?Between Dream and Reality?[/B]

Crysta, ¿qué es?
¿Un sueño, o la realidad tal vez?
¿Una imagen, que al final,
desaparecerá y todo lo olvidará?
¿O es algo más duradero,
con una existencia eterna?

Ah...tantas dudas
Algunas podré contestar
Otras como preguntas se quedarán.

Pero no importa, porque yo se donde estoy
Soñando, sabiendo que al despertar
Mi existencia se comenzará a nublar.

Sueño que un ave soy
Y volando hacia mi amor estoy
Toco la puerta
Mi vista atenta
Por una mirada,
Antes de que desaparezca.

Ella abre, no ezperando una sorpresa
Yo la miro, esperando una reacción
Un recuerdo, o una oración
Poco a poco ella se acercaLagrimas en sus ojos, aunque yo no lo crea.

Extiende sus brazos
Mi nombre es gritado,
De momento siento mis labios besados

¡Un momento!
¿Labios? ¿Qué labios?

Miro hacia abajo, y veo unas manos.
Me toma segundos realizar
Lo que ahora es verdad
¡Tengo un cuerpo humano!

Mirando para arriba sonrio
El ciclo ha sido vencido
¿Cómo? Quizas nunca lo sabré.
Pero si hay algo que yo se
Es que el amor perduró por esta vez.


[B]The Life of Carrot Glace[/B]

Chicas, chicas por doquier
De todas ellas un beso quiero tener
Con mis ojos entrenados yo puedo ver
A una linda rubia, no importa donde esté.

Yo tengo unos amigos
Un equipo sin sentido
Hemos estado juntos
Desde que en la escuela éramos alumnos.

Mi espada, que por mis padres fue regalada
Rara vez necesita ser desenvainada
¿Por qué es tan poco usada?
Pues porque es un recuerdo, y no un arma.

¿Se acuerdan de aquellos amigos de los que hablé?
Pues algo de ellos yo contaré:

Las hermanas Misu son gemelas
Ellas no lo saben, pero las encuentro bellas
Pero, si por su vida ustedes temen
La ira de ellas nunca reten.

Marron es mi joven hermano
Le gustan los hombres, aunque no parezca afeminado
Solo una vez lo he visto enfadar
Y a un hombre estuvo a punto de matar.

El último de mi grupo, Gateau es llamado.
Su pasado es algo olvidado
Pero su poder no es ignorado.

¿Por qué viajamos juntos? Ah, eso es algo personal.
Nuestro trabajo es muy confidencial
Bueno este poema debe acabar.
Una pelirroja camina por allá.

[vegeta rocker]

Why am i guessing i am one of the few who understands some......lol
anyway, i got half of the first one.
Not half bad.

[AnimeAddict]

[B]I hope you don't mind but I translated the poem so more people could enjoy it. I happen to like the first and last one, the second I just don't understand, hehe. ^_^[/B]

Poem of the North Star



I walk for a road Seeking to the love that have lost A man to whom friend called betraied Myself, and dead
person did me to seem.



New strengths arise inside me AND I raise me, I Have new desires to live no longer I endure.



I have travelled by many sides Seeking it him, king of the villains. Shin, with that name I knew him King,
with this name he was going to suffer.



Many men worked for him Torturando, killing. But they fear, I will destroy them Striking, attacking.



One of its secuaces was tuerto Shouted: ?¡it Dies! ?, always happy But he it ignored the terrible one portento
to know, that already was dead person.



My name? It is Ken Shiro, a warrior confused. With seven scars Shin left Believed me to leave me dead person in a sea of
pain



But the it will see! Yes, the it will see. The strength that The love has given me that has removed me.



The Hoctoshinken the quizo to exterminate, AND that same one Hoctoshinken is who will kill it.

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Terranigma ?BETWEEN Dream and Reality?



Crysta, ¿what is? A dream, or the reality perhaps? An image, that to the end, will disappear and all will forget
it? Or is something more lasting, with an eternal existence?



Oh. ..tantas you doubt Some I will be able to answer Other as questions will remain.



But it does not it matter, because I herself where Am Dreaming, knowing that upon awaking My existence will
begin to nublar.



Dream that a fowl I am AND flying toward my love I am I Touch the door My attentive view By a look, before
disappear.



She opens, not ezperando a surprise I look at it, expecting a reaction A remembrance, or a prayer Little to
little she herself acercaLagrimas in her eyes, although I does not create her.



Extends its arms My name is shouted, for the time being I sit down my lips kissed



A moment! Lips? What lips?



I look at downward, and I see some hands. It takes me seconds to carry out what now is truth ¡I Have a human
body!



Looking at for up sonrio The cycle has been defeated ¿How? Quizas never I will know it. But if there is
something that I Is herself that the love lasted for this time.



The Life of Carrot Glace



Small, small everywhere Of all they a kiss I want to have With my eyes coached I can see a pretty blonde, it
does not matter where be.



I have some friends A meaningless equipment we have been pals since in the school we were students.



My sword, that by my parents was given Rare time needs to be unsheathed ¿Why is so little used? Therefore
because is a remembrance, and not a weapon.



They agree of those friends of the ones that I spoke? Therefore something of them Myself will count:



The sisters Misu are twins They it do not know, but the beautiful encounter But, if by their life you they
fear The wrath of them never reten.



Marron is my young brother please the men, although he do not seem effeminate Alone once I have seen him to
annoy AND to a man was about killing.



The last one of my group, Gateau is called. Its past is something forgot But its power is not ignored.



Why do we travel juntos? Oh, that is somewhat personal. Our job is very confidential Good this poem should finish. A pelirroja
walks for there.

[b][size=1]Please do not double post unless your fanfic/poem is too long, as in it exceeds OtakuBoard's character per post limit. In this case your poem translation does not. --Elite.[/b][/size]

[Spikey]

Ok thanks, now I can understand.

Those both are very good. Both hard to undestand, but really good.

^.^

[Turkey]

I guess I should translate them manually...I'll edit this post later.
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The Terranigma poem was impossible to translate, as it lost everything that made it special to me once I translated it. I'm almost finished with the others, but I'll probably post them in the morning.