Writing The Aeon War

[Vilearchangemon]

Here's my FFX story with a twist.Enjoy

The Aeon War
Episode One: Seymour's Battle

[I]How this all started is a mystery to us.After being sent to the farplane by Summoner Yuna,we thought we could live in peace for once.We were sadly mistaken.The one they call Yu-Yevon was also sent.So was Maester Seymour.They challeged us,the Aeons.What we didn't know was that Sin had also been sent.As we marched forward for battle,Sin reared it's ugly head.Caught off guard,our troops bearly manaed to escape with their lives.The farplane was cut off from the Humans.Many were dying and becoming feinds.We now fight to destroy Yu-Yevon and his followers.With help from all aeons,final and normal,I,the one called Griver,will fight on with my troops to destroy Yu-Yevon once and for all.[/I]


"What do you mean my plan won't work!" Ifrit screamed towards me. "We have tried frontly assults many times,and all have failed. We need a diffrent way to fight Sin." I replied in a calm collective voice. "You are right Griver. I am sorry." Ifrit replied to my words. 'Not a thing to be sorry for." I told him "You were merly tring to find a way to destroy Sin.There is nothing wrong with that."I told him to calm him. "Right I'll get to work on another plan." he told me.He was in his human form.Most of use are when we are not in battle.It is a lot easier to talk and move.He had long completly red hair. His eyes burned with dark red flames. He had on a bright red chestplate.He also wore his red longpants.He use burning red claws as his human weapon.I was wearing my normal silver shirt,pants and armor.My hair was a bright silver color. My eyes were an icy blue. I had a silver long sword as my weapon.
I moved from the camp in witch Ifrit was. As my General,he came up with most of are battle plans.I moved towards the forest. When I reached the forst gate I looked back.I had to make sure everything was okay . I guess you could call me the leader.I always lead the forces to battle.I finaly moved into the forest after looking over our fort about four times.
Feind after feind died at the edge of my blade. My overdrive class was Warrior,so my overdrive filled quickly.After upgrading myself on the Sphere Grid,I started towards the fort.I heard a sizzling sound behind behind me.I turned to see a line of fire behind me.I backflip over it and looked forward. A familar figure walked from the shadows. "Seymour."I muddered to my self. "Hello there Griver.Nice day were having" he said to me ingnoratly. "All except your fire and your face." I told him. He looked hurt. "I try to be nice and I get insulted. How rude." "What do you want."I asked him. "Me,nothing,Yevon,your dead body." He shot a Firaga spell at me.I dodged to the left,and charged him.His staff and my sword met at a stagering halt."You can't beat me without your Aeon powers." He told me as if he wanted me to change.I thought about this and saw his plan. "No.If I do change you'll kill me with your Banish move." I told him. "Damn you!!"he cursed. I thought of thing I could do.Then I remembered my overdrive." Ready for this.Sprial Blade!!"I shouted. I threw my blade like a spining boomerage.It sliced Seymour acrossed the chest.I jumped and caught the blade in mid air.I brought it down hard on Seymours right sholder. Blood oozed from the two new wounds."How does that feel Seymour."I teased."Not good,but you pushed me into my overdrive!"Seymour shouted.I was surrounded by a dark blck-purple light.I felt forces beating one me from all sides.I was them shot out in the ground near Seymour."How did that feel." he mocked me.I just stared on at him.[I]What is he planing[/I].Thats all that went through my head during our battle."Well,I'm done playing with you"he said "rise Sin!"Sin's ugly head shot up.I dashed torwards the fort,only hoping I could get there in time.
"Sssssssssssssiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnn" I heard.I realized that the fort's Aeons knew already."Where's Griver!"I heard Shiva shout."In the forest"Bismark comented."No.." I heard Valefor,my second in comand,trail off. "He's smart" Bahamut started 'he already knows Sin is there." I knew they were safe now.I turned and began to change form.I grew orange fur and sharp claws on my arms and feet.A white mane puffed from my back.My teeth were now razor sharp.Finally,two dark feathered wings shot from my back.I took flight,too an eager opponet.I saw Seymour had changed form also.Into Seymour Flux."The lone spirit'he called me.I said nothing and flew at him.We meet with a sickening thud.I clawed at him as he defended.He threw his Spear at me and I blocked.I threw all I had at him,and he did the same.He landed on Sin."I grow bored.Sin end this with your Giga-Gravitron." he said in a stern voice."Stop Sin!"I heard the Aeons shout."No,stay back!"I told them.They all looked at me,confused.I landed and prepare my overdrive,Giga-Gravitron.As both mine and Sin's moves where done charging,we launched them.They met and in an eruption of pure energy,destryed almost all of the forest.As I was about to finish my move,Sin opened his mouth,cutting off our moves.Then we were both lifted away from the fort.I had no Idea where I was going.All i knew was that I was in trouble..........


Next Episode :I'm lost in the most dangeres place in the farplane,the Nexus.And While I'm tring to find my way back to the fort,Yu-Yevon attacks my troops.Now I must save boh me and them.Great....Next time: Griver Help!!!!

[Spikey]

That's pretty good.

It's really intersting, ecspeccialy the begging. Great job.