Writing Pretty Poxy

[Jesus Chicken]

Yeah, I wrote a song the other day amd everyone who's heard it thinks theyre great. Not many people have heard it but still. So I've decided to stick them on here and see if anyone will call me a sweety pie.

The songs called Slow

It's time for me to go,It's time for me to be on my way
Walkin down the street, away from your house
There's someone else there with you now, and we both know, its not me
And the way things have been goin, I wonder will it ever be?

I'm getting sick of always, walking into the rain
I wish we could just go out and say, what we want to say
But that means we would know right now, rather then it getting worse
And god knows, that would be, a crying shame

I think it's time, we let it go
I think it's time, we took it slow

We all have dreams every night, I wonder how many are about you
While you lay there asleep waiting for the next day
You doze so soundly everynight, but you dont need yoru beauty sleep
you store it all inside, the only place that it can keep

i think it's time we let it flow
I think its time we took it slow

E-N-D

So tell me what you think.

[Spikey]

I liked it. But don't you think you could sing some parts over, just to make it sound better?

And maybe add on to it. It's not that long.

The song itself is pretty good. It's just that a lot of famous songs repeat stuff, and are like 2:45 long. But that's up to you. It's just a suggestion^^

[Jesus Chicken]

Yeah, the chorus repeats a few times, I'm just too lazy to type it in.