Talon Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 [b]Reminiscence...the shaolin haunt you.....fear your own mind....[/b] [i][color=teal]When last that ever he saw her, he was swept away in a moonlight shadow.... Hatred called her to him, yet love sent her away, longing for his grasp, the grasp of a moonlight shadow.... His death, mourned by none, was still all to realistic....to painful to bear for her, in her moonlight shadow....[/color][/i] [b]Converge....become one.....change is the only constant.....[/b] [color=teal][i]His blade swept in a storm of passion, yet the knife could pierce no flesh, not in his moonlight shadow.... The young trees danced with the evening in their silky leaves, carried away by a moonlight shadow..... The last that ever she saw him, he was carried away by a moonlight shadow.....[/color][/i] [b]The end is near....change is the only constant in an uncertain world.....[/b] [color=teal][i]The fiercest blows were all for naught, he was shot six times in a desperate fight, his soul carried off by a moonlight shadow..... The gentle sway of the evening wind slowed, ended the soft caresses of her skin with a moonlight shadow..... Her blood fell to the floor with the knife, her heart floating to Heaven in a moonlight shadow.....[/color][/i] [b]Learn well this lesson, let not love leave you. If it does, do not let yourself go on if it will kill you in the end. For change, the only constant in an uncertain world, will not let your reminiscence of your love's death live. The shaolin teach you that you are your own worst enemy. Learn well this lesson, you must fear your own mind....[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 Since I'm feeling a bit dumbied today, I think that I can barely understand your meanings...thats ok because even though it was a poem of moral, it was also well made... I mean the feel of it was well laid out... Joog Gob :-D lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BearsBaby635 Posted December 19, 2002 Share Posted December 19, 2002 *sigh* John, I'm sorry my friend. It's great...I just wish I could say more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vegeta rocker Posted December 19, 2002 Share Posted December 19, 2002 (drools at kamui) MMMM i like it, its one of those you have to really pay attention to when you're reading it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sky Moonflow Posted December 28, 2002 Share Posted December 28, 2002 I never thought a person could go that far in a poem but you have just proven me wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talon Posted December 29, 2002 Author Share Posted December 29, 2002 [color=teal]Thanks, everyone. yet another product of my bored and restless mind laid to rest by praise. Now I hve to think some more.....*sighs*[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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