Writing Sometimes...

[Andrew]

I was looking through my files today and I found a poem I wrote a few months back. I don't know what the hell I was thinking when I wrote it and quite frankly I don't care.

Feel free to judge and comment in anyway you want.
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[I][U]Sometimes...[/U]

Sometimes life can be a Bítch,
But that?s ok so can I,
It makes me go crazy and itch,
I feel that I want to die.

Sometimes life sucks Áss,
But no worries so do I,
I can?t help but pass,
At every chance to die.

Sometimes I hate life to the bone,
But don?t fret I hate myself too,
All I do is sit and moan,
There?s never any place for me to go.

Sometimes I can?t remember yesterday,
Don?t worry I never remember a thing,
There?s always a debt to pay,
There?s never anything I can do anyway...[/I]

[Mitch]

[color=red] It has a nice beat, and it's fairly well thought out and placed forth. Not too shabby, there. I'd give it 'bout a 8.5/10. Good job.[/color]